Unit 2 写作指导·创佳作-【志鸿优化训练】2025-2026学年高中英语必修第三册 (外研版)

(l)the moment/the minute/,the second+从句 (2)immediately/directly/instantly+从句 (3)no sooner...than.../hardly...when...( 句用过去完成时，从句用一般过去时；如果o sooner或hardly位于句首，主句应部分倒装) 【佳句背诵】On hearing the bad news,he burst into tears..[读后续写之人物描写] 一听到这个不好的消息，他就流下泪来。 【即学即练】单句语法填空/句型转换 ① being informed the flight would be delayed,we made other arrangements. ②On his (arrive)in Paris,he was caught by some policemen at once. 3He started his travel to Suzhou as soon as he finished his job. 写作指导·创佳作 人物传记 ©感知·文体常识 人物传记是记载人物生平事迹的一种文体。 因此，写人物传记时要抓住其出生年月、主要事迹 和人们的评价等进行叙述，一般按时间顺序来写。 其写作步骤为： 1.开头 (1)直接开头法：这是最常见的一种开头方 法。一般从人物的出生开始，按照时间先后顺序 安排人物的典型事迹。 (2)倒叙开头法：这种方法常用于介绍在世的 人物，通常截取最近发生在人物身上的一个典型 的镜头进行切入，接着提及人物的过去。 (3)重要事件开头法：先点出人物生平最重要 的事迹或者他身上最显著的特点，接着展开介绍 人物。文章可以继续按照从重要到次要的排列顺 序介绍人物的其他事迹，也可以接着用第一种方 法，即按照时间顺序继续展开。 2.正文 (1)直叙法：按照人物生卒年月的顺序，依次 列举人物较有代表性的事迹。 写作指导·创佳作 his job,he started his travel to Suzhou. he finished his job,he started his travel to Suzhou. → he finished his job,he started his travel to Suzhou. →He had finished his job he started his travel to Suzhou. →He had finished his job he started his travel to Suzhou. Hardly he started his travel to Suzhou. (2)倒叙法：采用由近到远的时间顺序，叙述 人物的生平。 (3)事迹法：按照事件对人物重要性的大小依 次叙述。 3.结尾 (1)直接结束法：以人物的卒年或者距离现在 最近的一个事件直接结束文章。 (2)评论结束法：根据上文叙述，加入作者对 人物的看法和评价。 (3)引用：引用其他人对该人物的评价来结束 文章。 ⊙牢记·写作素材 一、增色词汇 1.be born in/into出生于… 2.be admitted to被…录取 3.graduate from从…毕业 4.go abroad for further studies出国深造 5.receive/,obtain,/win the Nobel Prize赢得诺贝 尔奖 6.set a new world record创造新的世界纪录 39 e英语|Unit2 Making a difference 7.win a gold/silver/bronze medal赢得金/银/铜牌 8.set a good example for为…树立一个好榜样 9.speak/,think highly of高度赞扬 l0.make great contributions to为…做出巨大 贡献 二、精彩句型 1.As for my favourite figure in Chinese history,it must be Wei Yuan,a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty. 关于我最喜欢的一位中国历史人物，一定是魏 源，晚清时期一位伟大的思想家。 2.I would really like to interview Yang Liwei because he is not only the first Chinese to go to space but also one of the greatest astronauts in the world. 我十分愿意采访杨利伟，因为他不仅仅是第一 个到太空的中国人，还是世界上最伟大的宇航 员之一。 3.It is even more difficult for a woman to win the Nobel Prize twice in life. 一位女性一生荣获两次诺贝尔奖更加困难 4.Madame Curie devoted her whole life to the study of science. 居里夫人一生致力于科学研究。 5.However,educated by his mother,he took an interest in reading. 然而，由于母亲的教育，他对读书产生了兴趣。 ©示例·写作步骤 【写作要求】 根据下列提示信息，写一篇莫言的人物传记。 姓名：莫言（管谟业） 出生日期：1955年2月17日 出生地：山东高密的一个贫苦家庭 兴趣爱好：自幼喜欢阅读、书法(calligraphy) 性格特征：开朗、幽默 教育经历：1986年毕业于解放军艺术学院 (PLA Academy of Arts);l991年毕业于北京师 范大学并随后获得文学硕土学位(Master of 。40 Arts) 主要成就：2011年凭借《蛙》获中国最高文学 奖—茅盾文学奖；2012年获诺贝尔文学奖(No bel Prize in Literature) 评价：第一位获得诺贝尔文学奖的中国作家， 被誉为对中国文学做出巨大贡献的作家之 【审题谋篇】 体裁 人物传记 人称 以第三人称为主 时态 以一般过去时和一般现在时为主 第一段：引入话题 总体介绍莫言 第二段：介绍细节 叙述莫言的生平 框架 第三段：个人感受 莫言的主要成就及 对他的评价 【遣词造句】 1.词汇 (1)出生于 (2)毕业于 (3)令某人兴奋的是 (4)对…做出巨大贡献 2.句式 (1)要点翻译 ①1955年2月17日莫言出生于山东高密的 一个贫苦家庭。 Mo Yan in Gaomi,Shandong Province on February 17,1955. ②莫言原名管谟业，早年对读书和书法产生 了浓厚的兴趣。 Mo Yan's original name is Guan Moye,and he in his early years. ③1986年从解放军艺术学院毕业后，莫言继 续深造，后来，他从北京师范大学获得了文学硕士 学位。 After he the PLA Academy of Arts in 1986,Mo Yan and received a Master of Arts from Beijing Normal University later. ④令所有中国人兴奋的是，在2012年他成为 第一位获得诺贝尔文学奖的中国作家，这必将为 中国文学的发展做出巨大贡献。 ,1n 2012 he became the first Chinese writer to be awarded the Nobel Prize in Literature,and it would certainly the development of Chinese literature. (2)句式升级 ⑤用过去分词短语作状语并用whose引导 非限制性定语从句改写句①和句②。 in Gaomi, Shandong Province on February 17,1955,Mo Yan, showed great interest in reading and calligraphy in his early years. ⑥用having done分词作状语改写句③。 the PLA Academy of Arts in 1986,Mo Yan went on further education and received a Master of Arts from Beijing Normal University later. 【妙笔成篇】 写作指导·创佳作 1针对训练 海南中学建校95周年庆典迎来了钱学森塑 像的揭幕和“钱学森班”的开设，你作为校报英语 专刊记者，请写一篇英语报道向留学生介绍此事。 内容包括： 1.介绍钱学森（留学美国、回国效力）； 2.钱学森的贡献（航空航天事业）； 3.此活动的意义。 参考词汇：unveil揭幕 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请在相应位置作答。 A Great Gift 41television programme That's Life. 第三步深读课文融会提能 Activity 6 1.Born 2.death 3.leaving 4.from 5.living 6.safety 7.had saved 8.brought 9.respected 10.including Part 2 Language points ◎基础落实·必备知识全过关 重点单词 【教材设题】1.aid2.temporary3.military 4.treatment 5.Ministry 6.achievement 【巧用￥一反三】1.majority2.similarity 3.royalty 重点短语 【教材设题】l.transport children to safety 2.keep records of the children 3.the majority of people rose to their feet 4.brought his actions to public attention 重点句式 【教材设题】On leaving school ○重难探究·能力素养全提升 高频词汇·讲练互动 l.①to fit②In③to④with the aid of a dictionary 2.Dachievement;achievements ②to achieve③achieve his goal④has made great achievements in 3.①in②in③the majority of 4.①in②after③on④take in the best route to his destination 5.①on②to③on④rose to his feet 5drag your feet on this matter 33 多义词汇·自主练透 I.①C②A③B Ⅱ.重要的，主要的主修科目 重点句式·多维剖析 ①Oh/Upon②arrival③On/Upon finishing; The moment/minute/second;Immediately/ Directly/Instantly;hardly,when;no sooner, than;had he finished his job when 写作指导·创佳作 示例·写作步骤 【遣词造句】 1.(1)be born into (2)graduate from (3)to one's excitement (4)make great contributions to 2.①was born into a poor family②showed great interest in reading and calligraphy 3graduated from;went on further education 4 To all Chinese people's excitement;make great contributions to 5 Born into a poor family;whose original name is Guan Moye 6Having graduated from 【妙笔成篇】 Born into a poor family in Gaomi,Shandong Province on February 17,1955,Mo Yan,whose original name is Guan Moye,showed great interest in reading and calligraphy in his early years.What's more,not only is he outgoing but he also has a strong sense of humour. Having graduated from the PLA Academy of Arts in 1986,Mo Yan went on further education and received a Master of Arts from Beijing Normal University later.With a talent for literature,he won China's highest literary prize-Mao Dun Literature Prize by his book 2 Frog in 2011. To all Chinese people's excitement,in 2012 he became the first Chinese writer to be awarded the Nobel Prize in Literature,which would certainly make great contributions to the development of Chinese literature. 针对训练 A Great Gift In memory of the great scientist Qian Xuesen, a statue of him was unveiled and a class named after him was set up in Hainan Middle School during its 95th anniversary celebration. Qian Xuesen,who was a milestone in China's history of science,came back to work for the motherland after finishing his further study in America.His arrival brought Chinese hope on the cause of aerospace.Being a pioneer in this field,he contributed a lot to the development of rockets and launched the first satellite for the country. Such a great gift inspires students to learn from excellent scientists'spirits and become a man like them. Unit 3 The world of science 激情早读·拓视野 【做练习】1.D 2.Smart beds record sleep quality and weight, sending warnings and suggestions via phone. Smart toilets track health data,providing early warnings for abnormalities or illnesses like cancer,thus promoting proactive health care. 33 Section A Starting out Understanding ideas Part 1 Reading comprehension 第一步速读课文理清脉络 Activity 1 an interview with the author of the book The New Age of Invention Activity 2 1.title 2.past 3.gunpowder 4.the compass 5.the telephone 6.tech-based 7.walking house 8.inventors 9.solution 10.create 第二步精读课文领悟细节 Activity 3 1~5 ADABB Activity 4 1.Gunpowder,papermaking,printing,the compass,the steam engine,the telephone,the radio,virtual reality,wearable tech,the flexible battery,3D printers,an intelligent walking house. 2.略 Activity 5 Most inventions start with recognising a problem that needs a solution.This was no doubt the reason behind the invention of the wheel in ancient times,which much later developed into the car.Now,reduced energy supplies and environmental pollution have led to more advances in the technology of new energy vehicles.But what remains important is that we have an incredible desire to think and create,and that's the real spirit of invention. 3