摘要:
该初中英语讲义通过写作框架与表格系统构建单元写作知识体系,分Unit 6“日常生活”和Unit 7“生日”主题,以“开头-正文-结尾”框架梳理写作结构,用表格呈现时间活动、情感表达等内容要点,明确各部分逻辑联系与重难点分布。
讲义亮点在于分层写作指导与实用方法工具结合,通过一类作文与基础作文对比,搭配“好词好句”(如“take part in after-school activities”)和“避雷指南”(如时态、时间表达规范),提升学生语言能力。以“My school day”时间活动描述、“My Mother’s Birthday”情感表达为例,用“First...Next...Besides”等逻辑词培养思维品质,基础学生可掌握基础表达,优秀学生能优化语言,支持教师实施精准分层教学。
内容正文:
Unit 6作文-日常生活
题目
你们学校的英文公众号正在进行主题为“My school day”的征文活动。请你根据下面的表格提示,用英语写一篇短文介绍你的上学日,然后进行投稿。
上午
6:30起床;7:30上学;8:00开始上课;上三节课;11:30吃午饭
下午
2:00开始上课;上两节课;课外活动(打篮球);5:00回家
晚上
6:00左右吃晚饭;做一个小时的家庭作业;9:00上床睡觉
一类作文
My School Day
Every school day is busy but meaningful. I usually get up at 6:30 in the morning and leave for school at 7:30. Our classes begin at 8:00. In the morning, we have three lessons, which are always interesting. I have lunch at 11:30 in the school canteen.
After lunch, we start afternoon classes at 2:00. We have two more lessons. Then I take part in after-school activities. I often play basketball with my classmates, which I really enjoy. I go home at about 5:00.
In the evening, I have dinner around 6:00. After that, I do my homework for about one hour. At 9:00, I go to bed and get ready for the next day.
I enjoy my school life because it is full and fun!
【写作框架】
开头:引言:我每天的校园生活是怎样的
正文:介绍上午、下午和晚上的活动
结尾:表达感受
【好词好句】
1. 每天都是忙碌且有意义的 Every school day is busy but meaningful.
2. …点去上学 leave for school at…
3. 参加课后活动 take part in after-school activities
4. 吃饭 have …
5. 做作业 do my homework
6. 为……做准备 get ready for…
Unit 6作文-日常生活
题目
你们学校的英文公众号正在进行主题为“My school day”的征文活动。请你根据下面的表格提示,用英语写一篇短文介绍你的上学日,然后进行投稿。
上午
6:30起床;7:30上学;8:00开始上课;上三节课;11:30吃午饭
下午
2:00开始上课;上两节课;课外活动(打篮球);5:00回家
晚上
6:00左右吃晚饭;做一个小时的家庭作业;9:00上床睡觉
基础作文
My School Day
I get up at 6:30 in the morning. I go to school at 7:30 and classes begin at 8:00. We have three lessons in the morning. I eat lunch at 11:30.
In the afternoon, we start class at 2:00 and have two lessons. Then I play basketball with my classmates. I go home at 5:00.
In the evening, I eat dinner at about 6:00. Then I do my homework for one hour. I go to bed at 9:00.
[写作框架]
上午:起床 + 上学 + 上课 + 吃午饭
下午:上课 + 课外活动 + 回家
晚上:吃晚饭 + 做作业 + 睡觉
[避雷指南]
1. 时态:全天用一般现在时描述日常习惯
2. 时间表达:使用 at + 时间 (at 6:30) / in the morning / in the evening 等
3. 动作词:get up / go to school / eat lunch / play basketball / do homework 等
4. 连接词:使用 then / after that / in the evening 等基本连接词。
Unit 7作文-生日
题目
母爱比天空更广,母爱比大海更深,母爱比清泉更纯。妈妈总是记得孩子的生日,为孩子张罗生日派对,你的开心、快乐、健康就是妈妈最大的快乐。妈妈的生日你记得吗?
请写一篇英语短文,内容包括:
(1) 妈妈的生日是在什么时候;
(2) 妈妈生日时你做些什么来表达对她的爱(不少于三点);
(3) 对妈妈的祝福。
一类作文
My Mother’s Birthday [写作框架]
My mother’s birthday is on May 10th. She always remembers my birthday and makes me feel special. So I want to make her birthday wonderful too.
First, I buy a nice gift, like a scarf that she likes. Next, I make a beautiful birthday card and write “I love you” in it. Besides, I help cook dinner on that day, which makes my mother very happy. I feel happy too because I can do something for her.
I wish my mother a wonderful birthday. I hope she is healthy and happy every day!
开头:妈妈生日、妈妈对我的爱、想回报她
正文:自己做的三件事 + 简短感受
结尾:祝福妈妈、表达心意
好词好句
1. 让我感到与众不同:make me feel special.
2. 精美礼物:a nice gift
3. 制作精美的生日卡片:make a beautiful birthday card
4. 做饭:cook dinner
5. 我感到很开心:feel happy
6. 我希望她每天能幸福快乐:I hope she is healthy and happy every day.
Unit 7作文-生日
题目
母爱比天空更广,母爱比大海更深,母爱比清泉更纯。妈妈总是记得孩子的生日,为孩子张罗生日派对,你的开心、快乐、健康就是妈妈最大的快乐。妈妈的生日你记得吗?
请写一篇英语短文,内容包括:
(1) 妈妈的生日是在什么时候;
(2) 妈妈生日时你做些什么来表达对她的爱(不少于三点);
(3) 对妈妈的祝福。
基础作文
My Mother’s Birthday
My mother’s birthday is on May 10th. I always do something special for her on that day.
First, I buy a beautiful gift for her. Then, I make a birthday card to say “I love you”. I also help her do housework on her birthday.
Happy birthday to my mother! I hope she is happy every day.
[写作框架] :
开头:妈妈生日是什么时候
正文:列举三件事(买礼物、做卡片、帮忙等)
结尾:对妈妈的祝福
避雷指南
1. 时间写清楚:用 on + 日期 表示生日。
2. 表达行为用简单句,动词正确:buy, make, say, give, help 等。
3. 祝福可以用简单句:Happy birthday to my mother! / I wish my mother happy every day
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