Unit 5 Wild animals 单元话题（野生动物）写作满分范文15篇-2025-2026学年七年级英语下册重难点讲练全攻略（沪教版五四制）

**基本信息** 分层进阶式野生动物主题写作训练，通过基础描述、信息整合到综合应用的逻辑链条，系统提升语言表达与跨文化环保意识。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|题型特征|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |基础入门训练|5篇|提示性写作（演讲稿、邮件回复），70词左右，聚焦动物特征+现状描述|从单一种类动物基础信息（颜色、分布）到简单呼吁，培养语言表达连贯性| |进阶拓展训练|5篇|半开放写作（倡议短文、征文投稿），80词左右，整合多维度信息（栖息地、食物、原因）|融合动物习性与濒危原因分析，提升信息整合与逻辑组织能力| |能力综合实践|5篇|主题性写作（博客、演讲比赛），80词左右，需结合具体数据与保护措施|综合外貌、行为、现状及解决方案，强化批判性思维与跨文化环保意识|

学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ Unit 5 Wild animals 单元话题（野生动物）写作满分范文15篇 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．假如你是李文，你的外教Mr Robin让你用英语为同学们介绍一种中国特有的动物。以下是你找到的关于金丝猴（golden monkey）的资料。请你结合以下提示写一篇演讲稿，为大家介绍一下金丝猴及其生存现状，并呼吁大家保护动物。 提示：1.颜色：黄色或黑色； 2.分布：中国南部； 3.特点：群居；食树叶和水果； 4.现状：人类的捕杀致使金丝猴处于危险之中。 要求：1.语言流畅，逻辑清晰，内容可以适当发挥； 2.词数70词左右； 3.书写规范，卷面整洁； 4.文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Good morning, everyone, Today I want to tell you one of the Chinese animals—the golden monkey. Golden monkeys live in the south of China. Some of them are yellow and some of them are black. Golden monkeys live in groups. They like eating leaves and fruit. People kill many golden monkeys so they are in great danger now. We must help save them and save all animals that are in danger! Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；   ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；   ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示的信息，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。      [写作步骤]      第一步：问候听众，点明主题；      第二步：介绍金丝猴的栖息地、外貌特征、生活习性和面临的现状；   第三步：发出呼吁，倡导大家帮助拯救金丝猴以及所有处于危险中的动物。      [亮点词汇]   ①want to do sth.想要做某事 ②live in groups群居 ③in danger处于危险中   [高分句型]      ①People kill many golden monkeys so they are in great danger now.（因果并列句）   ②We must help save them and save all animals that are in danger!（that引导的定语从句） 2．假设你是李梅，你的英国朋友Jennie发邮件邀请你保护濒危野生动物。请阅读以下邮件并回复。 To: LiMei@mail.com Subject: Let’s protect wild animals in danger! Dear Li Mei, How is everything going? I’m working on a project called “Let’s protect wild animals in danger!” these days. Are you interested in protecting wild animals? I know your favourite wild animal is the panda. Why do you like it? Is it in danger? Do you know why it is in danger and what we can do to help it? Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Jennie 参考词汇：lovely，friendly，lose their home，natural parks 要求：1. 邮件必须包含提示要点，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4. 词数：不少于60词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数） Dear Jennie, I’m glad to receive your e-mail and I want to tell you I am interested in protecting wild animals. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Mei 【答案】参考范文： Dear Jennie, I’m glad to receive your e-mail and I want to tell you I am interested in protecting wild animals. My favourite wild animal is pandas because they are quite lovely. They are also friendly to people. Their eyes are interesting. The black circles around their eyes make them look like they are wearing glasses. As far as I know, pandas are in danger. For one thing, they lost their home because people use more land to plant crops. For another, they don’t have enough food to eat. We must think of ways to help them. I think we should build more natural parks and plant more bamboo for them. Yours, Li Mei 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、开篇点题，引出话题； 第二步、介绍自己喜欢大熊猫的原因，濒危的原因； 第三步、介绍帮助大熊猫的方法并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①be interested in…对……感兴趣 ②as far as I know据我所知 ③For one thing…For another一方面……另一方面 [高分句型] ①My favourite wild animal is pandas because they are quite lovely.(because引导原因状语从句) 3．假如你叫李明，受邀参加学校的英语演讲比赛，演讲主题为“保护野生动物”，请根据以下提示，写一篇演讲稿。词数70 左右。 提示: 1. 最喜爱的动物名称； 2. 该动物的特征、习性等； 3. 该动物的现状；        4. 保护该动物的措施。 Dear teachers and students, My name is Li Ming. I am so happy to be here to talk about saving animals with you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear teachers and students, My name is Li Ming. I am so happy to be here to talk about saving animals with you. My favorite animal is pandas. They are black and white, and they are very cute. They live in forests and zoos in China. They like eating bamboo, leaves, fruits, and so on. For many Chinese people, they are very important because they are a symbol of China. But now pandas are at risk. People cut down too many trees, so pandas don’t have enough space to live in and don’t have enough food to eat. We should save pandas. We shouldn’t cut down too many trees and we should tell people the importance of saving pandas. Pandas are our friends, and let’s save them together. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，围绕保护动物展开，涵盖了所讲动物的特点、面临的困境及保护措施，可适当添加细节，突出保护主题。 [写作步骤] 第一步，先介绍自己及要谈论的主题 —— 拯救动物，并引出自己喜欢的动物熊猫。 第二步，再描述熊猫的特征、象征意义、面临的风险以及对应的保护措施。 [亮点词汇] ①the importance of……的重要性 ②at risk处于危险中 ③cut down砍伐 [高分句型] ①We shouldn’t cut down too many trees and we should tell people the importance of saving pandas.（and 连接两个并列成分） ②For many Chinese people, they are very important because they are a symbol of China.（because引导原因状语从句） 4．蓝鲸是世界上最大的动物。最近一次的科学调查中，同学们发现它们正濒临灭绝。请你根据下面的表格信息，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，呼吁人们保护蓝鲸。 栖息地 海洋 食物 海洋中的小型动物 濒临灭绝的原因 （1）海洋受到污染（pollute）； （2）受到人类捕杀。 严峻的形势 每年海洋中的蓝鲸越来越少。 措施 （1）保持海洋干净； （2）禁止捕杀蓝鲸。 The blue whales are the largest animals in the world. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The blue whales are the largest animals in the world. They live in the ocean and feed on small animals in the ocean. The blue whale is facing a serious situation. There are fewer blue whales in the ocean every year because of hunting and pollution. To protect blue whales, humans need to take measures such as reducing pollution to keep the oceans clean and banning blue whale hunting. Protecting the blue whale not only requires the joint efforts of the international community, but also requires everyone to start from the small things in daily life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，涵盖蓝鲸的基本情况、面临的困境及保护措施，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出保护蓝鲸这一核心要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，先介绍蓝鲸的基本信息，包括其是世界上最大的动物、生活环境及食物来源。 第二步，再描述蓝鲸面临的严峻处境，即数量逐年减少及原因，接着说明保护蓝鲸的措施。 [亮点词汇] ①feed on 以……为食 ②face a serious situation 面临严峻的处境 ③joint efforts 共同努力 [高分句型] ①They live in the ocean and feed on small animals in the ocean.（and连接两个并列的谓语动词） ②To protect blue whales, humans need to take measures such as reducing pollution to keep the oceans clean and banning blue whale hunting.（动词不定式作目的状语） 5．     学校在“地球生命共同体”科普活动中，呼吁大家保护濒危野生动物。假如你是学生代表李华，请根据下面的要点和要求，用英语写一封保护东北虎(Siberian tiger)的倡议书。(满分5分) 要点： (1)东北虎有着橙色的皮毛，大而强壮。它们生活在森林里； (2)人们砍倒许多树木，所以东北虎处于极大的危险之中； (3)提出保护东北虎的1~2条建议。 要求：要点齐全；表述通顺；简洁得体；40词左右。 Dear schoolmates, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 【答案】参考范文： Dear schoolmates,     Siberian tigers have orange fur and they are big and strong. They live in forests. However, people cut down many trees, so they are in great danger. We should save forests and never buy things made of their fur. Every Siberian tiger counts! Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇小作文； ②时态：主要用一般现在时，讲老虎的样子、住在哪、遇到的问题和保护办法； ③提示：内容围绕老虎的情况、危险和保护，写得清楚好懂，强调要保护它们。 [写作步骤] 第一步，说西伯利亚虎的样子，比如毛的颜色、体型； 第二步，讲它们住的地方和遇到危险的原因； 第三步，说怎么保护它们，还强调每只老虎都很重要。 [亮点词汇] ①live in forests 生活在森林里 ②cut down 砍伐 ③in great danger 很危险 [高分句型] ①Siberian tigers have orange fur and they are big and strong.（and 连接并列成分） ②However, people cut down many trees, so they are in great danger.（however 表转折，so 表结果） 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．动物是人类的朋友。然而，很多动物处于危险之中，濒临灭绝。雪豹就是其中之一。 请根据提示，写一篇短文倡议人们保护雪豹 (snow leopard)。 Habitat the mountains of Central and South Asia Food sheep, rabbits, other small animals Reasons hunt for fur (皮毛); cut down trees Actions help learn about them; set up national parks 要求：1.包含提示内容，可适当增加细节； 2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名； 3.不少于60词。开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Boys and girls, Snow leopards are our friends, but how much do you know about them?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Let’s do something to make a difference! 【答案】参考范文 Boys and girls, Snow leopards are our friends, but how much do you know about them? Snow leopards live in the mountains of Central and South Asia and feed on sheep, rabbits, and other small animals. Unfortunately, they are in danger. People hunt them for their fur, cut down forests, and leave them with no place to live. We should do something to protect them. First, we can help people learn more about snow leopards. Second, we can set up more nature parks. Let’s do something to make a difference! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头引出雪豹这一主题； 第二步，中间阐述雪豹的生活习性、面临的危险； 第三步，结尾提出保护雪豹的具体措施。 [亮点词汇] ①unfortunately不幸地 ②hunt捕猎 ③ensure确保 ④set up建立 [高分句型] Let’s do something to make a difference! (祈使句) 7．你喜欢聪明而强壮的大象吗？在泰国大象是好运的象征。然而大象又是世界上的濒危动物之一，我们怎么才能够挽救大象呢？请你根据提示内容，写一篇英语短文介绍你心目中的大象。要求：不少于80词。 提示内容：strong and clever    a symbol of    good luck    huge    large ears and long trunks    in danger    save the elephants There are many kinds of animals in the world. My favorite animal is the elephant. I love elephants because ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope people can save elephants. 【答案】例文 There are many kinds of animals in the world. My favorite animal is the elephant. I love elephants because they are strong and clever. They have huge bodies, large ears, and long trunks, which help them drink water and pick up food. In Thailand, elephants are a symbol of good luck. However, they are now in danger because of hunting and habitat loss. To save the elephants, we should protect their homes and stop buying ivory products. Elephants are friendly and intelligent. They can remember places and help people with work. So we should do our best to protect these amazing animals. I hope people can save elephants. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ② 时态：主要使用一般现在时； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点明主题 —— 表明自己最爱的动物是大象，并简述喜爱原因及大象的核心身体特征； 第二步，介绍大象的文化意义，转而阐述其当前濒危的现状及原因，并提出具体的保护措施； 第三步，补充大象的其他优点，最后表达希望更多人采取行动保护大象的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ① a symbol of... ……的象征 ② in danger 处于危险中 ③ habitat loss 栖息地丧失 ④ take action 采取行动 [高分句型] They have huge bodies, large ears, and long trunks, which help them drink water and pick up food.（定语从句） 8．动物是人类的朋友，但很多动物正濒临灭绝。现学校英语报就此话题向学生发起征文比赛，请根据以下要点提示，写一篇80词左右的英语短文向学校英语报投稿。 要点提示： 1. 描述大象的现状 (食物短缺、栖息地缩小等); 2. 动物濒危的原因 (人类捕杀、环境恶化等); 3. 拯救濒危动物的措施 (至少两点)。 注意： 1. 内容必须包含内容要点的所有信息; 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯; 3. 文中不得透露个人信息; 4. 词数80左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Save Animals in Danger There are many animals in danger. One of these animals is the elephant. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文： Save Animals in Danger There are many animals in danger. One of these animals is the elephant. They now face food shortages and shrinking habitats—forests where they live are being cut down. Animals are at risk mainly because of human activities: people hunt them for profit, and environmental pollution worsens their living conditions. To save them, we should set up more nature reserves and make strict laws to stop illegal hunting. Also, we need to call on more people to protect the environment. Let’s act to save our animal friends! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：需覆盖“大象现状、濒危原因、拯救措施”等所有要点，适当补充细节使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步：承接开头，描述大象的濒危现状； 第二步：说明动物濒危的核心原因； 第三步：提出至少两点拯救措施，收尾呼吁行动。 [亮点词汇] ①face food shortages 面临食物短缺 ②set up nature reserves 建立自然保护区 ③illegal hunting 非法捕猎 [高分句型] To save them, we should set up more nature reserves and make strict laws to stop illegal hunting. (“To do”结构表目的，作目的状语) 9．假如你和你的同桌正在参加学校举办的以“Giving Pandas a Good Life”为主题的英文手抄报评选活动。你的同桌负责手抄报的绘制，而你负责文本的撰写。请根据如下提示，完成一篇英语短文。 注意： （1）短文须包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥： （2）词数80个左右，标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Giving Pandas a Good Life What animal has six fingers and wears a black and white coat? Yes, it’s the panda! ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Giving Pandas a Good Life     What animal has six fingers and wears a black and white coat? Yes, it’s the panda!     Pandas are really cute and lovely with black and white fur. They love eating bamboo leaves and also enjoy sleeping a lot. But pandas are in great danger now. People cut down too many trees, so they lose their homes. And they can easily die of illness.     We must take action to help them. We can build more natural panda homes to give them enough living space. Also, we should plant more bamboo to feed them. Let’s work together to give pandas a good life! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍性记叙文，用一般现在时为主 明确要点：熊猫的基本特征，生存现状，保护措施 确定人称：第三人称（pandas/they） 注意事项：语言简洁易懂，突出保护主题，逻辑清晰 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，点明描述对象及其核心特征 主体段：分别介绍熊猫的习性和面临的危险 结尾段：发出呼吁，提出具体保护措施，升华保护熊猫的主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：熊猫的基本特征与习性 核心特征：six fingers/black and white fur/cute and lovely/round face/fluffy body/short tail 习性描述：love eating bamboo leaves/enjoy sleeping a lot 要点二：熊猫面临的危险 面临的危险：lose their homes/die of illness/lack of food/low reproduction rate/human activities 危险原因：people cut down too many trees/habitat fragmentation/environmental pollution 10．不同的人对不同的动物有不同的感受和发现。本次的写作任务是以“My Favourite Animal”为主题，写一篇英语小短文。根据写作要求, 简单描述你最喜欢的动物，或者保护动物的相关内容，认真完成写作任务。 ●What animals are in danger? (sharks, elephants...) ●Why are they in danger? (kill, cut down forests...) ●How can we save them? (...) 要求: 1. 短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息，选择使用参考词汇，可适当发挥； 2. 语句正确，意思通顺、连贯，书写规范； 3. 短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名) 。若文中出现人名，请选择使用：Mr. Liu/Ms. Wang /Ma Li /Wang Gang； 4. 词数：不少于50。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 范文： Many animals are in danger today, such as elephants and sharks. Elephants are killed for their ivory, and sharks are hunted for their fins. Some animals also lose their homes because people cut down forests. We must take action to save them. First, we should stop killing animals for their body parts. Second, we can plant more trees and protect forests. Third, we should not buy things made from animals. Governments can also make strict laws to protect wildlife. Every small action matters. Let’s work together to give animals a safe and happy home. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文/动物保护类文章，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：哪些动物处于危险中、它们为什么处于危险中、如何拯救它们 确定人称：第一人称复数（we）和第三人称（they）为主 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称，需涵盖所有要点 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：点明许多动物处于危险中，列举例子 主体段：说明动物濒危的原因 结尾段：提出保护措施并发出呼吁 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：濒危动物 动物举例：elephants/sharks/tigers/pandas等 濒危现状：in danger today/face extinction/numbers are dropping等 要点二：濒危原因 猎杀原因：killed for their ivory/hunted for their fins/killed for fur等 栖息地破坏：lose their homes because people cut down forests/human activities destroy nature等 其他原因：pollution/climate change等 要点三：保护措施 停止猎杀：stop killing animals for their body parts/not buy things made from animals等 保护栖息地：plant more trees/protect forests/build nature reserves等 政府行动：make strict laws to protect wildlife/punish illegal hunting等 个人行动：say no to animal products/spread the word等 要点四：呼吁总结 行动意义：every small action matters/together we can make a difference等 美好愿景：give animals a safe and happy home/protect wildlife for future generations等 能力综合实践5篇 11．自然俱乐部 (Nature Club) 正在举办“野生动物保护周” (Wildlife Protection Week) 活动，面向全校征集关于濒危动物的博客文章。 外貌特点 黑白相间的皮毛，圆脸，有黑眼圈；重达100-150公斤，高1.5米 生活区域 中国中部的竹林；四川、陕西、甘肃的山区 主要食物 竹子，每天吃14小时，每天约40公斤竹子 行为习惯 独居，擅长爬树 濒危原因 野外仅存约1800只；…… Our National Treasure—Giant Panda ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Our National Treasure—Giant Panda As the Nature Club holds Wildlife Protection Week, I’d like to introduce our national treasure—the giant panda, one of the most precious endangered animals in the world. Appearance Giant pandas are black and white. They have round faces with black eye patches, which makes them look very cute. They usually weigh between 100 and 150 kilograms and can be 1.5 metres tall. Home They live in bamboo forests in the mountains of Sichuan, Shaanxi and Gansu provinces in China. Food Bamboo makes up 99% of their diet. They spend up to 14 hours a day eating and can eat about 40 kilograms of bamboo daily! Behaviour Unlike other bears, giant pandas are good at climbing trees and usually live alone. Why in danger People are cutting down bamboo forests, so pandas are losing their homes. They also have a very low birth rate. Today, only about 1,800 giant pandas live in the wild. It is important for us to protect them. Giant pandas are not only our pride but also a symbol of wildlife protection. Let’s take action to protect them and their homes, so that these lovely creatures can live safely on our planet forever. 【详解】[第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，以一般现在时为主。 明确要点：介绍国宝大熊猫的外貌、生活区域、食物、行为习惯；分析大熊猫濒危的原因；呼应“野生动物保护周”活动，呼吁保护濒危动物 确定人称：第一人称 (I/we) 和第三人称 (they/giant pandas) 注意事项：要覆盖全部要点，严格对照表格与原文数据，科普部分客观平实，呼吁部分情感真挚，符合校园征文的正式又亲切的风格 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：交代活动背景，引出写作对象大熊猫，点明其珍贵濒危，为下文铺垫 主体段：从外貌、栖息地、食物、习性等方面介绍大熊猫，并说明其濒危原因与现状 结尾段：升华主题，呼吁大家保护大熊猫及其生存家园 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：外貌特点 核心表达：black-and-white fur/round face with black eye patches/weigh between 100 and 150 kilograms/1.5m in height等 要点二：生活区域 核心表达：bamboo forests in the mountains of Sichuan, Shaanxi and Gansu等 要点三：主要食物 核心表达：feed on bamboo/eat 14 hours a day/40kg of bamboo daily等 要点四：行为习惯 核心表达：live alone/be good at climbing trees等 要点五：濒危原因 核心表达：only about 1,800 left in the wild/loss of homes (bamboo forests cut down)/have a very low birth rate等 12．每年10月24日是国际长臂猿日（International Gibbon Day），该纪念日旨在提升公众对长臂猿保护的关注。为此，你校英语俱乐部将组织一场以“Protect Gibbons, Take Action Now”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请根据下面所给的宣传画及内容要求，写一篇演讲稿参赛。 内容： 1.长臂猿生存现状。 2.长臂猿遇到的问题及原因。 3.保护长臂猿的措施。 要求： 1.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。 2.须包含所有内容要点，并可适当发挥。 3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 4.词数70左右。文章标题与开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Hello, everyone, I’m very glad to speak here. Today my topic is “Protect Gibbons, Take Action Now”. It’s no secret that gibbons are one of the most precious (珍贵的) animals in the world.… __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Hello, everyone, I’m very glad to speak here. Today my topic is “Protect Gibbons, Take Action Now”. It’s no secret that gibbons are one of the most precious animals in the world. Gibbons mainly live in Hainan rainforest, but now only 42 of them are left. They’re losing their homes because humans cut down too many trees. Without enough trees, they have no place to live or food to eat. To save them, we should plant more trees and build nature reserves for them. Also, we need to tell more people to care about gibbons and stop cutting trees randomly. Let’s take action right now to protect these lovely animals! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：是“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接已给的开头，介绍长臂猿生存现状； 第二步，介绍长臂猿遇到的问题（失去家园）及原因（人类砍伐树木）； 第三步，给出保护措施，如：种植更多的树木，并为它们建立自然保护区等。 [亮点词汇] ①cut down砍倒（树木） ②care about关心 ③take action采取行动 [高分句型] They’re losing their homes because humans cut down too many trees.(because引导的原因状语从句) 13．假如你是某国际动物保护俱乐部的成员，最近，你对华南虎的生存现状进行了一次调查，情况不容乐观。请你根据要点提示，以“Protecting South China Tigers”为题用英语写一篇短文刊登在你们俱乐部的网站上，呼吁人们保护华南虎。 South China TigerHabitat (栖息地): forests in South China Appearance (外貌): yellow and brown Features: large and powerful; running at a speed of up to 60 miles per hour Situation: endangered (濒危的) Reasons: no safe place to live; humans hunted... 写作要求： 1. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称； 2. 词数为80词左右； 3. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Protecting South China Tigers South China Tigers live in forests in southern China. They have yellow and brown fur and are large and powerful, able to run at 60 miles per hour. Unfortunately, they are in serious danger because humans hunt them and they have lost their homes. To save them, we should protect their habitats, stop hunting and educate people about wildlife protection. In my view, protecting animals is protecting ourselves. We should try our best to live peacefully with animals. Let’s take action to protect animals. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，描述华南虎的外貌，栖息地，以及濒危的现状等情况； 第二步，号召人们保护华南虎。 [亮点词汇] ①in danger处于危险中 ②take action采取行动 [高分句型] ①Unfortunately, they are in serious danger because humans hunt them and they have lost their homes.（原因状语从句） ②Let’s take action to protect animals.（祈使句） 14．动物是我们的朋友，它们和我们共享一个地球，但有一些野生动物却濒临灭绝。假如你是李明，你们学校的校报正在征集关于保护野生动物的文章。请你以“Save the wild animals”为题，根据以下写作要点和要求，写一篇英语短文进行投稿，呼吁大家保护野生动物。 写作要点： 1. How are wild animals now? 2. Why are some wild animals in danger? 3. What is your advice (建议)? 要求： 1. 短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名； 3. 词数70左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：protect保护  nature reserve自然保护区 Save the wild animals Animals are our friends, but ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Save the wild animals Animals are our friends, but some of them are in danger. People cut down trees in the mountains. Some wild animals have little food to eat and no place to live in. Also, some people kill them for their meat and fur. So they need our help a lot. First, we should stop cutting down trees. Second, we should stop hunting and killing wild animals. What’s more, we can set up some nature reserves to protect them. Let’s try our best to help wild animals together! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：需包含野生动物现状、濒危原因及保护建议，可适当发挥，使文章通顺、完整，词数约70词，开头已给出。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题，说明动物是人类朋友，但部分野生动物正处于濒危状态； 第二步，阐述野生动物濒危的原因（栖息地破坏、人类非法猎杀）； 第三步，提出具体保护建议（停止砍伐、禁止猎杀、建立自然保护区），并呼吁大家共同行动。 [亮点词汇] ①in danger处于危险中 ②cut down trees砍伐树木 ③nature reserve自然保护区 [高分句型] ①People cut down trees in the mountains. Some wild animals have little food to eat and no place to live in.（说明栖息地破坏对动物的影响） ②Also, some people kill them for their meat and fur.（说明人类非法猎杀的原因） ③What’s more, we can set up some nature reserves to protect them.（提出具体保护措施，丰富内容） 15．近年来，人类与野生动物和谐共存的理念日益受到重视。假如你是李华，请用英语写一封信，呼吁大家保护华南虎。短文应包括以下所有提示内容。 注意：词数80左右(文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear everyone, The South China Tiger is a kind of tiger that lives mainly in Southern China. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear everyone, The South China Tiger is a kind of tiger that lives mainly in southern China. It has a round head, short ears, a long tail, and a yellow-black coat. It runs fast and is good at swimming. It feeds on other animals. However, they’re now endangered due to human activities like hunting. Also, people cut down trees and they have no place to live. They’re in danger, so we must take action. We can make a difference by stopping people from hunting them. Besides, it’s a good idea to set up special organizations to improve their living conditions. Let’s work together to protect them. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文/倡议书，主要使用一般现在时（描述特征）和情态动词（提出建议）。 明确要点：华南虎的外貌与特点、濒临灭绝的现状与原因（需补充）、保护措施（需补充两点）。 确定人称：第三人称（it/they）描述老虎，第一人称复数（we/us）呼吁行动。 注意事项：词数80左右，包含所有提示内容，逻辑连贯。 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：引入话题，介绍华南虎的基本信息（外貌、特点、食物）。 主体段：转折指出其濒危现状，分析原因（人类捕杀及补充点），并提出具体的保护措施（补充两点）。 结尾段：发出呼吁，号召大家共同保护华南虎。 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：外貌与特点 外貌描述：round head（头圆）, short ears（耳短）, long tail（尾巴长）, yellow and black coat（黄黑相间） 能力特点：run fast（速度快）, be good at swimming（善于游泳） 饮食习惯：feed on various animals（以各种动物为食） 要点二：现状与原因 当前状态：endangered/in danger of dying out（濒临灭绝） 已知原因：human hunting（人类捕杀） 补充原因1：loss of living areas/cut down trees（栖息地丧失/森林砍伐） 补充原因2：lack of food/pollution（食物短缺/环境污染） 要点三：保护措施 补充措施1：stop hunting /make laws against killing them（禁止捕杀/制定法律） 补充措施2：set up nature reserves /protect their homes（建立自然保护区/保护家园） 补充措施3：raise awareness /educate people（提高意识/教育大众） 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ Unit 5 Wild animals 单元话题（野生动物）写作满分范文15篇 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．假如你是李文，你的外教Mr Robin让你用英语为同学们介绍一种中国特有的动物。以下是你找到的关于金丝猴（golden monkey）的资料。请你结合以下提示写一篇演讲稿，为大家介绍一下金丝猴及其生存现状，并呼吁大家保护动物。 提示：1.颜色：黄色或黑色； 2.分布：中国南部； 3.特点：群居；食树叶和水果； 4.现状：人类的捕杀致使金丝猴处于危险之中。 要求：1.语言流畅，逻辑清晰，内容可以适当发挥； 2.词数70词左右； 3.书写规范，卷面整洁； 4.文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假设你是李梅，你的英国朋友Jennie发邮件邀请你保护濒危野生动物。请阅读以下邮件并回复。 To: LiMei@mail.com Subject: Let’s protect wild animals in danger! Dear Li Mei, How is everything going? I’m working on a project called “Let’s protect wild animals in danger!” these days. Are you interested in protecting wild animals? I know your favourite wild animal is the panda. Why do you like it? Is it in danger? Do you know why it is in danger and what we can do to help it? Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Jennie 参考词汇：lovely，friendly，lose their home，natural parks 要求：1. 邮件必须包含提示要点，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4. 词数：不少于60词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数） Dear Jennie, I’m glad to receive your e-mail and I want to tell you I am interested in protecting wild animals. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Mei 3．假如你叫李明，受邀参加学校的英语演讲比赛，演讲主题为“保护野生动物”，请根据以下提示，写一篇演讲稿。词数70 左右。 提示: 1. 最喜爱的动物名称； 2. 该动物的特征、习性等； 3. 该动物的现状；        4. 保护该动物的措施。 Dear teachers and students, My name is Li Ming. I am so happy to be here to talk about saving animals with you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．蓝鲸是世界上最大的动物。最近一次的科学调查中，同学们发现它们正濒临灭绝。请你根据下面的表格信息，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，呼吁人们保护蓝鲸。 栖息地 海洋 食物 海洋中的小型动物 濒临灭绝的原因 （1）海洋受到污染（pollute）； （2）受到人类捕杀。 严峻的形势 每年海洋中的蓝鲸越来越少。 措施 （1）保持海洋干净； （2）禁止捕杀蓝鲸。 The blue whales are the largest animals in the world. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．     学校在“地球生命共同体”科普活动中，呼吁大家保护濒危野生动物。假如你是学生代表李华，请根据下面的要点和要求，用英语写一封保护东北虎(Siberian tiger)的倡议书。(满分5分) 要点： (1)东北虎有着橙色的皮毛，大而强壮。它们生活在森林里； (2)人们砍倒许多树木，所以东北虎处于极大的危险之中； (3)提出保护东北虎的1~2条建议。 要求：要点齐全；表述通顺；简洁得体；40词左右。 Dear schoolmates, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．动物是人类的朋友。然而，很多动物处于危险之中，濒临灭绝。雪豹就是其中之一。 请根据提示，写一篇短文倡议人们保护雪豹 (snow leopard)。 Habitat the mountains of Central and South Asia Food sheep, rabbits, other small animals Reasons hunt for fur (皮毛); cut down trees Actions help learn about them; set up national parks 要求：1.包含提示内容，可适当增加细节； 2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名； 3.不少于60词。开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Boys and girls, Snow leopards are our friends, but how much do you know about them?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Let’s do something to make a difference! 7．你喜欢聪明而强壮的大象吗？在泰国大象是好运的象征。然而大象又是世界上的濒危动物之一，我们怎么才能够挽救大象呢？请你根据提示内容，写一篇英语短文介绍你心目中的大象。要求：不少于80词。 提示内容：strong and clever    a symbol of    good luck    huge    large ears and long trunks    in danger    save the elephants There are many kinds of animals in the world. My favorite animal is the elephant. I love elephants because ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope people can save elephants. 8．动物是人类的朋友，但很多动物正濒临灭绝。现学校英语报就此话题向学生发起征文比赛，请根据以下要点提示，写一篇80词左右的英语短文向学校英语报投稿。 要点提示： 1. 描述大象的现状 (食物短缺、栖息地缩小等); 2. 动物濒危的原因 (人类捕杀、环境恶化等); 3. 拯救濒危动物的措施 (至少两点)。 注意： 1. 内容必须包含内容要点的所有信息; 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯; 3. 文中不得透露个人信息; 4. 词数80左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Save Animals in Danger There are many animals in danger. One of these animals is the elephant. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．假如你和你的同桌正在参加学校举办的以“Giving Pandas a Good Life”为主题的英文手抄报评选活动。你的同桌负责手抄报的绘制，而你负责文本的撰写。请根据如下提示，完成一篇英语短文。 注意： （1）短文须包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥： （2）词数80个左右，标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Giving Pandas a Good Life What animal has six fingers and wears a black and white coat? Yes, it’s the panda! ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．不同的人对不同的动物有不同的感受和发现。本次的写作任务是以“My Favourite Animal”为主题，写一篇英语小短文。根据写作要求, 简单描述你最喜欢的动物，或者保护动物的相关内容，认真完成写作任务。 ●What animals are in danger? (sharks, elephants...) ●Why are they in danger? (kill, cut down forests...) ●How can we save them? (...) 要求: 1. 短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息，选择使用参考词汇，可适当发挥； 2. 语句正确，意思通顺、连贯，书写规范； 3. 短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名) 。若文中出现人名，请选择使用：Mr. Liu/Ms. Wang /Ma Li /Wang Gang； 4. 词数：不少于50。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 能力综合实践5篇 11．自然俱乐部 (Nature Club) 正在举办“野生动物保护周” (Wildlife Protection Week) 活动，面向全校征集关于濒危动物的博客文章。 外貌特点 黑白相间的皮毛，圆脸，有黑眼圈；重达100-150公斤，高1.5米 生活区域 中国中部的竹林；四川、陕西、甘肃的山区 主要食物 竹子，每天吃14小时，每天约40公斤竹子 行为习惯 独居，擅长爬树 濒危原因 野外仅存约1800只；…… Our National Treasure—Giant Panda ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．每年10月24日是国际长臂猿日（International Gibbon Day），该纪念日旨在提升公众对长臂猿保护的关注。为此，你校英语俱乐部将组织一场以“Protect Gibbons, Take Action Now”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请根据下面所给的宣传画及内容要求，写一篇演讲稿参赛。 内容： 1.长臂猿生存现状。 2.长臂猿遇到的问题及原因。 3.保护长臂猿的措施。 要求： 1.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。 2.须包含所有内容要点，并可适当发挥。 3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 4.词数70左右。文章标题与开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Hello, everyone, I’m very glad to speak here. Today my topic is “Protect Gibbons, Take Action Now”. It’s no secret that gibbons are one of the most precious (珍贵的) animals in the world.… __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．假如你是某国际动物保护俱乐部的成员，最近，你对华南虎的生存现状进行了一次调查，情况不容乐观。请你根据要点提示，以“Protecting South China Tigers”为题用英语写一篇短文刊登在你们俱乐部的网站上，呼吁人们保护华南虎。 South China TigerHabitat (栖息地): forests in South China Appearance (外貌): yellow and brown Features: large and powerful; running at a speed of up to 60 miles per hour Situation: endangered (濒危的) Reasons: no safe place to live; humans hunted... 写作要求： 1. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称； 2. 词数为80词左右； 3. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．动物是我们的朋友，它们和我们共享一个地球，但有一些野生动物却濒临灭绝。假如你是李明，你们学校的校报正在征集关于保护野生动物的文章。请你以“Save the wild animals”为题，根据以下写作要点和要求，写一篇英语短文进行投稿，呼吁大家保护野生动物。 写作要点： 1. How are wild animals now? 2. Why are some wild animals in danger? 3. What is your advice (建议)? 要求： 1. 短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名； 3. 词数70左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：protect保护  nature reserve自然保护区 Save the wild animals Animals are our friends, but ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．近年来，人类与野生动物和谐共存的理念日益受到重视。假如你是李华，请用英语写一封信，呼吁大家保护华南虎。短文应包括以下所有提示内容。 注意：词数80左右(文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear everyone, The South China Tiger is a kind of tiger that lives mainly in Southern China. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $