专题01 “大道至简”——“四步”避免读后续写“踩坑”“跑偏”(1) 课件 -2026届高三英语二轮复习专项

大道至简 ——“谈读后写续策略” 学生 原作 高考 真题 （2022） 知 “道” 得 “道” 四 步 作文续写： 作文续写作为新高考英语中变化最大的题型，作文续写是怎样考核的呢？ 提供一段350词以内的语言材料，要求考生根据该材料内容、所给段落的开头语进行150词左右的续写，使原材料发展成为一篇与给定材料有正常逻辑衔接且结构完整的短文。 新高考英语卷，除浙江卷，其余适应新高考的省份卷（全国卷）中的作文续写取消了提示词。这是一种结合了阅读理解进行写作的题型，将阅读和写作统一，融合了信息的获取、概括、转化以及语言组织等方面能力的检查。 命题特点：读后续写文章题材选择以记叙文为主。文章信息完整，既可以提炼出要点，又要给续写留出余地，此类文章故事性强，情节有起伏，内容连贯，逻辑性强，结构清晰，结尾处有结局或者感慨、总结等。 段落要求：给定的段落开头能引导故事延续，又防止天马行空的想象。 2022年高考真题 Back Back 知 “道” 失分原因 评分标准 试题剖析 （一）“看透”——读后续写试题的命题规律 真实的问题情境 夹叙夹议类体裁 独立思考能力 正能量 展开合理想象 衔接自然顺畅 逻辑性较强 契合度高 Back （二）“吃透”——读后续写评分标准 主要考查两个方面：内容创作和语言运用 四个维度： 1.逻辑—— 与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度； 2.内容——完整性、丰富性； 3.语言——应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性； 4.语篇——上下文的连贯性，考察语篇衔接能力。 Back 评分标准 评分原则： （1)总分25分；按5档给分； （2)评分时，先根据所给短文的内容和语言初步确定所属档次，然后以该档次要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分； （3)词数少于130词，总分扣除2分； （4)主要从以下4个方面考虑： a. 与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度； b. 内容丰富性 c. 语法结构及词汇的丰富性和准确性； d. 上下文连贯性。 （5)拼写与标点符号准确性也是评分的一个重要方面； （6)若书写较差，分数降低一档。 评分4个维度： 第一项：逻辑 第二项：内容 第三项：语言 第四项：语篇 （衔接） 第五档（21-25） ：漂漂亮亮 第四档（16-20） ：清清楚楚 第三档（11-15） ：马马虎虎 第二档（6-10） ：稀里糊涂 第一档（0-5） ：一塌糊涂 高考读后续写评分档次 Back （三）“摸透”目前考生读后续写主要失分原因 1.没有凸显正能量的主题。 2.续接突兀脱节，另起炉灶，“脑洞大开” 3.情节过于简单，语言不够丰富，无意义对话过多。 4.语法错误和拼写错误过多 5.明显地生搬硬套，词不达意。 6.书写过于潦草，影响阅读。 Back （四）“悟透”——读后续写提升的关键 “读”是“写”的“活水之源”和解题关键。有效输入才能高效输出。 1.提升阅读理解提取信息-处理信息-使用信息的能力； 2.通过阅读有效输入语料，吸取精华，积累素材，提 升语言表达能力； 3.以“读”促“写”，读写结合，学以致用。 Back 得 “道” 理得清 续得顺 写得准 读得懂 Back Why     Who           When   Where What   how Why Back Why   Who             When   Where What   how Hesitated afraide proude frustrateded determined Back 八省联考 学生原作 We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn‘t look at me . Believing he didn’t want to quit from the bottom of the heart, I made up my mind to spare no effort to motivate him. I told him that he should live for himself, not others, and no matter what happened, all of us would back him up. Lowering his head, David got lost in deept houghts. “As long as you go all out, there‘s no need to care about the outcomes, right?”I patted on his shoulder,softening my voice. Eventually, David’s eyes sparkled,after which he rose to his feet, heading to the starting line firmly. I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. He was undoubtedly the shortest, but much taller than other runners in my view. The run started. Although falling behind from the beginning, David didn‘t slower his steps. His face got red, but his eyes shone like stars. Loud encouragements surrounnded him, fueling him a lot. Ultimately, he crossed the ending line and hugged me tightly.“You succeeded! ” I said,with tears welling up in my eyes. I finally realized that great bravery and encouragements could break all the obstacles, both physically and mentally. We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn't look at me. I patted his shoulder gently , “David, no one can laugh at you except when you look down on yourself. ” Hearing my words, David turned to me with tears rolling down his cheeks. “If you are brave to challenge yourself, I will back you up!” I added with passion. He looked up, “I have been preparing for this event, I desire to finish the cross-country run.” His coach heard what David said and clapped his hands with joy-he knew David was more determined than anyone else now. I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. The run started. As expected, David fell behind from the very beginning. It seemed that the runway was extremely long for him. Nevertheless, David went all out as if he had forgotten all about his disease. At a point, he tripped and fell down, but he struggled to his feet and kept on running. All classmates and his coach were cheering for him enthusiastically. “Come on! You can make it ! We are proud of you!” they shouted. To everyone‘s joy, he reached the final line, ranking the 9th. He won, not the medal but everyone’s admiration. It was his brave heart and strong determination that made a great difference 激活词汇： ① quit 放弃 ② motivate 激励，鼓励 ③ spare no effort不遗余力，全力以赴 ④ from the bottom of the heart 从内心里 ⑤ made up my mind 下定决心 ⑥ Back up支持 ⑦ Fuel somebody 为某人加油 ⑧ Ultimately 最后 ⑨ challenge oneself 挑战自我 ⑩ nevertheless然而 Back 写“活”动作&表情： ① Pat on the shoulder 拍拍肩膀 ② lower one’s head 低下头 ③ with tears welling up in my eyes 热泪盈眶 ④ Eventually, David's eyes sparkled,after which he rose to his feet, heading to the starting line firmly. 终于，大卫眼睛发光，之后，他站起身来，坚定地走向起跑线。 ⑤ At one point, he tripped over and fell down to the ground, but he struggled to his feet and kept on running. 有那么一会儿，他跌倒在地，但是他挣扎起来坚持跑。 Back 【亮点句式1】 As long as you go all out, there's no need to care about the outcomes.(条件状语从句) 【亮点句式2】Lowering his head, David got lost in deep thoughts. （现在分词作状语) 【亮点句式3】I finally realized that great bravery and encouragements could break all the obstacles, both physically and mentally. (宾语从句) 【亮点句式4】 It was his brave heart and strong determination that made a great difference. 正是他的勇敢和坚定产生了极大的影响。 Back 建议：以读促写 积累语料 建议：看透、吃透 摸透、悟透 建议：“四步”齐活 There is a chance that he will come tomorrow. 1.他可能明天会来。 2.汤姆建议我们放学后去购物。 The suggestion came from Tom that we should go shopping after school. 英语逻辑思维写作练习 ---同位语从句的使用 ________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ , students work harder than ever. 1.随高考临近 ， 同学们学习更加努力。 英语逻辑思维写作练习 --- 介词的使用 ________________________________________________________________ With the national college entrance examination approaching , 2.多亏法律帮助保护了美洲雕(bald eagles)并且禁止使用有害化学药品。 那些鸟儿回归了。 英语逻辑思维写作练习 --- 介词与定语从句的搭配使用 __________________helped protect bald eagles and didn’t allow the use of harmful chemicals the birds made a comeback. ________________________________________________________________ Thanks to laws that 多亏了我们的老师帮助我学习功课， 我成功的通过了考试。 _________________________help us with our lessons we succeed in passing the exam. ________________________________________________________________ Thanks to our teachers who 英语逻辑思维写作练习 --- 介词与同位语从句的搭配使用 Tom 迟到了，因为他起床晚了。 Tom was late due to ________________he got up late. ________________________________________________________________ due to the fact that in spite of The young man boarded the train to Beijing __________________ his money was running out. 那个年轻人登上了开往北京的列车，尽管他的钱快用光了。 ________________________________________________________________ in spite of the fact that Thank you! $