Unit 1 写作指导·创佳作-【志鸿优化训练】2025-2026学年高中英语必修第三册 (外研版)

e英语|Unit1 Knowing me,knowing you "delicious"will be served every time you visit. 也许被你评价为“美味的”饭菜在你每次到访时 都会端上来。 句中every time you visit为名词词组every time :引导的时间状语从句，every time相当于whenever, 表示“每当…”。 引导时间状语从句的连词还有： (l)time短语，the first/,second/last time第一次/ 第二次/最后一次…时 (2)the+名词，the minute/moment/second/instant (=as soon as).一…就… (3)某些副词，如directly,immediately,instantly等 【佳句背诵】Every time I travelled by boat,I got seasick..[应用文之个人生活] 每次坐船旅行，我都会晕船。 写作指导·创佳作 读后感 ©感知·文体常识 本单元的作文是在读完一本书或一篇文章后 发表自己的见解或感悟。读后感属于议论文，是 种以表达观点感受为主的理性文体。 一、格式 1.引入话题：简要解释名言警句，介绍所读的 文章、书籍或者观看的影视作品，包括名称、作者、 主要内容等。 2.主体：介绍自己的思考或感悟，结合具体 实例。 3.结尾：总结全文得出的结论及意义等。 二、时态 文章多用一般现在时和一般过去时（事例）， 但是可根据具体情况使用其他时态。 三、写正文时应注意的问题 1.围绕一个主题来展开。 2.若无法用已学语言知识来表达某种意思， 则可采用“同义转换法”。 3.结尾最好用一句话来总结自己的感想或 体会。 。18 【即学即练】单句语法填空/单句写作 ① moment I got home,I found I had left my jacket on the playground. 2He was playing basketball the (one)time I saw him. ③Please tell me (immediate)he arrives. ④虽然对我的所作所为很生气，但每次我犯错 的时候，我的父母都选择原谅我。 Although annoyed at what I did,my parents chose to forgive me ©牢记·写作素材 一、增色词汇 1.have both favourable and unfavourable aspects 既有好处，也有坏处 2.be listed as follows如下所列 3.firstly,..secondly,..第一，…；第二，… 4.to begin with首先 5.to make matters worse使事情更糟的是 6.through above analyses通过以上分析 7.advantages outweigh disadvantages利大于弊 8.in addition/what's more另外 二、精彩句型 (一)精彩开头 1.This fable describes a story between a wolf and a goat. 这则寓言讲述了一只狼和一只山羊的故事。 2.The story about Mr Ye and the dragon goes like this. 叶公与龙之间的故事是这样的。 3.We all know the story about the farmer and the snake. 我们都知道农夫与蛇的故事。 (二)丰满主体 1.We have all surely had the experience of being cheated by people around us. 我们肯定都有过这样的经历，被我们身边的人 欺骗。 2.One of the main reasons for doing so is that we trust others so easily. 这样做的其中一个主要原因就是我们太容易相 信别人。 3.No one can prove to us to what extent we can believe it. 没人可以给我们证明我们可以在多大程度上相 信它。 (三)余味结尾 1.In conclusion,I'd like to point out that we should never show mercy to people who are as evil as the snake. 最后，我想指出我们决不要可怜像蛇一样恶毒 的人。 2.After reading it,I find every second in life is very precious. 读完后，我觉得人生的每一秒都是宝贵的。 3.We should spare no effort to study and overcome the difficulties before us. 我们应该不遗余力地学习，克服我们面前的 困难。 ©示例·写作步骤 【写作要求】 请你根据下面这则寓言故事，结合自己的学 习生活情况，发表自己对同学间关系的观点和 看法。 要点：1.该故事的寓意；2.该故事给我们生活 的启示。 The Porcupine Dilemma One cold winter night,a group of porcupines gathered together to keep warm.As soon as they started to get closer,they hurt each other with their quills,so they had to move apart.After a short time,they started to feel cold again,so 写作指导·创佳作 they moved closer together.But again they had to move away because of the pain caused by the other porcupines'quills.After repeating this process a few times,they eventually found the ideal distance where they could feel warm while managing not to hurt each other. 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 【审题谋篇】 体裁 议论文 人称 以第一人称为主 时态 以一般现在时为主 第一段：豪猪取暖给我们的启示 框架 第二段：论证自己的观点 第三段：总结自己的观点 【遣词造句】 1.词汇 (1) 正如…所说 (2) 保持适当距离 (3) 很重要 (4) 适用于 (5) 人际关系 2.句式 (1)要点翻译 ①正如叔本华在一则寓言中所描述的那样： 在冬天，豪猪需要保持适当距离才能相互取暖而 不至于伤害彼此。 Schopenhauer In winter,porcupines need to ②从这个故事中我们可以得到启示：保持适 当距离很重要。 From this story,we can get the enlightenment: ③现实生活中朋友之间的关系也是如此。 the interpersonal relationship between friends in real life. 19· '英语|Unit1 Knowing me,knowing you ④如果朋友之间太过于亲密，我们会感觉自 己得不到对方的尊重。 If friends are too close,we will feel that ⑤如果朋友间关系太过于疏远，我们之间似 乎出现了隔阂。 If the relationship between friends is too distant, ⑥正如谚语所说：“距离产生美。” “Distance produces beauty.” (2)句式升级 ⑦用省略结构改写句④。 ⑧用适当的衔接词把句⑦和句⑤连接起来。 【妙笔成篇】 1针对训练I 阅读经典寓言故事《农夫与蛇》，并根据要求 写一篇英语文章。 20 Once upon a time,on a cold winter day,the farmer who had gone home from the market found a snake on the roadside.He thought it was frozen and stiff,so he put it in his arms and let it wake up.The snake was frightened,and when it fully recovered,it instinctively bit the farmer and finally killed the farmer.Before he died,the farmer regretted very much and said sadly,"I want to do good,but because of my shallow knowledge,I hurt my life,so I got this kind of reward." 要点：1.你对这则寓言的理解； 2.举例说明； 3.总结并思考。 参考词汇：Aesop伊索；fable寓言；evil邪恶 的，有害的 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3.请在相应位置作答。 Of all the fables of Aesop,what impresses me most is the story The Farmer And The Snake. It goes like this:第二步 精读课文领悟细节 Activity 3 1~5 CBADD Activity 4 1.略 2.略 Activity 5 1.Perhaps we comfort ourselves with the knowledge that most of the lies we tell are "white lies":little lies that we tell to protect others from the truth. 2.(1)One of the main reasons for telling a white lie is to try to make others feel better. (2)Another reason for telling a white lie is to give encouragement. (3)Finally,we may also tell a white lie when we want to protect others from bad news. 第三步深读课文融会提能 Activity 6 1.lying 2.honestly 3.to protect 4.better 5.disappointment 6.despite 7.comments 8.a 9.when 10.have had Part 2 Language points ◎基础落实·必备知识全过关 重点单词 【教材设题】l.tears2.Moreover3.apart 4.tangled 5.fences 6.frank 7.independent 【巧用举一反三】1.confident2.competent 3.different;different 重点短语 【教材设题】1.don't tell the truth2.to what extent 3.have results we cannot know 32 in advance 重点句式 【教材设题】every time you visit ◎重难探究·能力素养全提升 高频词汇·讲练互动 1.①to②a③what ④to a great/ large extent 2.①paying②justified ③justify your work to 3.①Frankly②with③To be frank 4.①into②apart③down④was moved to tears 5.①of/from②independence③dependence 4to be independent of/from;not to depend on 6.①taking apart②tell;apart③set; apart Apart from the above reasons 多义词汇·自主练透 I.①B②A③C Ⅱ.泪水撕破 重点句式·多维剖析 ①The②first③immediately④every time I made a mistake 写作指导·创佳作 示例·写作步骤 【遣词造句】 1.(1)as...puts (2)keep a proper distance (3)be of great importance (4)be true of (5)interpersonal relationship 2.1As;puts in a fable;keep a proper distance to keep each other warm without hurting each other 2Keeping a proper distance is of great importance 3The same is true of ④we cannot get respect from each other⑤it seems that there is a gap between us 6As the saying goes DIf too close,we will feel that we cannot get respect from each other. 8If too close,we will feel that we cannot get respect from each other.On the contrary,if the relationship between friends is too distant, it seems that there is a gap between us. 【妙笔成篇】 As Schopenhauer puts in a fable:In winter, porcupines need to keep a proper distance to keep each other warm without hurting each other. From this story,we can get the enlightenment: Keeping a proper distance is of great importance. The same is true of the interpersonal relationship between friends in real life.If too close,we will feel that we cannot get respect from each other.On the contrary,if the relationship between friends is too distant,it seems that there is a gap between us. As the saying goes,"Distance produces beauty.” 针对训练 Of all the fables of Aesop,what impresses me most is the story The Farmer And The Snake.It goes like this:A kind farmer saved a frozen snake,which bit and killed the farmer at last. Many of us have all surely had the experience of being hurt by the people we ever helped. Some old people lied and accused the helper of hurting them in order to get a lot of money. But on the other hand,some people in trouble died because of lack of timely help. In conclusion,we should never have pity on people who are as evil as the snake.It is -32 very important to extend a helping hand to the people who are kind and really in need. Unit 2 Making a difference 激情早读·拓视野 【做练习】 1.C 2.Their incredibly simple possessions and unique cooking method impressed the writer most.He was also deeply touched by their warm hospitality and the privilege of sharing their family life and traditions. Section A Starting out Understanding ideas Part 1 Reading comprehension 第一步速读课文理清脉络 Activity 1 Ryan built a well to help solve the problem of water shortage in Africa Activity 2 1.good deeds 2.clean water 3.a well 4.build more wells 5.courage 6.perseverance 第二步精读课文领悟细节 Activity 3 1~5 BBDCD Activity 4 1.Kind-hearted,enthusiastic... 2.略 Activity 5 1.(1)He cleaned windows and did gardening for his family and neighbours. (2)He started to ask for help from his classmates and neighbours and persuaded them to donate money. (3)After several months,Ryan had raised