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The Secret of Flowers
Anna worked with her mother in their vegetable garden every day. This was how they made their living. Anna helped her mother tend the garden, so the vegetables would be healthy and ready for the market. Anna often pretended the plants she tended were beautiful roses, like Mrs. Brown’s prize flowers.
The only person in the village who made money selling flowers was Mrs. Brown. She grew roses and sold them to flower shops in the city. Every year she joined the City Rose Festival. People thought that Mrs. Brown used magic to grow her roses. How else could she win first prize twenty years in a row?
Anna loved to tend flowers. Moreover, she often dreamed about growing her own roses and winning first prize in the festival. With the prize money, she would also be able to lighten the burden at home. However, roses were too expensive for her to start.
One day, Anna visited Mrs. Brown to see her flowers. Mrs. Brown was whispering to her roses when she arrived. “Spying on (监视) me again!” Mrs. Brown frowned.
“I only came to see your flowers, Mrs. Brown.” Anna took a deep breath. “I wish I could grow beautiful roses and win a prize at the festival like you.”
“I have experience passed down from generations.” Mrs. Brown laughed. “Stick to vegetables, child. Leave flowers to those who know the secret of flowers.”
Mrs. Brown returned to her gardening, ignoring the sad look on Anna’s face. Then she pulled up a dried-up rose, and threw it over the fence. “A plant in bad condition. Unworthy of my time,” Mrs. Brown mumbled (咕哝).
Anna smiled, as she had an idea. She bowed farewell to Mrs. Brown and went out the garden gate. Mrs. Brown was busy minding her prize roses. Anna quickly bent over and grabbed the abandoned rose before rushing home. She remembered a quiet spot behind the cottage. It was the perfect place for her little rose to grow. Now, she had a chance for the festival.
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Anna planted the rose in her garden and tended it carefully.
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On festival morning, Mrs. Brown passed by and saw the beautiful rose.
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一、文本分析
1.角色
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2.视角
第________人称
3.时空线
Anna worked with her mother in the vegetable garden to make a living→ _________________ → Mrs. Brown was the only one selling flowers and won the City Rose Festival first prize for 20 years→ _________________ → Anna dreamed of growing roses to win the festival and lighten family burden but couldn’t afford them→ _________________ → Anna visited Mrs. Brown, was refused help, and got an abandoned dried-up rose→ Anna planned to plant the rose and take part in the festival
4. 细节问答
How did Anna and her mother make a living? :
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Who was Mrs. Brown?:_________________________________
Why did people think Mrs. Brown used magic to grow roses?:
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Why did Anna want to grow roses and win the festival?:
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What did Mrs. Brown do when Anna asked for help?:
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What did Anna get from Mrs. Brown’s garden?:
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What would Anna do after getting the abandoned rose?:
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What does the story tell us?:
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5.情节线
Anna和妈妈靠种蔬菜谋生,她常常幻想自己种玫瑰→_________________ →村里只有Mrs. Brown卖花,连续二十年获得城市玫瑰节一等奖,人们认为她用了魔法→_________________ →Anna热爱养花,梦想种玫瑰赢得比赛、减轻家里负担,却买不起玫瑰苗→Anna拜访Mrs. Brown求助被拒,意外得到一株被丢弃的枯萎玫瑰→Anna把玫瑰带回家,计划在小屋后面的空地种植,准备参加玫瑰节→_________________ →(续写)Anna精心照料玫瑰,玫瑰逐渐绽放→(续写)节日当天Mrs. Brown看到Anna的玫瑰,揭开鲜花的秘密,Anna收获成长
6.情感线
Anna:hard-working→___________→hopeful→___________→disappointed
→___________→determined→___________(续写)
7. 综合概括(中英各一句)
中文:
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英文:
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8. 句式
宾语从句;定语从句;状语从句;非谓语;并列句
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9. 本文主题
温情励志类:_______________________________________
二.情节构造
Paragraph 1: Anna planted the rose in her garden and tended it carefully.
衔接句1——How did Anna tend the rose? What happened to the rose?:
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Paragraph 2: On festival morning, Mrs. Brown passed by and saw the beautiful rose.
衔接句2——How did Mrs. Brown react? What was the secret of flowers?:
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三.段落续写框架
第一段:Anna把玫瑰种在了自己的花园里,精心照料它。
→①__________________→②__________________→③_______________;
第二段:节日那天早上,Mrs. Brown路过,看到了那朵美丽的玫瑰。
→④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。
四.段落续写
Anna planted the rose in her garden and tended it carefully.
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On festival morning, Mrs. Brown passed by and saw the beautiful rose.
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参考答案
一、文本分析
1.角色
Anna(勤劳、善良、热爱鲜花、有梦想、坚持不懈的女孩);Mrs. Brown(技艺精湛、起初傲慢吝啬、后来懂得分享的养花人);Anna’s mother(勤劳朴实、依靠种蔬菜维持生计的母亲)
2.视角
第三人称
3.时空线
Anna worked with her mother in the vegetable garden to make a living→ she often pretended the vegetables were roses, dreaming of growing real ones→ Mrs. Brown was the only one selling flowers and won the City Rose Festival first prize for 20 years→ people thought she used magic to grow roses→ Anna dreamed of growing roses to win the festival and lighten family burden but couldn’t afford them→ she visited Mrs. Brown to ask for help→ Anna visited Mrs. Brown, was refused help, and got an abandoned dried-up rose→ Anna planned to plant the rose and take part in the festival
4. 细节问答
How did Anna and her mother make a living? :They made a living by growing and selling vegetables in their garden.
Who was Mrs. Brown?:She was the only person in the village who sold flowers, and she won the first prize in the City Rose Festival for twenty years in a row.
Why did people think Mrs. Brown used magic to grow roses?:Because she could win the first prize in the City Rose Festival twenty years in a row, which seemed impossible without magic.
Why did Anna want to grow roses and win the festival?:Because she loved flowers, and she wanted to use the prize money to lighten the burden at home.
What did Mrs. Brown do when Anna asked for help?:She laughed at Anna, refused to help her, and told her to stick to vegetables.
What did Anna get from Mrs. Brown’s garden?:She got an abandoned dried-up rose that Mrs. Brown threw over the fence.
What would Anna do after getting the abandoned rose?:She would plant it in the quiet spot behind her cottage, tend it carefully, and take part in the City Rose Festival.
What does the story tell us?:The secret of success is not magic, but persistence and devotion; kindness and sharing can make beauty spread, and everyone deserves a chance to pursue their dreams.
5.情节线
Anna和妈妈靠种蔬菜谋生,她常常幻想自己种玫瑰→Anna羡慕Mrs. Brown的玫瑰,梦想能自己种玫瑰→村里只有Mrs. Brown卖花,连续二十年获得城市玫瑰节一等奖,人们认为她用了魔法→Anna热爱养花,梦想种玫瑰赢得比赛、减轻家里负担,却买不起玫瑰苗→Anna拜访Mrs. Brown求助被拒,意外得到一株被丢弃的枯萎玫瑰→Anna把玫瑰带回家,计划在小屋后面的空地种植,准备参加玫瑰节→(续写)Anna每天精心照料玫瑰,浇水施肥,玫瑰慢慢恢复生机、绽放出美丽的花朵→(续写)节日当天Mrs. Brown路过看到Anna的玫瑰,十分惊讶,终于揭开鲜花的秘密——用心与坚持,Anna虽未获奖却收获了成长与Mrs. Brown的认可。
6.情感线
Anna:hard-working→yearning→hopeful→nervous→disappointed→inspired→determined→joyful and grateful(续写)
7. 综合概括(中英各一句)
中文:Anna和妈妈靠种蔬菜谋生,她热爱鲜花,梦想种玫瑰参加城市玫瑰节并获奖,以此减轻家里的负担。由于买不起玫瑰苗,她向村里擅长种玫瑰的Mrs. Brown求助却被拒绝,意外得到一株被丢弃的枯萎玫瑰,于是她决定精心培育这株玫瑰,为玫瑰节做准备。
英文:Anna and her mother made a living by growing vegetables. She loved flowers and dreamed of growing roses to take part in the City Rose Festival and win a prize to lighten her family’s burden. Unable to afford rose seedlings, she asked Mrs. Brown, who was good at growing roses in the village, for help but was refused. She accidentally got an abandoned dried-up rose and decided to take good care of it to prepare for the festival.
8. 句式
状语从句:When Anna arrived, Mrs. Brown was whispering to her roses.
非谓语动词:Anna helped her mother tend the garden, so the vegetables would be healthy and ready for the market.
宾语从句:Anna often dreamed about growing her own roses and winning first prize in the festival.
定语从句:The only person in the village who made money selling flowers was Mrs. Brown.
并列句:Anna loved to tend flowers, and she often dreamed about growing her own roses to win the festival.
9. 本文主题
温情励志类:梦想的实现不靠魔法,而靠坚持不懈的付出与用心的浇灌;傲慢会遮蔽善意,分享与认可能成就更多美好,每一份坚持都能收获属于自己的成长。
二.情节构造
Paragraph 1: Anna planted the rose in her garden and tended it carefully.
衔接句1——How did Anna tend the rose? What happened to the rose?:
Anna watered it every morning and evening, removed weeds around it, and protected it from strong winds. With her careful care, the dried-up rose gradually came back to life and bloomed beautifully.
Paragraph 2: On festival morning, Mrs. Brown passed by and saw the beautiful rose.
衔接句2——How did Mrs. Brown react? What was the secret of flowers?:
Mrs. Brown was shocked and realized the rose was the one she had abandoned. She told Anna the secret of flowers — devotion and persistence, and apologized for her rudeness. Anna didn’t win first prize but gained precious experience.
三.段落续写框架
第一段:Anna把玫瑰种在了自己的花园里,精心照料它。
→①Anna每天早晚给玫瑰浇水、除草,细心呵护,哪怕它一开始毫无生机→②在她的照料下,枯萎的玫瑰慢慢发芽、长叶,最终绽放出娇艳的花朵→③Anna满心欢喜,带着玫瑰准备参加玫瑰节;
第二段:节日那天早上,Mrs. Brown路过,看到了那朵美丽的玫瑰。
→④Mrs. Brown十分惊讶,认出这是自己丢弃的玫瑰,对Anna充满敬佩→⑤她向Anna道歉,揭开鲜花的秘密——没有魔法,只有用心与坚持→⑥Anna虽未获得一等奖,却收获了成长和Mrs. Brown的友谊,也坚定了追求梦想的决心。
四.段落续写
Anna planted the rose in her garden and tended it carefully. She watered it gently every morning and evening, cleared the weeds around it, and even covered it with a cloth on windy nights. At first, the rose showed no sign of life, but Anna never gave up. Days later, a tiny green shoot emerged from the soil. With her constant care, the shoot grew into leaves, and soon a beautiful pink rose bloomed, bright and fragrant. Anna smiled, holding the flower tightly, ready for the City Rose Festival.
On festival morning, Mrs. Brown passed by and saw the beautiful rose. Her eyes widened in surprise — she recognized it was the dried-up rose she had thrown away. She walked over, touched the petals gently, and apologized to Anna for her rudeness. “The secret of flowers is not magic,” she said, “but devotion and persistence.” Though Anna didn’t win first prize, she gained Mrs. Brown’s friendship and realized that with hard work, any dream could come true.
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