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Unit7
What did you learn on that special day?
Section B 2a-2b
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1.能根据图片与提示词,复述 Sam 的农场旅行,理清时间与活动逻辑。
2.掌握 “范文模仿 — 笔记构思 — 动笔写作 — 自评修改” 的英语写作步骤。掌握描述旅行可用句式It took sb. + 时间 + to do sth./so + adj./adv. + that…等;完成 2a 笔记任务,梳理旅行的时间、地点、人物、交通、活动、感受等。能模仿范文,写一篇完整的校园旅行日记。能依据评价标准自评与互评作文,做到内容完整、时态正确、语句通顺。能运用连接词使文章条理清晰,提升书面表达的连贯性。
3.乐于分享校园旅行经历,培养观察生活、记录生活的习惯。增强合作意识,感受集体活动的乐趣。
Objectives
2
Review
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Sam’s trip
to the farm
Retell Sam’s trip to the farm
Friday,30 May
Sam went on a school trip to a farm with his classmates on Friday.
when
where
who
Sam’s trip
to the farm
Retell Sam’s trip to the farm
In the morning
In the morning,they explored the farm
and saw large tents
with different fruits
and vegetables,such as tomatoes and cucumbers.
what he did
what he
saw
Sam’s trip
to the farm
Retell Sam’s trip to the farm
In the morning
The farmer told them about how these fruits and vegetables go from the fields to our tables.
what he learn
How he
felt
He felt very interested.
Sam’s trip
to the farm
Retell Sam’s trip to the farm
Go straight to work
First ,they picked some strawberries.
what he did
How he
felt
The work seemed easy,but it took time to get it right.
Sam’s trip
to the farm
Retell Sam’s trip to the farm
Go straight to work
In the afternoon, the farmer taught them how to cut branches and leaves from tomato plants.
what he did
Sam’s trip
to the farm
Retell Sam’s trip to the farm
Go straight to work
Finally, they watered the plants.
what he did
How he
felt
It was tiring, but he enjoyed working with his hands.
Sam’s trip
to the farm
Retell Sam’s trip to the farm
He took some vegetables home.
what he did
He tasted them and thought
they were delicious.
Sam’s trip
to the farm
Retell Sam’s trip to the farm
Farming isn’t easy!
what he
learnt
“Every grain comes from hard work”
Today was really a day to remember.
Share your school trip
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Writing
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2b. Write a diary entry about your school trip.
When
Who
Where
How
How did he feel?
What
What did he see/hear/do?
What did he learn?
人称:
时态:
格式:
time order
时间顺序
第一人称
一般过去时
左对齐顶格写,
日期左上角
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When
What
Where
Who
How
What did you do/
see/hear/learn/eat?
When did you go?
Where did you go?
Who did you go with?
How’s the weather?
How did you go
there?
How did you feel?
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2a. Make notes about your last school trip.
My School Trip
1.Where did you go?
____________________________ 3.How did you feel?
____________________________
What did you do / see / hear/ eat?
_____________________________ What did you learn?
_____________________________
Who did you go with?
How’s the weather?
How did you go there?
When did you go?
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Before writing
Look at the pictures of Bob’s school trip and answer the questions.
1. Where did Bob go?
2. How did he go there?
3. What did he see?
4. What did he do there?
He saw many animals,such as elephants.
He went to a zoo.
He took a bus to go there.(He went there by bus.)
He took some photos and bought some gifts.
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Sunday,May 24th
Today I ______ on a school trip to a zoo with my classmates.The weather _____sunny and warm.It ______ us 30 minutes to go there by bus.Along the way,I _______ with my friends very happily.At the zoo, I _____ a lot of animals,such as elephants,monkeys and tigers.Then,I _____(take) out my camera and______a lot of photos of them.I also______some sheep and rabbits with fresh vegetables.It ______ interesting because they _______(seem) to like the food very much.After that,my classmates and I _____ to the gift shop and _______some gifts. In the afternoon,the guide ______ us about some endangered animals.I ________(realize)that we should protect them from now on.
Today ______really a day to remember.It ______ an unforgettable experience.
时态保持一致,都用过去时。
Sample1
went
was
took
talked
saw
took
took
fed
was
seemed
went
bought
told
realized
was
was
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Sunday,May 24th
Today I went on a school trip to a zoo with my classmates.The weather was sunny and warm.It took us 30 minutes to go there by bus.Along the way,I talked with my friends very happily.At the zoo, I saw a lot of animals,such as elephants,monkeys and tigers.Then,I took out my camera and took a lot of photos of them.I also fed some sheep and rabbits with fresh vegetables.It was interesting because they seemed to like the food very much.After that,my classmates and I went to the gift shop and bought some gifts. In the afternoon,the guide told us about some endangered animals.I realized that we should protect them from now on.
Today was really a day to remember.It was an unforgettable experience.
Sample1
When
Who
Where
How
What
What did you do/see/hear/learn/eat?
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Sunday,May 24th
Today I went on a school trip to a zoo with my classmates.The weather was sunny and warm.It took us 30 minutes to go there by bus.Along the way,I talked with my friends very happily.At the zoo, I saw a lot of animals,such as elephants,monkeys and tigers.Then,I took out my camera and took a lot of photos of them.I also fed some sheep and rabbits with fresh vegetables.It was interesting because they seemed to like the food very much.After that,my classmates and I went to the gift shop and bought some gifts. In the afternoon,the guide told us about some endangered animals.I realized that we should protect them from now on.
Today was really a day to remember.It was an unforgettable experience.
时间或
空间顺序
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Before writing
Look at the pictures of Alice’s school trip and answer the questions.
1. Where did Alice go?
2. How did she go there?
3. What did she see?
4. What did she learn to do there?
She saw some exhibitions about robots.
She went to a space museum.
She took a train to go there.(went there by train.)
She learned to make a model robot.
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Sample2
Sunday,May 24th
Today I ______ on a school trip with my classmates. We ______the science museum and it _____ really interesting. We _____ there so fast by train. Along the way,we ______ some farms and villages . The guide ______(show) us around the museum warmly.It _____ not only big but also modern.There ______ some exhibitions about robots in it.I _____ so amazed that I ______ a lot of great photos. They ______ very clever. I didn’t know they _____(can) play chess with us. It ___ so cool! Then the guide _______ us how to make a model robot. After that, I ______ to the gift shop and ______ some lovely gifts for my parents. They _______ (be not)expensive.
All in all, it ______ an exciting day.
时态保持一致,都用过去时。
went
visited
was
got
saw
showed
was
were
was
took
looked
could
was
taught
went
bought
weren’t
was
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Sample2
Sunday,May 24th
Today I went on a school trip with my classmates. We visited the science museum and it was really interesting. We got there so fast by train. Along the way,we saw some farms and villages . The guide showed us around the museum warmly.It was not only big but also modern.There were some exhibitions about robots in it.I was so amazed that I took a lot of great photos. They looked very clever. I didn’t know they could play chess with us. It was so cool! Then the guide taught us how to make a model robot. After that, I went to the gift shop and bought some lovely gifts for my parents. They weren’t expensive.
All in all, it was an exciting day.
When
Who
Where
How
What
What did you do/see/hear/learn/eat?
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Sunday,May 24th
Today I went on a school trip with my classmates. We visited the science museum and it was really interesting. We got there so fast by train. Along the way,we saw some farms and villages . The guide showed us around the museum warmly.It was not only big but also modern.There were some exhibitions about robots in it. I was so amazed that I took a lot of great photos.They looked very clever. I didn’t know they could play chess with us. It was so cool! Then the guide taught us how to make a model robot. After that, I went to the gift shop and bought some lovely gifts for my parents. They weren’t expensive.
All in all, it was an exciting day.
时间或
空间顺序
Sample2
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模仿写作
1.It took us 30 minutes to go there by bus.
It took sb.+时间+to do sth.
仿写:____________________________________
骑单车去那里花了我们一个小时。
2.In the afternoon,the guide told us about some endangered animals.
tell sb.about sth. 告诉某人关于某事
仿写:_____________________________________________
导游告诉我们这些展品的历史。
It took us an hour to go there by bike.
The guide told us about the history of these exhibitions.
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模仿写作
3.I realized that we should protect them from now on.
I realize/understand that we should....
仿写:_______________________________________
我意识到我们不应该忘记历史。
4.I saw a lot of animals,such as elephants,monkeys and tigers.
such as+n./v-ing
仿写:_____________________________________________
____________
我看见很多旧的东西,比如老照片,图画和枪。
I realized that we shouldn’t forget the history.
I saw many old things,such as old photos,paintings
and guns.
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模仿写作
5.It was not only big but also modern.
not only....but also 不仅...而且,连接相同词性的词
仿写:____________________________________________________
我不仅和大自然亲近,而且还了解很多农耕知识。
6.The guide showed us around the museum warmly.
show sb.around +地点 带某人游览某地
仿写:_____________________________________________
农民热情地带着我们游览农场。
I not only got close to nature but also learned a lot about farming.
The farmer showed us around the farm warmly.
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模仿写作
7.I was so amazed that I took a lot of great photos.
so+adj./adv.+that从句,意为“如此...以至于...”
仿写:_______________________________________________
__________
这些动物是如此可爱以至于我忍不住和他们玩了起来。
仿写:____________________________________________________
_____________
这些蔬菜是如此好吃以至于我忍不住吃了很多。
These animals were so lovely that I couldn’t help playing
with them.
These vegetables were so delicious that I couldn’t help
eating a lot.
can’t/couldn’t help doing sth.忍不住做某事
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ASSESSMENT(评价标准)
Structure
(结构)2分 Does the article have linking words?
Content
(内容)5分 Are all the details stated? (时间,地点,人物,天气,交通方式,活动(所见所闻所学)感受
If not, add the missing details.
Language
(语言)6分 Any mistakes (spelling or grammar)?
If yes, correct them.
Any good vocabulary or sentences?
If yes, underline them.
Handwriting 2分 Is it clean and tidy?
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