续写提分技巧1 课件-2026届高三英语二轮复习专项

读后续写提分技巧一 非谓语·独立主格万能仿写 一、现在分词作伴随状语 （一个主语同时发出两个动作，最常用、最加分） 结构：Doing…, 主语 + 谓语… 基础句：He sat on the grass and watched the sunset. 升级句式：Sitting on the grass, he watched the sunset. 他坐在草地上，看着日落。 仿写训练： 1.我慢慢地走着，跟着他进了屋。 ________________, I followed him into the house. 2. 她温柔地笑着，递给我一瓶水。 _______________, she handed me a bottle of water. 3.我屏住呼吸，轻轻地向前走去。 ____________________, I stepped forward quietly. Walking slowly Smiling gently Holding my breath 二、现在分词表“轻柔动作/脚步” （读后续写高频：悄悄走近、轻轻开门、放慢脚步） 结构：Doing softly/quietly/gently…, 基础句： I walked toward the door softly. 我轻手轻脚地走向门口。 升级句式： Stepping softly, I walked toward the door. 仿写训练： 1.他轻轻地动了动，碰了碰我的肩膀。 ________________, he touched my shoulder. 2.他环顾四周，对我低声说话。 __________________, he whispered to me. 3.他甜甜地笑着对我点了点头。 _________________, he nodded to me. Moving gently Glancing around Smiling sweetly 三、同一主语连续三个动作 （阅卷最爱！画面感极强） 结构：Did…, did…, and did… Doing..., doing..., did... 1.他站起身，擦干眼泪，走开了。 He stood up, wiped his tears, __________________. 2.我深吸一口气，抬起头，大声说了出来。 I took a deep breath, ________________, and spoke loudly. 3.她冲过来，握住我的手，给了我一个拥抱。 ____________________, held my hands, and gave me a hug. and walked away raised my head She rushed forward 高级版（带非谓语） 我坐在那里，十指交叉，焦急地等待着。 ______________________________________, I waited anxiously. Sitting there and crossing my fingers 仿写训练： 被雷声吓坏了，我躲在妈妈身后。 ___________________________, I hid behind my mother. 受到他的话的鼓舞，我决定再试一次。 __________________________, I decided to try again. 听到这个消息很惊讶，她站在那里说不出话。 __________________________, she stood there speechless. 四、过去分词作状语（表状态/被动） 结构：Done…, 主语 + 谓语… 基础句：I was tired and fell asleep quickly. 升级句式：Too tired, I fell asleep quickly. 我如此疲惫，以至于很快就睡着了。 Frightened by the thunder Encouraged by his words Surprised at the news 句式训练： He ran to the bus stop, __________________________. 他跑到公交站，却发现公交车已经开走了。 I opened the box, ______________________________. 我打开盒子，没想到里面是一个可爱的玩具。 She looked up, _______________________. 她抬起头，不料我们却四目相对。 五、不定式表意外结果 结构：…, only to do… He lifted a rock only to drop it on his own feet. 他搬起石头，结果却砸了自己的脚。 only to find the bus gone only to see a lovely toy inside only to meet my eyes 六、现在分词作结果状语（表自然而然、顺理成章的结果） 结构：sb did..., doing... 基础句： He worked so hard at English that he made great progress. 他努力学英语于是取得了很大进步。 升级句式： He worked hard at English, making great progress. So hard did he work at English that he made great progress. 仿写训练： 1.他从自行车上摔下来，伤到了左腿。 He fell off the bike, ____________________. 2.大雨下了一整天，引发了大洪水。 The heavy rain lasted all day,____________________. 3.她父母早逝，结果她成了孤身一人。 Her parents died young, ______________________________. 4.他错过了末班车，只好步行回家。 He missed the last bus, _____________________. hurting his left leg causing a big flood leaving her alone in the world having to walk home 1. 名词/代词 + doing 大雨倾盆，我们不得不停下脚步。 _______________________, we had to stop walking. 夕阳西下，我们踏上回家的路。 ________________, we made our way home. 我的心跳得很快，一句话也说不出来。 _______________________, I couldn’t say a word. 六、独立主格结构（高级感拉满） （独立结构的名词和句子的主语不一致） The rain pouring down The sun setting My heart beating fast 2. 名词/代词 + done 综合考虑一切，这是很有意义的一天。 _______________________, it was a meaningful day. 话说完，他转身离开了。 ________________, he turned around and left. 工作完成后，我们就回家了。 _________________, we went home. 他坐在前排，嘴巴半张着。 He sat in the front row, _______________________ 他双手抱胸在那里站着。 He stood there, __________________________________. Everything considered His words said The job finished his mouth half opened. his arms folded across his chest 3. 名词 /代词+ 形容词/副词 他脸色苍白，震惊地站在那里。 ______________, he stood there in shock. 会议结束后，我们回到了教室。 __________________, we went back to class. 他坐在椅子上，气得脸色苍白。 He sat on the chair, _________________________. 窗户开着，房间里很冷。 ____________________, it was very cold in the room. 他一言不发，会议就结束了。 _________, the meeting came to an end. His face pale The meeting over his face pale with anger The windows open He silent 4.名词/代词+介词短语 老师进来了，手里拿着几本书。 The teacher came in, ________________________. 他站在后面，目光盯着她的背影。 He stood behind, ______________________. 士兵站在那里，手里拿着枪. The soldier stood there, _____________. 他躺在草地上，双手枕在脑后。 He lay on the grass, ___________________________. 她站在那里，眼里含着泪水。 She stood there, __________________. tears in her eyes his hands behind his head gun in hand his eyes on her back some books in his hand 七、with复合结构 结构：with+宾语+doing/done/to do/adj./adv./介词短语 我眼里含着泪水，真诚地向他道谢。 _______________________, I thanked him sincerely. 我双腿颤抖着，走向了舞台。 _______________________, I walked toward the stage. 他低着头站在那里。 He stood there, ____________________. 窗户开着，她睡得很香。 She was sleeping soundly, _______________________. 他关着门在书房里努力学习。 ______________________, he studied hard in the study. 因为有太多事情要做，他没有时间休息。 _______________________________, he had no time to rest. With tears in my eyes With my legs shaking with his head down with the window open With the door closed With too much work to do 熟能生巧 1.我心跳剧烈，站在那里，不知所措。 _____________________, I stood there, not knowing what to do. 2.我深受感动，抱住她，言语无法表达我的谢意。 Moved deeply, I hugged her,___________________________________. 3.听到一声巨响，我们转过身，不料看到一个陌生人。 Hearing a loud sound, we turned around, ______________________. 4.综合来看，这次经历让我懂得了勇敢的重要性。 _______________________, this experience taught me the importance of bravery. Heart beating wildly words failing to express my thanks only to see a stranger All things considered 把下面句子变成高级句式： 1. It was raining hard. We couldn’t go out. 2. He was worn out. His mother told him to go to bed early. 3. I looked at him. I didn’t know what to say. 4.He sat by the table. He fixed his eyes on a nail on the wall. It raining hard, we couldn’t go out. He worn out, his mother told him to go to bed early. Looking at him, I was at a loss for words. Fixing his eyes on a nail on the wall, he sat by the table. His eyes fixed on a nail on the wall, he sat by the table. He sat by the table with his eyes fixed on a nail on the wall. 5.妈妈在前面走着，小孩在后面开心地跟着。 The mother walked ahead, ______________________________. 6.小孩双手支着头，眼睛盯着天空。 _____________________________, the little child gazed quietly up at the sky. 7.他撞到课桌，书都掉到了地上。 He knocked on the desk, ___________________________________. 8.他急急忙忙赶到家，却发现门锁着。 He hurried home, ____________________________. 9.轻轻地碰了我一下，他往前面走去。 _____________________, he walked forward. her child following her happily Resting his chin in his hands all the books dropping on the floor only to find the door locked Gently touching me 请填入所给动词的适当形式： The breeze ________ (blow)softly,we wandered into the park, ________(leave)all our tiredness behind. With leaves ________(rustle) in the wind and sunlight filtering through the branches, we sat on a stone bench,watching kids ________(run)and laughing on the grass. Time ________(pass) quietly, no one wanted to leave, our minds relaxed and all pressure __________ (forget). blowing leaving rustling running passing forgotten THANKS! $