Unit2 写作讲解：An Email About My Family 2025-2026学年教科版(五四学制)六年级英语上册

教科版（五四学制）六上Unit2 写作讲解 An Email About My Family 一、写作目标及话题分析 核心话题：以笔友身份写一封电子邮件，介绍个人信息、家庭成员、宠物及相关问题，完成日常交际中的家庭介绍表达 核心句型：have got / has got结构，以陈述句为主，可适当用and连接并列句 时态：一般现在时（单一核心时态，描述当前家庭现状、拥有的成员/宠物等） 人称：第一人称（I/my/me，主体介绍）+第二人称（you，礼貌称呼笔友） 字数要求：80–120词 二、写作思路（黄金四段式） 段落布局 核心功能 模板句式 开篇引入 礼貌称呼笔友，简单问候，点明写信目的并介绍姓名、籍贯 [Hi/Dear ___,] I'm ___ and I'm from ___. I want to tell you about my family. 家庭成员 介绍兄弟姐妹数量及特点，运用have got / has got核心语法 I've got ___ brothers and ___ sister. My brother ___ is my twin. He's got ___. My sister ___ is ___. She's got ___. 宠物补充 介绍宠物的种类和名字，丰富家庭介绍内容 I've got a pet ___. Its name is ___. 结尾互动 向笔友提问促进交流，附上祝福语和署名，完成邮件收尾 Have you got a big family? Have you got any pets? Write soon! [___] 三、素材积累 词汇储备 类别 核心词汇 基本信息 name, age, from, hometown, town 家庭成员 family, brother, sister, twin, twin brother 宠物相关 pet, rabbit, dog, cute 邮件表达 tell, write soon, yours 核心语法 have got, has got 万能句式 句式类型 模板句子 开头句 I'm ___ and I'm from ___. I want to tell you about my family. 中间句 I've got ___ brothers and ___ sister. My brother ___ is my twin. He's got ___. My sister ___ is ___. She's got ___. 宠物句 I've got a pet ___. Its name is ___. 结尾句 Have you got a big family? Have you got any pets? Write soon! ___ 四、书面表达 （一）填空式模板 An Email About My Family Dear ____, I'm ____ and I'm from ____, a small town in ____. I've got a very ____ family! I've got ____ brothers and ____ sister. My brother ____ is my twin. He's ____. He's got ____ hair and ____ eyes, like me. My sister ____ is ____. She's got ____ hair and ____ eyes. We often ____ together after school. I've got a pet ____. Its name is ____! It's ____ and very ____. Have you got a ____ family? Have you got any ____? ____ soon! ____ （二）范文 An Email About My Family Dear Max, I'm Daniel and I'm from Dunoon, a small town in Scotland. I've got a very big family! I've got six brothers and one sister. My brother, George, is my twin. He's tall. He's got short brown hair and brown eyes, like me. My sister, Connie, is 10. She's got long brown hair and blue eyes. We often play games together after school. I've got a pet rabbit. Its name is Snowball! It's white and very cute. Have you got a big family? Have you got any pets? Write soon! Daniel （三）范文中文翻译 一封关于我家庭的电子邮件 亲爱的马克斯： 我是丹尼尔，来自苏格兰的一个小镇邓农。我有一个非常大的家庭！ 我有六个兄弟和一个姐妹。我的兄弟乔治是我的双胞胎兄弟。他很高，和我一样，留着棕色短发，长着棕色眼睛。我的妹妹康妮10岁，她留着棕色长发，长着蓝色眼睛。我们放学后经常一起玩游戏。 我有一只宠物兔子，它的名字叫雪球！它全身雪白，非常可爱。 你有一个大家庭吗？你有宠物吗？ 盼复！ 丹尼尔 五、自我检查&同伴互评清单 检查维度 核心问题 语法规范 1. have got / has got用法是否正确，主语与谓语搭配无误？ 2. 第一人称（I/my/me）和第二人称（you）使用是否准确，无混淆？ 3. and连接并列句的用法是否规范？ 内容表达 1. 是否涵盖姓名籍贯、家庭成员、宠物信息、向笔友提问4个核心要点？ 2. 内容是否贴合笔友交流场景，逻辑是否连贯？ 3. 字数是否在80–120词之间，句子以简单句为主？ 格式规范 1. 邮件格式是否完整，包含称呼、正文、提问、祝福语、署名？ 2. 每句首字母是否大写，标点符号使用是否正确？ 3. 词汇拼写是否无误，专有名词（姓名、地名）书写是否规范？ ( 1 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $