2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---初次社区服务 导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My friend Emma has always been involved in community service. She and her husband founded a clothing center, offering free clothes, shoes, etc. to anyone who needs them. Then there's me. I'd never been involved in community service. Instead, I spent my time and money buying snacks, dining out, watching TV and movies etc. That changed one evening last winter when Emma called me. She told me she needed my help and then asked what I would do the next evening. I replied briefly that I wanted to see a film. “But David, tomorrow I need your help for several hours at my clothing center,” Emma continued. “I had a family who signed up to help this week, but they've got the flu. My husband and I can't run the place alone.” I hesitated, thinking I might not be able to help since I had never been to her clothing center before. But Emma insisted, saying that the next evening she needed me to boldly go where I had never gone before. Since my friend was desperate, I had to agree At 6:45 the next evening, I showed up at the clothing center in an old brick building on Main Street. “Thank you,” said Emma when I arrived. “It's really simple. My husband and I will manage the actual clothing room; we just need you to run the welcome table by the door. Have people line up, make sure they know what they need, give them a bag, and then we'll take them in one at a time. In the past few weeks, we've got a ton of donations of clothes, shoes, gloves, etc., so we should be able to help many people.” The directions seemed clear enough; I figured I could handle it. How many people in my town were going to show up on a snowy Wednesday night for free clothes anyway? At 7:00 pm, Emma unlocked the front door. 注意： （1）续写词数应为 150个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Looking out, I was surprised by the number of people who would come in. _____________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ That snowy Wednesday night marked the beginning of my journey into community service. ___________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 Emma devoted herself to community service and ran a clothing center--- _________________ --- I used to spend spare time on entertainment and never did volunteer work--- _________________ --- Emma’s volunteer fell ill and she turned to me for help--- _________________ --- I arrived at the center and prepared for volunteer work 4. 细节问答 What did Emma do for community service?：___________________________________ How did the author spend his spare time before?：_________________________________ Why did Emma ask the author for help?：________________________________________________ What was the author’s volunteer duty?：__________________________________________ What was the weather like that night?：_____________________________________________ 5．情节线 Emma创办衣物公益中心、长期投身社区服务→作者往日虚度闲暇时光、从未参与志愿活动→_____________________________________→作者抵达公益中心，负责门口接待登记工作，低估了前来求助的人数→（续写）大量居民冒雪前来领取衣物，作者忙碌却认真完成工作、深受触动→（续写）__________________________________________________________ 6．情感线 I: indifferent and leisurely→___________→hesitant and doubtful→___________→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：________________________________________________________________________ 英文：________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 找出原文宾语从句、定语从句、状语从句、非谓语、现在分词作状语：________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 成长公益类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: 衔接句1——How was the author’s volunteer experience? What did he see and feel? ________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: 衔接句2——What changes took place in the author? What did he learn from the experience? ________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：放眼望去，进店的人数之多让我大吃一惊。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：那个飘雪的周三夜晚，开启了我的社区服务之旅。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写 （第一段留白作答） ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （第二段留白作答） ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 I（原本贪图享乐、冷漠懈怠，后被触动、乐于奉献、实现自我成长的普通人）；Emma（热心公益、善良无私、坚持社区服务、乐于助人）；needy residents（需要公益帮扶、朴实困难的居民） 2．视角 第一人称 3．时空线 Emma devoted herself to community service and ran a clothing center--- She provided daily necessities for people in need for free --- I used to spend spare time on entertainment and never did volunteer work--- I lived a leisurely but meaningless spare life --- Emma’s volunteer fell ill and she turned to me for help--- I gave up watching a movie and agreed to offer help --- I arrived at the center and prepared for volunteer work 4. 细节问答 What did Emma do for community service?：She founded a clothing center with her husband to provide free daily supplies for people in need. How did the author spend his spare time before?：He spent spare time eating, entertaining and relaxing, taking no part in volunteer work. Why did Emma ask the author for help?：Her scheduled volunteer family caught the flu, leaving her and her husband short-handed. What was the author’s volunteer duty?：He was responsible for welcoming guests, managing lines and handing out bags at the door. What was the weather like that night?：It was snowy and cold. 5．情节线 Emma创办衣物公益中心、长期投身社区服务→作者往日虚度闲暇时光、沉迷娱乐、从未参与志愿活动→固定志愿者突发生病，Emma人手紧缺、无奈求助作者→作者原本计划观影，犹豫再三后答应帮忙→作者抵达公益中心，负责门口接待工作，内心低估求助人数、认为工作轻松→（续写）大量居民冒雪前来求助，作者忙碌一整天，目睹他人困境、体会公益意义→（续写）这次特殊的志愿经历彻底改变作者，从此主动投身社区服务，懂得奉献与温暖的价值 6．情感线 I: indifferent and leisurely→unwilling and hesitant→hesitant and doubtful→shocked and busy→fulfilled and warm-hearted（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：原本只享受娱乐、从不参与公益的作者，在朋友Emma的请求下临时帮忙打理公益衣物中心，冒雪服务困难居民，在志愿工作中深受触动，从此开启公益之路、收获成长。 英文：Originally addicted to entertainment and indifferent to charity, the author helped his friend run a free clothing center unexpectedly. Touched by meaningful volunteer work on a snowy night, he fell in love with community service and gained self-growth. 8. 句式 状语从句：Since my friend was desperate, I had to agree. 宾语从句：I replied briefly that I wanted to see a film. 非谓语：She and her husband founded a clothing center, offering free clothes. 定语从句：I had a family who signed up to help this week. 并列句：My husband and I will manage the room; we just need you to run the welcome table. 9. 本文主题 成长公益类：微小的善意与志愿奉献能够温暖他人、成就自我；走出舒适区、帮助他人，能赋予生活别样的意义与价值。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: 衔接句1——How was the author’s volunteer experience? What did he see and feel? Dozens of residents lined up patiently in the snow. Busy as I was, I witnessed people’s need for help and gradually understood the value of voluntary work. Paragraph 2: 衔接句2——What changes took place in the author? What did he learn from the experience? I abandoned my previous lazy lifestyle, took the initiative to join community service regularly and realized helping others brings genuine happiness. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：放眼望去，进店的人数之多让我大吃一惊。 →①许多居民冒着风雪排队等候，远超我的预期→②我认真负责接待、维持秩序、分发袋子→③目睹人们拿到物资的笑容，内心深受触动； 第二段：那个飘雪的周三夜晚，开启了我的社区服务之旅。 →④彻底改变了我享乐散漫的生活方式→⑤此后主动坚持参与各类社区志愿活动→⑥领悟人生真谛：奉献温暖他人，丰盈自我人生。 四.段落续写（高分范文 149词） Looking out, I was surprised by the number of people who would come in. Despite the freezing snow, many residents stood in line patiently, hoping to get warm clothes and necessities. Immediately, I devoted myself to my work. I guided people to line up orderly, answered their questions patiently and handed out prepared bags one after another. Though busy and tired, I felt warm every time grateful smiles appeared on their faces. It suddenly struck me that simple help could make a huge difference to those in need. That snowy Wednesday night marked the beginning of my journey into community service. I no longer wasted spare time on meaningless entertainment. Instead, I kept volunteering at the clothing center in my free time. I gradually realized that community service was not a troublesome task but a way to pass on warmth. True happiness derives from helping others and contributing to the community, which also enriches my life and shapes me into a better person. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $