第2章 第4节 10大主题轻松搞定 主题9 同学交往 -【载望】高中英语高分作文

高中英语高分作文 主题9 同学交往 项目合作 真题导练 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头 语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 2022年浙江1月卷·改编When Dr. Henderson was assigning (project mates for his psychology class,I secretly hoped that he would pair me with my best friend or at least a classmate I could have some fun with.Above all,I hoped he wouldn't assign me to work with the fiercely competitive and extremely serious fellow who always wore dark clothes and apparently had a personality to match.As fate(命运)would have it,.Dr. Henderson very deliberately matched everyone in class and announced that I would be working with the one person in class I wanted to avoid. I went up to my new teammate and introduced myself.He looked at me as though I weren't there.I felt he treated me as though I would hold him back and probably make him fail to get an A in the course.He wasn't mean or abusive:he just gave me the impression that he could do whatever project we dreamed up better if he did it alone. Needless to say,I didn't look forward to an entire term of being brushed off,but I tried to make the best of it and didn't say anything for fear that I would make things worse. The project required each team to develop a hypothesis(假说)，set up an experiment to test the hypothesis,do the statistical analysis and present the findings.Whatever grade the team received would be shared by both students. When my teammate and I met to discuss our project,I was uneasy.Here was this challenging student who had a reputation for single-mindedness and good grades -the exact opposite of me.I actually wanted to drop the class at one point,but stopped short because I didn't want to give him the satisfaction of my chickening out.I decided to stick to it no matter what. After long discussions we somehow agreed to do a study on the psychological well-being of teenagers. I wasn't sure what it meant exactly,but at least we had a topic. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2.请按如下格式作答。 We started to meet regularly to draw up our plans One day,I got word that he was admitted to hosp 1284/I/// ⊙主题同步 人教版必修第一册Unit1 Teenage Life 外研版必修第三册 Unit 1 Knowing Me,Knowing You 译林版必修第一册 Unit 3 Getting Along with Others ⊙参考译文 Henderson博士给心理学课分配项目搭 档时，我暗自希望他能把我和最好的朋友分 到一组，或者至少是一个能和我玩到一块的 同学。最重要的是，我希望他别把我和那个 极具竞争力、异常严肃的家伙分到一组，那人 总是穿深色衣服，性格显然也和穿着一样沉 闷。结果天不遂人愿，Henderson博士特意给 班上所有人都安排了搭档，然后宣布我要和 班上那个我最想避开的人一起合作。 我走向新队友并做了自我介绍。他看着 我，就好像我不存在似的。我觉得他把我当 成会拖他后腿、大概率让他在课程中拿不到 A的人。他不是刻薄或有攻击性，只是给我 的感觉是，要是他独自做项目，不管我们想做 啥课题，他都能做得更好。 不用说，一整个学期都要被无视，我可一点 儿也不期待，但我努力往好的方面想，什么也没 说，生怕把事情弄得更糟。 这个项目要求每个小组提出一个假说， 设计实验来验证假说，进行统计分析，然后呈 现研究结果。小组的成绩由两名成员共享。 我和队友碰面讨论项目时，心里很不安。 这是个很难搞的学生，出了名的一根筋，成绩还 特别好—和我完全相反。我有那么一刻真想 退课，但还是打消了念头，因为不想让他因为我 临阵退缩而得意。我决定不管怎样都坚持下去。 经过长时间讨论，我们总算商定要研究 青少年的心理健康问题。我不太清楚这到底 意味着什么，但至少我们有了一个主题。 tal for a serious disease 第二章手把手教你写好读后续写 审题构思 ⑨信息萃取 1.who:“我”、Henderson博士、“我”的项目搭档 2.where:学校 3.when:“我”上心理学课期间 4.what:“我”在心理学课上被老师分配与自己不想合作的严肃且好胜的同学组队完成项目， 虽不情愿但决定坚持；两人经长时间讨论后，同意以青少年心理健康为研究主题 5.wy:“我”不愿与严肃好胜的同学合作，担心相处不顺利，但为了不退缩决定坚持；两人需共 同完成包含假说、实验、统计分析和成果展示的项目，且成绩共享 6.how:①“我”：得知搭档时失望→初次交流感觉被忽视，内心不情愿但选择隐忍→曾想退课 但放弃，决定坚持→与搭档讨论时不安，最终同意研究主题 ②搭档：初次见面时对“我”冷淡→参与项目讨论，最终与“我”达成主题共识 7.theme:合作中的适应与包容、不同性格的协作可能、克服偏见的过程 ⑨情节设计 首句(We started to meet regularly to draw up our plans..） 承接句(“我”的举动) 所做（动作） 第一段 (二人定期碰面的互动) 所想（心理） 尾句（我们相处的状态） 所做（动作） 所想（情绪） I,my teammate 写 架 (One day,I got word that he was admitted to hospital for a serious disease.) 第二段 承接句(“我”去医院看望他) 所做（动作） (“我”去医院探望与 感悟) 尾句(“我”对同学间关系的感悟)一所想（心理） 初稿搭建 我们开始定期碰面来制订计划。我们相约在图书馆见面。他往日的看法仍萦绕在我脑 海。然而当我提出自己的想法时，他居然轻轻点头。我们之间的不安慢慢变成了笑声。 有一天，听说他因重病住院了。我跑去医院。我们一起完成了统计分析表。我意识到， 成绩A远不如我们之间的尊重重要。 We started to meet regularly to draw up our plans.We met in the library as planned.His old judgment was still on my mind.However,when I put forward my suggestion,he nodded softly. Our uneasiness slowly turned into laughs. One day,I got word that he was admitted to hospital for a serious disease.I ran to the hospital.We finished the statistical analysic chart together.I realized the A mattered less than the respect between us. 129 高中英语高分作文 高分润色 VV0009000000010001100090011011001000070071 We started to meet regularly to draw up our plans.In the quiet library corner,I spread my cheap notebook,the memory of his old silent judgment lingering:I'd drag him down.When I suggested asking teens to draw their feelings,I waited for the familiar eye-roll.Instead,he nodded,voice low but steady: ③“Let's try it..”④We shared one pair of earphones，swapping sides as if handing a peace flag.Each time I messed up the data,he nudged the calculator closer,not away.The silence between us gradually turned into quick laughs and the soft sound of pencils working on the same page. One day,we started to meet regularly to draw up our plans. I ran,our half-finished poster flapping against my chest.In the white ward he looked small,yet smiled when I unrolled the chart. ⑨“Your ideas made this better,”he murmured."My throat tightened-those were the first words he'd ever given me credit for.We colored the last bars together while the monitor beeped steadily.Outside,snowflakes melted on the glass like quiet applause.I understood then:the A we would share mattered less than the respect we'd earned.Real grades aren't the numbers on the report card,but the moment two people stop seeing“burdens”and start seeing each other.. 我们开始定期碰面，一起制定计划。在图书馆安静的 角落里，我铺开那本廉价的笔记本，他过去那种无声的判断 还萦绕在我脑海里：我会拖他的后腿。当我提议让青少年 们画出自己的感受时，我等着他像往常那样翻白眼。可他 却点了点头，声音低沉却坚定：“咱们试试。”我们共用一副 耳机，换边听的时候，像在传递一面和平的旗帜。每次我把 数据弄混，他都会把计算器往我这边推推，而不是挪开。我 们之间的沉默渐渐变成了爽朗的笑声，还有铅笔在同一页 纸上划过的轻柔声响。 有一天，听说他因重病住院了。我飞奔过去，那半张没完 成的海报在胸前扑腾着。白色的病房里，他看起来小小的，可 当我展开图表时，他却笑了。“你的想法让这个更好了。”他 轻声说。我的喉咙一紧—这是他第一次认可我的付出。监 护仪稳稳地发出滴答声，我们一起给最后几根柱状图涂完了 颜色。窗外，雪花落在玻璃上融化了，像无声的掌声。那一刻 我明白了：我们将要共享的A等级，远不如我们赢得的尊重 重要。真正的成绩不是成绩单上的数字，而是两个人放下 “负担”的偏见、真正看见彼此的那一刻。 L41/JJJW//77777777 SEAL四维元素 心理刻画句： ①“lingering”体现记忆的挥之不 去，“cheap notebook”与“silent judgment'”形成对比，暗示内心的 自卑与对偏见的敏感。 ②“waited for”展现预期中的抵 触，与后文中“nodded”形成反差。 ⑩“tightened”以生理反应外化内 心震动，“first words'”强调被认可 的分量。 动作设计句： ④“shared”与“swapping'”展现互 动的亲近，“peace flag”的比喻暗 示关系从疏离到缓和。 ⑤“nudged the calculator closer'”与 “not away”形成对比，用细微动作 体现对方从排斥到包容的态度 转变。 ⑦“ran”凸显急切，“flapping”以海 报的动态暗示合作仍未完成。 ①“colored..together”在“monitor beeped”背景下，用合作动作呼应生 命与协作的延续。 氛围衬托句： ⑥“silence...turned into quick laughs” 体现氨围从压抑到融洽的转变，“the soft sound of pencils'”增添了生活 质感。 ⑧“white ward'”渲染清冷氛围， “smal”与“smiled”反衬人物的乐 观与对合作的珍视。 ②“snowflakes melted'”以自然景象 比喻“quiet applause'”,将内心感动 外化于景。 言语设计句： ③“Let's try it'”简短有力，“low but steady”的语气与预期的“eye-rol” 形成反差。 ⑨“Your ideas made this better”直 接认可对方价值，“murmured”传 递出真诚。 OFEST结尾仪式 B"the A...mattered less than the respect”颠覆对“成绩”的固有认 知，“stop seeing‘burdens'”呼应 前文的偏见，升华对人际相处本质 的思考。 第二章手把手教你写好读后续写 规范誊写 We started to meet regularly to draw up our plans. One day,I got word that he was admitted to hospital for a serious disease. 高分秘籍 V1D1101101801101100700130100000111007780717001170010010030010010117000 1.【心理刻画句】原句：in the quiet library corner,I spread my cheap notebook,the memory of his old silent judgment lingering:I'd drag him down. 仿写：在空荡荡的画室里，我拿起那支褪色的画笔，他曾经那句“你没天赋”的评价还在耳边 回响：我永远成不了画家。 2.【a动作设计句】原句：We shared one pair of earphones,.swapping sides as if handing a peace flag.Each time I messed up the data,he nudged the calculator closer,not away. 仿写：我们共撑一把伞，换手时像在传递一份无声的关怀。每次我踩进积水，她都会把伞往 我这边倾斜，从不挪开。 3.【氛围衬托句】原句：The silence between us gradually turned into quick laughs and the soft sound of pencils working on the same page. 仿写：我们之间的尴尬渐渐化作默契的对视，还有笔尖划过练习册的沙沙声。 4.【结尾升华句（内心感悟式）】原句：I understood then:the A we would share mattered less than the respect we'd earned.Real grades weren't the numbers on the report card,but the moment two people stopped seeing "burdens"and started seeing each other. 仿写：那一刻我明白了：我们将要同获的冠军奖杯，远不如我们结下的友谊珍贵。真正的胜 利不在于奖牌上的名次，而在于两个人放下“对手”的标签、真正成为伙伴的瞬间。 131. 高中英语高分作文 实战演练11 W 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It snowed for days.Everything was frozen solid.As we hadn't the heating in our classroom, most of us wore thick and warm clothes.Then,by chance I discovered under Lucas'dirty woolen coat,there was just a semi-sleeved shirt. It was so strange that I couldn't help wondering whether Lucas was crazy to make such a choice. I told this to the boys in my class."How stupid!"We all ran to see Lucas and jokingly pulled off his coat.Lucas stepped back,shaking with both cold and anger.I saw tears welled into his eyes. When I went back home,I told mom "the stupid choice"Lucas made. Mom fell silent.Then she made a phone call.The next day,she told me to bring a package to the school."Give it to Lucas.Tell him to put on the clothes in it. "Why?"As a fourth-grader,I wasn't wise enough to see something hidden behind.It was years later that I understood that Lucas'family had the basics,but there was little money for much else beyond food and shelter. Mom hugged me and said softly,"Guess why a hungry person doesn't eat?" "Because he can't get any food to eat."I answered loudly. “Exactly..”Mom said,“So,why doesn't Lucas wear a thick and warm sweater?"” It all clicked into place. It made me feel guilty.Mom said it was unkind to make fun of disadvantaged friends.And mom also told me to“see”through my heart,but not just through my eyes..I wondered“How?” At the end of the term,the teacher,Miss Carter,told us we were going to take a class picture, as for some reason,we would break up when we stepped into the fifth grade.Twenty-two students lined up in three rows and faced the camera with happy smiles.The teacher told us anyone who paid a dollar would bring a class picture back home.I could hardly wait to get my first class picture. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式作答。 Then suddenly,I thought of Lucas. Lucas was frozen in shock when the teacher handed him that class picture. 41////7J77/7//7777777Kim和Echo放松地坐下，欣赏着周围的森林。 阳光透过树叶洒下来，他们打开午餐时，衬衫上印着 斑驳的光点。潺潺的溪流声当作背景音乐，三明治 吃起来格外香甜。“真高兴有你在，我的大朋友！” Kim咧嘴笑着，对Echo轻声说。Echo笑了起来，扔 给他一个苹果：“跟你说过—一我们是超棒的搭 档。”起身准备出发时，Kim的脚步轻快了许多，仿佛 自信化作了靴底的一，点弹跳力。“准备好迎接下一 场冒险了吗？”Echo问。Kim点点头，眼中闪烁着崭 新的勇气：“有你在身边？随时都准备着。” 主题8动物情缘 人鸟情未了 高分秘籍 1.When I opened the yellowed diary,my fingertips brushed its cover unconsciously,and a flood of thoughts surged within me. 2.Grateful,I lingered for a moment,a warm current flowing slowly in my chest. 3.There it was,its orange fur glowing softly in the moonlight,sitting quietly at my car. 4.Right then I knew every encounter was precious, deserving tenderness;even a simple greeting could warm a person's long years. 实战演练10 I saw tears welling up in my daughter's eyes. "Dad,don't you know how Bella greets me every day after school and comforts me when I'm sad?If Bella's at the pound,no one will adopt her,and they might have to put her down."She sobbed.It hit me then that Bella was more than just a pet to her-she was a friend.I felt a wave of guilt washing over me,my resolve melting like ice in the sun.We searched high and low for Bella,but night seeped in,leaving us empty-handed.Eventually,my daughter fell asleep, exhausted by her tears,in my comforting arms. After a long,stressful night,we finally received a call from the city pound.Bella had been found!My daughter sprang up,her sneakers thudding against the floor.We rushed to the pound,and the moment Bella bounded into her arms,licking her cheek-no words could hold that warmth.Back home,I immediately strengthened the fence,determined to prevent any more escapes.That afternoon,as we sat on the porch with Bella at our feet,basking in the warm golden sunlight, we were filled with gratitude and a newfound appreciation for the love and loyalty our pets brought into our lives.We grinned,hearts brimming with happiness. 我看见女儿眼里噙满了泪水。“爸爸，你难道不 1522/////WW 知道Bella每天放学都来接我，在我难过的时候安慰 我吗？要是Bela被送到收容所，没人会收养它的， 他们可能会把它安乐死的。”她抽泣着说。那一刻 我才意识到，对女儿来说，Bela绝不仅仅是一只宠 物—一而是一个朋友。一阵愧疚涌上心头，我的固 执像阳光下的冰雪般消融了。我们四处寻找Bela, 可夜色渐渐弥漫开来，最终还是一无所获。女儿哭 得力竭，在我安抚的臂弯里沉沉睡去。 熬过了漫长又揪心的一夜，我们终于接到了市 流浪狗收容所的电话一找到Blla了！女儿猛地 跳起来，运动鞋在地板上咚咚作响。我们飞奔到收 容所，Blla一跃扑进她怀里，舔着她的脸颊—一那 份温暖，任何言语都难以形容。回到家，我立刻加固 了围栏，下定决心绝不能再让它跑出去了。那天下 午，当我们坐在门廊上，Bela趴在脚边，沐浴在温暖 的金色阳光里时，心中满是感激，也重新体会到宠物 带给我们生活的爱与忠诚。我们相视而笑，心里洋 溢着满满的幸福。 主题9同学交往 项目合作 高分秘籍 1.In the empty studio,I picked up the faded paintbrush,the memory of his old words "you have no talent"echoing:I'd never be a painter. 2.We shared one umbrella,swapping hands as if passing a silent care.Each time I stepped into a puddle,she leaned the umbrella toward me,not away. 3.The awkwardness between us gradually turned into wordless glances and the rustle of pen tips brushing against workbooks. 4.I understood then:the championship trophy we would share mattered less than the friendship we'd built.Real victory isn't the rank on the medal,but the moment two people stop seeing“rivals”and start seeing partners. 实战演练11 Then suddenly,I thought of Lucas.Could he pay the extra dollar for the class picture?I remembered the thin shirt under his coat.The bell rang;I sprinted to my friends.We emptied our pockets:two quarters, three dimes,and a handful of cents-just enough. "This time,let's give Lucas a reason to smile."I whispered.We took the coins to Miss Carter and asked her to keep our secret.She smiled and nodded. Walking back to class,I felt lighter,as if the laughter we once aimed at Lucas had turned into something warm.Two days later,the pictures arrived. Lucas was frozen in shock when the teacher handed him that class picture.He stood up slowly,the envelope trembling in his hands."No,I didn't...,"he murmured,cheeks reddening.Miss Carter smiled, "Your classmates did."Lucas raised his head;his gaze swept across the room until it found mine.I gave him a small wave.Around us,everyone began to clap-some knowing the whole story,others just sharing the joy. Lucas's eyes brimmed,but this time they were tears of gratitude.A surge of warmth filled my chest.I finally got Mom's words:when you look with your heart,even a single dollar can wrap a friend in lasting warmth. 突然，我想到了Lucas。他能付得起那额外一美 元的班级合影钱吗？我记起他外套里那件单薄的衬 衫。铃声一响，我就朝走廊里的朋友们飞奔过去。 我们掏空了口袋：两个25美分硬币、三个10美分硬 币，还有一把1美分硬币—刚好够。“这次，咱们 给Lucas一个笑的理由。”我轻声说。我们把硬币拿 给Carter老师，让她保密。她笑着点了，点头。走回 教室时，我感觉轻松了些，仿佛从前我们对Lucas的 嘲笑，都变成了某种温暖的东西。两天后，照片 到了。 老师把那张班级合影递给Lucas时，他惊得一 动不动。他慢慢站起身，信封在手里微微发抖。他 喃喃道：“不，我没…”，脸颊泛红。Carter老师笑 了：“是你的同学们付的。”Lucas抬起头，目光在教 室扫视着，直到与我的目光相遇。我朝他轻轻挥了 挥手。周围的人都鼓起掌来—有的知道前因后 果，有的只是分享这份喜悦。Lucas眼眶湿润了，但 这次是感动的泪水。一股暖意涌上我的心头。我终 于懂了妈妈的话：用心去看，哪怕是一美元，也能给 朋友带去长久的温暖。 主题10险境求生 熊口脱险 高分秘籍 1.Swatting had only made the bees more excited- they swarmed harder,buzzing loud enough to drown out the talking. 2.But it wasn't long before the wind brought rain again, slamming against the windows.The brief pause of the rain had only given us a short breath. 3.“Run slower！Don't fall！”he called,his steps speeding up involuntarily to keep up. 4.It hit me then:life never goes as planned-one minute everything is smooth,the next obstacles appear.But in that uncertainty,persistence and mutual help turn difficulties into growth.We came to finish a task,but left learning the courage to embrace change. 实战演练12 Later,as we stood by the burning tent to keep warm,we considered our situation.Surrounded by the vast White Mountains National Forest and with all our supplies consumed by the fire,we felt utterly isolated. Wearing only thin underwear,we shivered violently.Our cries for help went unanswered,echoing in vain through the trees.“The ranger station！”Max exclaimed,his voice a mix of desperation and hope."We've got to get the foresters'attention!"We fed more wood into the fire, pinning all our hopes on someone noticing the smoke. After waiting what seemed like centuries,we were on the edge of mental collapse. Suddenly,we heard a noise in the forest.With it becoming louder and closer,a dark shape approached us一it was a forester！“That smoke was a pretty clear call for help,"he grinned,tapping his flashlight.We gratefully climbed into his warm vehicle as he put out the fire.On the way to the ranger station,we briefly explained what had happened and expressed our sincere gratitude for his prompt assistance.At the station,we put on some warm clothes and called our parents.Only then did I realize:survival isn't just luck it's the courage to act,even when all feels lost. 后来，我们站在燃烧的帐篷旁取暖，盘算着眼下 的处境。四周是广袤的怀特山国家森林，所有补给 都被大火吞噬，我们感到彻底的孤立无援。由于只 穿着单薄的内衣，我们被冻得瑟瑟发抖。呼救声没 有得到任何回应，只是徒劳地在树林里回荡。“护林 站！”Max惊呼，声音里夹杂着绝望与一丝希望，“我 们得让护林员注意到我们！”我们往火里添了更多 木柴，把所有希望都寄托在有人能看到这烟上。等 待仿佛持续了几个世纪，我们的精神已经濒临崩溃。 突然，我们听到森林里传来声响。随着声音越 来越近、越来越清晰，一个黑影朝我们走来一是护 林员！“那烟雾可是个相当明确的求救信号啊，”他 咧嘴一笑，用手电筒轻轻敲了敲手心。当他扑灭了 余火时，我们满怀感激地钻进了他那辆温暖的车里。 去护林站的路上，我们简单说了一下事情的经过，并 对他及时的帮助表达了诚挚的谢意。到了站里，我 们换上暖和的衣服，给父母打了电话。那一刻我才 明白：生存不只是靠运气—一即便在一切都看似无 望的时候，敢于行动的勇气至关重要。 153.