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考前押题 11 书面表达 3 大常考话题(期中专项训练)
话题1幸福与助人
话题2运动与健康
话题3饮食与健康
话题 1 Happiness and helping others(幸福与助人)
Passage 1
上周末你参加了学校组织的社区志愿活动,帮助老人打扫、聊天、表演节目。请根据图片内容,以 “A Happy Day to Help Others” 为题写一篇短文。
写作提示:
1. What did you do there?
2. How did the old people feel?
3. How did you feel?
写作要求:
1. 不得出现真实姓名和校名;
2. 可适当增加细节,行文连贯;
3. 字迹工整、语言精练、条理清晰;
4. 至少 70 词。
A Happy Day to Help Others
【范文】
A Happy Day to Help Others
Last weekend, I took part in a meaningful volunteer activity in the community with my classmates. We went to the old people’s home to visit the old people and spend a happy day with them.
First, we cleaned the rooms carefully. We swept the floor, cleaned the windows and made the rooms tidy and warm. Then we talked with them happily, listened to their interesting stories and told them about our school life. Some of us sang beautiful songs and danced lightly for them. The old people listened carefully, smiled a lot and clapped for us warmly.
I felt very happy, warm and proud. Helping others can bring us true happiness and touch our hearts. Love is really the key to a happy and beautiful life.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:记叙文,以一般过去时为主
明确要点:活动内容、老人的感受、自己的感受与感悟
确定人称:第一人称 I
注意事项:不出现真实姓名、学校
[第二步:构思布局]
开头:交代时间、事件
主体:具体做的事情(打扫、聊天、表演)
结尾:个人感受与主题升华
[第三步:要点展开]
活动:cleaned the rooms, talked with them, sang songs, danced
感受:smiled a lot, felt happy and proud
主题:Helping others brings happiness. Love is the key to happiness.
Passage 2
以 “My Secret of Happiness”为题,根据思维导图提示写一篇短文,介绍你的幸福秘诀。
写作要求:
1. 包含所有要点,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,条理清晰;
3. 不少于 70 词。
My Secret of Happiness
【范文】
My Secret of Happiness
Everyone in the world wants to be happy. But different people have different ideas about happiness. Here are my secrets of happiness.
First, I always look on the bright side of life and stay positive. I never lose heart when I meet small difficulties. Then I enjoy helping others in need. It makes me feel warm and proud. Next, I love staying with my family. We talk, laugh and do interesting things together every day.
Happiness is not from money or expensive things. It really comes from love, kindness and good life. I hope everyone can find their own happiness and live a happy life every day.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
文体:说明文;时态:一般现在时;人称:第一人称
要点:积极、助人、陪伴家人、热爱生活
[第二步:构思布局]
开头:点题人人都想幸福
主体:分点介绍幸福秘诀
结尾:总结幸福的来源
[第三步:要点展开]
结构词:First, Then, Next
短语:look on the bright side, help others, stay with family
主题句:Happiness comes from love and good life.
Passage 3
以 “Happiness comes from helping others” 为题,写一篇短文讲述一次助人经历。
写作要点:
1. When and where did you help others?
2. What did you do?
3. How did you feel?
写作要求:不少于 70 词。
Happiness comes from helping others
【范文】
Happiness comes from helping others
Last week, I went to the park with my family. I saw a little boy crying alone near the lake. He was lost and could not find his mother.
I went up to him gently and asked his name and his mother’s name. Then I took him to the gate of the park and asked the worker to help call his mother. Soon his mother came in a hurry and thanked me again and again with a big smile.
I felt very happy and warm at that time. I truly understand that happiness springs from doing good and helping others. I will keep helping people in need in the future.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
记叙文;一般过去时;第一人称;讲述助人经历与感受
[第二步:构思布局]
开头:时间、地点、事件
主体:帮助过程
结尾:感受与道理
[第三步:要点展开]
短语:find his mother, cry, thank me again and again
道理:Happiness springs from helping others.
话题 2 Sports and health(运动与健康)
Passage 1
请根据图片,以 “Our School Sports Day” 为题,描述运动会的场景、活动与感受。
写作提示:
1. What are the students doing?
2. How do they feel?
3. What do you think of sports?
写作要求:不少于 70 词。
Our School Sports Day
【范文】
Our School Sports Day
Our school had a wonderful and exciting sports day yesterday. All the teachers and students were excited and energetic.
Look! Some students were running fast on the playground. Some were playing basketball happily. Others were cheering for their classmates loudly and warmly. Everyone tried their best, fought hard and never gave up when they faced difficulties.
Sports are really good for us. They make us strong, healthy and full of energy. They also teach us important spirit. We all had a great time and will remember this great day.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
记叙文;一般过去时;描述运动会场景
[第二步:构思布局]
开头:总起运动会
主体:学生们的活动
结尾:运动的意义
[第三步:要点展开]
活动:running, playing basketball, cheering
意义:make us strong, never give up
Passage 2
根据表格信息,以 “My Favorite Sport” 为题写短文。
Sport
Running
How often
Every morning
Why
Healthy, relaxing, strong
Your idea
Sports make life better
写作要求:不少于 70 词。
My Favorite Sport
【范文】
My Favorite Sport
My favorite sport is running. It is easy and cheap, and everyone can do it.
I go running in the quiet park near my home every morning. Running makes me healthy, strong and full of energy. It also helps me relax well after busy study. I never feel bored or tired when I run slowly in the fresh air. I enjoy every relaxing minute of it.
I think sports are very important and necessary for us. They can make our life better, happier and more colourful. I will keep running every day and enjoy the fun of sports.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
说明文;一般现在时;介绍自己最爱的运动
[第二步:构思布局]
开头:点明运动项目
主体:频率、原因
结尾:观点与坚持
[第三步:要点展开]
短语:every morning, make me healthy, relax, keep running
Passage 3
以 “Sports Are Good for Us” 为题,写一篇短文介绍运动的好处。
要点:
1. Sports can make us strong and healthy.
2. We can make friends by doing sports.
3. We should exercise every day.
要求:不少于 70 词。
Sports Are Good for Us
【范文】
Sports Are Good for Us
Sports are very important and necessary in our daily life. They are good for us in many different great ways.
First, doing sports often can make us strong and healthy. It can keep us away from illness and make us active every day. Second, we can make more true friends when we play team sports. We also learn to work together and help each other.
According to health experts, we should do sports for about 60 minutes every day. Sports can make our life colourful, meaningful and full of fun.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
说明文;一般现在时;介绍运动好处
[第二步:构思布局]
开头:总起运动重要
主体:两点好处
结尾:建议每天锻炼
[第三步:要点展开]
结构:First, Second
短语:make us strong, make friends, work together
话题 3 Food and healthy eating(饮食与健康)
Passage 1
以 “Healthy Eating” 为题,根据图片写一篇短文,介绍健康饮食。
提示:
1. What healthy food do you know?
2. Why are they good for us?
3. What should we do?
要求:不少于 70 词。
Healthy Eating
【范文】
Healthy Eating
Healthy eating is very important for our body and mind. We should eat healthy and balanced food every day.
Fresh vegetables and fruit are really good for us. They can make us strong and give us enough nutrition. Eggs, milk, fish and chicken are also healthy and helpful. We should not eat too much fast food or sweet snacks. They are bad for our teeth, stomach and body.
Let’s have good and healthy eating habits from now on. A balanced diet can help us grow well and live a happy and healthy life.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
说明文;一般现在时;介绍健康饮食
[第二步:构思布局]
开头:健康饮食重要
主体:健康食物、不健康食物
结尾:建议与习惯
[第三步:要点展开]
食物:vegetables, fruit, milk, fast food
习惯:good eating habits, balanced diet
Passage 2
根据表格,以 “My Favorite Food” 为题写短文。
Food
Porridge
Taste
Warm, nice
Who makes it
Mother
Feeling
Love, warm
要求:不少于 70 词。
My Favorite Food
【范文】
My Favorite Food
My favorite food is porridge. It is simple but very delicious in my heart.
My mother often cooks different kinds of porridge for me. Sometimes it is sweet eight-treasure porridge. When I am ill, she always makes plain rice porridge for me carefully. It tastes warm, nice and comfortable. It is simple but better than any expensive pill.
The porridge is full of my mother’s deep love and care. It always makes me feel warm and happy. It is really the best and most delicious food in my heart.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
记叙文;一般现在时;介绍最爱的食物
[第二步:构思布局]
开头:点明食物
主体:谁做、味道、故事
结尾:情感
[第三步:要点展开]
短语:tastes warm, full of love, feel warm
Passage 3
以 “Food and culture”为题,写一篇短文,介绍食物是文化的桥梁。
要点:
1. Food can connect different cultures.
2. Ice cream comes from China.
3. Food helps us know the world.
要求:不少于 70 词。
Food and culture
【范文】
Food and culture
Food is more than just something to eat. It is a great and important bridge between different cultures in the world.
Many interesting foods travel far and go across borders. For example, ice cream comes from China long ago. Marco Polo tasted binglao and took the idea back to Europe. Now it is popular and welcome all over the world. Different countries also have similar special dishes.
Food helps us know different cultures and stories. It makes the world like a warm big family. We can learn a lot about history and life from different kinds of food.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
说明文;一般现在时;食物与文化
[第二步:构思布局]
开头:食物是文化桥梁
主体:举例冰淇淋
结尾:食物的意义
[第三步:要点展开]
短语:a bridge between cultures, come from, all over the world
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考前押题11书面表达3大常考话题(期中专项训练)
话题归纳·内容导航
话题1幸福与助人
话题2运动与健康
话题3饮食与健康
话题通关·靶向提分
话题1 Happiness and helping others(幸福与助人)
Passage 1
上周末你参加了学校组织的社区志愿活动,帮助老人打扫、聊天、表演节目。请根据图片内容,以“A Happy
Day to Help Others”为题写一篇短文。
写作提示:
1.What did you do there?
2.How did the old people feel?
3.How did you feel?
写作要求:
1.不得出现真实姓名和校名:
2.可适当增加细节,行文连贯;
3.字迹工整、语言精练、条理清晰;
4.至少70词。
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A Happy Day to Help Others
Passage 2
以“My Secret of Happiness'为题,根据思维导图提示写一篇短文,介绍你的幸福秘诀。
逾
Be positive
Help others
MY SECRET OF
HAPPINESS
錙
一
Stay with family
Love life
写作要求:
1.包含所有要点,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,条理清晰;
3.不少于70词。
My Secret of Happiness
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Passage 3
以“Happiness comes from helping others'”为题,写一篇短文讲述一次助人经历。
写作要点:
1.When and where did you help others?
2.What did you do?
3.
How did you feel?
写作要求:不少于70词。
Happiness comes from helping others
话题2 Sports and health(运动与健康)
Passage 1
请根据图片,以“Our School Sports Day'”为题,描述运动会的场景、活动与感受。
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写作提示:
1.What are the students doing?
2.How do they feel?
3.What do you think of sports?
写作要求:不少于70词。
Our School Sports Day
Passage 2
根据表格信息,以“My Favorite Sport'”为题写短文。
Sport
Running
How often
Every morhing
Why
Healthy,relaxing,strong
Your idea
Sports make life better
写作要求:不少于70词。
My Favorite Sport
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Passage 3
以“Sports Are Good for Us'”为题,写一篇短文介绍运动的好处。
要点:
1.Sports can make us strong and healthy
2.We can make friends by doing sports.
3.We should exercise every day.
要求:不少于70词。
Sports Are Good for Us
话题3 Food and healthy eating(饮食与健康)
Passage 1
以“Healthy Eating”为题,根据图片写一篇短文,介绍健康饮食。
健康饮食
快餐零食
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Passage 3
以“Food and culture'”为题,写一篇短文,介绍食物是文化的桥梁。
要点:
1.Food can connect different cultures.
2.
Ice cream comes from China.
3.Food helps us know the world.
要求:不少于70词。
Food and culture
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