2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习妻子深井救人续写导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 A Wife Risks Her Life On a misty February morning in a small town in southern India, Ramesan Nair, a 64-year-old retired officer, was picking black peppers with his wife Padmam and relatives. He climbed a tree near the family well to reach the peppers. Suddenly, a sharp cracking sound broke the morning silence. The branch beneath Ramesan broke. He lost his balance and fell directly into the 40-foot well below, striking his head and back against the wall on the way down. His wife Padmam heard the crash, then the terrifying splash (落水声). She rushed to the well and looked down into the darkness. She called his name. His faint voice echoed back — he was all right. She found a plastic rope and lowered it for him to climb. For a few seconds, she waited for a response. Then he cried out, “I can’t. I’m too weak, and my leg is hurt.” Padmam went into action quickly. She grabbed the thick rope attached to the well’s pulley system (滑轮系统). Tying one end to a nearby tree, she told her relative to call the fire department. After tying the other end around her waist, she climbed onto the edge of the well and lowered herself down. The wall of the well was slippery. The rope cut into her hands, leaving her palms bloody. Halfway down, she lost her hold and fell onto a narrow platform inside the well. The fall knocked the breath out of her. Catching her breath, she looked down, hoping to catch sight of her husband — but saw only water. With no time to think, she jumped into the water. The waist-high water was cold. Fish, frogs and small snakes swam around her as she searched with her hands in the dark. Finally, her hand touched her husband’s shoulder. He was unconscious, his face just below the water. 注意： （1）续写词数应为 150个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: With all her strength, Padmam lifted her husband and held him against the wall. _____________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Forty feet above, the firefighters were lowering a rescue basket into the well. ___________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 Ramesan picked peppers with his family--- _________________ --- He failed to climb the tree and fell into a deep well--- _________________ --- The injured husband couldn’t climb up with the rope--- _________________ --- Padmam climbed down the well, fell onto a platform and jumped into cold water--- _________________ 4. 细节问答 Why did Ramesan fall into the well?：___________________________________ Why couldn’t Ramesan climb up by himself?：_________________________________ What difficulties did Padmam meet while rescuing her husband?：________________________________________________ What state was Ramesan in when Padmam found him?：__________________________________________ What did Padmam do before climbing down the well?：_____________________________________________ 5．情节线 清晨一家人采摘黑胡椒，丈夫爬树不慎断裂坠入深井→丈夫受伤虚弱，无法借助绳索自救→妻子果断求助消防、绑绳下井施救→井壁湿滑，妻子坠落平台、双手受伤，依旧跳入冷水→黑暗凶险的井中，妻子成功摸到昏迷的丈夫→（续写）妻子拼尽全力托举丈夫、坚持等待救援→（续写）消防员抵达救援，夫妻成功获救，彰显深情与勇敢 6．情感线 Padmam: shocked and anxious→___________→persistent and fearless→___________→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：________________________________________________________________________ 英文：________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 找出原文宾语从句、定语从句、状语从句、非谓语、独立主格：________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 温情人性类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: 衔接句1——What difficulties did Padmam keep facing? How did she stick to rescuing her husband? ________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: 衔接句2——How did the firefighters rescue the couple? What ending and spirit are shown? ________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：帕德玛用尽全身力气托起丈夫，将他靠在井壁上。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：四十英尺的井上，消防员降下救援篮。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写 （第一段留白作答） ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （第二段留白作答） ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 Padmam（勇敢坚毅、深爱丈夫、临危不乱、甘于冒险牺牲的妻子）；Ramesan（意外坠井、受伤虚弱、陷入昏迷的丈夫）；firefighters（专业可靠、及时救援的施救人员） 2．视角 第三人称 3．时空线 Ramesan picked peppers with his family--- Ramesan climbed a tree to pick peppers --- He failed to climb the tree and fell into a deep well--- Padmam first tried a plastic rope to save him --- The injured husband couldn’t climb up with the rope--- Padmam prepared carefully and climbed down the well --- Padmam climbed down the well, fell onto a platform and jumped into cold water---She found her unconscious husband in the dark well water 4. 细节问答 Why did Ramesan fall into the well?：The tree branch broke suddenly, making him lose balance and fall into the well. Why couldn’t Ramesan climb up by himself?：He was badly hurt, weak and unable to move. What difficulties did Padmam meet while rescuing her husband?：The well wall was slippery, her hands were bleeding, and the well water was cold with creatures swimming around in total darkness. What state was Ramesan in when Padmam found him?：He was unconscious with his face barely above the water. What did Padmam do before climbing down the well?：She asked relatives to call the fire department and tied the pulley rope firmly around her waist. 5．情节线 清晨一家人采摘黑胡椒，丈夫爬树不慎断裂坠入深井→丈夫头部背部受伤、身体虚弱，无法借助绳索自救→妻子冷静求救、绑定绳索下井亲身施救→井壁湿滑、双手磨破流血，妻子坠落狭小平台，依旧果断跳入井水→黑暗冰冷的井中布满水生生物，妻子摸索找到昏迷丈夫→（续写）妻子拼尽全力托举丈夫，强忍疲惫伤口坚持等待救援→（续写）消防员抵达开展救援，夫妻二人成功脱险，彰显伟大的爱意与坚韧 6．情感线 Padmam: shocked and anxious→calm and decisive→persistent and fearless→exhausted but firm→relieved and grateful（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：丈夫意外坠井重伤昏迷，妻子不顾黑暗、冰水与危险，冒险下井施救，拼尽全力保护丈夫，最终在消防员的帮助下成功脱险。 英文：When her husband accidentally fell into a deep well and got seriously injured, Padmam overcame various dangers, risking her life to rescue him and finally got saved with the help of firefighters. 8. 句式 状语从句：As she searched with her hands in the dark, she finally found her husband. 宾语从句：He cried out that he was too weak to climb up. 非谓语：Tying one end to a nearby tree, she told her relative to call the fire department. 独立主格：He was unconscious, his face just below the water. 定语从句：She grabbed the thick rope attached to the well’s pulley system. 9. 本文主题 温情人性类：真爱无畏，平凡人拥有非凡的勇气；危难之中的坚守与牺牲，彰显人性光辉与真挚的亲情。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: 衔接句1——What difficulties did Padmam keep facing? How did she stick to rescuing her husband? Suffering from painful bleeding palms and cold water, Padmam held her husband tightly to prevent him from drowning and waited desperately for rescue. Paragraph 2: 衔接句2——How did the firefighters rescue the couple? What ending and spirit are shown? Firefighters lifted the exhausted couple into the basket. Everyone was touched by Padmam’s bravery and selfless love for her husband. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：帕德玛用尽全身力气托起丈夫，将他靠在井壁上。 →①冰水刺骨、手掌伤口剧痛，身体极度疲惫→②死死托住昏迷的丈夫，防止其溺水→③咬牙坚持，在黑暗中静静等待救援； 第二段：四十英尺的井上，消防员降下救援篮。 →④消防员小心翼翼操作设备展开救援→⑤夫妻二人成功获救、脱离危险→⑥众人敬佩妻子的勇敢，诠释真爱与坚守。 四.段落续写（高分范文） With all her strength, Padmam lifted her husband and held him against the wall. The icy water kept biting at her body, and her wounded palms ached sharply. Exhausted as she was, she refused to give up. Knowing that her slight carelessness would cost her husband’s life, she held him firmly to keep his face above the water. Surrounded by strange creatures and darkness, she stayed calm and patient, waiting eagerly for the firefighters’ arrival. Forty feet above, the firefighters were lowering a rescue basket into the well. Guided by flashlights, they spotted the exhausted couple quickly. They gently helped Padmam and her weak husband into the basket and lifted them steadily out of the well. After emergency treatment, Ramesan soon regained consciousness. Witnessing what his wife had done for him, he was deeply moved. It was Padmam’s fearless love and persistent courage that saved his life. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $