摘要:
该初中英语课件聚焦“健康你和我”志愿服务活动的电子邮件写作,通过任务背景(校志愿队队长李华向交换生Sam介绍活动)导入,串联邮件格式、活动信息整合(主题、时间、地点)、内容拓展(运动、讲座、互动类活动)及目的升华等知识点,以活动分类提示、句式示例为学习支架,帮助学生构建写作逻辑。
其亮点在于以真实情境任务驱动,融合语言能力与思维品质培养。例如,引导学生拓展活动细节(如健康讲座提供饮食建议、运动俱乐部包含慢跑等),运用宾语从句、比较级等句式表达活动目的,提升语言表达准确性与思维深度。对学生而言,可掌握邮件写作结构与内容拓展方法,发展学习能力;对教师而言,提供具体教学支架与示例,便于高效开展写作教学。
内容正文:
Unit6 Caring for your health
Writing
你是校志愿队队长李华。你校将于下周六组织主题(theme为“健康你和我”的志愿服务活动, 交换生Sam也报名参加。请你根据以下内容写一封电子邮件, 向他介绍活动的安排。
Theme Healthy You and Me
Time 8:30 a.m.-11:30 a.m.
Place Sports Centre
Activities ...
Purpose ...
注意:1. 可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2. 词数 80词左右(邮件的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入词数);
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息, 否则不予评分。
Dear Sam,
Thank you for joining us in our voluntary work next Saturday.______________________________________________
文章结构:
一、介绍活动信息(开篇必备)
二、描述活动内容(主体核心):
运动俱乐部类
健康讲座类
志愿服务互动类
三、表达活动目的与感受(结尾升华)
目的类
感受类
呼吁类
四、邮件礼貌收尾句
你是校志愿队队长李华。你校将于下周六组织主题(theme为“健康你和我”的志愿服务活动, 交换生Sam也报名参加。请你根据以下内容写一封电子邮件, 向他介绍活动的安排。
Theme Healthy You and Me
Time 8:30 a.m.-11:30 a.m.
Place Sports Centre
Activities ...
Purpose ...
注意:1. 可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2. 词数 80词左右(邮件的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入词数);
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息, 否则不予评分。
Dear Sam,
Thank you for joining us in our voluntary work next Saturday._____________________
_____________________________________
Thank you for joining us in our voluntary work next Saturday.
一、介绍活动信息(开篇必备)
基础:主题 + 地点+ 时间 :
We will have an activity at the Sports Center next Saturday.
*告知对方:
You will join us.
你是校志愿队队长李华。你校将于下周六组织主题(theme为“健康你和我”的志愿服务活动, 交换生Sam也报名参加。请你根据以下内容写一封电子邮件, 向他介绍活动的安排。
Theme Healthy You and Me
Time 8:30 a.m.-11:30 a.m.
Place Sports Centre
Activities ...
Purpose ...
注意:1. 可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2. 词数 80词左右(邮件的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入词数);
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息, 否则不予评分。
Dear Sam,
Thank you for joining us in our voluntary work next Saturday._____________________
_____________________________________
Thank you for joining us in our voluntary work next Saturday.
一、介绍活动信息(开篇必备)
(进阶)主题 + 地点 + 时间:
We will hold...called 主题 at 地点 from... to 时间.
We will hold an activity called "Healthy You and Me" at the Sports Center, from 8:30 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. next Saturday.
*告知对方:
You are welcome to join us in this meaningful activity.
你是校志愿队队长李华。你校将于下周六组织主题(theme为“健康你和我”的志愿服务活动, 交换生Sam也报名参加。请你根据以下内容写一封电子邮件, 向他介绍活动的安排。
Theme Healthy You and Me
Time 8:30 a.m.-11:30 a.m.
Place Sports Centre
Activities ...
Purpose ...
注意:1. 可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2. 词数 80词左右(邮件的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入词数);
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息, 否则不予评分。
Dear Sam,
Thank you for joining us in our voluntary work next Saturday._____________________
_____________________________________
二、描述活动内容(主体核心):
运动俱乐部类 sports clubs
基础:We will do some sports.
(进阶)We can take part in...,such as...(table tennis, rope skipping, basketball, football, running,...) 举例
There are...for us to join so that we can.../it can...
目的:...so that...
build up our body/
help us exercise and stay fit.
你是校志愿队队长李华。你校将于下周六组织主题(theme为“健康你和我”的志愿服务活动, 交换生Sam也报名参加。请你根据以下内容写一封电子邮件, 向他介绍活动的安排。
Theme Healthy You and Me
Time 8:30 a.m.-11:30 a.m.
Place Sports Centre
Activities ...
Purpose ...
注意:1. 可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2. 词数 80词左右(邮件的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入词数);
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息, 否则不予评分。
Dear Sam,
Thank you for joining us in our voluntary work next Saturday._____________________
_____________________________________
二、描述活动内容(主体核心):
2. 健康讲座类 a health speech
基础:We will listen to a health speech.
进阶:
Don’t miss the health speech! The teachers will give us useful advice on how to eat healthily and stay relaxed.
[定从]We will... speech which is about...
We will listen to a health speech which will teach us to be positive and keep a balanced diet.
你是校志愿队队长李华。你校将于下周六组织主题(theme为“健康你和我”的志愿服务活动, 交换生Sam也报名参加。请你根据以下内容写一封电子邮件, 向他介绍活动的安排。
Theme Healthy You and Me
Time 8:30 a.m.-11:30 a.m.
Place Sports Centre
Activities ...
Purpose ...
注意:1. 可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2. 词数 80词左右(邮件的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入词数);
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息, 否则不予评分。
Dear Sam,
Thank you for joining us in our voluntary work next Saturday._____________________
_____________________________________
二、描述活动内容(主体核心):
3. 游戏互动类 group games
基础:We can play group games.
进阶:We can/will...to make...adj..
We can play interesting group games like "slow walking race" with others to make the activity lively.
Finally, we will play fun group games to make the activity more lively and interesting.
你是校志愿队队长李华。你校将于下周六组织主题(theme为“健康你和我”的志愿服务活动, 交换生Sam也报名参加。请你根据以下内容写一封电子邮件, 向他介绍活动的安排。
Theme Healthy You and Me
Time 8:30 a.m.-11:30 a.m.
Place Sports Centre
Activities ...
Purpose ...
注意:1. 可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2. 词数 80词左右(邮件的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入词数);
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息, 否则不予评分。
Dear Sam,
Thank you for joining us in our voluntary work next Saturday._____________________
_____________________________________
三、表达活动目的与感受(结尾升华)
目的类
基础:Health is very important.
进阶: [宾从]We hope that... (主谓宾).
be aware of 意识到...
live a adj. life 过上...的生活
We hope that our students can be aware of the importance of health and live a balanced and healthy life.
We want to let everyone know that health is very important to our learning.
你是校志愿队队长李华。你校将于下周六组织主题(theme为“健康你和我”的志愿服务活动, 交换生Sam也报名参加。请你根据以下内容写一封电子邮件, 向他介绍活动的安排。
Theme Healthy You and Me
Time 8:30 a.m.-11:30 a.m.
Place Sports Centre
Activities ...
Purpose ...
注意:1. 可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2. 词数 80词左右(邮件的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入词数);
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息, 否则不予评分。
Dear Sam,
Thank you for joining us in our voluntary work next Saturday._____________________
_____________________________________
三、表达活动目的与感受(结尾升华)
感受类
基础:This activity will be meaningful and unforgettable.有意义并且难忘的
进阶: [宾从]I believe that... (主谓宾).
The 比较级 +主谓 , the 比较级 +主谓.
越...,就越...
I believe that this activity will be meaningful and unforgettable.
The healthier we are , the better we can learn.
你是校志愿队队长李华。你校将于下周六组织主题(theme为“健康你和我”的志愿服务活动, 交换生Sam也报名参加。请你根据以下内容写一封电子邮件, 向他介绍活动的安排。
Theme Healthy You and Me
Time 8:30 a.m.-11:30 a.m.
Place Sports Centre
Activities ...
Purpose ...
注意:1. 可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2. 词数 80词左右(邮件的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入词数);
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息, 否则不予评分。
Dear Sam,
Thank you for joining us in our voluntary work next Saturday._____________________
_____________________________________
三、表达活动目的与感受(结尾升华)
呼吁类
基础:Let's become a healthy student from now on.
四、邮件礼貌收尾句
Looking forward to seeing you at the Sports Center!
I hope you will enjoy this meaningful voluntary work.
If you have any questions, feel free to ask me.
你是校志愿队队长李华。你校将于下周六组织主题(theme为“健康你和我”的志愿服务活动, 交换生Sam也报名参加。请你根据以下内容写一封电子邮件, 向他介绍活动的安排。
Theme Healthy You and Me
Time 8:30 a.m.-11:30 a.m.
Place Sports Centre
Activities ...
Purpose ...
注意:1. 可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2. 词数 80词左右(邮件的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入词数);
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息, 否则不予评分。
Dear Sam,
Thank you for joining us in our voluntary work next Saturday._____________________
_____________________________________
Thank you for joining us in our voluntary work next Saturday.
We will hold an activity called "Healthy You and Me" at the Sports Center, from 8:30 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. next Saturday. You are welcome to join us in this meaningful activity. To begin with, there are many fun sports clubs for us to join so that it can help us exercise and keep fit. For example, jogging, table tennis and cycling clubs. Don’t miss the health speech! The teachers will give us useful advice on how to eat healthily and stay relaxed. Finally, we will play fun group games like "slow walking race" to make the activity more lively and interesting.
From the activity, we hope our students can be aware of the importance of health and help them live a balanced and healthy life. The healthier we are , the better we can learn. Let's become a healthy student from now on.
Looking forward to seeing you at the Sports Center!
Yours, Li Hua
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