Unit 5 写作指导·创佳作-【志鸿优化训练】2025-2026学年高中英语必修第三册 (外研版)

e英语|Unit5 What an adventure! 康塞尔和我彼此紧挨着，近到好像能透过金属 外壳听到彼此说话。 (I)该句中asif引导方式状语从句。当说话人认 为句子所述的是不真实的或极少有可能发生、存 在的情况时，asif引导的从句要用虚拟语气。 :(2)在asif引导的方式状语和表语从句中，若从句 的动作与现在情况不符或相反，则用一般过去时； 若表示与过去情况不符或相反，则用过去完成时； 若表示与将来情况不符或相反，则用“could/ would/,might-十动词原形”。 (3)当说话者认为句子所述的是真实的或极有可 能发生、存在的事实时，asif引导的从句要用陈述 语气 【佳句背诵】He behaved as if nothing had happened.[读后续写之人物描写] 他装作若无其事的样子。 【即学即练】单句语法填空/单句写作 ①He looks as if he (be)an artist. 2He opened his mouth as if he (say)something. ③玛丽对晚会的描述很生动，以至于我感觉好 像我在那里一样。 Mary's description of the party was so vivid that I felt as if I there. 2.介词词组置于句首引起的完全倒装句 【教材原句】Above me was the calm surface of the sea. 在我之上是平静的海面。 写作指导·创佳作 潜水经历 ©感知·文体常识 本单元的作文是描写一次潜水经历，是游记 类记叙文。 一、格式 一篇好的记叙文需要直接或间接地表达以下 六个要点，即when,where,who,what,why,how。 。96 (1)表示地，点的介词词组位于句首，且主语是名词 时，句子用完全倒装。 (2)out,in,down,up,away,here,there,now, then,next等表示方位和时间的副词位于句首，且 主语是名词时，句子用完全倒装。 (3)作表语的形容词、分词短语提到系动词前面 时，句子也构成完全倒装。 (4)代词such位于句首，且在句中作表语时，句子 用完全倒装。 (5)在上述(1)(2)情况中，若主语是代词，则不用 倒装。 【佳句背诵】Among the students is an old professor with white hair..[读后续写之人物 描写] 在学生们当中有一位白发苍苍的老教授。 【即学即练】单句语法填空/单句写作 DAcross the Yangtze River (lie)more than one bridge,the Nanjing Yangtze River Bridge being the first one. ②The door opened and in (come)Mr Smith. 3Present at the meeting (be) some scientists from China. ④这就是我们这座充满活力的城市，只要您方 便，随时欢迎来参观。 which you are welcome to visit whenever at your convenience. 二、时态 时态多用一般过去时，人称以第一人称和第 三人称为主。 三、写正文时应注意的问题 1.围绕一个主题来展开。 2.若无法用已学语言知识来表达某种意思， 测可采用“同义转换法”。 3.结尾最好用一句话来总结自己的感想或 体会。 ®牢记·写作素材 一、增色词汇 I.leave a deep impression upon/,on留下深刻的 印象 2.be determined to do sth.下定决心做某事 3.be fascinated by对…着迷 4.carry out a rescue plan执行救援计划 5.with the help of在…的帮助下 6.turn to sb.for help向某人求助 7.in great panic处于极度恐慌中 8.burst out crying突然哭起来 二、精彩句型 1.It reminded me of a similar experience,which was imprinted on my mind. 这让我想起了一个类似的经历，它深深地印在 我的脑海里 2.We were about to set off when it began to rain. 我们正要出发时，天开始下雨了。 3.Hardly had he finished his speech when the audience started cheering. 他刚讲完，听众就开始欢呼起来。 4.I benefit a lot from this unforgettable experience and realise that it is honesty that wins us the respect from others. 我从这次难忘的经历中受益匪浅，我意识到正 是诚实使我们赢得了别人的尊重。 5.Through this meaningful activity,I learn the fact that giving is much happier than receiving. 通过这个有意义的活动，我了解到给予比接受 快乐得多。 ©示例·写作步骤 【写作要求】 假定你是李华，寒假里你和父母去了三亚旅 游，体验了一次海底潜水。请你给校报的英语园 地写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你的潜水经历。内 写作指导·创佳作。 容包括： 1.潜水衣和氧气罐； 2.多彩缤纷的水下世界； 3.自我感受。 参考词汇：diving suit潜水衣；oxygen tank 氧气罐 【审题谋篇】 体裁 记叙文 人称 以第一人称为主 时态 以一般过去时为主 第一段（引人）：点明时间、地点、人物 框架 第二段（阐述）：奇妙的水下世界 第三段（总结）：难忘的经历 【遣词造句】 1.词汇 (1)寒假 (2)一次难忘的经历 (3)在…的帮助下 (4)连绵起伏的山脉 97 e英语|Unit5 What an adventure! (5)充满乐趣 2.句式 (1)要点翻译 ①还有一些奇形怪状的大石头：有的像连绵 起伏的山脉，有的像三角形的屋顶。 some were like rolling mountains, and some were like triangular roofs of houses. ②直到这次潜水我才看到这样一个有趣的水 下世界。(not.until..) I this diving. ③它不仅让我看到了美妙的海底世界，也让 我体验了浩瀚的大海。 It let me see the wonderful underwater world, let me experience the vast sea. (2)句式升级 ④用简单句改写句①。 ⑤用强调句型改写句②。 ⑥用倒装句改写句③。 【妙笔成篇】 98 1针对训练」 假定你是某国际学校的学生李华，你昨天参 加了某旅行社组织的海底探险旅行。请你用英 语写一篇日记，记述这次的探险旅行。内容 包括： 1.时间、地点； 2.探险项目：深海潜水、观察海洋生物、海底 古文明遗址探险等； 3.你的感受。 参考词汇：expedition探险 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请在相应位置作答。my thick helmet,inside which my head shook like a nut in its shell. 2.(1)The light,which lit the soil thirty feet below the surface of the ocean,astonished me by its power. (2)The solar rays shone through the watery mass easily,and consumed all colour, and I clearly distinguished objects at a distance of a hundred and fifty yards. (3)Beyond that the colours darkened into fine shades of deep blue,and gradually disappeared. 第三步深读课文融会提能 Activity 6 1.is seen 2.but 3.a 4.are captured 5.where 6.adapted 7.walking 8.were 9.astonished 10.heavier Part 2 Language points ©基础落实·必备知识全过关 重点单词 【教材设题】l.permitted2.fascinated 3.relate 4.astonished 5.distinguished 6.gradually 【巧用举一反三】1.warmth2.truth 3.strength 4.growth 5.depth 重点短语 【教材设题】1.look back upon the impression 2.as if I was in broad daylight 3.she is about to set sail once again 重点句式 【教材设题】l.as if an exchange of words had been possible through our metal cases 2.was the calm surface of the sea 34 ◎重难探究·能力素养全提升 高频词汇·讲练互动 1.①掌管，负责②收费，要价③指控 ④费用⑤taken charge of;:was charged with; in charge of 2.①to take②without③for④time permitting;if time permits 3.①to②relation③relates④is not related to 4.①to hear ②astonishment③in 4What astonished me was that 5.①between②from③for ④is distinguished as 6.①surrounding②surrounded③surrounding ④surroundings⑤was surrounded with/by 多义词汇·自主练透 I.①B②C③A Ⅱ.主管，负责（使）充电 重点句式·多维剖析 1.①were②would say ③had been 2.①lies ②came ③were④Such is our lively city 写作指导·创佳作 示例·写作步骤 【遣词造句】 1.(1)winter vacation (2)an unforgettable experience (3)with the help of (4)rolling mountains (5)be full of fun 2.1There were also some strange shapes of large stones 2couldn't see such an interesting underwater world until ③not only;but also 4There were also some strange shapes of large stones:some like rolling mountains and some like triangular roofs of houses. 5It was not until this diving that I could see such an interesting underwater world. 6Not only did it let me see the wonderful underwater world,but it also let me experience the vast sea. 【妙笔成篇】 During the winter vacation,my parents took me to Sanya.I had an unforgettable experience of underwater diving. After changing into my diving suit,I put on my oxygen tank and went to the sea.With the help of the coach,I started to dive.I saw a colourful underwater world!All kinds of fish were wearing beautiful clothes.There were also some strange shapes of large stones:some like rolling mountains and some like triangular roofs of houses.I just found that the diving was not so terrible,but full of fun.It was not until this diving that I could see such an interesting underwater world. This diving trip is so unforgettable.Not only did it let me see the wonderful underwater world,but it also let me experience the vast sea. 针对训练 Yesterday,I took part in an underwater expedition organised by a travel agency in the West Sea,which left a deep impression on me. We had many exciting activities,one of which was deep sea diving.During the diving, we enjoyed the undersea beauty and watched the marine life which we had never seen so close. 34 What impressed me most was the exploration of the ruins of ancient civilizations under the sea.Seeing those ruins,I couldn't help wondering what the ancient people's life was like. In my view,this travel broadened our horizons as well as helping us learn more about the sea. Unit 6 Disaster and hope 激情早读·拓视野 【做练习】 1.In case it became damaged during the shaking and could not open. 2.The answer may vary. Section A Starting out Understanding ideas Part 1 Reading comprehension 第一步速读课文理清脉络 Activity 1 the high temperature made the author worried Activity 2 1.30 plus 2.air conditioning 3.higher 4.his flat 5.boat 6.the top floor 7.swim 8.natural disasters 第二步精读课文领悟细节 Activity 3 1~5 CAACD Activity 4 1.略2.略 Activity 5 1.(1)I should probably put my flat on the market and buy a boat. (2)I'll speak with my manager about moving to the top floor. (3)Most importantly,I will need to learn