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英语应用文写作讲解与练习
一、报道:走进非物质文化遗产
假定你是校英文报记者李华,你校刚刚举办了“走进非物质文化遗产”活动。请你写一篇英文活动报道,内容包括:1.活动内容;2.活动反响。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Meet Intangible Cultural Heritage
写作注意要点
1.基本时态为一般过去时。
2.写作思路:三段论。第一段引出报道的主题及时间和地点;第二段介绍活动内容(要点1);第三段写活动反响(要点2)。
【参考范文】
Meet Intangible Cultural Heritage
Last Saturday saw an event themed “Meeting Intangible Cultural Heritage” at our school’s Cultural Center, aimed at promoting the excellent traditional Chinese culture.
The event featured traditional craftsmanship such as paper-cutting and clay sculpture presented by inheritors of intangible cultural heritage. Along with the demonstrations came a student interactive session, in which everyone got themselves involved, creating a dynamic atmosphere. Beyond that, a documentary on shadow puppetry and Peking Opera was shown, allowing students to gain a deeper insight into the significance behind intangible cultural heritage.
The event resonated with teachers and students alike. Many students hoped that the school would organize more such events in the future, breathing life into intangible cultural heritage on campus. (116 words)
【中文翻译】
走进非物质文化遗产
为弘扬中华优秀传统文化,我校于上周六在校文化中心成功举办了“走进非物质文化遗产”主题活动。
活动现场精彩纷呈,既有非遗传承人现场展示剪纸、泥塑等传统技艺,也有学生互动体验区,大家亲手尝试制作,气氛热烈。此外,还播放了关于皮影戏和京剧的纪录片,让同学们深入了解非遗背后的文化内涵。
此次活动受到师生一致好评。大家纷纷表示,不少同学希望学校今后多举办类似活动,让非遗在校园中“活”起来。
【参考范文解析】
01
应用文写作思路
(1)审题判定文体为报道;
(2)因文本是报道,故李华的身份不必交代;
(3)因文体主体部分为介绍刚举办的走进非物质文化遗产活动,故本文总体时态定调为一般过去时。
02
本文亮点
(1)Last Saturday saw运用无灵主语结构
(2)aimed at旨在
(3)The event featured以...为特色(重点推出)
(4)Along with the demonstrations came运用完全倒装结构
(5)Beyond that此外
(6)gain a deeper insight into对...更深入理解
(7)resonated with与...产生共鸣
(8)breathing life into为...注入新的活力
二、发表看法:摄影比赛使用AI技术
假定你是李华。你的外国笔友Mark在邮件中说,学校摄影比赛中有幅作品因使用AI技术生成而被取消参评资格。请你回复邮件谈谈你对这一事件的看法及理由。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mark,
Thanks for sharing the disqualified photo case with me.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
写作注意要点
1.基本时态为一般现在时。
2.写作思路:三段论。第一段亮明观点;第二段阐述理由;第三段表达期待。
Dear Mark,
Thanks for sharing the disqualified photo case with me. I find it reasonable to exclude the AI-generated work from the competition.
At the heart of a photography competition lies the documentation of real-life moments and photographers' distinctive observation and creativity. Technologically impressive as AI-generated images may be, they fall short of the essential elements of authentic photography, including on-site framing, light management, and emotional investment. Were AI-generated works allowed to compete, it would not only be an injustice to photographers who work with great effort on location, but also obscure the essential lines that define photography as an art.
Nevertheless, I advocate for establishing a separate section for AI-generated images, so that the technology can demonstrate its appeal under fair and transparent rules. What do you think of the distinction? Looking forward to your reply. (126 words)
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【中文翻译】
亲爱的马克:
感谢你和我分享学校摄影比赛不合格作品的案例。对此,我认为组委会取消那幅AI生成作品的参评资格是合情合理的。
摄影比赛的核心在于记录真实的瞬间和摄影师独特的观察与创意。AI生成图像虽然技术先进,但其创作过程缺乏现场取景、光线把握和情感投入等真实摄影的核心元素。如果允许AI作品参赛,对辛苦实地拍摄的参赛者不公平,也会模糊摄影艺术的本质边界。
不过,我支持为AI生成图像设立独立赛道,让技术在公平规则下展示魅力。你觉得这样的区分合理吗?
期待你的回信!
李华
【参考范文解析】
01
应用文写作思路
(1)审题判定文体为发表看法;
(2)根据原文本特点,李华的身份不必交代;
(3)因文本主体部分为发表看法并说明理由,故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。
02
本文亮点
(1)At the heart of a photography competition lies运用完全倒装结构
(2)Technologically impressive as AI-generated images may be运用部分倒装结构
(3)fall short of缺乏
(4)Were AI-generated works allowed to compete虚拟语气的省略倒装结构=If AI-generated works were allowed to compete
(5)Nevertheless然而
(6)advocate for支持
三、投稿:小组合作学习划水现象
你校英文报正在开展以“Teamwork”为主题的征文活动。请你针对你们班学习小组合作中部分成员不出力的“划水”(free-riding)现象,写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:1.描述具体现象;2.提出你的建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.可适当增加细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
Free-riding in Teamwork: A Problem to Solve
写作注意要点
1.基本时态为一般现在时。
2.写作思路:三段论。第一段描述现象(要点1);第二段提出建议(要点2);第三段总结。
【参考范文】
Free-riding in Teamwork: A Problem to Solve
In the teamwork of my class, certain members avoid their engagement in discussions, delay or dodge their tasks when assigned, or worse still, copy what others have done, ultimately taking a free ride on the team's performance.
To address the issue, I propose clarifying each member's role and creating a detailed schedule so that everyone is fully aware of their responsibilities and deadlines. It is also advisable to establish a peer evaluation system, in which each individual’s contributions are anonymously assessed on a regular basis, and those with poor performance are required to undertake an additional minor task.
Only when each member's contribution is brought to light and given due recognition can a team's collective strength be truly activated and the tendency to free-ride be effectively eliminated. (127 words)
【中文翻译】
团队合作中的划水现象:一个需要解决的问题
在我的班级的小组学习中,有时会出现“划水”现象:个别成员讨论时沉默不语,任务分配后拖延推诿,甚至直接抄袭他人成果,最终坐享团队成绩。
对此,我建议:第一,小组初期明确分工,制定详细计划表,让每个人清楚自己的责任与截止时间;第二,引入“互评机制”,定期匿名评价成员贡献,表现差者须额外承担小任务。
只有让每一份努力都被看见、被认可,才能真正激发团队合力,避免“划水”心理。
【参考范文解析】
01
应用文写作思路
(1)审题判定文体为投稿;
(2)因文体是投稿,故作者的身份不必交代;
(3)因文本主体部分为描述小组合作学习中的“划水”现象并提出建议,故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。
02
本文亮点
(1)worse still更糟的是
(2)address the issue解决问题
(3)propose clarifying提议做某事
(4)is fully aware of充分意识到
(5)It is also advisable to做某事是推荐的
(6)on a regular basis=regularly经常
(7)Only when each member's contribution is brought to light and given due recognition can ...部分倒装结构(其中bring sth to light意为“把...公开,使...意识到”,due意为“应得的”)
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