内容正文:
Unit 7 Role models of our time
沪教牛津版七年级下册
Who is your role model?
Key question
主题范畴:人与社会
Writing
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Writing an article about someone you admire most
写一篇关于你最崇拜的人的文章
The school website is calling for articles about people you admire. Who do you admire most? Why do you admire him / her? Write an article and send it to us.
学校官网正在征集关于你们所崇拜的人的文章。你最崇拜谁?你为什么崇拜他/她?写一篇文章发给我们。
Pre-writing
astronomer /əˈstrɒnəmə(r)/
polio /ˈpəʊliəʊ/
sugar pill
chief engineer
n. 天文学家
n. 小儿麻痹症
糖丸
总工程师
New words and phrases
The person I admire most
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Group work
Talk about your role model.
What he / she did
What he / she (has) achieved
The reason(s) I admire him / her
第三
一般过去时
Writing
spent many years developing
to make sure
Thanks to
millions of
showed selfless love
brought hope to
inspires me to help
a true hero
Step 3: 句子提升
常用的连接词:
(1) _________________ 以便
高分表达:
(2) _________________ 致力于;
(3) ____________________ 阻止……做某事;
protect ... from ... 保护……免受……
so that
devote ... to ...
stop ... from doing sth.
Post-writing
Check and revise 检查和修改
Tick (√) the boxes to check your writing, and then revise it.
根据下面的清单检查和修改作文。
I made an outline to organize my ideas.
I wrote about his / her work and what he / she (has)
achieved.
I gave clear reasons why I admire him / her most.
I used the words and expressions I learnt in this unit
I used correct spelling, grammar and punctuation.
Grade and share
Elements要素 Level档次
Content内容(6分) 要点齐全,切合题意
适当发挥
Accuracy准确性(6分) 语法,大小写,拼写等格式错误
语言使用恰当,丰富
Fluency流畅性(3分) 分段,书写,衔接,过渡
互评总分
⭐可参考作业布置如下:
Samples:
Homework
个人作业(可选) 小组作业(可选)
1.背诵本篇作文,将其抄入作文集锦中。 1.互评作文。
2.完成超越范文挑战部分练习。
单击“同步练习题”字样,即可打开本课时同步练习题的Word文档。
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THANKS
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