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专题07书面表达(书信)
基础
必练
Passage 1
(22-23高一下·湖南·期中)
假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Aice来信向你倾诉她深受体重问题的困扰,希望你能给她一些健康减肥的建
议。请你根据以下要点给她写一封回信:
1.表示理解和关心:
2.给出具体的减肥建议(如合理饮食、适量运动、保持良好作息等);
3.鼓励她保持积极心态,相信自己能够成功。
注意:词数100左右。
Dear Alice,
Yours,
LiHua
Passage 2
(2425高一下·湖南·期中)
假定你是李华,你所在的学校举办了主题为“学科月"(Subject Month)的系列活动。请你给外国朋友Nicole写
一封邮件分享让你印象最深的一项活动,内容包括:
1.介绍活动:
2.你的收获。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Dear Nicole,
Sincerely.
LiHua
Passage 3
(24-25高一下·湖南长沙·期中)
假定你是学生李华,你的英国朋友Chris很喜欢文学,希望你给他推荐一本名著。请你给Chris回信,内容
包括:
1简要介绍一本名著;
2.说明推荐的理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 4
(2425高一下·湖南长沙·期中)
假定你是李华,上个月校学生会在学校操场举行了爱心义卖(charity sale)活动。请你为学校英语校报写一
篇关于该活动的英文报道。内容包括:
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1.活动的时间、地点和月的;
2.活动的具体情况
3.你的收获。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Charity Sale in Our School
Passage 5
(24-25高一下·湖南长沙·期中)
假定你是李华,你校上周与姐妹学校举行了友谊足球赛。你的美国朋友Adn对此很感兴趣,请你给他写一
封邮件,内容包括:
1.活动月的:
2.比赛情况;
3.你的感受和收获。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Aden,
I hope this email finds you well.
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Passage 6
(24-25高一下·湖南·期中)
你校上周末举办了一场讲座,主题为“了解中国古典文学”。请就此给学校英文报写一篇短文,报道此事,
内容包括:
1.讲座的信息;
2.学生的反响。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Lecture on Chinese Classical Literature
Passage 7
(24-25高一下·湖南娄底·期中)
假定你是李华,你们学校的外教Mk对中国的传统节日端午节很感兴趣,发邮件向你咨询有关习俗。请你
回复邮件,内容包括:时间、文化涵养、庆祝活动等。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.信的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
Yours,
LiHua
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进阶
提升
Passage 1
(24-25高一下·湖南邵阳·期中)
假定你是李华,你校第十二届“校长杯英语戏剧节即将举行。请你给负责组织的外教Jan写一封信申请做志
愿者,内容包括
1.写信目的;2.个人优势;3.能做的事情。
注意:
1.词数80左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Jane.
Looking forward to your early reply
Yours,
LiHua
Passage 2
(2425高一下·湖南长沙·期中)
假如你是某国际学校学生会主席李华,世界环境日(World Environment Day)即将到来,请你代表学生会以
“爱护环境”为主题,写一封倡议信。要点如下:
1.环境现状;
2.保护环境的具体措施:
3.号召全校同学积极参与。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文流畅。
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Dear students,
The Students'Union
专题07 书面表达(书信)
Passage 1
(22-23高一下·湖南·期中)
假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Alice来信向你倾诉她深受体重问题的困扰,希望你能给她一些健康减肥的建议。请你根据以下要点给她写一封回信:
1. 表示理解和关心;
2. 给出具体的减肥建议(如合理饮食、适量运动、保持良好作息等);
3. 鼓励她保持积极心态,相信自己能够成功。
注意:词数100左右。
Dear Alice,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Alice,
I was sorry to hear about your struggles with weight. Please know that I fully understand how difficult it can be to deal with such a sensitive matter, and let me share some advice that might help.
Firstly, focus on a balanced diet. Try to eat more fruits and vegetables, and reduce your intake of sugary foods and drinks. Secondly, regular exercise is crucial. Find an activity you enjoy, such as walking, jogging, or yoga. Aim for at least 30 minutes each time you exercise. Additionally, getting enough sleep is important for weight management. Try to maintain a regular sleep schedule to reduce stress.
Please remember that weight loss is a gradual process that requires patience and persistence. I believe in you and your ability to make positive changes in your life.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份,给英国朋友Alice写一封回信,为深受体重问题困扰的她提供一些健康减肥的建议,需首先对她的情况表示理解和关心,然后可从饮食、运动及作息方面给出具体的建议,最后给予她鼓励。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
困难的:difficult→hard, tough
应对:deal with→handle, tackle
专心于:focus on→concentrate on
关键的:crucial→essential, significant, vital
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Additionally, getting enough sleep is important for weight management. Try to maintain a regular sleep schedule to reduce stress.
拓展句:Additionally, as getting enough sleep is important for weight management, try to maintain a regular sleep schedule to reduce stress.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Please know that I fully understand how difficult it can be to deal with such a sensitive matter, and let me share some advice that might help. (运用了第一个that引导宾语从句、how引导宾语从句、第二个that引导限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Additionally, getting enough sleep is important for weight management. (运用了动名词短语作主语)
Passage 2
(24-25高一下·湖南·期中)
假定你是李华,你所在的学校举办了主题为“学科月”(Subject Month)的系列活动。请你给外国朋友Nicole写一封邮件分享让你印象最深的一项活动,内容包括:
1.介绍活动;
2.你的收获。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Nicole,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Nicole,
I’m excited to tell you about the most memorable activity during our school’s Subject Month — the “Science Experiment Show”!
Our physics teacher organized a competition where teams designed creative experiments using everyday materials. My team built a mini water-powered rocket from plastic bottles. Through constant efforts we successfully launched it, and it flew surprisingly far! The best part was seeing other teams’ projects, like homemade volcanoes and solar-powered toy cars.
Through this activity, I learned that science isn’t just about textbooks — it’s about hands-on creativity and teamwork. Now I feel more confident about exploring scientific ideas beyond the classroom.
Did your school ever hold such events? I’d love to hear your stories!
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华,你所在的学校举办了主题为“学科月”(Subject Month)的系列活动。请你给外国朋友Nicole写一封邮件分享让你印象最深的一项活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
兴奋的:excited→thrilled
难忘的:memorable→unforgettable
比赛:competition→contest
发射:launch→send up
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:My team built a mini water-powered rocket from plastic bottles.
拓展句:My team built a mini water-powered rocket whose material came from plastic bottles.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Our physics teacher organized a competition where teams designed creative experiments using everyday materials.(运用了where引导限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Through this activity, I learned that science isn’t just about textbooks — it’s about hands-on creativity and teamwork.(运用了that引导宾语从句)
Passage 3
(24-25高一下·湖南长沙·期中)
假定你是学生李华,你的英国朋友Chris很喜欢文学,希望你给他推荐一本名著。请你给Chris回信,内容包括:
1.简要介绍一本名著;
2.说明推荐的理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris,
Knowing that you are an enthusiast of the Four Great Classics of Chinese literature, I’m writing to recommend A Dream of Red Mansions to you.
Written by Cao Xueqin during the Qing dynasty, it tells the story of a wealthy family’s decline, similar to the author’s own life. It shows the beauty of women in many ways and explores the love story between Jia Baoyu and Lin Daiyu. I love this book because of its vivid language, interesting plot, and historical details. It also helps readers learn about traditional Chinese food, medicine, and architecture.
I truly hope you find my recommendation helpful. I look forward to your prompt reply.(109 words)
Yours,
Li Hua
进阶版:
Dear Chris,
Overjoyed to receive your letter where you mention that you are an enthusiast of four great classics of Chinese literature, I am writing to heartily recommend A Dream of Red Mansions to you.
Written by Cao Xueqin in the Qing dynasty, it is a story that describes the fall of a large, wealthy family much like the author’s own. It also shows the beauty of women from all angles and the love between Jia Baoyu and Lin Daiyu. I am fascinated by
the book because of its vivid language, attractive plot and historical elements. In addition, it is of great value in understanding the Chinese traditional cuisine, medicine and architecture.
We can talk about it more after you finish reading it. Hope you will enjoy reading it.(126 words)
Yours,
Li Hua
终极版:
Dear Chris,
A Dream of Red Mansions stands as my most cherished classic, captivating me with its rich characters and emotional depth. Follow me to unfold your journey of its timeless beauty.
Written by Cao Xueqin in the Qing dynasty, it is an epic that describes the fall of a large, wealthy family much like the author’s own. While it portrays the beauty of women like flowers, it also captures the sad, delicate love story of Jia Baoyu and Lin Daiyu. I am deeply captivated by its vivid language, compelling narrative, and historical elements. Moreover, it serves as an invaluable gateway to understanding Chinese traditional cuisine, medicine, and architecture.
This masterpiece reflects life’s joys and sorrows. I highly recommend it to anyone who wants to explore the richness of Chinese traditions and the depth of human emotions.(134 words)
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Chris回信,推荐一本名著,内容包括介绍一本名著并说明推荐的理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
富有的:wealth→rich
喜欢:love→fall in love with
真诚地:truly→sincerely
回复:reply→answer
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Written by Cao Xueqin during the Qing dynasty, it tells the story of a wealthy family’s decline, similar to the author’s own life.
拓展句:Written by Cao Xueqin during the Qing dynasty, it tells the story of a wealthy family’s decline, which is similar to the author’s own life.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that you are an enthusiast of the Four Great Classics of Chinese literature, I’m writing to recommend A Dream of Red Mansions to you.(运用了现在分词短语作状语和that引导宾语从句)
【高分句型2】I truly hope you find my recommendation helpful.(运用了省略连接词that的宾语从句)
Passage 4
(24-25高一下·湖南长沙·期中)
假定你是李华,上个月校学生会在学校操场举行了爱心义卖(charity sale)活动。请你为学校英语校报写一篇关于该活动的英文报道。内容包括:
1. 活动的时间、地点和目的;
2. 活动的具体情况;
3. 你的收获。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Charity Sale in Our School
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】A Charity Sale in Our School
On March 20th, a charity sale, organized by the Student Union, was held on our school playground to raise money for children in need.
Students from different grades participated enthusiastically, bringing handmade crafts, books, snacks, etc., and setting up stands to sell them at affordable prices. So much excitement was in the air that teachers and parents were attracted and participated. The playground buzzed with creativity — DIY workshops, a lively talent show, and interactive games drew most crowds. Two hours later, 10,200 yuan was raised.
Through this experience, we not only learned the value of teamwork but also felt the joy of helping others. As one participant puts it, small actions can make a big difference.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为学校英语校报写一篇英文报道,介绍上个月校学生会在学校操场举行的爱心义卖活动。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
募集:raise → collect
参加:participate → take part
热情地:enthusiastically → passionately
快乐:joy → delight
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:On March 20th, a charity sale, organized by the Student Union, was held on our school playground to raise money for children in need.
拓展句:On March 20th, a charity sale, which was organized by the Student Union, was held on our school playground to raise money for children in need.
【点睛】【高分句型1】So much excitement was in the air that teachers and parents were attracted and participated. (运用了so…that…引导的结果状语从句的倒装结构)
【高分句型2】As one participant puts it, small actions can make a big difference. (运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句)
Passage 5
(24-25高一下·湖南长沙·期中)
假定你是李华,你校上周与姐妹学校举行了友谊足球赛。你的美国朋友Aden对此很感兴趣,请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 活动目的;
2. 比赛情况;
3. 你的感受和收获。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Aden,
I hope this email finds you well.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear Aden,
I hope this email finds you well. I can’t wait to share the friendly football match we had with our sister school last week with you.
The match was held to strengthen bonds and promote teamwork. All players exchanged passes and shot with great enthusiasm. We led by 2-1 at halftime, but the opponent made a strong comeback. The game ended in a 3-3 draw.
I felt proud and excited throughout the match, and I was impressed by the sportsmanship and friendly spirit from both teams. Hope we can watch a match together someday!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求李华给美国朋友Aden写邮件,告知其上周学校与姐妹学校举行友谊足球赛之事,涵盖活动目的、比赛情况及个人感受收获 。
【详解】1.词汇积累
友好的:friendly → amicable
加强:strengthen → reinforce
促进:promote → facilitate
兴奋的:excited→ exhilarated
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The match was held to strengthen bonds and promote teamwork.
拓展句:As far as I know, the match was held to strengthen bonds and promote teamwork.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I can’t wait to share the friendly football match we had with our sister school last week with you.(运用了省略关系代词引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Hope we can watch a match together someday!(运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句)
Passage 6
(24-25高一下·湖南·期中)
你校上周末举办了一场讲座,主题为“了解中国古典文学”。请就此给学校英文报写一篇短文,报道此事,内容包括:
1. 讲座的信息;
2. 学生的反响。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Lecture on Chinese Classical Literature
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【答案】参考范文:
A Lecture on Chinese Classical Literature
Last weekend, our school held a lecture whose theme was “Understanding Chinese Classical Literature” in the school hall. The lecture was delivered by Professor Li, a renowned scholar in this field. He introduced the history and key works of Chinese classical literature, highlighting famous poets and their masterpieces. His engaging presentation made the complex subject accessible and fascinating.
The lecture was vas well-received by students. Many expressed their admiration for the profound wisdom and beauty of classical literature. They appreciated the opportunity to gain deeper insights into China’s cultural heritage. Some students even mentioned that the lecture inspired them to read more classical works in their spare time.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生撰写一篇关于学校举办的“了解中国古典文学”讲座的新闻报道,包括讲座的具体信息及学生对讲座的反响。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
举办:hold → host
表达:opportunity → chance
表达:express → convey
强调:highlight → emphasize
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The lecture was delivered by Professor Li, a renowned scholar in this field.
拓展句:The lecture was delivered by Professor Li, who is a renowned scholar in this field.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Last weekend, our school held a lecture whose theme was “Understanding Chinese Classical Literature” in the school hall. (运用了whose引导定语从句)
【高分句型2】Some students even mentioned that the lecture inspired them to read more classical works in their spare time. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
Passage 7
(24-25高一下·湖南娄底·期中)
假定你是李华,你们学校的外教Mike对中国的传统节日端午节很感兴趣,发邮件向你咨询有关习俗。请你回复邮件,内容包括:时间、文化涵养、庆祝活动等。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.信的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mike,
I’m happy to know your inquiry about the Dragon Boat Festival and now I’m writing to introduce it to you.
The festival falls on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month. It is observed in memory of Quyuan, a patriotic poet in ancient China, who drowned himself in a river as protest against corruption. One celebration is the dragon boat race, where paddlers row to the beat of a drum, resembling the search for Qu Yuan’s body in the river. On this day, people eat zongzi, which are glutinous rice dumplings wrapped in bamboo leaves.
I want to invite you to experience the Dragon Boat Festival in China. The festive atmosphere and cultural traditions are not to be missed.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Mike回复邮件,说明端午节的时间、文化涵养、庆祝活动等。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴:happy→glad
为纪念:in memory of→in hornor of
反抗:protest against→combat
传统:tradition→convention
2.句式拓展
句型转换
原句:I’m happy to know your inquiry about the Dragon Boat Festival and now I’m writing to introduce it to you.
拓展句:Since you are curious about the Dragon Boat Festival, I’m writing to introduce it to you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It is observed in memory of Quyuan, a patriotic poet in ancient China, who drowned himself in a river as protest against corruption.(运用了who引导非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】On this day, people eat zongzi, which are glutinous rice dumplings wrapped in bamboo leaves.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
Passage 1
(24-25高一下·湖南邵阳·期中)
假定你是李华,你校第十二届“校长杯”英语戏剧节即将举行。请你给负责组织的外教 Jane写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括:
1.写信目的;2.个人优势;3.能做的事情。
注意:
1.词数 80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Jane,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jane,
I’m writing to apply for a volunteer position in the upcoming 12th “Principal’s Cup” English Drama Festival. As an enthusiastic member of the school drama club and a student with strong English communication skills, I believe I can contribute effectively to this event.
Firstly, my bilingual ability allows me to assist both participants and foreign guests smoothly. Additionally, my experience in organizing last year’s festival has equipped me with practical skills in stage management and team coordination. I’d be glad to help with tasks like registration, guiding attendees, or supporting rehearsals.
Your consideration of my application would be greatly appreciated.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Jane写一封信,申请做第十二届“校长杯”英语戏剧节的志愿者。
【详解】1.词汇积累
职务:position→post
活动:event→activity
除此之外:additionally→in addition
任务:task→assignment
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Additionally, my experience in organizing last year’s festival has equipped me with practical skills in stage management and team coordination.
拓展句:Additionally, the experience that I gained in organizing last year’s festival has equipped me with practical skills in stage management and team coordination.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As an enthusiastic member of the school drama club and a student with strong English communication skills, I believe I can contribute effectively to this event.(运用了that引导的宾语从句,that被省略)
【高分句型2】Firstly, my bilingual ability allows me to assist both participants and foreign guests smoothly.(运用了动词不定式作宾语补足语)
Passage 2
(24-25高一下·湖南长沙·期中)
假如你是某国际学校学生会主席李华,世界环境日(World Environment Day)即将到来,请你代表学生会以“爱护环境”为主题,写一封倡议信。要点如下:
1. 环境现状;
2. 保护环境的具体措施;
3. 号召全校同学积极参与。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文流畅。
Dear students,
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The Students’ Union
【答案】Dear students,
As World Environment Day approaches, I’m writing to call for your attention to our planet’s growing environmental crisis. Polluted air, plastic-choked seas, and decreasing resources threaten Earth.
But together, we can make a difference. Start by making simple changes in daily life: turning off unused lights, taking shorter showers, and bringing reusable bags when shopping. At school, let’s be mindful of paper usage and participate in recycling programs. Beyond individual actions, we should also support community efforts like neighborhood clean-ups and tree-planting activities.
Remember, protecting our environment isn’t just a one-day event — it’s an ongoing commitment. Every small action adds up to create meaningful change. Let’s work hand in hand to build a greener, healthier future for all.
The Students’ Union
【导语】这是一篇应用文,世界环境日(World Environment Day)即将到来,请考生代表学生会以“爱护环境”为主题,写一封倡议信。
【详解】1.词汇积累:
接近:approach→draw near
减少的:decreasing→shrinking
参与:participate in→take part in
支持:support→back
2.句式拓展:
同义句
原句:Polluted air, plastic-choked seas, and decreasing resources threaten Earth.
拓展句:Earth is threatened by polluted air, seas choked with plastic, and shrinking resources.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】As World Environment Day approaches, I’m writing to call for your attention to our planet’s growing environmental crisis.(运用了 as 引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型 2】Start by making simple changes in daily life: turning off unused lights, taking shorter showers, and bringing reusable bags when shopping.(运用了状语从句的省略)
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