内容正文:
Unit 6 A Day in the Life 作文素材
一、单元话题说明
本单元的话题是“一天的生活”,与此相关的写作一般是介绍自己或他人的日常作息,用英语表达时间(整点、半点、刻钟),用what time和when询问、描述作息时间,讲述一天中不同时间段的活动,对比不同人的作息差异,同时学会理解合理安排时间的重要性,表达对时间管理的看法。
2、 经典例题
一阶段审题立意
日常作息是我们生活的重要组成部分,合理安排作息能让我们的生活更有序、更充实。你的芬兰笔友Timo给你发来邮件,分享了他的日常作息,他很想知道你的学校日作息是什么样子的,和他的作息有什么不同。请你写一篇短文(或邮件),向他介绍你的学校日作息。
要求:1. 包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 不少于80词,语言简洁,符合初一难度;
3. 正确使用本单元所学的时间表达、what time/when句式及一般现在时,语句通顺。
审题:
1. 要点:介绍自己的学校日作息(各时间段活动)、用规范时间表达、对比自己与Timo的作息差异
2. 人称:以第一人称(我)为主,第三人称(Timo)为辅
3. 时态:一般现在时(描述固定的日常作息)
4. 文体:短文(或应用文,可灵活选择)
二阶段谋篇布局
一、开篇点题:I have a regular school day routine. It helps me make good use of my time. Now I’d like to tell you about my school day and how it is different from yours.
二、具体介绍相关内容:
1. 自己的作息安排:Firstly, I usually get up at... (时间,如six fifteen/a quarter past six). I brush my teeth and take a shower, then I have breakfast at... After breakfast, I go to school at...
2. 学校期间的作息:Secondly, my school begins at... Each lesson is... minutes long. I have... lessons in the morning and... lessons in the afternoon. I have lunch at... After school, I usually...
3. 作息差异对比:Thirdly, my routine is a little different from yours. You get up at 7:40 a.m., but I get up earlier. Your school begins at 9:00 a.m., while mine begins at... Besides, you go to the ice hockey club after school, but I usually do my homework first.
三、表达感受:
I think a regular routine is very important. It helps me study better and live a happy life. To plan time is to save time, and I will keep my good routine and make better use of my time.
三阶段积句成篇
开头句
1. I have a regular daily routine. It makes my school day busy but meaningful.
2. What time do you usually get up on school days? Let me tell you about my daily routine.
3. Everyone has different daily routines. My school day routine is full and interesting.
4. Thank you for sharing your daily routine. Now I want to tell you about mine.
中间句
1. I usually get up at a quarter past six, then I take a shower and have breakfast at seven o’clock.
2. What time does your school begin? Mine begins at eight o’clock in the morning.
3. When do you have lunch? I have lunch at twelve ten in the afternoon with my classmates.
4. After school, I sometimes play basketball with my friends, then I go home and do my homework.
5. Each lesson in our school is 45 minutes long, and there’s a short break between lessons.
6. I usually go to bed at nine thirty p.m. because I want to get enough sleep for the next day.
7. Firstly, I get up early every school day; Secondly, I have a busy but happy school day; Thirdly, my routine is different from yours but both helpful.
结尾句
1. My daily routine is simple but regular. It helps me make good use of every minute.
2. I think having a good daily routine is important. It makes my life more ordered and colorful.
3. Though our daily routines are different, we both try to make good use of our time.
4. To plan time is to save time. I will keep my good routine and work harder every day.
名言警句
1. To plan time is to save time. 合理安排时间就是节约时间。
2. Early to bed, early to rise. 早睡早起。
3. Time is precious; don’t waste it. 时间宝贵,请勿浪费。
三、范文欣赏
Dear Timo,
Thank you for sharing your daily routine with me. I think your routine is great, and now I’d like to tell you about my school day routine. It is a little different from yours but also regular.
I usually get up at a quarter past six every school day. I brush my teeth and take a shower first, then I have breakfast at seven o’clock. After breakfast, I go to school at seven fifty. My school begins at eight o’clock. Each lesson is 45 minutes long, and we have a short break between lessons. I have four lessons in the morning and two lessons in the afternoon. I have lunch at twelve ten with my classmates. After school, I usually do my homework first, then I play basketball with my friends for a while. I have dinner at six thirty, and I go to bed at nine thirty p.m.
My routine is a little different from yours. You get up at 7:40 a.m., but I get up earlier. You go to the ice hockey club after school, but I do my homework first. I think both our routines are good because they help us make good use of time. To plan time is to save time, and I will keep my good routine.
Yours,
Li Ming
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