2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习温柔投喂，温暖相遇续写导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Josie and I wanted a dog more than anything else on Earth. At night, we’d slip out to the roof to talk about dogs after our parents went to bed. One summer night, as we sat together on the roof, Josie saw something. “What’s that?” She pointed down toward a dark shadow on our driveway. I followed her finger and saw a big, black dog with long, shaggy hair. We climbed down the roof. Josie made a little kissing noise and held out her hand. The dog approached slowly. When it was close enough to pet, I petted it gently. It was so skinny that I could just feel every bone, and its fur was messy and full of dirt. It seemed to be a homeless dog. We decided to bring it some food. I slid into the kitchen to fill a bowl with milk and a couple of raw eggs. As soon as the dog finished, it disappeared into the bushes. The next day, we used all our pocket money to buy dog food, including two cans of Woof Buddies, a small bag of kibble (狗粮), and beef tailbones. We hid the food as we were afraid our parents wouldn’t approve of us feeding a homeless dog. That night, as soon as we set a plate down, the dog appeared almost as if from nowhere. It nosed the food, but for some reason the dog wouldn’t eat it. “Come on,” I said. “Let’s leave the dog alone and see what happens.” So we went in and hid to see. Unexpectedly, it grabbed the plate in its mouth and ran away. By the time we rushed back outside, the dog and the food were long gone. This went on a long time — four or five nights, maybe. The most unusual thing was that even though the dog kept taking the food, it didn’t seem to be putting on any weight. Instead, it was getting even skinnier. Then came that special night. The dog came, but this time it barked (犬吠) at us, whined (哀叫), and ran back and forth. I ran my hand through its fur, “What’s it? What do you want?” 注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: The dog barked again, ran toward the bushes, and turned to see if we were following. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Seeing this, we decided to take it and its babies home together. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 Josie and I were eager to raise a dog--- _________________ --- we found a skinny homeless dog at night--- _________________ --- we secretly fed the dog with food but it took food away every time--- _________________ --- the dog became thinner without gaining weight despite constant feeding--- _________________ --- the dog barked repeatedly and behaved strangely to attract us 4. 细节问答 What was the author and Josie’s biggest wish? ：___________________________________ What did the homeless dog look like when first found?： _________________________________ Why did they hide dog food secretly?： ________________________________________________ What strange behavior did the dog have?： __________________________________________ What puzzled the author and Josie most?： _____________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 我和乔西极度渴望养一只小狗，时常深夜畅想→夏夜发现一只瘦弱肮脏的流浪黑狗，心生怜悯→___________________________________________→连续多日投喂，狗狗不仅没有长胖反而愈发消瘦→某天夜晚狗狗反常吠叫、来回跑动，试图吸引我们注意→（续写）狗狗引导我们来到灌木丛，揭晓藏在林间的幼崽→（续写） ________________________________________________________ 6．情感线 I & Josie：eager and loving→___________→puzzled and curious→___________（续写） The dog：cautious and hungry→___________→trusting and grateful 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文： ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文： ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 温情治愈类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: The dog barked again, ran toward the bushes, and turned to see if we were following. 衔接句1——Where did the dog lead them? What secret did it hide? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Seeing this, we decided to take it and its babies home together. 衔接句2——How did they persuade their parents? What lesson did they learn? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：狗狗再次吠叫，冲向灌木丛，回头观望我们是否跟随。 →①我和乔西满心疑惑，跟随狗狗钻进灌木丛→②意外发现几只瘦弱的幼崽，瞬间明白所有真相→③母狗把食物全部留给幼崽，自身日渐消瘦，我们深受触动； 第二段：见此情景，我们决定把母狗和幼崽一起带回家。 →①我们诚恳向父母讲述事情经过与母狗的伟大→②父母被打动，同意收养狗狗一家→③我们用心照料狗狗，领悟生命可贵、善意温暖人心。 四.段落续写 The dog barked again, ran toward the bushes, and turned to see if we were following. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Seeing this, we decided to take it and its babies home together. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 I & Josie（热爱小动物、善良纯真、富有同情心的孩子）；Homeless dog（谨慎温顺、伟大无私、竭尽全力哺育幼崽的流浪母狗） 2．视角 第一人称 3．时空线 Josie and I were eager to raise a dog--- we spotted a skinny and messy homeless dog one summer night--- we secretly prepared various food to feed the stray dog--- the dog took away all the food instead of eating on site--- continuous feeding failed to fatten the dog, which grew thinner--- the dog acted strangely to attract the author and Josie’s attention 4. 细节问答 What was the author and Josie’s biggest wish? ：They desired most to raise a dog. What did the homeless dog look like when first found?：It was extremely skinny with messy and dirty long black fur. Why did they hide dog food secretly?：Because they were afraid their parents would disapprove of feeding a homeless dog. What strange behavior did the dog have?：It took away all the food they prepared instead of eating it on the spot. What puzzled the author and Josie most?：The dog became thinner and thinner despite being fed constantly for days. What does the story tell us?：All lives deserve kindness and respect, and maternal love is great and selfless across all living creatures. 5．情节线 我和乔西极度渴望养一只小狗，时常深夜畅想、期盼养狗→夏夜在自家车道发现一只瘦弱肮脏的流浪黑狗，心生怜悯→偷偷用食物投喂流浪狗，狗狗每次都带走食物、不在现场进食→连续多日坚持投喂，狗狗非但没有长胖，反而愈发瘦弱，让两人十分困惑→某天夜晚狗狗反常吠叫、来回跑动，主动吸引我们跟随→我们跟随狗狗发现灌木丛中的幼崽，知晓母狗无私哺育幼崽的真相→深受触动，决心收养狗狗一家，说服父母，用善意温暖弱小生命，感悟生命与母爱的伟大 6．情感线 I & Josie：eager and loving：concerned and puzzled：moved and warm-hearted The dog：cautious and hungry：grateful and dependent：trusting and affectionate 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：两个喜爱小动物的孩子持续投喂一只瘦弱的流浪狗，偶然发现流浪母狗将食物全部留给幼崽的无私举动，最终收养狗狗一家，用善意温暖弱小生命，见证万物伟大的母爱。 English: Two kind children kept feeding a skinny stray dog. They accidentally discovered the mother dog’s selfless love for her puppies and finally adopted the whole dog family with sincere kindness. 8. 句式 状语从句：As soon as the dog finished, it disappeared into the bushes. 非谓语动词：The next day, we used all our pocket money to buy dog food, including two cans of Woof Buddies, a small bag of kibble (狗粮), and beef tailbones. 宾语从句：We hid the food as we were afraid our parents wouldn’t approve of us feeding a homeless dog. 并列句：The dog came, but this time it barked, whined, and ran back and forth. 9. 本文主题 温情治愈类：万物皆有灵，母爱无私且伟大，心怀善意、温柔待人待物，便能温暖世间弱小生命。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: The dog barked again, ran toward the bushes, and turned to see if we were following. 衔接句1——Where did the dog lead them? What secret did it hide? Full of curiosity, we followed the dog closely and found several weak puppies hidden in the bushes, realizing why the mother dog never gained weight. Paragraph 2: Seeing this, we decided to take it and its babies home together. 衔接句2——How did they persuade their parents? What lesson did they learn? We sincerely told our parents the touching story. Moved deeply, they agreed to adopt them and we learned to cherish every life and keep kindness in heart. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：狗狗再次吠叫，冲向灌木丛，回头观望我们是否跟随。 →①我和乔西满怀好奇，紧随狗狗钻进茂密灌木丛→②发现数只虚弱瘦小的幼崽蜷缩在落叶中→③恍然大悟，母狗一直省食哺育幼崽，我们深受触动； 第二段：见此情景，我们决定把母狗和幼崽一起带回家。 →①我们诚恳向父母讲述全部经过与母狗无私的母爱→②父母深受感动，准许我们收养狗狗一家→③我们悉心照料狗狗，领悟万物有灵、善意与母爱皆可贵。 四.段落续写（标准答案） The dog barked again, ran toward the bushes, and turned to see if we were following. Curious and confused, Josie and I exchanged a glance and hurried to follow it. Pushing aside thick branches, we caught sight of a tiny surprise. Nestled in dry leaves were several fragile little puppies, trembling weakly. It dawned on us immediately why the skinny dog never gained weight. It had been carrying all the food we gave it back to feed its hungry babies instead of eating itself. Moved deeply, we stroked its messy fur gently, understanding its silent devotion. Seeing this, we decided to take it and its babies home together. Nervous but determined, we explained the whole touching story to our parents sincerely. To our great surprise, they were touched by the mother dog’s love and agreed warmly. From then on, we took good care of the lovely dog family. Witnessing them recover health and play happily every day, Josie and I learned that every life deserves kindness and compassion, and small warm acts can bring endless happiness. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $