Unit 1 Period 4 Writing-【新课程能力培养】2025-2026学年高中英语选择性必修第二册学习手册（人教版）

Period 4 写作点拨 如何用英文写劝说信 说服性信函首先要符合信函的格式。其 次，要具备说服性议论文的特点。一般来 说，说服性议论文分四个基本段落：第一段 引出话题；第二、三段提出正、反两方面的 观点，陈述各自理由；第四段总结利弊，表 明态度。在具体写作中要注意下列几点： 1.话题的提出要开门见山，不要拖泥 带水； 2.正、反对比论据要正确，条理要清 楚，语言应准确、精练； 3.作者的观点必须鲜明，不能模棱两可； 4.议论文的主体时态多用一般现在时： 5.尽量避免同一单词、句型的重复使用， 多采用同义词、相似结构以使表达多样化。 【常用句型】 1.I don't think it is a very good way to... For example,..Worst of all,.. 2.In my opinion,it is wrong to... 3.As far as I am concerned,we should... 4.The main disadvantages of...are as fol- lows.First...;Second...;Third...;Finally... 5.I would very much like to advise you t0.… 6.Now that you...,why not...? 7.No matter how...,I do believe... 【常用词汇】 1.besides,in addition,furthermore,more- Unit 1 SCIENCE AND SCIENTISTS Writing over,what's more 2.what's worse,worse still,to make things worse 3.but,still,however,on the other hand, on the contrary,in fact 4.for example,in other words,that is to say 5.in a word,in short,in conclusion,in brief 6.in one's opinion/view,as far as....con- cerned,I think/believe 典例赏析 假设你叫李华，你的笔友John在最近 给你的来信中，无意间透露了他有早恋倾 向。请你给他写封劝说信，帮他分析早恋的 危害、应该持有的态度，以及解决问题的办 法。词数80左右；可适当增加细节，以使 行文连贯。 Hi John, How are you doing? Yours sincerely, Li Hua (13 高中英语选择性必修第二册（人教版） 【参考范文】 Hi John, How are you doing?In your last letter you talked about puppy love,so I'd like to give you my views on the subject. In my opinion,we students should try to avoid puppy love at this point in our lives,as it may lead to many problems.It not only distracts us from our studies,but also makes our parents and teachers very worried about us.At this moment our studies must come first.We are too young to be involved in love. I'm not saying that it's wrong for boys and girls to socialize with each other,or work together in class.We can encourage and help each other and make progress together.But we should avoid any type of romance. If we find ourselves falling in love,the best course of action is to seek advice from our parents and teachers. Do you agree with me?I'm looking for- ward to your early reply. Best wishes. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【词句品鉴】 高级词汇distract;socialize,encourage in one's opinion;lead to;be involved 精彩短语in;make progress;fall in love;seek advice;look forward to not only...but also...;too...to...;I'm not 增分句型 saying that... 14 学 【名师点评】 这封劝说信层次非常清晰，开头就开门 见山地表达了自己对中学生早恋问题的看 法，理由陈述条理清楚，且论据充分，使用 了“not only.but also.”和“too..to.”结 构表达自己的观点，有说服力；还使用了 “T'm not saying that..”句型，让被劝说的人 感到对方给自已提建议时，语气委婉，让人 易接受。能够使用高级词汇和短语，一些高 级句型的运用也为文章增色不少。 写作模板 Hi John, (最近好吗)？In your last letter you talked about puppy love,so I'd like to (给你我的观点)on the subject. (以我看来)，we students should try to avoid puppy love at this point in our lives, (因为这会导致很多问 题).It (不仅)distracts us from our studies. (而且)makes our parents and teachers very worried about us.At this moment our studies must (处于第 一位).We are (太小而不能)be involved in love. (我不是说)that it's wrong for boys and girls to socialize with each other, or work together in class.We can encourage and help each other and make progress together. But we should avoid any type of romance. If we (发现我们坠入爱河)， the best course of action is to (寻求 父母和老师的建议). Do you agree with me?I'm looking for- ward to your early reply. Best wishes. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落 开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短 文，续写词数应为150左右。 At noon on a brilliant Tuesday in March, my 12-year-old son Kai and I are a mile and a half into a four-day,27-mile walk through the Grand Canyon-his first backpacking trip- when he asks:"Are we almost to camp?" Um,no.Camp,at Hermit Creek,is seven miles and nearly 2,500 feet below,which will take us several more hours.We're going down a poorly maintained path off the canyon,across which we can see many of the canyon's layers. This is on display in cliffs hundreds of feet tall,a reminder of how far we have to go. We are here largely because of a birthday note Kai wrote me two years ago in which he declared,"You used to be a wild 10-year-old like me and now you're a wild 53-year-old. We can do so many things together!I am ex- cited for when I'm old enough for the Grand Canyon!" There are,I suppose,dads who could re- sist that,just as there are fathers who would plan an experience-appropriate trip for their sons.I am neither,so here we are.Never mind Unit 1 SCIENCE AND SCIENTISTS that;aside from simply being 12,Kai has done almost nothing to physically prepare for this. Or that I haven't backpacked for 13 years. We head on past twisty trees and brush. Soon the view broadens,and the layers grow deeper,down to the shadowy,1.8 billion-year- old Vishnu,a panorama(全景)that leaves Kai excited.“This place is amazing,”he says. Nightfall in the canyon can be magical. Darkness surrounds us,pressed by cool air. We navigate a narrow path to the stream and, hearing the sound of a waterfall,lie down to take in the stars.Twice I suggest we turn in. “Not yet,,”Kai says.“This is too unbeliev- able.” Paragraph 1: The last day's plan is to travel the three miles to the Colorado River,which is the most challenging. Paragraph 2: After the backpacking trip,I also write a note to my son. 学(15N 高中英语选择性必修第二册（人教版） 二、按照汉语提示完成句子 1.put/lay the blame on 2.has been transformed into 3.To assist;to learn 4.is in the charge of Tom;in charge of the company 5.nothing is more important 三、语篇填空 1.waters 2.happier 3.who 4.dating 5.its 6.was listed 7.to 8.to promote 9.a 10.confidence 【解析】这是一篇说明文。文章以瓷器工作室老板 范玉佩为切人点介绍了中国五大名瓷之一一一钧瓷及其 故乡神后镇。 1.考查动词时态。句意：每天早上7点起床，25岁 的范玉佩打扫干净，在院子里浇花，然后打开她的钧瓷 制作工作室的门，准备开始新的一天的业务。分析句子 结构可知，此空为并列的谓语动词，与cleans,,opens并 列，用一般现在时，且为单数，故填waters。 2.考查形容词比较级。句意：对于范来说，她的家 乡禹州市神后镇的生活要幸福得多。根据句意及空前 much可知，此处应该用比较级，故填happier。 3.考查定语从句。句意：她和丈夫一起创办了自己 的工作室，丈夫辞去了在北京的工作。分析句子结构可 知，此句为非限制性定语从句，先行词为her husband, 指人，在从句中作主语，故填who。 4.考查非谓语动词。句意：钧瓷是中国五大名瓷之 一，其历史可追溯到宋朝。分析句子结构可知，此空应 为非谓语动词作状语，date back to短语没有被动语态， 所以用现在分词表主动，故填dating。 5.考查代词。句意：它以在窑炉中加热时会变色而 闻名。根据“change of colors”可知，此处应该用形容 词性物主代词，故填its。 6.考查动词时态语态。句意：2008年被列为国家级 非物质文化遗产。根据时间状语“In2008”可知，此句 应该用一般过去时，主语“it”和动词1st之间为被动关 系，故填was listed。 7.考查介词。句意：神后镇是钧瓷的故乡。be home to为固定搭配，意为“是…的故乡”，故填to。 8.考查非谓语动词。句意：最近，禹州市地方政府 (66 采取了一系列措施来促进这种生产。take measures to do sh.为固定用法，意为“采取措施做某事”，不定式作目 的状语，故填to promote。 9.考查冠词。句意：她最近的目标是拥有一家商 店，在那里他们可以出售自己的产品。根据句意和shop 可知，此处泛指一家商店，shop发音以辅音音素开头， 故填a。 10.考查名词。句意：随着每天都有越来越多的游 客来到神后镇，范相信钧瓷在未来会获得更大的人气。 根据空前the可知，此处应填名词，作宾语，且为不可 数名词，故填confidence。 Period 4 Writing 读后续写 【参考范文】 Paragraph 1: The last day's plan is to travel the three miles to the Colorado River,which is the most challenging.With high wind howling around,we ascend the steep rock and wade the winding stream.It's almost impossible for a 12-year-old boy to overcome such a harsh condition.To my utter as- tonishment,he eventually manages to challenge himself to reach the destination and his spirits never sink despite his sore legs and minor bruises.Bathed in the warm sunshine, Kai skips with extreme excitement and shares everything novel with me along the Colorado River Paragraph 2: After the backpacking trip,I also write a note to my son.The note says "It's not only a physically demanding adventure but also a spiritually rewarding experience.I'm delighted that we are both wild enough and enjoy this life- time trip."Although Kai is only an immature boy that may just focus on the gorgeous scenery,I still believe that when he gradually grows up,he will genuinely realize that the adventure imparts the courage and consistent beliefs to him to face the stormy.