2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---友谊里的勇气与成长 导学案

2026-04-20
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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 One afternoon, on our way home from school, Emma and I were chatting about the events of our day. Emma, with her curious eyes shining, asked me about my friendship with Lucy. Without a moment’s hesitation, I said, “I only hung out with Lucy because she wanted me to, but I didn’t really want to be friends with her. She was kind of boring.” Unluckily, I didn’t know Lucy was nearby. When I looked up, she was right there, having heard everything. Her face turned pale, and her eyes got big with surprise. She didn’t say anything and ran off. Emma and I just stood there, feeling bad. I knew I should go after Lucy and say sorry, but I was too shocked to move. Emma’s face turned red too. We walked home without talking, and it felt like our steps were getting heavier. The next days were hard. I felt really bad about what I said and wanted to fix things with Lucy. I needed to say sorry. But what should I say? Even though I didn’t mean to, I hurt Lucy’s feelings. Every time I saw her at school, I looked away quickly. Then, something interesting happened in our speaking class. On Tuesday, Ms. Julia said we would do pre-class speeches. She had written our topics on small pieces of paper and put them in a box. We had to pick one without knowing what it was. I was a bit nervous. When I reached into the box, I pulled out a paper that said, “Tell your most embarrassing moment.” My heart was beating fast. It felt like I was given a chance to make things right. I spent the next few days practicing my speech, trying to find the right words to apologize to Lucy. I wanted to be sincere and show her I was sorry. When the day of the speech came, I was still nervous, but I knew it was important to face my mistake. 注意: 1. 续写词数应为150个左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I stood in front of the class, took a deep breath, and began to share my story. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That day marked a turning point. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1.角色 ________________________________________________________ 2.视角 第________人称 3.时空线 On the way home from school, I chatted with Emma--- _________________ --- Lucy heard my bad words and ran off--- _________________ --- I felt guilty but didn’t dare to apologize--- _________________ --- We had pre-class speeches in speaking class--- I picked the topic “Tell your most embarrassing moment” 4. 细节问答 What were Emma and I doing on the way home from school? :___________________________________ What did I say about Lucy?:_________________________________ How did Lucy react when she heard my words?:________________________________________________ How did I feel after Lucy ran off?:__________________________________________ Why didn’t I apologize to Lucy at once?:_____________________________________________ What topic did I pick in the speaking class?_________________________________________________ What did I want to do through the speech?________________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?:________________________________________________ 5.情节线 放学路上,我和艾玛聊天→_________________ →我随口说不想和露西做朋友,被露西听到,她伤心跑开→_________________ →我内心愧疚,却不敢主动道歉→口语课上,老师安排课前演讲,我抽到“讲述最尴尬的时刻”这一主题→_________________ →(续写)我在课堂上演讲,真诚向露西道歉→(续写)这次道歉成为转折点,我和露西修复友谊,也学会了真诚待人 6.情感线 I:casual and thoughtless→___________→guilty and hesitant→___________→nervous but determined→___________(续写) 7. 综合概括(中英各一句) 中文:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式(宾语从句;定语从句;状语从句;非谓语;并列句) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题(温情成长类) _______________________________________ 二.情节构造 I stood in front of the class, took a deep breath, and began to share my story. 衔接句1——What did I share in the speech? What did I say to Lucy?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That day marked a turning point. 衔接句2——What changed after the speech? What was the ending?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三.段落续写框架 第一段:我站在班级面前,深吸一口气,开始分享我的故事。→①__________________→②__________________→③_______________; 第二段:那一天成为了一个转折点。→④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写 I stood in front of the class, took a deep breath, and began to share my story. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That day marked a turning point. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1.角色 I(知错能改、有勇气的学生);Emma(“我”的同学,见证事件全过程);Lucy(“我”的朋友,善良敏感,被话语伤害);Ms. Julia(口语课老师,间接促成“我”道歉) 2.视角 第一人称 3.时空线 On the way home from school, I chatted with Emma--- I talked about my friendship with Lucy and said I didn’t want to be her friend--- Lucy heard my bad words and ran off--- Emma and I felt bad, and I didn’t dare to chase her--- I felt guilty but didn’t dare to apologize--- We had pre-class speeches in speaking class--- I picked the topic “Tell your most embarrassing moment” 4. 细节问答 What were Emma and I doing on the way home from school? :We were chatting about the events of our day and talking about my friendship with Lucy. What did I say about Lucy?:I said I only hung out with Lucy because she wanted me to, and I didn’t really want to be her friend; I thought she was kind of boring. How did Lucy react when she heard my words?:Her face turned pale, her eyes got big with surprise, she didn’t say anything and ran off. How did I feel after Lucy ran off?:I felt really bad, guilty and shocked, and I regretted what I had said. Why didn’t I apologize to Lucy at once?:Because I was too shocked to move at that moment, and later I was too hesitant to face her. What topic did I pick in the speaking class?:I picked the topic “Tell your most embarrassing moment”. What did I want to do through the speech?:I wanted to apologize to Lucy sincerely, fix things with her and show her I was sorry for hurting her feelings. What does the story tell us?:We should be careful with our words, dare to admit our mistakes and apologize sincerely, which is important for keeping friendship. 5.情节线 放学路上,我和艾玛聊天→我随口说不想和露西做朋友,觉得她很无聊,被一旁的露西听到→我随口说不想和露西做朋友,被露西听到,她伤心跑开→我和艾玛都很愧疚,我当时太震惊没敢去追露西→我内心愧疚,却不敢主动道歉,每次见到露西都躲闪→口语课上,老师安排课前演讲,我抽到“讲述最尴尬的时刻”这一主题→(续写)我在课堂上演讲,真诚向露西道歉,讲述自己的愧疚→(续写)这次道歉成为转折点,我和露西修复友谊,也学会了真诚待人、谨慎言语 6.情感线 I:casual and thoughtless→shocked and guilty→guilty and hesitant→nervous but determined→relieved and grateful(续写) 7. 综合概括(中英各一句) 中文:放学路上,我随口对艾玛说不想和露西做朋友,被露西听到后她伤心跑开,我内心十分愧疚却不敢道歉。后来口语课上,我抽到“讲述最尴尬的时刻”的演讲主题,决定借演讲真诚向露西道歉,弥补自己的过错。 英文:On the way home from school, I casually told Emma that I didn’t want to be friends with Lucy, which was heard by Lucy, and she ran off sadly. I felt very guilty but didn’t dare to apologize. Later, in the speaking class, I picked the speech topic “Tell your most embarrassing moment” and decided to sincerely apologize to Lucy through the speech to make up for my mistake. 8. 句式(宾语从句;定语从句;状语从句;非谓语;并列句) 状语从句:When I looked up, she was right there, having heard everything. / Even though I didn’t mean to, I hurt Lucy’s feelings. 非谓语动词:Without a moment’s hesitation, I said... / When I reached into the box, I pulled out a paper that said, “Tell your most embarrassing moment.” 宾语从句:Emma asked me about my friendship with Lucy. / I wanted to show her I was sorry for what I had said. 并列句:She didn’t say anything and ran off. / I was a bit nervous, but I knew it was important to face my mistake. 9. 本文主题(温情成长类) 真诚的道歉是修复友谊的桥梁,敢于承认错误、正视自己的不足,才能收获真挚的情谊,实现自我成长。 二.情节构造 I stood in front of the class, took a deep breath, and began to share my story. 衔接句1——What did I share in the speech? What did I say to Lucy?:I shared the moment I hurt Lucy with my thoughtless words, and I sincerely apologized to her in front of the whole class. That day marked a turning point. 衔接句2——What changed after the speech? What was the ending?:Lucy forgave me, we repaired our friendship, and I learned to be careful with my words and brave to admit mistakes. 三.段落续写框架 第一段:我站在班级面前,深吸一口气,开始分享我的故事。→①我讲述了放学路上伤害露西的经过,表达内心的愧疚→②我对着露西的方向真诚道歉,承认自己的轻率→③全班安静,我看到露西眼中的动容; 第二段:那一天成为了一个转折点。→①演讲结束后,露西主动找到我,原谅了我的过错→②我们重新成为好朋友,我也变得更加谨慎真诚→③这次经历让我明白,勇敢道歉、珍惜友谊的重要性。 四.段落续写 I stood in front of the class, took a deep breath, and began to share my story. I told everyone about the afternoon when I hurt Lucy with my thoughtless words, and how guilty I had felt these days. I looked directly at Lucy, my voice trembling a little, and said sincerely, “Lucy, I’m so sorry. I didn’t mean to hurt you. You are a good friend, and I hope you can forgive me.” The whole class was quiet, and I saw tears in Lucy’s eyes. That day marked a turning point. After class, Lucy came up to me and gave me a hug, saying she had forgiven me. We talked for a long time and made up completely. From then on, I became more careful with my words and cherished our friendship deeply. This experience taught me that courage to admit mistakes and sincere apology can save a precious friendship. 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $

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