Unit 7 课时4 Section 3 Writing（课件）英语新教材沪教版八年级下册

Unit 7 Section 3 Writing 沪教版2024英语（八年级下） Space exploration 1 学习目标 I can talk about astronauts’ life and work in space. understand problems caused by space junk. explain China's efforts in space exploration. describe China's latest space missions. 2 01 新 课 导 入 03 应 用 实 践 06 回 顾 总 结 07 随 堂 小 练 02 学 习 理 解 04 迁 移 创 新 05 考 点 速 递 学习内容 3 新课导入 1 4 play an important role in... be interested in from an early age be talented in make contributions to... go on spacewalk space exploration do scientific experiments, 从早年开始 太空探索 在… 有天赋 进行太空行走 起重要作用 在…做出贡献 做科学实验 对…感兴趣 Play a game! (短语积累） 写作素材积累 1.王浩泽生于1990年，是中国最著名的宇航员之一。 Wang Haoze was born in 1990. She is one of China's most famous astronauts. 2.小时候， 她就对太空充满兴趣，梦想成为一名宇航员。 As a child, she was deeply interested in space and dreamed of becoming an astronaut. 3. 她多年刻苦训练，终于在2020年 年成为一名宇航员。 She worked hard for many years and finally became an astronaut in 2020. 写作素材积累 4.他 在天宫空间站驻留了3个月。 He stayed on the Tiangong space station for 3 months. 5.任务期间，他完成了多项科学实验，并仔细检查空间站设备。 During the mission, he carried out many scientific experiments and checked the station's equipment carefully. 6.当队友们在做实验时，他 正在为下一项任务做准备。 While his teammates were working on experiments, he was preparing for the next task. 7.他 甚至参与了太空行走，这是本次任务的重要部分。 He even took part in a spacewalk, which was a key part of the mission. 写作素材积累 8.即使训练十分艰苦，他 也从未放弃自己的梦想。 He never gave up his dream, even when training was very hard. 9.在任务中，他展现出顽强的毅力和强烈的责任感。 He showed great perseverance and a strong sense of responsibility during the mission. 10.他为中国的太空探索事业做出了巨大贡献。 His work has made great contributions to China's space exploration. 学习理解 02 9 Writing an article about a Chinese astronaut Next month, the Science Club will focus on astronauts from around the world. We'd like you to write articles about Chinese astronauts. The best articles will be put on the school website. 1 Wang Yao has written an article about Chinese astronaut Nie Haisheng. Before she wrote the article, she did some research and made some notes. Read her notes and article. Then answer the questions. What information from her notes did she use? What did she not use? Nie Haisheng (born in October 1964) When he was little loved planes loved reading ·dreamt of flying 1998 was selected for the Chinese spaceflight programme 12 October 2005- 17 October 2005 Shenzhou-6 celebrated his 41st birthday in space 11 June 2013- 26 June 2013 Shenzhou-10 (commander) 17 June 2021- 17 September 2021 Shenzhou-12(commander) one of the first three astronauts on the Tiangong space station Honours and titles was given the title “Heroic Astronaut” The asteroid 9517 Nie Haisheng was named after him. Quote I've never given up, and I'm always ready to face the next challenge. Nie Haisheng: a heroic astronaut When Nie Haisheng was little, he loved planes and often dreamt of flying. While the other children were playing, Nie was studying hard. He was determined to make his dream come true. “I’ve never given up, and I’m always ready to face the next challenge,” said Nie. On 12 October 2005, he finally went on his first space flight in the Shenzhou-6 spacecraft. Although the mission only lasted for 5 days, he enjoyed the flight a lot. Then, in 2013 and 2021,Nie served as commander on the Shenzhou-10 and Shenzhou-12 missions. The latter made him one of the first three astronauts to live and work on China's Tiangong space station. They did different kinds of experiments and even performed a spacewalk! Their mission lasted 93 days. Nie was given the title “Heroic Astronaut” to recognize his great work. In addition, the asteroid 9517Niehaisheng was named after him. Nie Haisheng: a heroic astronaut When Nie Haisheng was little, he loved planes and often dreamt of flying. While the other children were playing, Nie was studying hard. He was determined to make his dream come true. “I’ve never given up, and I’m always ready to face the next challenge,” said Nie. On 12 October 2005, he finally went on his first space flight in the Shenzhou-6 spacecraft. Although the mission only lasted for 5 days, he enjoyed the flight a lot. Then, in 2013 and 2021,Nie served as commander on the Shenzhou-10 and Shenzhou-12 missions. The latter made him one of the first three astronauts to live and work on China's Tiangong space station. They did different kinds of experiments and even performed a spacewalk! Their mission lasted 93 days. Nie was given the title “Heroic Astronaut” to recognize his great work. In addition, the asteroid 9517Niehaisheng was named after him. 开头：介绍宇航员的童年梦想、个人品质（勤奋、坚持），引用其名言增强感染力。 按时间顺序，介绍宇航员的关键成就、航天任务细节 总结宇航员的荣誉，贡献，升华其精神品质，表达敬意 核心作用：快速建立人物形象，点明宇航员身份，引出下文。 话题分析 写一篇关于航天员的文章 本单元围绕“太空探索的意义与挑战” 展开，核心探讨 “中国在太空探索方面取得了哪些成就” 这一关键问题。通过宇航员太空生活纪实、太空垃圾危害、天宫空间站发展、北斗导航系统应用等内容，呈现了太空探索的多维度价值。写作这一环节重点介绍中国太空成就和宇航员。同时培养学生描述太空生活、讨论太空探索利弊这一类短文，也要能将这单元语言点应用到作文中。写作时请注意以下要点： 一、学习如何描述人物生平、成就和品质。 二、掌握科技类文章的写作特点。 三、注意使用准确的时间顺序和事实依据。 介绍宇航员文章的基本结构： 开头：介绍宇航员的基本信息（姓名、出生、早期梦想），点明其 航天身份。 中间：描述其关键航天经历（任务时间、核心贡献、太空工作细 节），结合过去进行时描述任务中的具体场景。获得的荣誉 称号、奖项。 结尾：总结其成就与精神品质，体现出的优秀品质和航天精神。 如何写不同的“人” 我们前面学习过写“人” 的英语作文，七下Unit 7 The person I admire most——*** 我最敬佩的人，8上 Unit 1写关于一位科学家的百科全书条目。现在写一位航天员。这类写人的共同点： 一、都遵循「人物基本信息→关键经历 / 成就→品质 / 影响」的清晰框 架，以时间线或成长线推进内容。 二、事实为核心支撑：无论哪种类型，都必须用具体事例、数据、事件 （如出生年份、任务时间、成就细节） 三、人物形象塑造的底层逻辑相同：都需要通过 “经历 + 行为” 体现 人物品质，而非直接喊口号。比如不说 “他很坚持”，而是用 “他训练多年，从未放弃太空梦想” 来体现。 四、结尾都有 “升华”：百科 / 航天员类侧重行业贡献与历史意义，敬 佩类侧重精神品质与个人影响。 五、侧重点有所不同： 文章类型 核心侧重 关键要素 语言特点 百科条目/科学家 客观事实、知识介绍 生卒年、出生地、成就、数据 简洁、无主观评价、用事实说话 航天员介绍 科技事实 + 航天贡献 任务时间、核心工作、太空细节、荣誉 客观为主，可适当体现精神品质 我最敬佩的人 事实 + 个人情感 人物身份、具体事例、敬佩原因、对我的影响 可加入主观感受，情感真 常用句型 / 表达：  ...is one of China's most famous astronauts. He/She was born in...  When he/she was little, he/she dreamed of...  He/She was selected as an astronaut in... and participated in... mission.  During the mission, he/she was responsible for... While his/her teammates were..., he/she was...  He/She has made great contributions to China's space exploration and is respected 应用实践 03 20 2 Write an article about a craftsperson. Step1 Plan Choose an astronaut and collect information about him or her Think about how to organize the information. Step 2 Write Write your article. Try to give it an eye-catching title. Find a photo of the astronaut you are writing about and add it to the article. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I included the most suitable facts from my notes in my article. I used the words and expressions I learnt in this unit I used correct spelling, grammar and punctuation. Step 3 Check and revise Tick (√) the boxes to check your writing, and then revise it. 时间 / 类别 Wang Haoze (born in March 1990) When she was little ◆ loved science and engineering ◆ dreamed of exploring space ◆ was hard-working and curious 2020 ◆ was selected as a member of China's third group of astronauts 2024.10.30-2025.04.27 ◆ Shenzhou-19 mission (China's first female spaceflight engineer) ◆ worked and lived on the Tiangong space station for about 6 months ◆ carried out scientific experiments and technical tasks in space Honours and titles ◆ China's first female spaceflight engineer ◆ Received praise for her excellent performance in the Shenzhou-19 mission Quote ◆ "The greatest luck in life is to take on my mission when I am young and strong. Being able to combine my personal value with the needs of the motherland is happiness." Wang Haoze: China’s First Female Spaceflight Engineer Wang Haoze, born in March 1990, is China’s first female spaceflight engineer. As a child, she loved science and dreamed of exploring space. Her hard work and passion led her to join China’s astronaut team in 2020. In October 2024, she took part in the Shenzhou-19 mission and stayed on the Tiangong space station for six months. During this time, she completed over 100 scientific experiments, maintained key station equipment, and supported two extravehicular activities. She also helped test new space technologies and collect important data for future missions. Her careful, steady work played a key role in keeping the station running safely and the mission on track. Wang Haoze has made great contributions to China’s space exploration. As the first female spaceflight engineer, she broke new ground for women in the field. Her courage and dedication inspire millions of young people, showing that with perseverance, dreams can take flight. 回顾总结 06 25 一、掌握orbit astronaut、mission等航天类核心词汇及相关句型，能仿 照范文框架，围绕“童年经历、航天任务、个人品质、成就荣誉” 四个维度，撰写结构完整、逻辑连贯的 介绍性短文。 二、学会运用衔接词使语篇更流畅，能通过自评与互评修改作文。 三、从搜集的航天员信息中筛选最具代表性的内容，避免行文冗长或 偏离主题。 四、灵活运用本单元所学语言知识，克服中式英语，实现语言表达的 准确性与多样性，融入真情实感体现航天精神。 课堂小练 07 27 翻译： 1.聂海胜是中国最著名的宇航员之一，他出生于 1964 年 10 月。 Nie Haisheng is one of China's most famous astronauts. He was born in October 1964. 2.小时候，他就热爱飞机，梦想有一天能飞向太空。 When he was little, he loved planes and dreamt of flying into space one day. 3.从小，他就对科学和太空表现出浓厚的兴趣，并立志成为一名宇航员。 From a young age, he showed a strong interest in science and space, and decided to become an astronaut. 4.他把大部分时间都用在努力学习上，决心实现自己的童年梦想。 He spent most of his time studying hard, determined to turn his childhood dream into reality. 5.1998 年，他入选了中国航天计划。 He was selected for the Chinese spaceflight programme in 1998. 6.2005 年 10 月 12 日，他乘坐神舟六号飞船完成了首次太空飞行。 On 12 October 2005, he went on his first space flight in the Shenzhou-6 spacecraft. 7.2013 年，他担任神舟十号任务的指令长。当队友们检查设备时，他正在为下一项任务做准备。 In 2013, he served as commander on the Shenzhou-10 mission. While his teammates were checking the equipment, he was preparing for the next task. 8. 2021 年 6 月至 9 月，他在天宫空间站驻留了 93 天。这段时间里，他和队友们正在进行各类实验，甚至还执行了一次太空行走。 From June to September 2021, he stayed on the Tiangong space station for 93 days. During this time, he and his teammates were doing different kinds of experiments and even performing a spacewalk. 9.聂海胜因其在太空探索中的杰出贡献，被授予 “英雄航天员” 称号。 Nie Haisheng was given the title “Heroic Astronaut” for his great work in space exploration. 10.他为中国航天事业做出了巨大贡献，赢得了全体中国人民的尊敬。 He has made great contributions to China's space industry and won the respect of all Chinese people. 11.他不仅是一位英雄航天员，更是中国航天梦的象征。我们为他感到骄傲。 He is not only a heroic astronaut but also a symbol of China's space dream. We are proud of him. 时间 / 类别 Chen Dong (born in February 1978) When he was little ◆ loved science and technology ◆ dreamed of exploring space ◆ was curious about the unknown 1997 ◆ joined the Air Force 2010 ◆ was selected as a member of China's second group of astronauts 17 Oct 2016-18 Apr 2017 ◆ Shenzhou-11 mission ◆ stayed on the Tiangong-2 space lab for 33 days 5 Jun 2022-7 Dec 2022 ◆ Shenzhou-14 (commander) ◆ led the construction of the Tiangong space station ◆ completed three extravehicular activities Honours and titles ◆ awarded the title "Heroic Astronaut" ◆ recipient of national honorary medals Quote ◆ "Space exploration is full of challenges, but I will keep moving forward for our country." 请根据下面信息，写一篇介绍宇航员陈冬的文章。 Chen Dong: A Dedicated Astronaut Chen Dong, born in February 1978, is a distinguished Chinese astronaut. As a child, he loved science and dreamed of exploring space. He joined the Air Force in 1997 and became an astronaut in 2010 after years of hard training. In 2016, he took part in the Shenzhou-11 mission and stayed on the Tiangong-2 space lab for 33 days. In 2022, as commander of the Shenzhou-14 mission, he spent six months on the Tiangong space station. During this time, he completed three spacewalks and helped finish the station’s construction. His careful work ensured the mission’s success. Chen Dong was given the title "Heroic Astronaut" for his great contributions. His courage and dedication inspire many young people. He has shown that with perseverance, we can reach for the stars. Thank you！ 33 $