第2章 第4节 10大主题轻松搞定 主题2 责任担当 -【载望】高中英语高分作文

高中英语高分作文 主题2责任担当 勇敢少年 真题导练 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头 语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 2025年浙江1月卷Kevin was pretty bored. His mother was at work,and his father had been away on business.Therefore,he was left in the care of Mrs.Hill,an old lady who lived next door.His parents had raised the 12-year-old to be a good boy. He never got into trouble,though sometimes he wanted to do risky things.Mrs.Hill was asleep. Kevin sighed (and hoped something exciting would happen.Suddenly,a movement outside caught his eye. Mrs.Hill's front window faced Mr.and Mrs. Green's house across the street.The couple had both gone to work,so it was strange that someone was over there.Kevin stared at the man at their front door.Suddenly,the man jumped through an open window into the house.With his heart in his mouth, Kevin grabbed Mrs.Hill's home phone and called the police. Thinking that the man might get away with whatever he wanted before the police arrived,Kevin decided to do something.He rushed out of Mrs. Hill's house and crossed the street quickly.Grabbing a branch from a cut-down tree,he jumped in through the window."Stop right there!You must leave right now!"he called out,holding the branch with both hands. The man froze for a second,but when he saw the skinny boy he breathed a sigh of relief."Hey, kid,put that down.It was my home.My parents used to live here and my father's watch was here," he explained,trying to lift a floorboard. At that moment,the sounds of a police car echoed(回响)in the air.The man stood up in a panic,then ran through the house toward the window and jumped out.Kevin followed out and told the arriving police officers what had happened.They pursued and arrested the man. Kevin went back to Mrs.Hill's house.Somehow he wasn't sure he had done the right thing."What if he has told the truth?"he thought to himself.The man's words sounded pretty convincing. S1//1////1/11///1//11 VVVUIUUNIVVV0V08V10000800009008001000 ⊙主题同步 人教版必修第二册Unit2 Morals and Virtues 外研版必修第三册Unit5 What an Adventure 译林版必修第一册Unit2Let's Talk Teens ⊙参考译文 Kevin觉得特别无聊。他妈妈在上班，爸 爸出差在外，所以他由住在隔壁的Hl夫人 照看，Hill夫人是位上了年纪的女士。Kevin 的父母把这个12岁的孩子教导成了一个好 孩子，他从没惹过麻烦，虽说有时也想做些冒 险的事儿。Hill夫人睡着了，Kevin叹了口气， 盼着能发生些刺激的事儿。突然，外面的一 个动静吸引了他的目光。 Hill夫人的前窗正对着街对面Green夫 妇的家。这对夫妇都去上班了，所以有人在 那儿很奇怪。Kevin盯着他们家前门那儿的 那个男人，突然，那个男人从一扇开着的窗户 跳进了屋里。Kevin的心提到了嗓子眼，他抓 起H夫人家的电话报了警。 Kevin想着，要是警察赶到前那个人带着 想偷的东西跑了可怎么办，于是他决定采取 行动。他冲出Hill夫人的家，快速穿过街道。 从一棵被砍倒的树上折下一根树枝，他从窗 户跳了进去。“站住！你必须马上离开！”他 双手握着树枝喊道。 那个男人愣了一下，可看到是个瘦小的 男孩后，他松了口气。“嘿，孩子，把那东西放 下。这以前是我家。我父母过去住在这儿， 我爸爸的手表还在这儿呢。”他一边解释，一 边试图要撬起一块地板。 就在这时，警车的声音响了起来。那男 人惊慌地站起来，然后穿过屋子朝窗户跑，跳 了出去。Kevin跟着跑了出去，把发生的事告 诉了赶来的警察。警察展开追捕，逮捕了那 个男人。 Kevin回到Hill夫人的家，不知怎么的， 他不确定自己做得对不对。“要是他说的是 真的呢？”他心里想。那男人的话听起来很 有说服力。 第二章手把手教你写好读后续写 注意： 1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2.请按如下格式作答。 When Mr.and Mrs.Green got home,Kevin went to talk to them. Kevin and Mr.Green took the watch they had found to the police station. 审题构思 VVV01180801000007000818070001800808000080001000918810001801807088001000 ⑨信息萃取 1.who:Kevin;Mrs.Hill;闯入者；Green夫妇；警察 2.where:Mrs.Hill家、格林夫妇家（街道对面） 3.when:白天（大人去上班后） 4.what:Hill夫人睡着后，Kevin发现Green夫妇家有人闯入，报警后并协助警察逮捕闯入者 5.why:Kevin不确定闯入者是否在说谎（对方的话听起来可信） 6.how:①Kevin:无聊→紧张→冲动制止→事后怀疑 ②男子：闯入辩解→警察来时恐慌逃跑 7.theme:少年的勇气与迷茫、真相与表象的矛盾 @情节构思 (When Mr.and Mrs.Green got home,Kevin went to talk to them.) 第一段 承接句(Kevinl向Green?夫妇反馈事件经过)一所做（动作）Kevin (Kevinl向Green夫 妇反馈事件经过) 尾句（发现I旧手表后的气氛）一所想（心理）Kevin,the Greens 续 架 (Kevin and Mr.Green took the watch they had found to the police station.) 第二段 （Kevin和Green 承接句（警局工作人员核验手表） 所做（动作）the officer on duty 先生带着手表去警 局求证) 尾句(Kevin>对这次事件的感悟)一所想（心理） Kevin O89 高中英语高分作文 初稿搭建 Green夫妇回到家后，Kevin过去跟他们交谈。他跟他们说有个男人跳过窗户，很快就 被警察逮捕了，还提到了那块手表。Green太太提议去查看一下，于是Green先生撬开地板， 找到了那块旧手表。 Kevin和Green先生把手表送到了警察局。警官确认手表与男子所说的情况一致。 Kevin松了口气，Green先生夸赞了他的勇敢。Kevin最终意识到，做正确的事有时需要承担 风险。 When Mr.and Mrs.Green got home,Kevin went to talk to them.He told them a man had jumped through the window and been quickly arrested by the police,and also mentioned the watch.Mrs.Green suggested checking,so Mr.Green pried up the floorboard and found the old watch. Kevin and Mr.Green took the watch they had found to the police station.The officer confirmed it matched the man's description.Kevin felt relieved,and Mr.Green praised his bravery.Kevin finally realized doing the right thing sometimes needed taking risks. 高分润色 When Mr.and Mrs.Green got home,Kevin went to talk to them. SEAL四维元素 He recounted the man's leap through the window and the swift 心理刻画句： police arrest.The Greens listened intently,their faces a mix of ②“listened intently”与“faces a mix concem and curiosity.He insisted his father used to live here and of concern and curiosity”展现出 that the watch was very important,Kevin added,his eyes sparkling Green夫妇对离奇事件的复杂 with excitement and doubt.Mrs.Green's eyes widened in surprise. 情绪。 o“Let's go check,”she said urgently.⑦Mr.Green pried up the ④“eyes sparkling with excitement floorboard and found an old,dusty watch,just as the man had and doubt'”外化Kevin讲述时的矛 described.For a moment,the room fell silent,the weight of the 盾心理。 discovery hanging in the air. ⑤“eyes widened in surprise”传递 Kevin and Mr.Green took the watch they had found to the 出Green太太的震惊。 ②以比喻手法生动描绘Kevin如 police station.Upon arrival,the officer on duty examined the 释重负的心理。 watch and confirmed it matched the man's description.We'll 动作设计句： need to investigate further,but it looks like his story checks out," ①用连续动作简述事件经过。 the officer said,his tone both professional and reassuring.A ⑦以连贯动作使抽象线索具象化。 wave of relief washed over Kevin.As they left,Kevin looked at ⑨“examined”与“confirmed”体现 Mr.Green and said,⑧“1 guess I did okay in the end.”&Mr. 警察的专业流程。 Green smiled and patted him on the shoulder.5"You went above ④“smiled”与“patted”两个温和动作 and beyond,Kevin.That's true bravery."Kevin felt a sense of 展现Green先生对Kevin的认可。 accomplishment,realizing that doing the right thing sometimes 氛围衬托句： means taking risks. ⑧以环境的突然安静，放大发现手 Green夫妇回到家后，Kevin过去和他们交谈。他讲述 表时的震撼感。 ①“his tone both professional and 了那个男人跳窗的经过以及警方迅速实施的逮捕行动。 reassuring”传递事件逐渐明朗的 Green夫妇专注地听着，脸上露出担忧与好奇交织的神情。 信号。 “他坚称自己的父亲以前住在这里，还说那块手表非常重 言语设计句： 要，”Kevin补充道，眼中既带着兴奋又透着疑虑。Green夫 ③“insisted”暗含Kevin对其真实 人惊讶地睁大了眼睛。“咱们去看看，”她急切地说。Green 性的怀疑。 0904/IIH/I//0 第二章手把手教你写好读后续写 先生撬开地板，发现了一块老旧且满是灰尘的手表，和那个 ⑥简短有力的提议自然引出下文 男人描述的一模一样。一时间，房间里陷入沉默，这一发现 寻找手表的行动。 带来的影响弥漫在空气中。 四官方回应明确事件的可信度。 Kevin和Green先生带着他们发现的手表去了警察局。 ③略带试探的话语展现Kevin期 一到那儿，值班警官检查了手表，确认它与那男人的描述相 待被认可的心理。 符。“我们需要进一步调查，但看起来他说的情况属实，” ⑤Green先生的肯定既是对Kevin 警官说道，语气专业又让人安心。Kevin顿时如释重负。离 行为的总结，又为结尾升华做 铺垫。 开时，Kevin看着Green先生说：“我想最终我做得还不错。” FEST结尾仪式 Green先生微笑着拍了拍他的肩膀。“你做得非常出色， ⑥直接点明故事核心—勇气源 Kevin。这才是真正的勇敢。”Kevin感到一种成就感，他意 于超越常规的担当，升华事件的成 识到做正确的事有时意味着要承担风险。 长意义。 规范誊写 VVUUU1UVV800000880801000V0010000001100000018000800000000000880000000010V When Mr.and Mrs.Green got home,Kevin went to talk to them. Kevin and Mr.Green took the watch they had found to the police station. 高分秘籍 W 1.【氛围衬托句（拟人手法+“独立主格”结构）】原句：For a moment,the room fell silent, the weight of the discovery hanging in the air. 仿写：刹那间，赛场一片欢腾，胜利的喜悦在空气中弥漫。 2.【心理刻画句（无灵主语句）】原句：A wave of relief washed over Kevin. 仿写：Linda心中突然涌起一阵恐慌。 3.【结尾升华句（哲理箴言式)】原句：Kevin felt a sense of accomplishment,realizing that doing the right thing sometimes means taking risks. 仿写：Lucy感到一种满足感，意识到小小的善举能带来大改变。 VVN11111111111111114467444 高中英语高分作文 实战演练3 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 At age twenty-five,with a degree in social work,I was on a mission to change the world. Excited to be working with people in need and to help change lives,I possessed the idealistic, energetic attitude that anything was possible. One evening,sitting in my one-bedroom apartment,I received a call from my aunt,saying that my ten-year-old cousin had been removed from her home and placed into a foster-care center )I was living in Indiana,she in Arizona.I tried to offer advice and get some information on the situation.I contacted the social worker in Arizona,who filled me in on the situation. The social worker said that Maia had been removed from her home and it was unlikely that she would be able to return,given the situation.Maia would likely remain in foster care unless she could move in with a family member.In particular,she needed to be in a home without men.I fit the criteria.My heart jumped,swirling (with emotions.Would it be possible for me,a graduate student,to raise a ten-year-old girl?I had a heart-to-heart talk with my wise mother and we decided to travel to Arizona together to assess the situation. Upon arrival in Arizona,we met with the social worker,who took us to see Maia.By then,she had been moved to a foster home.She was living with a kind woman but in a very different environment from what she was used to.She hugged us tightly and begged us to take her home with us.We attended a meeting with the social worker,the lawyers,and the state prosecutor () With my family's support,I decided to adopt her.The social worker had mentioned that I would need to complete foster-parenting classes to earn a certification and find a suitable home.I was ready to face the challenges. Before we left Arizona,a rude man who worked in child welfare questioned me how I could manage school and work with a child.He didn't want me calling him to ask for her to be sent back after I had failed.I assured him that I'd figure out a way to do this even if that happened. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2.请按如下格式作答。 My mother and I said goodbye and left Maia behind in Arizona while we returned home. After everything was worked out,I returned to Arizona to collect Maia. ////////////1/7/1better to us.The moment we tried to stop him from pulling,to our surprise,he promptly sat down,looking at us intently with his big,innocent eyes.In the process,not only did Max become more obedient,but our family also grew closer.We realized that every member of our team played an important role,and we needed to support each other to ensure everything ran smoothly. 我走出房间。不出所料，妈妈和Max浑身都是 泥。显然，Max又带着妈妈在森林里狂奔了一阵。 当我看到妈妈脸上充满歉意的表情时，我的沮丧瞬 间消失了。“亲爱的，”妈妈轻声说，“我为之前责骂 你向你道歉。”妈妈快速冲了个澡后，我给她端去一 杯热茶，她随即跟我讲述了她和Max的冒险经历，包 括Max是如何挣脱她的掌控的。看来我们俩都对这 只狗束手无策了。 爸爸出面了，提议我们一起训练Max。接下来 的几天里，我们教Max一些基本的指令，比如“坐 下”“待着”和“回来”。这并不容易，但渐渐地，Max 对我们的指令反应越来越好了。当我们试图阻止它 拉扯时，令我们惊讶的是，它立刻坐了下来，用它那 双又大又无辜的眼睛专注地看着我们。在这个过程 中，不仅Max变得更听话了，我们一家人的关系也更 亲密了。我们意识到，团队中的每一个成员都扮演 着重要的角色，我们需要相互支持，才能确保一切顺 利进行。 节日惊喜 高分秘籍 1.Dad's eyebrows lifted slightly,a hint of pride flickering in his eyes. 2.Kneeling down,eyes fixed on the broken toy,Dad picked up the pieces and started mending it. 3.The living room echoed with children's laughter and clinking cups. 4.As stars twinkled in the sky,the family embraced the sweet moments of the night. 实战演练2 Amy answered the door and was surprised to see Mr.Henderson.His kind eyes and warm smile instantly put her at ease."Hello there,young artist," he greeted her.Amy blushed,her heart fluttering with a mix of excitement and nervousness."Is everything alright,dear?"Bonnie appeared behind Amy.Mr. Henderson introduced himself and explained how he had seen Amy's artwork at the school exhibition."Your granddaughter's sense of composition is remarkable. Her work reminds me of classic cartoon panels,he said,his voice filled with genuine admiration.Bonnie's eyes widened in surprise,her anger beginning to subside. Bonnie hesitated for a long time and decided to ask Mrs.Warren for advice.After a thoughtful conversation,Mrs.Warren helped Bonnie see the value in Amy's passion for art."Bonnie,I called today not just about Amy's homework,but I've notice she's really passionate about drawing.Maybe we can encourage both,"she suggested.With newfound understanding, Bonnie returned home and found Amy in her room,lost in another drawing.This time,Bonnie sat beside her, watching in awe as Amy's imagination unfolded on the paper.As the evening light cast a warm glow on the room,Bonnie felt a sense of peace settle over her, knowing she had made the right choice. Amy开了门，看到Henderson先生时很惊讶。 他友善的眼神和温暖的笑容立刻让她放松下来。 “你好啊，小艺术家。”他跟她打招呼。Amy红了脸， 心里既兴奋又紧张。“没事吧，亲爱的？”Bonnie出 现在Amy身后。Henderson先生做了自我介绍，说 他是在学校展览上看到Amy的作品的。“你孙女的 构图感很棒，她的作品让我想起经典的卡通画格。” 他说，声音里满是真诚的赞赏。Bonnie惊讶地睁大 了眼睛，怒气渐渐消了下去。 Bonnie犹豫了很久，决定向Warren夫人请教。 一番深思熟虑的交谈后，Warren夫人帮Bonnie明白 了Amy对艺术的热爱有其价值。“Bonnie,我今天打 电话不只是说Amy作业的事，还有我留意到她是真 的酷爱画画。或许我们可以两样都鼓励。”她建议 道。带着新的理解，Bonnie回到家，发现Amy正在 房间里埋头画画。这次，Bonnie坐到她身边，惊叹地 看着Amy的想象力在纸上铺展开来。傍晚的光线 给房间镀上一层暖光，Bonnie感到一阵平静笼罩着 她，知道自己做了正确的选择。 主题2责任担当 勇敢少年 高分秘籍 1.In an instant,the stadium erupted in cheers,the joy of victory floating in the air. 2.A wave of panic swept over Linda. 3.Lucy felt a sense of satisfaction,realizing that small kindnesses can bring about big changes. 实战演练3 My mother and I said goodbye and left Maia behind in Arizona while we returned home.The journey back was filled with a sense of urgency and purpose. Over the next few weeks,I threw myself into a whirlwind of activity:classes on foster-parenting to earn 147 a certification,and a move from my apartment to a house with an extra room.Balancing work and the mission felt so overwhelming,but Maria's plea echoed in my mind,fueling my determination.My mother also became my anchor,offering support and help for me to get qualified.With each form signed and each box ticked,we inched closer to reuniting with Maia. After everything was worked out,I returned to Arizona to collect Maia."You've come back for me," she whispered,her eyes wide with hope,as she held her backpack tightly.With a nod,I reassured her, "Always."The journey home was a silent one,Maia's hand firmly in mine,as we navigated the unfamiliar territory of our new life.Upon registering her for school,the raised eyebrows and hushed whispers swirled around us like a biting wind,yet they only strengthened my determination."We're a team, Maia,"I said firmly,as we faced the world together. And in that moment,with Maia by my side,I realized that my idealistic mission had found its first chapter- changing lives,starting with our own. 我和母亲跟Maia道了别，把她留在了亚利桑那 州，之后我们便一起返程了。返程的路上，我们心中 充满了紧迫感和使命感。接下来的几周里，我一头 扎进了一连串的忙碌中：参加寄养父母培训课程以 获取资格证书，从公寓搬到了一栋带额外房间的房 子里。平衡工作和这项使命让我倍感压力，但Maia 的恳求一直在我脑海中回响，激励着我坚定前行。 母亲也成了我的支柱，为我获取资格提供支持和帮 助。每签下一份表格，每完成一项任务，我们就离与 Maia团聚更近了一步。 一切安排妥当后，我回到亚利桑那州接Maia。 “你回来接我了。”她小声说，眼睛里充满了希望，紧 紧抓着自己的背包。我点，点头，向她保证：“我永远 都会回来。”回家的路上很安静，Maia紧紧握着我的 手，我们一同踏入了这段陌生的新生活。给她办理 入学登记时，周围投来的惊讶目光和窃窃私语如刺 骨的寒风般袭来，但这只会让我更加坚定。“我们是 一个团队，Maia。”我坚定地说，我们要一起面对这 个世界。那一刻，看着身边的Maia,我意识到，我那 理想化的使命已经翻开了第一章—改变生活，就 从改变我们自己的生活开始。 主题3成长收获 理解感恩 高分秘籍 1.Her gaze softened,and the room seemed suddenly filled with warmth. 2.My eyes stung;I'd thought outdoing him meant high- 8L1///////777/7/77777777 paying jobs and spacious houses,not being a carpenter for life.Yet here he was,giving me the understanding he'd once craved. 3.In that moment I realized maturity wasn't about outshining my mother,but cherishing the gentle courage that let her break the prejudice. 4.He pinned the faded badge to his chest,already preparing to sign up as a volunteer in the community tomorrow morning. 实战演练4 The man looked surprised."Yes,it's me,Lily," she said with a bright smile,as memories flooded back. Marco's face lit up in recognition,and for a moment he simply stared,as if time had folded."Lily!It's been so long一Ican't believe you're here！”He opened his arms,and they shared a quick,warm hug.Settling into a worn wooden chair,Marco poured two cups of coffee and began to speak,"The restaurant was struggling to keep pace with modern trends and was losing regulars."Lily listened intently,her heart aching for the place that held so many memories. Lily was staring at Marco,her mind racing with a brilliant idea."Marco,what if we updated Vittorio's?" she suggested.“How would we do that?”Marco asked,genuinely curious."We could introduce new dishes and host cooking classes,"Lily said, enthusiasm rising,"while keeping the traditional soul that makes Vittorio's special."Marco's smile widened. "Lily,that might just save us.United by a shared dream,Lily turned down the offer from the top restaurant and found true fulfillment in giving back to the place that had started her journey.Excited about Vittorio's future,she knew her path was now rich with meaning and purpose. 那个男人露出惊讶的神情。“没错，是我， Lily,”她笑得灿烂，往事涌上心头。Marco认出了 她，脸上顿时焕发光彩，一时间只是怔怔地望着，仿 佛时光倒流。“L山y！这么久没见一真不敢相信你 来了！”他张开双臂，两人匆匆相拥，温暖而短暂。 Marco在一把旧木椅上坐下，倒了两杯咖啡，开口说 道，“这家餐厅如今难以跟上潮流，老顾客也在不断 流失。”Liy专注地听着，心里为这个承载了太多回 忆的地方泛起一阵酸楚。 Lily凝视着Marco,脑海里闪过一个绝妙的主 意。“Marco,我们把Vittorio's翻新一下怎么样？”她 提议道。“具体该怎么做呢？”Marco问，真心觉得好 奇。“我们可以推出新菜品，再办些烹饪课，”Liy 说，兴致愈发高涨，“同时要保留那些让Vittorio's独 具特色的传统精髓。”Marco笑得更灿烂了：“Lily,这