摘要:
**基本信息**
以“台风经历”为情境,通过基础造句、进阶仿写、综合写作三阶设计,构建从词汇句型到语篇表达的知识巩固路径,培养语言能力与思维品质。
**分层设计**
|层次|知识覆盖|设计特色|
|----|----------|----------|
|基础层|核心词汇(coastal, typhoon)、简单句型|提供中文提示的填空式造句,如“厦门是一座迷人的海滨城市...”|
|进阶层|复合句(while引导的时间状语从句)、细节描写|仿写课文原句(如“While I was doing my homework...”),强化观察与活动描述|
|综合层|语篇结构(三段式)、逻辑衔接|结合自我检查清单,要求完整写作并涵盖天气、活动、影响、感悟四要素|
内容正文:
Unit 5 Nature's Temper
第8课时 Section B Writing
Writing Task:
作为滨海城市,台风是厦门常见的自然灾害之一。相信你一定有过难忘的台风经历-或许是狂风暴雨的夜晚,或许是居家避险的时光。请以“An unforgettable typhoon experience”为题,结合自身经历,写下你的台风故事与感悟。写作内容包含以下要点,词数不少于100词。
要点提示:
1.What were your family doing when the typhoon started?
2.What did you see, hear, or do during it?
3.How did it affect you and your family?
4. What can you learn from this experience?
Part 1.Beginning (Introduction+When+What)
Introduction:1.造句:Xiamen is a coastal city,but it often suffers from
厦门是一座迷人的海滨城市,但是它每年夏无总是遭受台风(袭击)。
When+What:2.造句: .I remember it clearly.
去年夏天,一场台风席卷了我们的城市。我仍然记忆犹新。
3.I will never forget the that hit our city two years ago.
我永远不会忘记两年前那场袭击我们城市的强台风。
Part 2. Body (observations 观察+family activities+impacts 影响)
Observation 观察:1.原句:When Jenny looked up,thick black clouds were forming in the sky.
仿写:
当我看向窗外时,我注意到天空笼罩着(be covered with)厚厚的云团,
2.原句:All of a sudden, thunder rolled across the sky. Then it started to pour.
仿写:All of a sudden, .Followed by a heavy downpour(瓢泼大雨).
3.造句:I heard that
我听见雨水大声地拍打着窗户。
Activities:4.造句:
一听到关于台风的消息,我和我的家人立马采取行动。
5.造句: Icre the typhoon started
台风来临前,我爸爸让我们把窗户封起来并把地面的物品都搬走。
6.原句:While I was doing my homework, the typhoon landed on the coast.
仿写: ,the typhoon landed on the coast of our city.
7.原句:The power went out suddenly while my father and I were making dinner.
仿写: suddenly while
Impacts 影响:8.原句:The wind was too ... for me to .../The wind was so ...that I...
仿写:
9.造句:
由于狂风,街上的许多树木都倒塌了,所有的事情都一团糟。
Part 3.Thinking and gaining 感悟与收获
10.造句:
我们太幸运了,因为我们在台风来临前做了充分的准备。
11.造句:
尽管台风非常可怕,但是它让我们每个人更加团结一心了。
12. Nature is both a kind mother and a cold-blooded killer.大自然既是温柔的母亲,也是冷血的杀手。
Start your writing:
An Unforgettable Typhoon Experience
1
Self-Checklist
检查维度
具体要求
得分
内容完整性
1.正确描述台风天气情况(通过听、看、感受几方面描写);
2.说明至少2点家人的活动细节;
3.提及台风对家人造成的影响;
4.阐述台风经历给你带来的感悟与收获。
逻辑连贯性
1.采用“开头引出活动→中间描述台风经过→结尾总结感悟与收获”的三段式结构;
2.合理使用衔接词(递进/原因/结果/转折类,如 besides,because,so,however)。
表达流畅度
1.句式多样(结合简单句+复合句/不定式/动名词结构);
2.词汇准确(核心词汇不重复、搭配正确);
3.无语法错误(时态一致、主谓一致、标点规范)。
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