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How to write letter of advice Jim is planning a trip to China, so he needs some travelling tips about transportation. 【2019 北京】你的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京，天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。请给他回邮件：内容包括交通出行，必备衣物。 3 Your class and you are anxious about failing to understand the new foreign teacher’s oral English course. 你班同学近来为听不懂新来的外教口语课苦恼，请你给新来的外籍教师Jim写封邮件，提出相应建议，并说明理由。 4 Your School Newspaper plans to add a new column about mental health. 【西城期末改编】你校英文网站将新增“Mental Health”版块，现正征集栏目设置建议。请给负责人Jim写信，内容包括你最想设置的一个栏目及其内容；设置该栏目的理由 5 Jenny has a conflict with her parents about choosing a college major. 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国笔友Jenny 即将高中毕业，因为选择大学专业问题和父母发生矛盾，向你寻求建议。请你给他写封邮件，表示理解并提出建议和理由。 6 Which situation is most difficult for you to give advice? we can tell yout weo de we Information-gap exists To have a nice trip with smooth transportation Why is your advice needed for this situation? What is your advice letter’s writing purpose? Newspaper: To be reader-oriented To improve students 'mental health Faced with learning problems To enhance Teacher-student relation 8 Writing Task: Jenny has a conflict with her parents about choosing a college major. She is looking forward to your suggestions. the writing purpose of your advice letter To resolve the parent-teen conflict To help Jenny make a “right” major decision Read the following pairs of suggestions, and figure out which suggestion is better, and why? Situation 1: Overuse of Cellphone A. There are some apps that can lock your phone for a certain time so that you would be forced to concentrate on what you are doing. B. You may try to cultivate the sense of self-discipline and always keep in mind that harms of cellphone overuse and attempt to drag yourself out of the addiction by the strong will. Practical & Problem-solving Situation 2: Column about Mental Health Closely-related and To-the-point 12 You could set up a column where students can convey their depressions and anxiety met on the campus. Then give some expert advice such as the integration of body and mind with nature or how to improve self-awareness to cope with peer pressure. It is suggested to share inspiring stories of athletes we adore in the column to cheer us up. Their tremendous spirit will encourage us to struggle against frustration and build up confidence and succeed in the exams. Situation 3: Oral English Course Instruction A. It is very hard for us to follow your lecture, so is it possible you could change the challenging reading materials about literature into more intriguing and easier ones? Topic like traveling might fit for us English learning beginners better. It is expected that you could instruct us some strategies about how to make authentic pronunciation like you. Situation 3: Oral English Course Instruction B. We are so lucky to have you to impart us so much about English literature with well-selected reading materials. In order to make out of your lessons, could you please slow down a little bit for us to reflect and keep notes? And we hope to have more chance to interact with you to share about our thoughts and confusions in the class. Moreover, we are eager to learn some pronunciation tips and authentic oral expressions from you. Tactful and interactive careful not to say or do anything that will annoy or upset other people  圆通得体的，有分寸的 A. Personally, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the most important rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of my hometown. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots. That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice. Situation 4: Traveling Route Choice B. Firstly, Tai Mountain’s high altitude and spectacular scenery on the top of the mountain will surely impress you. The scene of sunrises will not disappoint you. The morning sky in the shade of yellow along with the mild beams of light will lift your spirit. What’s more, as the hometown of Confucius, Tai Mountain is surrounded by an atmosphere of traditional Chinese culture. Situation 4: Traveling Route Choice Convincing and detailed 16 Pair Work Please conclude principles of making good suggestions and prioritize at least 3 principles. You could ask yourself questions like this: Does / Is my advice ___________ in the letter? 17 1. Is my advice key-to-the-point and closely-related to the theme? 3. Is my advice convincing and detailed? 2. Does my advice work and solve the problem? 4. Is my advice tactful and with audience-awareness? Read a letter of advice, and answer the following 2 questions: Q1：What is the reader’s problem? Q2: What suggestions did the author give to the reader? Which suggestion do you think is most persuasive and impressive and why? What suggestions did the author give to the reader? Which suggestion do you think is most persuasive and impressive and why? Dear Reader, When it comes to education, I think the most important thing we can ever learn is how to love and appreciate other people. All humans are part of a larger community. Thinking about this, I'm not sure where the desire to be better than most people fits in. Most of us do fall into the "average" category. This is a natural outcome in any large population and what you need to know is that being average does not diminish your worth. To show your understanding and let the reader feel relieved We often glorify exceptional achievements, but everyday, ordinary successes are what make up the bulk of contributions to society and also the bulk of a fulfilling life. It feels incredible, no doubt, to win a gold medal at the Olympics, but it is the trivial (细枝末节) of the everyday that makes the most difference to wellbeing, even to people with those gold medals. A medal is icing on a cake, but we can't live on icing; we need the more substantial stuff underneath. Give specific example and metaphor to change the reader’s belief Don't be in a hurry to tick off all the usual milestones that supposedly make for a successful life. Don't be tempted to measure success just by grades and job titles. Instead, accept where you are, explore what interests you, and take away the pressure that comes from comparing yourself to others. Watch how you are talking to yourself and congratulate yourself when you spot an unhelpful thought pattern you need to change. Change will take practice. Be patient. Be curious about yourself. Think about ways to be creative, be kind, get involved and belong. We all have our own unique journey through life. Comparing your journey to others' can lead to dissatisfaction and overlooking the unique contributions you do have to make. Give actional and practical suggestion to tell you what to do to solve your trouble Writing Task: Jenny has a conflict with her parents about choosing a college major. She is looking forward to your suggestions. the writing purpose To resolve the parent-teen conflict To help Jenny make a “right” major decision 23 What might be the reasons of Jenny’s conflict with her parents when choosing a major? 24 Parents’ concerns about the children’s ability to choose the right major and their expectation to the kids Children’s expectation to follow his heart and passion after forming his own belief and value Writing Task: Jenny has a conflict with her parents about choosing a college major. She is looking forward to your suggestions. the writing purpose To resolve the parent-teen conflict To help Jenny make a “right” major decision 25 Writing Task: Please write a paragraph to give several suggestions to Jenny. Evaluation Criteria Content Problem-solving and practical Specific and to-the-point Tactful and with audience-awareness Language Considerate and interactive Expressions and sentence patterns Logic Logical and coherent Peer Evaluation Evaluation Criteria Content Problem-solving and practical Specific and to-the-point Tactful and with audience-awareness Language Considerate and interactive Expressions and sentence patterns Logic Logical and coherent 27 How to Polish Language to Express Idea Effectively Simple Version: Try to understand your parents’ concerns and opinion. Understanding their opinions will help solve the conflict. Useful expressions and phrases see from … perspective = put yourself in …’s shoes … provide more insights to… reasoning behind their positions ease /relieve/ alleviate the tension …reach a resolution faster Polished Version: Supporting Details Added You could take a step back and put yourself in your parents’ shoes / see from their perspective. Asking parents for full reasoning behind their positions can provide more insight into the issue. It will help ease the tension and reach a resolution faster. 28 How to Polish Language to Express Idea Effectively Simple Version: Try to communicate with your parents face-to-face and consider how each other feel. Useful expressions and phrases calmly/ honestly / respectfully justify your stand / decisions with reasonings view parents as allies to reach the common goal refocus our energy Polished Version with Supporting Details Added Talk with our parents calmly and respectfully with convincing reasonings to justify our decision and remove their concern. Be willing to listen to their concerns without interrupting and view them as allies to reach the common goal of finding a major fit for us. 29 How to Polish Language to Express Idea Effectively Simple Version: If both your parents and you are still confused about what you are good at , you can turn to your teacher for help. Useful expressions and phrases conduct the personality and career assessment keep informed with… / gain access to … school counselor / college professor college major information, career statistics, program offerings Polished Version with Supporting Details Added If you still fail to settle a compromise about the major, you can turn to the school counselor or career assessment counselor for professional help. Gaining access to the information about college major information, career statistics, program offerings can give you more insight to choose a major that fit for you the best. 30 Homework By taking reference of what you learned today, polish your writing and complete your suggestion letter based on the requirements below. 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国笔友Jenny 即将高中毕业，因为选择大学专业问题和父母发生矛盾，向你寻求建议。请你给他写封邮件， 1. 表示理解 2. 提出建议和理由。 31 $