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第2讲 打磨词汇升级句式,润色习作2法宝
策略一 词汇升级——学会运用高级词汇
策略二 句式升级——学会运用高级句式
目 录 索 引
策略一 词汇升级——学会运用高级词汇
技法1 求新求变
同样意义的词语,要根据语境使用最新学过的词汇而不是小学、初中学过的词汇。如果同样的意义重复出现,要使用不同的表达方式。
1.(2022全国乙卷)Those who choose to read English books and visit English learning websites only make up 18% and 12% respectively.
→Those who choose to read English books and visit English learning websites only account for 18% and 12% respectively.
2.(2024新课标Ⅰ卷)It was such a good experience that I would always remember it.
→It was such a memorable/an extraordinary experience that I would always keep it in mind.
3.(2023浙江1月卷)Throughout the event,I was attracted by the wide variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes,and those that provide food and shelter for animals.
→Throughout the event,I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals.
技法2 求准求精
写作时不一定每一句都要有复杂句式,有时准确使用一个单词或短语就会让整个句子增色不少。
1.(2023新课标Ⅰ卷)I think that it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class.
→I don’t think it a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class.
2.(2021全国乙卷)In conclusion,we should find a way to study online better.
→In conclusion,we should find a way to study online more efficiently.
3.(2022全国甲卷)The World Oceans Day was set up to raise people’s awareness of protecting the oceans,which play an important part in global ecosystem.
→The World Oceans Day was set up to raise people’s awareness of protecting the oceans,which play a significant/crucial part in global ecosystem.
技法3 短语优先
恰当地选用一些贴切、地道的高级表达,尤其是短语,对提高书面表达的得分至关重要。所以考生不妨考虑在文章中使用较高级的表达,充分展现自己的语言功底。
1.(2023新课标Ⅰ、Ⅱ卷)I would appreciate it if you could consider my suggestion.
→I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestion into account/consideration.
2.(2023全国乙卷)Initially,on watching the Winter Olympic Games in Beijing,I began to love skating.
→Initially,on watching the Winter Olympic Games in Beijing,I became enthusiastic about skating.
3.(2021全国乙卷)And eventually,we can master what we desire to learn.
→And eventually,we can have a good command of what we desire to learn.
4.(2023新课标Ⅰ、Ⅱ卷)Firstly,randomly pairing up students may cause imbalanced language abilities within the groups.
→Firstly,randomly pairing up students may lead to/result in imbalanced language abilities within the groups.
高分语料
普通表达与其对应升级表达总结:
类型1 校园生活
汉语意义 普通表达 升级表达
能够做某事 be able to do sth be capable of doing sth,be competent to do sth
努力做某事 try to do sth spare no effort to do sth,strive to do sth
某人必须要做的事情 ...sb must do a must for sb
试图做某事 try to do sth attempt/seek to do sth,make an attempt to do sth
汉语意义 普通表达 升级表达
参加 join in,take part in participate in,get involved in,attend,engage in
想做某事 want to do sth can’t wait to do sth,desire/long to do sth,be eager to do sth
专注于 focus on concentrate on,be absorbed in,be immersed in
帮助某人 help sb do sb a favor,lend/give sb a hand,come to sb’s assistance
忙于 be busy with be occupied with,be engaged in
即将来临 be coming be around the corner,be approaching
利用,使用 use make (full) use of,take advantage of,make the best of,adopt
类型2 动作行为
汉语意义 普通表达 升级表达
记住 remember keep/bear in mind that...
面对,面临 face be faced with,meet with,encounter
意识到 know,realize be aware of/that...,be conscious of,come to realize
重视 value attach great importance to,take sth seriously
参观 visit pay a visit to,go to...for a visit
某人想到某事 sb think(s) of sth sth occur(s) to/strike(s) sb,sb come(s) up with sth
建议 suggest/advise that... put forward the suggestion that...,recommend that...
汉语意义 普通表达 升级表达
弥补,补偿 make up for compensate for
吸引某人 attract sb appeal to sb,have great appeal for sb, draw sb
相信,认为 believe that...,be sure that... hold the firm belief/view that...,be convinced that...
影响 affect have an effect/influence/impact on
造成,导致 cause contribute to,lead to,result in,bring about
提高 improve,raise,increase promote,strengthen
照顾 look after,take care of tend to,attend to
类型3 人际关系
汉语意义 普通表达 升级表达
向某人道歉 say sorry to sb make an apology to sb,apologize to sb
因某事感激某人 thank sb for sth,be thankful to sb for sth be grateful to sb for sth,express one’s gratitude to sb for sth
遇见 meet come across,encounter,run into
鼓励某人 encourage sb be in favor of sb
向某人求助 ask sb for help turn to sb for help
类型4 修饰形容
汉语意义 普通表达 升级表达
不同种类的 different kinds of a wide range of,a variety of,various, varieties of
大量的,很多的 a number of,a lot of a considerable number of,
an overwhelming majority of,
large quantities of,scores of,
dozens of,countless,numerous
对……有益 be useful to,be good for be of great benefit to,do good to,
be beneficial to
汉语意义 普通表达 升级表达
由……组成 be made up of consist of,be composed of
疲惫不堪 be tired be worn out,feel exhausted
立即 immediately without hesitation/delay
擅长 be good at be skilled at,have a gift for,have a good command of,be expert at/in
准时 on time on schedule,punctually
类型5 陈述事实
汉语意义 普通表达 升级表达
几天前 a few days ago the other day
大家
公认…… People think that... It’s acknowledged/
accepted/believed that...
实际上 actually as a matter of fact
谈及 talk of/about,mention refer to,speak of,when it comes to
显然 clearly apparently,obviously
应该 should be supposed to
关于 about with regard to,in terms of,as for,
regarding,concerning
通常 usually more often than not
汉语意义 普通表达 升级表达
有时 sometimes occasionally,once in a while
不得不做 have to do have no choice but to do
仅仅 only no more than,merely
只要 as long as on condition that
在我看来 in my opinion as far as I’m concerned,personally speaking
引起人们的关注 attract people’s attention arouse/draw people’s concern
越来越多的 more and more an increasing number of,a growing number of
我担心…… I’m worried that... What makes me worried is that...
汉语意义 普通表达 升级表达
很重要 be very important be of great/vital importance
应采取有效措施解决这个问题 should take effective measures to solve the problem effective measures ought to be taken to deal/cope with the problem
受欢迎 be popular with/among enjoy wide popularity among/with
忽视 ignore fail to take...into account,turn a blind eye to
因为 because (of) on account of,in that,since,seeing that,as,on the grounds that...
与……有关的 be related to be associated/connected with
策略二 句式升级——学会运用高级句式
复杂结构的运用,如强调句、倒装句、含有名词性从句、定语从句或状语从句的复合句和语法结构,及含有非谓语动词的高级句式等,能彰显考生对英语语言文字的驾驭能力。但是,在使用这些句式时,应遵循以下原则:高级但不造作,多变但不离谱,复杂但不晦涩。
技法1 自我介绍 开篇吸睛
句式1:I am Li Hua,+同位语/定语从句
(2020全国Ⅲ卷)I am Li Hua,one of your students,writing in the hope that you can give us some advice on our short play.
我是你的一位学生李华,写这封信的目的是希望你能给我们一些关于英语短剧的建议。
技法2 活用非谓语 句句精彩
句式2:分词(短语)作状语
①(2025全国一卷)First,this theme directly reflects our daily school life,making it relatable to everyone.
首先,这个主题直接反映了我们日常的校园生活,让每个人都觉得亲切熟悉。
②(2023全国甲卷)Known as a Chinese writer and politician in the Song Dynasty,Fan Zhongyan was highly appreciated because he made great contributions to society.
作为中国宋代著名的作家和政治家,范仲淹因其对社会的巨大贡献而受到高度赞赏。
③(2023新课标Ⅰ卷)Learning that we’ll be randomly paired to do the oral practice,I feel an urge to express my different voice.
得知我们将被随机配对进行口语练习,我有表达自己不同想法的欲望。
句式3:aiming to...为了……
(2021全国甲卷)My school is to hold theme-based class meetings,aiming to promote traditional Chinese culture.
为弘扬中国传统文化,我校将举行主题班会。
句式4:the purpose of which + be to do (非限制性定语从句)……的目的是……
Various activities have been held,the purpose of which was to raise our awareness of campus safety.
各种各样的活动已经举行,其目的是提高我们的校园安全意识。
句式5:representing/on behalf of...代表……
(2022新课标Ⅰ卷)On behalf of/Representing the English program of our school’s radio station,I’m writing to invite you to give an interview.
我代表学校广播电台英语节目写信邀请你接受采访。
技法3 巧用it提升表达
句式6:It seems/seemed that...
(2024新课标Ⅰ卷)It seemed that I was integrated with nature and felt its vitality and rhythm.
我似乎与大自然融为一体,感受到了大自然的活力和节奏。
句式7:It is +adj./n.+ (for/of sb) to do/that从句
(2025全国一卷)It is also a great way to discover hidden sides of each other, thus strengthening friendships.
这也是一个发现彼此不为人知一面的绝佳方式,从而增进友谊。
句式8:It goes without saying that...
毋庸置疑……
(2021天津3月卷)It goes without saying that Beijing is not only the political center but also the economic center of our country.
毋庸置疑,北京不仅是我国的政治中心,而且是我国的经济中心。
技法4 三大从句 锦上添花
句式9:what引导的主语从句+be+n./that...
(2021浙江6月卷)What impressed me was the amazing works by those gifted student painters.
令我印象深刻的是那些天才学生画家的惊人作品。
句式10:There is no doubt/There is no denying that...毫无疑问/不可否认……
(2022全国甲卷)There is no denying that we will make a difference to the marine environment with joined efforts.
不可否认,我们将共同努力,对海洋环境做出巨大贡献。
句式11:As an old saying goes...俗话说……
As is known to us/all...众所周知……
As is known to all,both teachers and students are suffering from physical and mental health problems by sitting long before the desks.
众所周知,老师和学生都因久坐遭受着身体和心理健康问题。
句式12:if引导的条件状语从句
(2023新课标Ⅰ卷)To begin with,we’d feel privileged if you could match us according to our oral English levels,rather than pair us randomly.
首先,如果您能根据我们的英语口语水平给我们搭配,而不是随机搭配,我们会感到很荣幸。
技法5 倒装省略 风景独好
句式13:Not only+助动词/情态动词/系动词+主语+谓语+其他,but+主语(+also)+谓语+其他,意为“不仅……而且……”。
(2024新课标Ⅰ、Ⅱ卷)In a word,it was not only an art class but it also provided us with a chance to connect with nature.
→In a word,not only was it an art class but it also provided us with a chance to connect with nature.
总之,这不仅是一堂艺术课,也给我们提供了与自然接触的机会。
句式14:“Only+副词/介词短语/when/if引导的状语从句” 位于句首时的部分倒装句,意为“只有……才……”。
(2025全国一卷)Only when we give good clues can others guess who it is,with hints given,making it like a fun game!
只有当我们给出好的线索时,别人才能猜出是谁,给出提示,就像一个有趣的游戏!
句式15:So+adj./adv.+情态动词/系动词/助动词+主语+that...
(2021新高考Ⅰ卷)So patiently did their father instruct them that the twins made the breakfast fast and well.
父亲耐心地指导,因此双胞胎把早餐做得又快又好。
句式16:形容词/名词/副词+as+主语+系动词/谓语动词
(2021全国乙卷)Convenient as online learning is,staring at the screen for a long time is harmful to our eyes.
虽然网络学习很方便,但长时间看屏幕对我们的眼睛有害。
句式17:省略if的虚拟条件句
Your selfless assistance made me achieve such great progress in English.
→Had it not been for your selfless assistance,I couldn’t have achieved such great progress in English.
要不是你无私的帮助,我不会在英语方面取得这么大的进步。
句式18:When/while/unless/until/if/even if/even though+doing/done/adj.
Although we were hot and tired,seeing the neighbourhood neat and clean,we were more than delighted.
→Although hot and tired,seeing the neighbourhood neat and clean,we were more than delighted.
尽管又热又累,但看着小区整洁又干净,我们都非常高兴。
技法6 恰当强调 一句千钧
句式19:It is/was+被强调成分+that+其他,意为“正是……”。
(2024浙江1月卷)A small change can make a big difference in your day.
→It’s a small change that can make a big difference in your day.
一个小的改变可以给你的一天带来巨大的影响。
句式20:主语+助动词do/does/did+动词原形+...,意为“……确实/一定……”。
提示:该句用于强调动词,一般现在时用do/does,一般过去时用did。
(2025全国一卷) I do believe this column will both entertain and strengthen our school community.
我相信这个专栏既能娱乐大家,又能增强我们学校的团体凝聚力。
技法7 适时感叹 虚实结合
句式21:what/how 引导的感叹句
提示:what 引导的感叹句中,中心词是名词,how引导的感叹句中,中心词是形容词或副词。
I am delighted to be one of the members in your team.
→How delighted I am to be one of the members in your team!
成为你的团队的一员,我真高兴!
技法8 with复合句型 佳作之道
句式22:with+宾语+非谓语动词,主句
提示:该句式中,非谓语动词形式主要有3种:doing (主动或进行),done (被动或完成),to do(将来的动作)。
①(2025湖北武汉质量检测)With our exchange program drawing to an end,I want to express our sincere gratitude to you for your kindness and generosity.(with复合结构)
在我们的交流项目即将结束之际,我想对您的友好和慷慨表示衷心的感谢。
②With so many fantastic works to be shown at the exhibition,it will surely arouse your interest in Chinese painting.(with复合结构)
有这么多了不起的作品即将在展览中展出,这一定会激起你对中国画的兴趣。
课堂应用
Ⅰ.用高级词汇替换下列句中的加黑词语
1.(2025湖北七市调研)As planned,the activity will begin at 8:00 a.m.at the school lecture hall where the biology teacher will explain basic principles of scientific observation.
2.(2025湖南长沙模拟)I want to express my thanks for recommending that I read some illuminating stories of scientists.
3.(2025湖南长沙模拟)Therefore,it is important to strengthen international cooperation and jointly safeguard world peace.
scheduled
convey my gratitude/appreciation
crucial/vital/significant
4.(2025安徽“江南十校”联考)Our campus is attractive with green grass,tall trees and modern buildings.The atmosphere is inviting and perfect for both studies and leisure.
5.(2021全国乙卷)With the wide spread of the Internet,more and more people become online learners.
engaging/appealing/charming
an increasing number of
Ⅱ.用高级句式升级下列句子
1.We can improve our efficiency and make our school life meaningful only in this way.
→ we can improve our efficiency and make our school life meaningful.(强调句)
2.It not only helped us cooperate better and beautify our campus,but it also raised our awareness of protecting the environment.
→ ,but it also raised our awareness of protecting the environment.(倒装句)
It is only in this way that
Not only did it help us cooperate better and beautify our campus
3.The radio program was founded in 2016.It aimed to provide a good platform for the students to share their school life.
→The radio program was founded in 2016,
to share their school life.
(动词-ing形式短语作状语)
aiming to provide a good platform for the students
Ⅲ.完成句子
1. is Li Bai’s Tang Poems for the reasons below.
我首先推荐的是李白的唐诗,原因如下。
2.I’m writing to invite you to go for a morning run with me,
in an amazing way.
我写信是想邀请你和我一起去晨跑,这对我们俩都有好处。
3. in the English poetry writing contest held by the English newspaper.
我写信是想告诉你,我在这家英文报纸举办的英语诗歌写作比赛中获得了一等奖。
What comes first on my recommendation list
which may benefit both of us
I am writing to inform you that I won first prize
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