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a certification,and a move from my apartment to a house with an extra room.Balancing work and the mission felt so overwhelming,but Maria's plea echoed in my mind,fueling my determination.My mother also became my anchor,offering support and help for me to get qualified.With each form signed and each box ticked,we inched closer to reuniting with Maia. After everything was worked out,I returned to Arizona to collect Maia."You've come back for me," she whispered,her eyes wide with hope,as she held her backpack tightly.With a nod,I reassured her, "Always."The journey home was a silent one,Maia's hand firmly in mine,as we navigated the unfamiliar territory of our new life.Upon registering her for school,the raised eyebrows and hushed whispers swirled around us like a biting wind,yet they only strengthened my determination."We're a team, Maia,"I said firmly,as we faced the world together. And in that moment,with Maia by my side,I realized that my idealistic mission had found its first chapter- changing lives,starting with our own. 我和母亲跟Maia道了别，把她留在了亚利桑那 州，之后我们便一起返程了。返程的路上，我们心中 充满了紧迫感和使命感。接下来的几周里，我一头 扎进了一连串的忙碌中：参加寄养父母培训课程以 获取资格证书，从公寓搬到了一栋带额外房间的房 子里。平衡工作和这项使命让我倍感压力，但Maia 的恳求一直在我脑海中回响，激励着我坚定前行。 母亲也成了我的支柱，为我获取资格提供支持和帮 助。每签下一份表格，每完成一项任务，我们就离与 Maia团聚更近了一步。 一切安排妥当后，我回到亚利桑那州接Maia。 “你回来接我了。”她小声说，眼睛里充满了希望，紧 紧抓着自己的背包。我点，点头，向她保证：“我永远 都会回来。”回家的路上很安静，Maia紧紧握着我的 手，我们一同踏入了这段陌生的新生活。给她办理 入学登记时，周围投来的惊讶目光和窃窃私语如刺 骨的寒风般袭来，但这只会让我更加坚定。“我们是 一个团队，Maia。”我坚定地说，我们要一起面对这 个世界。那一刻，看着身边的Maia,我意识到，我那 理想化的使命已经翻开了第一章—改变生活，就 从改变我们自己的生活开始。 主题3成长收获 理解感恩 高分秘籍 1.Her gaze softened,and the room seemed suddenly filled with warmth. 2.My eyes stung;I'd thought outdoing him meant high- 8L1///////777/7/77777777 paying jobs and spacious houses,not being a carpenter for life.Yet here he was,giving me the understanding he'd once craved. 3.In that moment I realized maturity wasn't about outshining my mother,but cherishing the gentle courage that let her break the prejudice. 4.He pinned the faded badge to his chest,already preparing to sign up as a volunteer in the community tomorrow morning. 实战演练4 The man looked surprised."Yes,it's me,Lily," she said with a bright smile,as memories flooded back. Marco's face lit up in recognition,and for a moment he simply stared,as if time had folded."Lily!It's been so long一Ican't believe you're here！”He opened his arms,and they shared a quick,warm hug.Settling into a worn wooden chair,Marco poured two cups of coffee and began to speak,"The restaurant was struggling to keep pace with modern trends and was losing regulars."Lily listened intently,her heart aching for the place that held so many memories. Lily was staring at Marco,her mind racing with a brilliant idea."Marco,what if we updated Vittorio's?" she suggested.“How would we do that?”Marco asked,genuinely curious."We could introduce new dishes and host cooking classes,"Lily said, enthusiasm rising,"while keeping the traditional soul that makes Vittorio's special."Marco's smile widened. "Lily,that might just save us.United by a shared dream,Lily turned down the offer from the top restaurant and found true fulfillment in giving back to the place that had started her journey.Excited about Vittorio's future,she knew her path was now rich with meaning and purpose. 那个男人露出惊讶的神情。“没错，是我， Lily,”她笑得灿烂，往事涌上心头。Marco认出了 她，脸上顿时焕发光彩，一时间只是怔怔地望着，仿 佛时光倒流。“L山y！这么久没见一真不敢相信你 来了！”他张开双臂，两人匆匆相拥，温暖而短暂。 Marco在一把旧木椅上坐下，倒了两杯咖啡，开口说 道，“这家餐厅如今难以跟上潮流，老顾客也在不断 流失。”Liy专注地听着，心里为这个承载了太多回 忆的地方泛起一阵酸楚。 Lily凝视着Marco,脑海里闪过一个绝妙的主 意。“Marco,我们把Vittorio's翻新一下怎么样？”她 提议道。“具体该怎么做呢？”Marco问，真心觉得好 奇。“我们可以推出新菜品，再办些烹饪课，”Liy 说，兴致愈发高涨，“同时要保留那些让Vittorio's独 具特色的传统精髓。”Marco笑得更灿烂了：“Lily,这 说不定真能救我们。”怀揣着共同的梦想，iy拒绝 了那家顶级餐厅的邀约，转而在回馈这个见证自己 起步的地方时，找到了真正的满足感。想到 Vittorio's的未来，她心中满是期待，深知自己的人生 道路从此充满了意义与方向。 主题4和谐社会 陌生温情 高分秘籍 1.After a moment of anxious hesitation,she finally spoke,tears welling up in the corners of her eyes. 2.Filled with joy,I took the gift she handed over,held it tightly in my arms,and didn't unpack it until she waved goodbye with a smile. 3.Her cheers echoed from across the playground as I spotted the certificate waving in her hand. 4.That failed experiment had not only taught me the importance of rigor but also brought me a group of partners fighting side by side.The teacher's encouragement had transformed a frustrating setback into the most precious medal in my growth. 实战演练5 At 10:00 a.m.,the doorbell rang,and there was my mother,smiling,with a young man by her side. Though a bit winded,she was in good spirits and clearly unharmed.Before I could speak,the young man explained how he'd found her looking lost and anxious on the unfamiliar streets."I was on my morning run when I came across your mom,"he said, his eyes crinkling with a warm smile."With the only clue that your house was near a park,we managed to find our way back."Despite the two-hour effort,they had made it safe and sound. After learning what had happened,I heartily thanked him.I invited him inside to join us for a cup of coffee,but he politely declined,saying,"I'm glad I could bring your mother home safely.I hope someone will do the same for my parents someday.His face shone with sincerity as he spoke.With a gentle smile, he left without even sharing his name.His heartfelt words went straight to my heart.From that day on, whenever I encounter someone in need,I always extend a helping hand,hoping to pass on the kindness the young man offered us. 上午10点，门铃响了，门口站着妈妈，她面带微 笑，身边还有一个年轻人。妈妈虽然有点气喘，但精 神不错，显然没受什么伤。我还没来得及开口，那个 年轻人就解释说，他是在陌生的街道上发现妈妈茫 然又焦急地站着的。“我早上跑步的时候碰到了你 妈妈，”他说着，眼角泛起温暖的笑意，“只知道你家 在公园附近，我们还是想办法找回来了。”尽管花了 两个小时，他们终究平安到家了。 弄清事情的来龙去脉后，我由衷地向他道谢，还 邀请他进屋喝杯咖啡，但他礼貌地拒绝了：“能把你 妈妈安全送回来，我很高兴。希望有一天，也会有人 这样对待我的父母。”他说这话时，脸上满是真诚。 他温和地笑了笑，甚至没留下名字就离开了。他的 肺腑之言深深触动了我。从那天起，每当遇到需要 帮助的人，我总会伸出援手，希望能把这位年轻人给 予我们的善意传递下去。 邻里互助 高分秘籍 1.An idea for a charity sale was quietly born among the classroom desks. 2.The nervous girl lingered at the stage entrance,but the teacher gave her an "encouraging"hug. 3.After a deep breath,she managed a nervous "Hi everyone-I made cookies,would anyone like a taste?” 4.The bag grew heavier with medicines and clothes from neighbors,while the boy's steps became lighter with the warmth of being cared for. 实战演练6 When Emily left the store and headed to her tent, Lisa stopped her.“Wait,please!'”Lisa said,“Isaw what you did for that elderly man.You gave up the noodles you needed to help him."Lisa handed her the packet of noodles,now a symbol of Emily's generosity. "Why did you do it?"Lisa asked,eyeing Emily's worn clothes."Being homeless taught me that kindness is everything,lady.Someone had to help him."Emily replied,her voice soft but resolute.Touched by her words,Lisa smiled and said,"Come to the store tomorrow morning.I may have an opportunity for you. Emily accepted,hopeful but uncertain. The next morning,Emily approached the store with a mix of anxiety and hope.There,Lisa greeted her warmly,offering a part-time position at the store as a reward for her kindness."It's not much,but it's a start,"Lisa said.Surprise and gratitude flooded Emily's eyes."Thank you,lady,"she managed to say,her voice trembling with emotion.She couldn't believe a small act of humanity would bring her such a big fortune.As she left,her step was lighter,and a brighter future seemed within reach,affirming that deeds of compassion can indeed open doors to a better tomorrow. 当Emily离开商店，朝着她的帐篷走去时，Lisa 叫住了她。“请等一下！”Lisa说道，“我看到你为那 149第二章手把手教你写好读后续写 主题3 成长收获 理解感恩 真题导练 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头 ⊙主题同步 语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 2021年浙江6月卷·改编My dad,George, 人教版必修第三册Unit2 Morals and Virtues only had an eighth grade education.A quiet man,he 外研版必修第一册Unit2 Family Matter didn't understand my world of school activities.From 译林版必修第一册Unit2Let's Talk Teens age 14,he worked.And his dad,Albert,took the ⊙参考译文 money my dad earned and used it to pay family 我的父亲George只接受过八年级教育。 expenses. I didn't really understand his world either:He 他性格沉静，不了解我学校活动的世界。他 was a livestock trucker,and I thought that I would 从14岁起就开始工作，而他的父亲Albert会 surpass（超过)anything he had accomplished by 拿走他挣的钱，用于支付家庭开支。 the time I walked across the stage at high school 我也不太理解他的世界：他是一名牲畜 graduation. 运输司机，我曾以为，等我高中毕业走过典礼 Summers in the mid-70s were spent at home shooting baskets,hitting a baseball,or throwing a 舞台时，会超越他所取得的一切成就。 football,preparing for my future as a quarterback on 70年代中期的夏天，我都在家投篮、打棒 a football team.In poor weather,I read about sports 球或扔橄榄球，为将来成为橄榄球队四分卫 or practiced my trombone（长号). 做准备。天气不好的时候，我会阅读体育相 The summer before my eighth grade I was one of 关的内容，或者练习长号。 a group of boys that a neighboring farmer hired to work in his field.He explained our basic task,the 八年级前的那个夏天，我和一群男孩受 tractor fired up and we were off,riding down the 雇于邻居家的农场主，在他的田里干活。他 field looking for weeds to spray with chemicals..After讲解了基本任务后，拖拉机发动起来，我们就 a short way,the farmer stopped and pointed at a 出发了，沿着田地寻找杂草，好喷洒农药。没 weed which we missed.Then we began again.This 走多远，农场主就会停下，指出我们漏掉的杂 happened over and over,but we soon learned to identify different grasses like cockleburs,lamb's- 草，然后我们重新开始。这样的事反复发生， quarters,foxtails,and the king of weeds,the pretty 但我们很快就学会辨认不同的草，像苍耳、 purple thistle.It was tiring work,but I looked 藜、狐尾草，还有杂草之王—漂亮的紫色蓟 forward to the pay,even though I wasn't sure how 草。这是份累人的活，但我期待着工钱，尽管 much it would amount to. At home,my dad said,"A job's a big step to 不确定能有多少。 growing up.I'm glad you will be contributing to the 在家时，父亲说：“有份工作是成长的一 household.”My dad's words made me realize that大步。我很高兴你能为家庭出份力。”父亲 my earnings might not be mine to do with as I的话让我意识到，我的收入可能没法按自己 wished. 的意愿支配了。 My labors lasted about two weeks,and the farmer said there might be more work,but I wasn't 我的这份劳作持续了大概两周，农场主 interested.I decided it was not fair that I had to 说可能还有更多活，但我没兴趣了。我觉得 contribute my money. 自己得拿出钱来（补贴家用），这不公平。 注意： 1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2.请按如下格式作答。 When I brought my paycheck home-it was $119-my dad wanted to talk to me. I was surprised that my dad allowed me to use the money as I wished 1111111111111111111144a3 高中英语高分作文 审题构思 VVVV011KK300370107717017133737077017703171173713317001101777133117078731 ⑨信息萃取 1.who“我”、父亲、祖父、邻居农场主 2.where:家、邻居农场 3.when:八年级前的夏天、70年代中期的夏天 4.what:“我”觉得只接受过八年级教育的父亲不懂自己的校园生活，认为自己高中毕业会超 越父亲的成就；70年代中期夏天“我”专注于运动，八年级前的夏天被农场主雇佣除 草，干了两周后因不愿将收人贴补家用而对这份工作失去兴趣 5.wy:“我”与父亲之间存在认知差异(“我”轻视父亲的职业，认为自己会更成功)；“我”因 不愿将打工收入用于家庭开支而想放弃农场工作 6.how:①“我”：轻视父亲的成就、专注于自己的兴趣（运动、长号）→打工时虽觉累但期待报 酬→得知收入需贴补家用后不满，欲放弃工作 ②父亲：沉默寡言，认可工作对成长的意义，提醒“我”收入要贡献给家庭 7.theme:成长中对父辈价值、父亲以及家庭责任的理解 ⑨情节设计 首句(When I brought my paycheck home一it was$119一my dad wanted to talk to me.) 第一段 承接句(“我”和父亲的表现) 所做（动作） I,my dad (工资到账后“我”和 父亲的交流) 尾句（父亲的决定） 所做（动作） my dad 续 所说（言语） 架 (I was surprised that my dad allowed me to use the money as I wished.) 第二段 (“我”理解了父亲， 承接句(“我”的反应) 所想（心理） 承担了家庭责任) 尾句(“我”的感悟，并决定继续工作) 所做（动作） 所想（心理） 初稿搭建 我把119美元的工资带回家时，父亲想和我谈谈。他说上交工资是家庭义务，但我可以 自由支配自己的工资，并要学会用自己的方式承担责任。 我很惊讶父亲竟然允许我自由支配这笔钱。他给了我他从未有过的自由。我拿出100 美元贴补家用，把剩下的19美元揣进了口袋，决定明天再去农场干活。 When I brought my paycheck home-it was $119-my dad wanted to talk to me.He said that handing over the wages was a family duty.But I could freely manage my own wages and learn to take responsibility in my own way. I was surprised that my dad allowed me to use the money as I wished.He gave me freedom he never had.I took out $100 for the house and put the remaining $19 in my pocket.I decided to go to the farm again tomorrow //////////////1//1 第二章手把手教你写好读后续写 高分润色 M When I brought my paycheck home-it was $119-my ⊙SEAL四维元素 dad wanted to talk to me.I clutched the bills,their edges digging 动作设计句： into my palm,as he settled into his armchair.Sun slanted through the window,lighting the silver in his hair.First pay, ①“clutched'”与“digging”形成张 huh？”he said,④weathered hands on his knees-the same 力，暗示对父亲即将谈话的不安， hands that loaded livestock at dawn and never complained. 动作细节折射心理状态。 Your grandpa took every cent I earned at fourteen,called it ⑧“counted out'”与“laid”两个连续 family duty.But this is yours to choose.A job's a big step toward 动作，展现“我”从犹豫到果断的 growing up:learning to carry your own weight,in your own way. 心理转变。 His voice softened,and the room felt suddenly larger than ③“pocketed”与“planning”形成 before. 现在与未来的呼应，体现“我”从 I was surprised that my dad allowed me to use the money as I 被动接受转为主动承担的蜕变。 wished.My throat tightened;I'd thought surpassing him meant 氛围衬托句： diplomas and trophies,not a trucker's life.Yet here he was, ②阳光与白发的意象组合，既暗示 giving me the freedom he never had.Without hesitation,I 父亲的操劳，又为对话增添温情 counted out$l00 and laid it on the table.⑨“For the house,”I 底色。 said.Dad looked up,a slow smile spreading across his face. ⑩“Proud of you,son.”In that moment I saw growing up wasn't ④“weathered hands”承前启后； about outdoing him,but honoring the quiet strength that let him “never complained”映射人物品格。 break the cycle.I pocketed the remaining $19,already planning ⑥声音变化与空间感知的结合，通 to ask the farmer for more hours tomorrow. 过通感手法外化心理变化， 我把119美元的工资带回家时，父亲想跟我聊聊。我 “larger'”象征父子隔阂的消解与 紧紧攥着钞票，边缘硌得掌心发疼，他则在扶手椅上坐定。 理解空间的拓展。 阳光斜斜地从窗外照进来，映亮了他头发里的银丝。“第一 言语设计句： 笔工资啊，是吧？”他说着，布满老茧的手放在膝盖上—就 ③简短疑问句暗藏父亲的期待与欣慰。 是这双手，天不亮就去装卸牲畜，却从没抱怨过。“我14岁 ⑤通过家族对比的对话传递价值观。 挣的每一分钱，你爷爷都要拿走，说这是家庭义务。但这笔 ⑨语言简洁却有力，展现“我”从 钱，你可以自己做主。工作是成长的一大步：学会用自己的 “索取”到“奉献”的转变。 方式承担责任。”他的声音柔和下来，房间仿佛一下子变得 ①简短的“Proud of you,son”是对 宽敞了许多。 儿子懂事的肯定。 父亲竞然允许我随心所欲地支配这笔钱，我很惊讶。 心理刻画句： 我的喉咙一阵发紧；我曾以为，超越他就意味着要有文凭、 ⑦通过生理反应（喉咙发紧）具象 有奖杯，而不是过着卡车司机那样的生活。可他此刻就在 化内心冲击。 眼前，给了我他从未拥有过的自由。我毫不犹豫地数出100 ⑩父亲的微笑侧面反映“我”内 美元放在桌上。“这是给家里的。”我说。父亲抬起头，脸 心因被理解而产生的触动。 上慢慢绽开笑容。“为你骄傲，儿子。”那一刻我明白，成长 FEST结尾仪式 不是要超越他，而是要敬重那份让他打破旧习的无声力量。 ②“quiet strength”与前文“never 我把剩下的19美元揣进口袋，盘算着明天要跟农场主说想 complained”“weathered hands”形成 多千几个小时。 闭环，完成从事件到哲理的升华。 O95. 高中英语高分作文 规范誊写 When I brought my paycheck home-it was $119-my dad wanted to talk to me I was surprised that my dad allowed me to use the money as I wished. 高分秘籍 W 1,【氛围衬托句（无灵主语句）】原句：His voice softened,.and the room felt suddenly larger than before. 仿写：她的目光柔和下来，整间屋子仿佛瞬间被暖意填满。 2.【心理刻画句（生理反应+内心触动）】原句：My throat tightened;I'd thought surpassing him meant diplomas and trophies,not a trucker's life.Yet here he was,giving me the freedom he never had. 仿写：我的眼眶一热；我曾以为胜过他意味着高薪职位和宽敞房子，而非一辈子当木匠。但 他就在眼前，给了我他当年渴求的理解。 3.【结尾升华句（内心感悟式）】原句：In that moment I saw growing up wasn't about outdoing him,but honoring the quiet strength that let him break the cycle. 仿写：那一刻我明白，成熟并非要胜过母亲，而是珍视那份让她打破偏见的温柔勇气。 4.【动作设计句（现在分词短语作状语）】原句：I pocketed the remaining$l9,already planning to ask the farmer for more hours tomorrow. 仿写：他将那枚褪色的徽章别在胸前，已然准备好明天一早就去社区报名当志愿者。 SL1///////////1//11 第二章手把手教你写好读后续写 实战演练4 110803138000330700100310800108317070871818770171101170 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Lily's dream was to become a great chef,so at the age of 20,she traveled to Italy,known for its famous cuisine,to learn to cook.After ten years of hard work,she was among the best. Her father,Tom,was getting old,and she wanted to be near him.Lily accepted an offer from one of New York's top restaurants.The manager offered her a high salary and 30%ownership of the restaurant.The next day,Lily went to sign the contract.As she got out of the car,she saw a blue sunshade.Instead of going to meet the manager,she crossed the street towards the old restaurant, Vittorio's.She pushed open the door and memories came flooding back. Lily's mother died when she was just 11,and her father lost his job and had to work as a freelancer(自由职业者).Money was very short.When Lily turned 13,Tom had made a reservation at Vittorio's,the best restaurant in the city. “I'm not hungry,dear.I had a big breakfast,”Tom said.“This is all for you！”“Oh,”Lily cried."Dad was so silly!He's been saving to come here for lunch for months and now he ruined his appetite with breakfast!"The waiter,Marco,quickly realized what was happening and went to Mr. Vittorio,the restaurant owner,and told him about Lily and Tom. An hour later,surprisingly,the waiter brought wonderful dishes and set them before the father and daughter.“Lunch is on the house with Mr.Vittorio's compliments(致意)，”Marco said.For Tom and Lily,it was a free but magical meal.They were very happy when they walked out."Lily," said Tom happily."I feel our luck has changed!"And it did!The next day,one of Tom's old friends called and offered him a job at a new magazine,and Lily believed Vittorio's had made it all happen.That was when she decided to become a chef! Twenty years later,the old restaurant looked old and sad,but Lily recognized the waiter immediately."Marco?"she asked,very happy to see him. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2.请按如下格式作答。 The man looked surprised. Lily was staring at Marco,her mind racing with a brilliant idea. o97.a