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A Letter of Suggestion(建议信)
假如你是Li Hua,你的朋友Tom正要减肥,现在向你询问如何能成功减肥。
请根据以下要点给他回封信,并表达你希望他早日减肥成功。
1)积极的心态; 2)均衡的饮食; 3)定期体育运动; 4)最关键的在于坚持。
注意:1)词数100左右;开头语和结束语已为你写好,不计入总词数。
2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
参考词汇:塑造身材: shape a figure 定期的: regular
Dear Tom,
How nice to hear from you. __________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Task 1 Phrases.
1. 积极的心态 ______________ 2. 当提到...时 ________________
3. 在某方面起着重要作用 __________ 4. 均衡的饮食 _________________
5. 应该做某事 ___________________ 6. 定期/经常锻炼 _______________
7. 锻炼身体/强身健体______________ 8. 增强免疫系统 ________________
Task 2 Translate the sentences.
Para1.
1. 听说你正要减肥。我很关心并写信来表达我对这件事的一些建议。
[简单版] I know ______________________. I am concerned and________________ __________________________________.
[升级版1] (非谓语) Learning that_____________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________.
[升级版2] 关于如何减肥,我的建议如下。_______________________________________________.
Para2.
1. 首先,当提到减肥时,有个积极的心态非常重要。
[It作形式主语] First of all, __________________losing weight, ___________________.
[动名词作主语]: __________________________________________________________
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2.其次,在减肥中起重要作用的是均衡的饮食。
[简单版] Secondly, a _________ diet plays _______________________ in losing weight.
[升级版] (what引导的主语从句)
Secondly, what ___________________________in losing weight _____________________.
3.你应该既吃肉又吃蔬菜,它们含有健康身体所必需的东西。。
[简单版] You __________________ eat both meat and vegetables. They contain the necessary things for a healthy body.
[升级版] (用which引导的非限制性定语从句改写]
_________________________________________________________________________.
4.除此之外,经常运动也是一个好的选择。
______________, _________________________________________________________.
5.经常运动不仅能锻炼身体,还能增强我们的免疫系统。
________________________________________________________________________.
6.据说,游泳可以帮助塑造好身材。
___________________ swimming can help shape a nice figure.
7.最重要的是,你必须要坚持。正如一句名言所说:“有志者,事竟成。”
[简单版] The most important is _______ you must keep it / be persistent.
Just as a famous saying goes, “___________________________________________.”
[升级版] (用what引导主语从句改写) :
_______________________________________________________________________.
Para3.
1. 希望这些建议对你有帮助,期待收到你的回复。
_________________________________________________________________________
2. 我坚信情况会向好的方面发展。
__________________________________the situation will become better and better.
高二英语必修五 第 2 页 (共 2 页)
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Suggestion Letter
建议信训练
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Lead-in
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【学习目标】
1.To review and consolidate some words and expressions
related to suggestion letter.
2.To enhance the writing about the topic.
【学习难点】
1. Cultivate students’ interest and confidence in writing.
2. Learn to imitate good sentences.
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假如你是Li Hua,你的朋友Tom正要减肥,现在向你询问如何能成功减肥。请根据以下要点给他回封信,并表达你希望他早日减肥成功。
1)积极的心态; 2)均衡的饮食;
3)定期体育运动; 4)最关键的在于坚持。
注意:1)词数100左右;开头语和结束语已为你写好,不计入总词数。 2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
参考词汇:塑造身材: shape a figure 定期的: regular
Dear Tom,
How nice to hear from you. _____________________
_________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
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suggestion letter
beginning
body
ending
three
structure(结构)
problems and purposes of writing
suggestions
hopes and wishes
______ parts
【Expressions】
1. 积极的心态 _____________________
2. 当提到...时 ____________________
3. 在某方面起着重要作用 ___________________
4. 均衡的饮食 _____________________
5. 应该做某事 ________________________
6. 定期/经常锻炼 __________________
7. 锻炼身体/强身健体__________________
8. 增强免疫系统 ___________________
when it comes to (doing) sth.
a positive attitude / a positive state of mind
play an important role/part in ...
a balanced diet
be supposed to do
do sports / exercise regularly 或work out regularly
build up one’s body
strengthen immune system
Task 1 短语积累
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Task 2. Translate the sentences.
句式:Para.1(第一段,对应材料,表明写作意图)
1. 听说你正要减肥。我很关心并写信来表达我对这件事的一些建议。
[简易版] I know ___________________________.
I am concerned and ________________________________.
[升级版] Learning that _____________________________________
[回顾版] 关于如何减肥,我的建议如下。_______________________________________________.
you are going to lose weight
writing to express my advice /ideas concerning this matter.
you are going to lose weight, I am concerned and writing to ...
As to how to lose weight, here come/are my tips.
或 my tips are as follows.
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1. 当提到减肥,有个积极的心态非常重要。
[It作形式主语] __________________losing weight,
___________________________________________.
[动名词作主语]: _______________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________.
When it comes to
When it comes to losing weight, having a positive attitude is of great importance.
it is very important to have a positive attitude.
Para.2 (第二段,灵活运用,要点要齐全)
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2. 在减肥中起重要作用的是均衡的饮食。
[简单版] A _________ diet plays __________________________ in
losing weight.
[升级版] (what引导的主语从句)
What ______________________in losing weight _________________.
balanced
plays an important role / part
plays an important role
is a balanced diet
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3. 你应该既吃肉又吃蔬菜,它们含有健康身体所必需的东西。
[简单版] You __________________ eat both meat and vegetables. They contain the necessary things for a healthy body.
[升级版] (用which引导的非限制性定语从句改写]
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
are supposed to
You are supposed to eat both meat and vegetables, which contain the necessary things for a healthy body.
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4. 除此之外,经常运动也是一个好的选择。
_____________________________________, ________________
_________________________________________________________.
Besides/Plus/What’s more/Furthermore
it is also a good choice to work out regularly.
5. 经常运动不仅能锻炼身体,还能增强我们的免疫系统。
________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________
Not only can doing sports regularly build up our bodies, but it also strengthens our immune system.
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6. 据说,游泳可以帮助塑造好身材。
___________________ swimming can help shape a nice figure.
It is said that
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7. 最重要的是,你必须要坚持。正如一句名言所说:“有志者,事竟 成。”
[简单版] The most important is _______ you must keep it / be persistent. Just as a famous saying goes, “_______________________________________
[升级版] (用what引导主语从句改写) : ____________________________________________________________
that
Where there is a will, there is a way.
What matters most is that you must keep it / be persistent. ....
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1. 希望这些建议对你有帮助,期待收到你的好消息。
________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
I do hope you will find this suggestions helpful.
I am looking forward to your good news.
= I do hope these suggestions can be of great benefit/help to you.
Para.3 (第三段,希望采纳,给予鼓励)
2. 我坚信情况会向好的方面发展。(同位语从句)
______________________________the situation will become better
and better.
I hold the firm belief that
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避免草率(或一句话)结尾
(para 3) Hope these suggestions will be useful for you and look forward to your early reply.
版本1:Hope these suggestions above can be of great help to you.
With persistent efforts and an optimistic state of mind, you are
to bound to win this summer.
版本2: Please take my suggestions into account. I hold the firm
belief that everything will change for the better and may you
succeed this summer.
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Summary
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Paragraph
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Sentence 1(希望所提建议对对方有帮助):
I hope you will find these ideas useful.
I hope you will make it if you follow the advice above.
I hope that these suggestions will help you out.
I hope that you can make progress with the help of my suggestions.
Sentence 2(祝愿对方处境得到改善):
I would be more than delighted to see improvements in this regard.
I sincerely hope you can take my advice into consideration and I do look forward to seeing your situation improved.
I do hope you can take my advice into consideration and nothing will excite me more than seeing your situation improved.
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Dear Tom, How nice to hear from you! Learning/Spotting that you are going to lose weight, I am so concerned that I am writing to express my advice /ideas concerning this matter.
(或 I am concerned and writing to share with you my suggestions.)
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First of all, having a positive attitude is of great importance when it comes to losing weight. As we all know, one with a positive attitude in life can really lead a happy life. Secondly, what plays an important role in losing weight is a balanced diet. You are supposed to eat both meat and vegetables, which contain the necessary things for a healthy body. Furthermore/Plus/Besides, it is also a good choice to work out regularly. Not only can doing sports regularly build up our bodies, but it also can strengthen our immune system. It’s said that swimming can help shape a nice figure. You can give it a try. What matters most is that you must keep it /stick to it / be persistent. Just as a famous saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way.”
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I do hope these suggestions can be of great benefit to you. I am looking forward to your good news.
Best wishes for you!
Yours,
Li Hua
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Thanks!
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听说你正要减肥。我很关心并写信来表达我对这件事的一些建议。
首先,当提到减肥时,有个积极的心态非常重要。其次,均衡的饮食在减肥中也起重要作用。你应该既吃肉又吃蔬菜,它们含有健康身体所必需的东西。除此之外,经常运动也是一个好的选择。经常运动不仅能锻炼身体,还能增强我们的免疫系统。据说,游泳可以帮助塑造好身材。最重要的是,你必须要坚持。正如一句名言所说:“有志者,事竟 成。”
希望这些建议对你有帮助。期待收到你的好消息。
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