内容正文:
Unit 5 Fun Clubs 作文素材
一、单元话题说明
本单元的话题是“趣味俱乐部”,与此相关的写作一般是介绍校园里的各种俱乐部,用can/can’t谈论个人或他人的能力,描述不同俱乐部的活动内容和特色,说明加入俱乐部的原因、在俱乐部里能做的事情,同时学会表达自己对俱乐部的喜好,理解加入俱乐部的意义——发现兴趣、培养特长、结交朋友。
写作时,可以先引出校园里的俱乐部种类,然后重点介绍自己喜欢或想加入的俱乐部,用can/can’t说明自己的能力与俱乐部的匹配度,描述俱乐部的活动内容,最后表达加入俱乐部的愿望、收获或对俱乐部意义的理解。
2、 经典例题
一阶段审题立意
校园里有各种各样的趣味俱乐部,它们能丰富我们的校园生活,帮助我们培养特长、结交朋友。学校要举办“俱乐部推荐”活动,要求每位同学写一篇短文,介绍自己最喜欢的校园俱乐部,说说俱乐部的活动内容、自己能在俱乐部里做什么,以及喜欢这个俱乐部的原因。
要求:1. 包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 不少于80词,语言简洁,符合初一难度;
3. 正确使用本单元所学的俱乐部词汇can/can’t表达能力,语句通顺审题:
1. 要点:介绍校园俱乐部的种类、自己最喜欢的俱乐部、俱乐部的活动内容、个人能力(can/can’t)、喜欢的原因
2. 人称:以第一人称(我)为主
3. 时态:一般现在时(描述俱乐部活动、个人能力及喜好)
4. 文体:短文(介绍性、推荐性均可)
二阶段谋篇布局
一、开篇点题:There are many interesting clubs in our school, such as the music club, art club and science club. My favourite club is... I want to join it because it’s fun and helpful.
二、具体介绍相关内容:
1. 俱乐部整体与个人喜好:Firstly, our school has many great clubs. They help us discover our interests and talents. I can... (个人能力), so I want to join the... club.
2. 俱乐部活动与个人能力:Secondly, in the... club, we can... (俱乐部活动,如play the guitar, act out stories, take photos). I can... (具体能力,如sing well, draw pictures), but I can’t... (不足的能力,如play the piano). The club leader often helps us practice, so we can improve our abilities.
3. 俱乐部的时间、地点补充:Thirdly, the club meets at... (时间) in... (地点). We often do interesting activities together, and we can make many new friends there.
三、表达感受:
I love the... club very much. It not only makes my school life more colorful, but also helps me develop my talents. Joining clubs is a great way to make friends and learn new things.
三阶段积句成篇
开头句
1. Our school has many fun clubs, and each club can help us develop our interests.
2. I want to join the... club because I can show my abilities and make new friends there.
3. There are different kinds of clubs in our school, such as the music club, chess club and nature club.
4. Joining a school club is interesting and meaningful. My favourite club is the...
中间句
1. I can sing well, so I want to join the music club. I can’t play the guitar, but I want to learn it.
2. In the nature club, we can go hiking, take photos of birds and collect plants every Sunday.
3. Can you play chess? If yes, you can join the chess club. We often play chess together after school.
4. The cooking club teaches us to cook delicious food like jiaozi and mapo tofu. I can’t cook now, but I want to learn.
5. In the book club, we read books, act out stories and share our ideas. It’s very interesting.
6. I can play ping-pong well, so I join the ping-pong club. We practice together and improve our skills.
7. Firstly, our school has many clubs; Secondly, I want to join the... club because I can...; Thirdly, I hope to make new friends and develop my talents there.
结尾句
1. Joining the... club makes my school life more colorful. I really enjoy the time there.
2. I love my club very much. It helps me find my interest and become a better person.
3. I hope more classmates can join our club and enjoy the fun of... (俱乐部活动).
4. Clubs are a great place to show our talents and make friends. I will keep joining club activities.
名言警句(贴合俱乐部主题,简单易懂)
1. Our interests make us interesting. 我们的兴趣让我们变得有魅力。
2. Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。
3. Joining clubs helps us grow and make more friends. 加入俱乐部帮助我们成长,结交更多朋友。
三、范文欣赏
There are many fun clubs in our school, such as the music club, nature club, cooking club and art club. My favourite club is the music club. I want to join it because I love music and it can help me show my ability.
I can sing well, but I can’t play any musical instruments. In the music club, we learn to sing new songs, practice singing skills and sometimes play simple instruments with the help of our club leader. The club meets at 4:30 p.m. on Wednesdays in the music room. We often do group activities together, and I can make many new friends who also love music.
I think joining the music club is very meaningful. It not only makes my school life more colorful, but also helps me improve my singing skills. I hope I can learn to play the guitar in the club and become better at music. I love the music club very much, and I will keep joining its activities.
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