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教科版(五四学制)六上Unit5 写作讲解 My Favourite Food 一、写作目标及话题分析 核心话题:围绕最喜欢的食物,用英语介绍自己三餐及零食的喜好、味道与特点,完成饮食介绍类场景表达 核心句型:a/an/some/any、there is/there are;一般现在时;and/but/or连接并列句 时态:一般现在时(描述饮食习惯、食物特点与个人喜好,无特殊变化) 人称:以第一人称(I/my/me)为主,介绍自己的饮食偏好 字数要求:80–120词 二、写作思路 段落布局 核心功能 模板句式 开篇引入 自我介绍+来自哪里,点明主题介绍最爱食物 I'm _ from _. I want to tell you about my favourite food. 日常主体 按早餐 午餐 零食顺序写食物、特点、搭配,为核心段落 I like to eat _ for breakfast. It's _ but _. For lunch, I often eat _. I sometimes have _ as a snack. 结尾总结 一句话表达对食物/家乡美食的喜爱 I love my favourite food. They are very delicious! 三、素材积累 词汇储备 类别 核心词汇 个人信息 I, from, city, favourite 三餐时间 breakfast, lunch, snack, dinner 食物名称 noodles, rice, dumplings, sausage, fruit, vegetables 味道特点 salty, sweet, crispy, tasty, delicious, soft 限定词 a, an, some, any 连词 and, but, or 万能句式 句式类型 模板句子 开头句 I'm _ from _. I want to tell you about my favourite food. 早餐句 I like to eat _ for breakfast. It's a bit _, but very _. 午餐句 For lunch, I often eat _. It's _ on the outside, but _ on the inside. 零食句 I sometimes have _ as a snack. _ makes them. 结尾句 I love my favourite food. They are so yummy! 四、书面表达 (一)填空式模板 My Favourite Food I'm _ from _. I want to tell you about my favourite food. I like to eat _ for breakfast. It's a bit _, but very _. I eat it with _. For lunch, I often eat _. It's _ in _ sauce. It's _ on the outside, but _ on the inside. I like it very much! I sometimes have _ as a snack. My _ makes them. They don't look very nice, but they taste great! I love my favourite food. (二)范文 My Favourite Food I'm Wenshuo from Harbin, China's "ice city". I want to tell you about my favourite food. I like to eat hongchang, or "red sausage" for breakfast. It's a bit salty, but very tasty. I eat it with dalieba, a kind of Russian bread. For lunch, I often eat guobaorou. It's pork in sweet-and-sour sauce. It's crispy on the outside, but soft on the inside. I like it very much! I sometimes have frozen pears as a snack. My grandma makes them. They don't look very nice, but they taste great! I love my favourite food. (三)范文中文翻译 我最喜欢的食物 我是文硕,来自中国的“冰城”哈尔滨。我想向你介绍我最喜欢的食物。 我早餐喜欢吃红肠,也就是“红香肠”。它有点咸,但非常美味。我会和大列巴一起吃,这是一种俄罗斯面包。 午餐我经常吃锅包肉。它是用糖醋汁烹制的猪肉,外皮酥脆,内里柔软。我非常喜欢它! 我有时会吃冻梨作为零食。我奶奶做的。它们看起来不太好看,但味道很棒! 我喜欢我最爱的这些食物。 五、自我检查&同伴互评清单 检查维度 核心问题 语法规范 1. 一般现在时用法是否正确? 2. a/an/some/any、there is/there are使用是否准确? 3. and/but/or连接句子是否规范? 内容表达 1. 是否涵盖自我介绍、早餐、午餐、零食4个要点? 2. 是否按早餐 午餐 零食顺序写作,逻辑清晰? 3. 字数是否在80–120词之间,句子以简单句为主? 格式规范 1. 标题书写规范,首字母大写? 2. 句子首字母大写,标点正确? 3. 食物、味道类单词拼写无误? ( 1 ) 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $