内容正文:
Unit 9 From Here to There
书面表达10篇
内容导航
单元话题 基础语篇练习 重难语篇练习
单元话题聚焦
交通与社区
基础语篇练习
稳扎稳打 必拿分数:聚焦稳拿分数题目,确保基础分值
重难语篇练习
突破瓶颈 争夺高分:聚焦高难度题目,争夺关键分数
基础语篇练习
1.假设你是李明,请根据以下提示,向你的笔友Tom介绍你所在的社区。
要求:1. 使用方位介词(如 next to, across from, between, on the corner of 等)
2. 使用一般现在时
3. 80词。
提示问题:1. What can you find in your community? (至少写3个地点)
2. Where are these places? (描述它们的位置关系)
3. What do you think of life in your community?
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Ming
2.假如你叫林林(Linlin),住在阳光社区,这是你们小区的地图。请根据以下要点提示和写作要求,用英语写一篇短文向大家介绍一下你的社区。
写作要点:
1)What is in your community?
2)What do you think of your life in your community?
写作要求:
(1)文中须包含地图所有信息,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
(3)词数70左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Hello, I’m Linlin. I live in the Sunshine Community.
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3.根据提示,用英语写一篇短文,描述你计划的一次假期旅行(如去海边、爬山或参观历史名城)。
提示内容:
- 旅行目的地和选择的交通方式;
- 需要携带的物品(如衣物、地图、相机等);
- 计划参观的景点或活动;
- 表达对旅行的期待。
写作要求:
1. 包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数70左右。
参考词汇:suitcase(行李箱), sunscreen(防晒霜), historical site(历史遗址), adventure(冒险)。
My Holiday Travel Plan
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4.假如你是学校报社的小记者,上周你对学校周边的社区进行了一次调查。请你根据调查结果,写一篇短文向校报投稿,介绍社区的一些基本情况和存在的问题,并提出你的建议。内容包括:
1. 基本情况(社区有超市、公园等设施;居民很友好……);
2. 存在问题(部分区域卫生差,地上有垃圾……);
3. 你的建议。
写作要求:1. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数80左右(开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Last week, I did a survey of the community around our school. Here is the result.
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I hope we can make the community better. Let’s work together to keep it clean.
5.假如你是李华,你的学校要举办以“My Dream Neighbourhood”为主题的演讲活动。请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文,向同学们介绍一下你理想的社区。
Environment (环境)
clean, beautiful
People
friendly, helpful
Wonderful places
· a square: play and exercise to keep healthy
· a garden: plant flowers and vegetables
· …
注意:
(1) 短文必须包含所有要点及一个补充要点,可适当发挥。
(2) 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(3) 词数60个左右 (开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
My Dream Neighbourhood
Hello, my name is Li Hua. Today, I’d like to share my dream neighbourhood with you. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6.假如你是李华,想邀请加拿大交流生Jim来你的新家。用英语写一封邀请信,内容包括以下要点,并适当发挥。
1. 位置:新家位于西华县城(Xihua County)中心。
2. 环境:空气清新,鸟语花香。
3. 邻居:友好善良,将为你准备一些美味的中国食物,他们有不同的技能,经常帮助我们解决各种问题……
4. 路线:沿着花园路(Garden Road)走,在第二个十字路口向左拐,过桥,你会看见一个银行,我家在银行旁边。
5. 我希望你能来参观。我正期待(look forward to doing)快点见到你。
写作要求:1) 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
2) 词数100左右。(文章开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数。)
Dear Jim,
I would like to invite you to my new home.
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Yours,
Li Hua
7.假如你叫李华,你的美国笔友Tom想了解你家附近的情况。请根据以下要点提示,给他写一封电子邮件。
要点提示:
1. 你家附近有一个公园、一个超市和一家图书馆;
2. 公园在超市的对面,里面有很多树和花,人们喜欢在里面散步、做运动;
3. 超市在图书馆的旁边,里面的东西很便宜,你经常和父母在周末去购物;
4. 图书馆很安静,你经常在那里看书。
要求:
5. 包含所有要点,可适当发挥;
6. 语言表达准确,语意通顺、连贯;
7. 词数:60—80词。
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8. 假如你是李楠,你邀请住在学校附近的王玲周日去你家里玩,可是她不知道你家在哪里。请根据汉语提示给她写一份路线说明。
提示:1. 从学校出发,先向左转,沿着新华街一直走,在第二个十字路口向右转。
2. 步行大约十五分钟,你会看到阳光餐馆,然后左转,进入沂河街区。
3. 早上8点半在沂河街区门口等她。
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重难语篇练习
9.假设你是李华,你的美国笔友Betty给你发了一封邮件,向你介绍了她生活的社区,她想知道你生活的社区是什么样子的。请你根据下列图示提示内容,给她回一封邮件。
要求:1. 必须包含提示内容,可适当发挥,70词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。参考词汇:convenient 方便的
Dear Betty,
I’m very glad to get your email. Now let me tell you about my community.
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Yours,
Li Hua
10.假定你是李萍,美国交换生John想参加你校的艺术节活动。请根据他的邮件和你校地图进行回复。
Dear Li Ping,
I’ve heard that there will be a report (报告) in your school art festival and I’m interested in it. But I don’t know your school very well. Could you please tell me how I can get to the Report Hall? When will the report start? What other activities can I take part in on that day?
Looking forward to your reply.
Love,
John
注意:
(1) 词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
Dear John,
Let me tell you the way to the Report Hall. Turn right after you walk into the school gate (大门).
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Yours,
Li Ping
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Unit 9 From Here to There
书面表达10篇
内容导航
单元话题 基础语篇练习 重难语篇练习
单元话题聚焦
交通与社区
基础语篇练习
稳扎稳打 必拿分数:聚焦稳拿分数题目,确保基础分值
重难语篇练习
突破瓶颈 争夺高分:聚焦高难度题目,争夺关键分数
基础语篇练习
1.假设你是李明,请根据以下提示,向你的笔友Tom介绍你所在的社区。
要求:1. 使用方位介词(如 next to, across from, between, on the corner of 等)
2. 使用一般现在时
3. 80词。
提示问题:1. What can you find in your community? (至少写3个地点)
2. Where are these places? (描述它们的位置关系)
3. What do you think of life in your community?
Dear Tom,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】例文:
Dear Tom,
I live in a nice community. There is a small park next to my apartment building. I often play there with my friends. Across from the park is a clean supermarket. My mom usually buys fresh vegetables there. Between the supermarket and a restaurant is a lovely library. I like reading books there after school.
Life here is convenient and relaxing. The neighbors are friendly, and we always help each other. I really enjoy living in this warm community.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:应用文(书信)
时态:一般现在时
人称:第一人称
写作要点:介绍社区里至少3个地点、它们的位置关系(用方位介词)、对社区生活的评价
注意事项:词数80词左右;必须使用方位介词;不得透露个人信息;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:点明自己住在一个不错的社区
主体段:介绍社区里的地点及位置关系(公园、超市、图书馆等)
结尾段:表达对社区生活的感受
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:社区地点
a small park 小公园
a clean supermarket 干净的超市
a lovely library 漂亮的图书馆
a restaurant 餐馆
要点二:位置关系
next to my apartment building 在我公寓楼旁边
across from the park 在公园对面
between the supermarket and a restaurant 在超市和餐馆之间
要点三:社区生活感受
convenient and relaxing 方便又放松
friendly neighbors 友好的邻居
help each other 互相帮助
enjoy living in this warm community 喜欢住在这个温暖的社区
2.假如你叫林林(Linlin),住在阳光社区,这是你们小区的地图。请根据以下要点提示和写作要求,用英语写一篇短文向大家介绍一下你的社区。
写作要点:
1)What is in your community?
2)What do you think of your life in your community?
写作要求:
(1)文中须包含地图所有信息,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
(3)词数70左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Hello, I’m Linlin. I live in the Sunshine Community.
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【答案】例文:
Hello, I’m Linlin. I live in the Sunshine Community. There is a sports center where I often go to exercise. There is also a library. I usually go there to read books. There are many houses in our community. We have a supermarket, which is very convenient for us to buy things. There is a park, too. I like to play with my friends there. I think my life in this community is very comfortable. People here are friendly and I enjoy living here.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇看图作文;
②时态:本文应使用“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,借用文章已给开头,总述社区特点,并依次介绍图中的场所;
第二步,表达对社区环境和生活的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①convenient方便的
②comfortable舒适的
[高分句型]
①There is a sports center where I often go to exercise.(there be句型,定语从句)
②People here are friendly and I enjoy living here.(and连接的并列句)
3.根据提示,用英语写一篇短文,描述你计划的一次假期旅行(如去海边、爬山或参观历史名城)。
提示内容:
- 旅行目的地和选择的交通方式;
- 需要携带的物品(如衣物、地图、相机等);
- 计划参观的景点或活动;
- 表达对旅行的期待。
写作要求:
1. 包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数70左右。
参考词汇:suitcase(行李箱), sunscreen(防晒霜), historical site(历史遗址), adventure(冒险)。
My Holiday Travel Plan
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【答案】
例文:
My Holiday Travel Plan
I plan to visit Beijing during the holiday. I will go there by high-speed train because it is fast and comfortable. In my suitcase, I will put some clothes, a map, and a camera.
I want to visit the Great Wall and the Palace Museum. I also plan to try Beijing duck and take many photos. I am excited about this trip. I think it will be a great adventure and I will learn a lot about Chinese history.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:主要使用一般将来时;
③提示:需涵盖旅行目的地、交通方式、携带物品、景点活动及个人期待,内容完整,语言简洁。
[写作步骤]
第一步,明确旅行目的地(北京)和交通方式(高铁);
第二步,说明携带物品(衣物、地图、相机);
第三步,列举计划参观的景点(长城、故宫)和活动(品尝烤鸭、拍照);
第四步,表达对旅行的期待(兴奋、增长见识)。
[亮点词汇]
①high-speed train高铁
②fast and comfortable快速舒适
③suitcase行李箱
④take photos拍照
⑤the Palace Museum故宫博物院
[高分句型]
①I will go there by high-speed train because it is fast and comfortable. (because引导原因状语从句)
②I also plan to try Beijing duck and take many photos. (plan to do表示计划)
4.假如你是学校报社的小记者,上周你对学校周边的社区进行了一次调查。请你根据调查结果,写一篇短文向校报投稿,介绍社区的一些基本情况和存在的问题,并提出你的建议。内容包括:
1. 基本情况(社区有超市、公园等设施;居民很友好……);
2. 存在问题(部分区域卫生差,地上有垃圾……);
3. 你的建议。
写作要求:1. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数80左右(开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Last week, I did a survey of the community around our school. Here is the result.
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I hope we can make the community better. Let’s work together to keep it clean.
【答案】例文
Last week, I did a survey of the community around our school. Here is the result.
The community has various facilities, including a supermarket, a park, and several small shops. The residents are friendly and always willing to help. However, I noticed that some areas are not well-maintained, with litter scattered on the ground, especially near the park and the bus stop. This not only affects the appearance of the community but also poses a health risk. To improve the situation, I suggest organizing regular clean-up events involving both students and residents. Additionally, more trash bins should be placed in key areas to encourage proper waste disposal.
I hope we can make the community better. Let’s work together to keep it clean.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、开篇点题,引出话题;
第二步、根据提示,介绍社区的一些基本情况和存在的问题;
第三步、给出建议并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be willing to愿意
②not only…but also...不仅……而且……
③work together共同努力
[高分句型]
I hope we can make the community better.(宾语从句)
5.假如你是李华,你的学校要举办以“My Dream Neighbourhood”为主题的演讲活动。请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文,向同学们介绍一下你理想的社区。
Environment (环境)
clean, beautiful
People
friendly, helpful
Wonderful places
· a square: play and exercise to keep healthy
· a garden: plant flowers and vegetables
· …
注意:
(1) 短文必须包含所有要点及一个补充要点,可适当发挥。
(2) 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(3) 词数60个左右 (开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
My Dream Neighbourhood
Hello, my name is Li Hua. Today, I’d like to share my dream neighbourhood with you. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
My Dream Neighbourhood
Hello, my name is Li Hua. Today, I’d like to share my dream neighbourhood with you. It is clean and beautiful. People are friendly and helpful. There are many wonderful places. There is a big square in the center. Children can play there and old people can do exercise to keep healthy. Beside the square, there is a garden. We can plant flowers and vegetables. It also makes the neighbourhood beautiful. There is also a supermarket. I can buy all kinds of things in it.
I feel happy and relaxed to live in my dream neighbourhood.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示的信息,并适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,以自我介绍开篇,引出要分享的“梦想社区”主题;
第二步,概括描述社区的整体特征,按照空间顺序依次介绍社区设施。介绍广场时,说明其位置及不同人群的活动;
第三步,表达在梦想社区生活的美好感受。
[亮点词汇]
①do exercise锻炼
②keep healthy保持健康
③all kinds of各种各样的
[高分句型]
①There are many wonderful places. (There be句型)
②Children can play there and old people can do exercise to keep healthy. (动词不定式表目的)
6.假如你是李华,想邀请加拿大交流生Jim来你的新家。用英语写一封邀请信,内容包括以下要点,并适当发挥。
1. 位置:新家位于西华县城(Xihua County)中心。
2. 环境:空气清新,鸟语花香。
3. 邻居:友好善良,将为你准备一些美味的中国食物,他们有不同的技能,经常帮助我们解决各种问题……
4. 路线:沿着花园路(Garden Road)走,在第二个十字路口向左拐,过桥,你会看见一个银行,我家在银行旁边。
5. 我希望你能来参观。我正期待(look forward to doing)快点见到你。
写作要求:1) 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
2) 词数100左右。(文章开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数。)
Dear Jim,
I would like to invite you to my new home.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Jim,
I would like to invite you to my new home. It is in the center of Xihua County. The air is fresh here. There are many beautiful flowers and green trees, You can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing.
My neighbors are very friendly and kind. They will prepare plenty of delicious Chinese food for you. They have different skills and often help us with all kinds of problems. We are like a big family.
This is the way to my home. Walk along the Garden Road, and then turn left at the second crossing. Cross the bridge, you’ll see a bank. My home is beside the bank.
I hope you can come and visit. I am looking forward to meeting you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文为一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:要点内容已给出,注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节,完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,诚挚发出邀请;
第二步,介绍新家的位置,环境以及邻居;
第三步,介绍来新家的路线。
[亮点词汇]
① plenty of很多
② help sb with sth帮助某人做某事
③ the way to去……的路
④ look forward to期待
[高分句型]
① There are many beautiful flowers and green trees.(There be句型)
② Cross the bridge, you’ll see a bank.(祈使句)
7.假如你叫李华,你的美国笔友Tom想了解你家附近的情况。请根据以下要点提示,给他写一封电子邮件。
要点提示:
1. 你家附近有一个公园、一个超市和一家图书馆;
2. 公园在超市的对面,里面有很多树和花,人们喜欢在里面散步、做运动;
3. 超市在图书馆的旁边,里面的东西很便宜,你经常和父母在周末去购物;
4. 图书馆很安静,你经常在那里看书。
要求:
5. 包含所有要点,可适当发挥;
6. 语言表达准确,语意通顺、连贯;
7. 词数:60—80词。
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【答案】例文
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to tell you something about my neighborhood.
There is a park, a supermarket and a library near my home. The park is across from the supermarket. There are many trees and flowers in it. People like to take walks and do sports there. The supermarket is next to the library. Things in it are very cheap. My parents and I often go shopping there on weekends. Because the library is quiet, I often read books there.
I like my neighborhood very much. What about yours?
Write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示的信息,并适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写信意图,引出要介绍的内容;
第二步,详细描述社区的相关设施及特点;
第三步,表达对社区的喜爱,并询问对方情况,期待回信。
[亮点词汇]
①across from在……对面
②do sports做运动
③on weekends在周末
[高分句型]
①There is a park, a supermarket and a library near my home.(There be句型)
②Because the library is quiet, I often read books there.(because引导的原因状语从句)
8. 假如你是李楠,你邀请住在学校附近的王玲周日去你家里玩,可是她不知道你家在哪里。请根据汉语提示给她写一份路线说明。
提示:1. 从学校出发,先向左转,沿着新华街一直走,在第二个十字路口向右转。
2. 步行大约十五分钟,你会看到阳光餐馆,然后左转,进入沂河街区。
3. 早上8点半在沂河街区门口等她。
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【答案】例文:
Dear Wang Ling,
Welcome to my home. And now I will tell you how you can get to my home.
Walk from our school and turn left first. Then walk along Xinhua Street and turn right at the second crossing. After about a fifteen minutes’ walk, you can see Sunshine Restaurant. Then turn left and walk into Yihe Neighborhood. And I will wait for you at the gate of the neighborhood at half past eight in the morning.
Yours,
Li Nan
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为一般现在时;
③提示:根据提示信息写一份路线说明告诉王玲如何去自己家。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,详细介绍去自己家的路线,并表示自己会等她。
[亮点词汇]
①turn left左转
②walk along沿着……走
③a fifteen minutes’ walk步行十五分钟
④wait for等待
[高分句型]
①And now I will tell you how you can get to my home. (宾语从句)
②Walk from our school and turn left first. (祈使句)
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9.假设你是李华,你的美国笔友Betty给你发了一封邮件,向你介绍了她生活的社区,她想知道你生活的社区是什么样子的。请你根据下列图示提示内容,给她回一封邮件。
要求:1. 必须包含提示内容,可适当发挥,70词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。参考词汇:convenient 方便的
Dear Betty,
I’m very glad to get your email. Now let me tell you about my community.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Betty,
I’m very glad to get your email. Now let me tell you about my community.
My community is in the center of the city. There are lots of trees and flowers here. In the community, there are two supermarkets, so it’s convenient for us to do shopping. There is a community service center. We can call it for help. There is also a park. Many people like to do sports there. The subway station is not far from the community, so it’s easy for people to go somewhere. My neighbors are very kind. We often help each other.
Life in this community is wonderful. I like living here.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中“社区的位置,住户情况,环境,周边的交通设施,以及周围的设施”,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“我很高兴收到你的电子邮件。”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“我的社区的位置,周边环境,周边设施,住户的情况”重点介绍我的社区的具体情况;
第三步,书写结语。表达“我喜欢住在这里。”
[亮点词汇]
① lots of许多
② do shopping购物
[高分句型]
① There are lots of trees and flowers here. In the community, there are two supermarkets, so it’s convenient for us to do shopping.(there be句型)
② The subway station is not far from the community, so it’s easy for people to go somewhere.(it的固定句型“It’s adj for sb to do sth.”表示“做某事对某人来说是……的。”)
10.假定你是李萍,美国交换生John想参加你校的艺术节活动。请根据他的邮件和你校地图进行回复。
Dear Li Ping,
I’ve heard that there will be a report (报告) in your school art festival and I’m interested in it. But I don’t know your school very well. Could you please tell me how I can get to the Report Hall? When will the report start? What other activities can I take part in on that day?
Looking forward to your reply.
Love,
John
注意:
(1) 词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
Dear John,
Let me tell you the way to the Report Hall. Turn right after you walk into the school gate (大门).
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Yours,
Li Ping
【答案】例文
Dear John,
Let me tell you the way to the Report Hall. Turn right after you walk into the school gate. Turn left at the first corner. Go straight down this road until you arrive at the Science Building and turn left. You can see the Report Hall behind the Science Building.
The report will start at 9 a.m.. There will be other activities on that day. If you have a gift for art, you can show yourself in a talent show. A sale will be held in the afternoon. Maybe you can sell something made by yourself. Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Ping
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:应用文,用一般现在时
明确要点:报告厅的路线、报告开始的时间、当天的其他活动
确定人称:第一人称和第二人称
注意事项:文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:总起句,点明主题——告知去报告厅的路线
主体段:分别介绍报告厅的路线、报告开始的时间、当天的其他活动
结尾段:结尾表达对对方到来的期待
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:报告厅的路线
路线介绍:根据地图详细介绍,turn left、go straight等
要点二:报告开始的时间
要点三:当日的活动
活动介绍:a talent show、a sale等
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