2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---寒风中的坚守与善意的回响 导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 On a cold, damp evening in mid-November, a sharp wind cut through the streets, but Jack paid little attention to the chill. As a delivery rider, he had just finished a few smooth orders, his hands warm from the hot milk tea cups he’d been carrying, and his spirits fairly good. Stepping out of a milk tea shop, he found the spot where his second-hand electric bike had been parked now empty. In an instant, his heart sank, and a wave of hopelessness swept over him, turning his calm evening into a nightmare. That bike was far more than just a vehicle; it was his lifeline, the only way for him to earn daily income and cover his living expenses. Panic set in as he remembered the undelivered orders — especially a cup of hot milk tea for Ms. White, a regular customer. His hand trembled as he pressed the voice button, his words laced with sorrow and anxiety as he apologized repeatedly, offering to pay for the undelivered drink. To his great surprise, Ms. White did not respond with anger or complaint, but with gentle kindness. Ms. White told him not to worry and to take his time finding his bike. Her understanding words calmed him, but also deepened his sense of responsibility. “She is so kind. I cannot let her down,” he thought. For nearly two hours, he searched every nearby street, but there was no sign of his bike. As night grew darker and the wind bit harder, Jack clenched his fists and made a firm decision. He took out his poor savings, bought a bag of fresh apples and a new cup of hot milk tea, then set off on foot to Ms. White’s apartment, several kilometers away. The wind bit into his thin jacket, and his old shoes grew heavy with mud, but the thought of keeping his promise and maintaining his integrity kept him moving forward through the dimly lit urban landscape. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Finally, breathless, Jack reached Ms. White’s doorstep and rang the bell. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Deeply moved by Jack’s action, Ms. White decided to share the story online that night. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 11月中旬一个寒冷潮湿的夜晚，外卖骑手Jack送完订单→_________________ →Jack走出奶茶店，发现自己的二手电动车被盗→_________________ →电动车是他的生计来源，他陷入绝望与恐慌→_________________ →他想起还有未送达的订单，尤其要送给老顾客White女士的奶茶→_________________ →他给White女士打电话道歉，提出赔偿，White女士温柔谅解，让他不用着急→_________________ →Jack深受触动，责任感倍增，搜寻电动车近两小时无果→_________________ →Jack拿出积蓄买了苹果和新奶茶，步行几公里前往White女士家→（续写）Jack气喘吁吁地到达White女士家门口，按响了门铃→（续写）White女士被Jack的行为打动，当晚把他的故事发到了网上 4. 细节问答 What was Jack’s job? ：___________________________________ What happened to Jack after he stepped out of the milk tea shop?： _________________________________ Why was the electric bike important to Jack?： ________________________________________________ What did Jack do when he realized he couldn’t deliver the milk tea?： __________________________________________ How did Ms. White respond to Jack’s apology?： _____________________________________________ What did Jack do after searching for his bike in vain?： _________________________________________________ Why did Jack keep moving forward though it was cold and tiring?： ________________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 11月中旬的一个寒冷潮湿的夜晚，寒风刺骨，外卖骑手Jack送完几单订单，心情不错，手上还留着奶茶的暖意→_________________ →他走出奶茶店，发现自己停放二手电动车的地方空了，电动车被盗→Jack瞬间心沉下去，绝望席卷而来，原本平静的夜晚变成了噩梦→_________________ →这辆电动车对他来说不仅是交通工具，更是生计的唯一来源，是他赚钱维持生活的依靠→他突然想起还有未送达的订单，尤其是老顾客White女士的一杯热奶茶→他紧张得手发抖，拨通White女士的电话，满心愧疚地道歉，提出赔偿未送达的奶茶→_________________ →让他意外的是，White女士没有生气抱怨，反而温柔地安慰他，让他不用着急，慢慢找车→White女士的谅解让Jack平静下来，但也加深了他的责任感，他暗下决心不能让White女士失望→Jack在附近街道搜寻了近两个小时，始终没有找到电动车→夜色渐深，寒风更烈，Jack握紧拳头做了一个坚定的决定→他拿出自己微薄的积蓄，买了一袋新鲜苹果和一杯新的热奶茶，步行几公里前往White女士的公寓→寒风穿透他单薄的外套，旧鞋子沾满泥土变得沉重，但坚守承诺、保持诚信的信念支撑着他在昏暗的城市中前行→（续写）Jack气喘吁吁地到达White女士家门口，按响了门铃→（续写）White女士被Jack的行为打动，当晚把他的故事发到了网上 6．情感线 Jack：good spirits→___________→panicked and hopeless→___________→responsible and determined→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文： ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文： ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 温情励志类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Finally, breathless, Jack reached Ms. White’s doorstep and rang the bell. 衔接句1——How did Ms. White react? What did Jack say and do?： ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Deeply moved by Jack’s action, Ms. White decided to share the story online that night. 衔接句2——What happened after the story was shared? What was the ending?： ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：终于，Jack气喘吁吁地到达了White女士的家门口，按响了门铃。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：被Jack的行为深深打动，White女士决定当晚就把这个故事发到网上。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写 Finally, breathless, Jack reached Ms. White’s doorstep and rang the bell. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Deeply moved by Jack’s action, Ms. White decided to share the story online that night. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 Jack（外卖骑手，诚信、有责任感、坚韧不拔，懂得感恩）；Ms. White（Jack的老顾客，善良、温柔、善解人意，懂得体谅他人） 2．视角 第三人称 3．时空线 11月中旬一个寒冷潮湿的夜晚，外卖骑手Jack送完订单→Jack心情不错，手上留着奶茶的暖意，未在意刺骨的寒风→Jack走出奶茶店，发现自己的二手电动车被盗→他瞬间陷入绝望，因为电动车是他的生计来源→电动车是他的生计来源，他陷入绝望与恐慌→他想起还有未送达的订单，尤其要送给老顾客White女士的奶茶→他给White女士打电话道歉，提出赔偿，White女士温柔谅解，让他不用着急→Jack深受触动，责任感倍增，搜寻电动车近两小时无果→Jack拿出积蓄买了苹果和新奶茶，步行几公里前往White女士家→（续写）Jack气喘吁吁地到达White女士家门口，按响了门铃→（续写）White女士被Jack的行为打动，当晚把他的故事发到了网上 4. 细节问答 What was Jack’s job? ：He was a delivery rider. What happened to Jack after he stepped out of the milk tea shop?：He found his second-hand electric bike had been stolen. Why was the electric bike important to Jack?：Because it was his lifeline, the only way for him to earn daily income and cover his living expenses. What did Jack do when he realized he couldn’t deliver the milk tea?：He called Ms. White to apologize repeatedly and offered to pay for the undelivered drink. How did Ms. White respond to Jack’s apology?：She did not get angry or complain, but comforted him gently and told him not to worry and take his time finding his bike. What did Jack do after searching for his bike in vain?：He took out his poor savings, bought a bag of fresh apples and a new cup of hot milk tea, and went to Ms. White’s apartment on foot. Why did Jack keep moving forward though it was cold and tiring?：Because he wanted to keep his promise and maintain his integrity. What does the story tell us?：Integrity and a sense of responsibility are precious qualities; kindness can be passed on, and every sincere effort will be rewarded with warmth. 5．情节线 11月中旬的一个寒冷潮湿的夜晚，寒风刺骨，外卖骑手Jack送完几单订单，心情不错，手上还留着奶茶的暖意→他走出奶茶店，发现自己停放二手电动车的地方空了，电动车被盗→Jack瞬间心沉下去，绝望席卷而来，原本平静的夜晚变成了噩梦→这辆电动车对他来说不仅是交通工具，更是生计的唯一来源，是他赚钱维持生活的依靠→他突然想起还有未送达的订单，尤其是老顾客White女士的一杯热奶茶→他紧张得手发抖，拨通White女士的电话，满心愧疚地道歉，提出赔偿未送达的奶茶→让他意外的是，White女士没有生气抱怨，反而温柔地安慰他，让他不用着急，慢慢找车→White女士的谅解让Jack平静下来，但也加深了他的责任感，他暗下决心不能让White女士失望→Jack在附近街道搜寻了近两个小时，始终没有找到电动车→夜色渐深，寒风更烈，Jack握紧拳头做了一个坚定的决定→他拿出自己微薄的积蓄，买了一袋新鲜苹果和一杯新的热奶茶，步行几公里前往White女士的公寓→寒风穿透他单薄的外套，旧鞋子沾满泥土变得沉重，但坚守承诺、保持诚信的信念支撑着他在昏暗的城市中前行→（续写）Jack气喘吁吁地到达White女士家门口，按响了门铃，White女士开门后十分惊讶，Jack说明来意并递上苹果和奶茶，表达自己的歉意与感谢→（续写）White女士被Jack的诚信和坚持深深打动，当晚把他的故事发到网上，网友们纷纷点赞支持Jack，有人帮忙寻找电动车，最终Jack不仅找回了电动车，还收获了更多善意与温暖 6．情感线 Jack：good spirits→desperate and panicked→anxious and guilty→responsible and determined→relieved and grateful（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：外卖骑手Jack在一个寒冷的夜晚送完订单后，发现自己赖以生存的二手电动车被盗，他因无法送达老顾客White女士的奶茶而满心愧疚，打电话道歉时却得到了White女士的温柔谅解。Jack深受触动，搜寻电动车无果后，拿出积蓄买了苹果和新奶茶，步行几公里送到White女士家。White女士被他的诚信与坚持打动，将他的故事发到网上，最终Jack收获了网友的善意与帮助，也让诚信与善意得以传递。 英文：On a cold evening, delivery rider Jack found his second-hand electric bike stolen after finishing his orders. He felt guilty because he couldn’t deliver a cup of milk tea to his regular customer Ms. White, but Ms. White comforted him gently instead of complaining. Deeply touched, Jack bought apples and a new cup of milk tea with his savings and walked several kilometers to Ms. White’s apartment. Moved by Jack’s integrity and perseverance, Ms. White shared his story online. Finally, Jack received kindness and help from netizens, and integrity and kindness were passed on. 8. 句式 状语从句：As night grew darker and the wind bit harder, Jack clenched his fists and made a firm decision. 非谓语动词：Stepping out of a milk tea shop, he found the spot where his second-hand electric bike had been parked now empty. 宾语从句：He thought, “She is so kind. I cannot let her down.” 定语从句：That bike was far more than just a vehicle; it was his lifeline, the only way for him to earn daily income and cover his living expenses. 并列句：The wind bit into his thin jacket, and his old shoes grew heavy with mud, but the thought of keeping his promise and maintaining his integrity kept him moving forward. 9. 本文主题 温情励志类：诚信是为人之本，坚守承诺、勇于担当，才能赢得他人的尊重与善意；善意是相互的，一份理解与体谅，能温暖他人的困境，也能收获意想不到的回响。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Finally, breathless, Jack reached Ms. White’s doorstep and rang the bell. 衔接句1——How did Ms. White react? What did Jack say and do?： Ms. White was surprised to see Jack, who was wet and tired. Jack handed her the apples and milk tea, apologized again and thanked her for her kindness, which moved Ms. White deeply. Paragraph 2: Deeply moved by Jack’s action, Ms. White decided to share the story online that night. 衔接句2——What happened after the story was shared? What was the ending?： The story quickly went viral, and many netizens praised Jack’s integrity and offered help. With everyone’s help, Jack found his electric bike and continued his work with warmth and hope. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：终于，Jack气喘吁吁地到达了White女士的家门口，按响了门铃。 →①White女士开门后，看到浑身湿透、满脸疲惫的Jack，十分惊讶→②Jack连忙递上苹果和热奶茶，再次向她道歉，还真诚地感谢她的谅解→③White女士接过东西，看着冻得发抖的Jack，心里满是感动； 第二段：被Jack的行为深深打动，White女士决定当晚就把这个故事发到网上。 →④她详细讲述了事情的经过，称赞Jack的诚信与担当，网友们看到后纷纷点赞、转发→⑤有人主动联系Jack，帮忙寻找被盗的电动车，还有人愿意为他提供帮助→⑥不久后，Jack在大家的帮助下找回了电动车，他更加坚定了坚守诚信的信念，也懂得了善意传递的力量。 四.段落续写 Finally, breathless, Jack reached Ms. White’s doorstep and rang the bell. The door opened quickly, and Ms. White looked surprised to see him, her eyes falling on his wet hair and muddy shoes. Jack held out the bag of apples and the hot milk tea, his voice still trembling but firm. “Ms. White, I’m so sorry for the delay. This is a small gift to thank you for your kindness,” he said. Ms. White took them gently, feeling the warmth of the milk tea through the cup, and her eyes filled with tears of joy. Deeply moved by Jack’s action, Ms. White decided to share the story online that night. She wrote down every detail, from the stolen bike to Jack’s long walk in the cold, praising his integrity and sense of responsibility. The story spread quickly online, with countless netizens leaving comments to praise Jack and offer help. A few days later, with the help of a kind netizen, Jack found his stolen electric bike. He was deeply grateful for the warmth around him and continued his delivery work with more sincerity and hope. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $