2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---海岸边的温暖守护 导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The wind swept across the Irish coast as Grandfather bent to examine Caper’s front hooves (蹄). The little horse stepped back and let out a painful sound. “They are burning and swollen (肿胀的),” said Grandfather with a heavy heart. “I think he has a mild case of sickness. Horses will eat themselves sick any chance they get. And the sickness has gone straight to this one’s hooves.” “When will he feel better?” asked Aislinn worriedly. Caper was not just their pet — he carried the load of fish to the market every week. Without him, they could not take the fish to the market. Without selling the fish, they would not get their rent paid. Grandfather removed half of the grain from Caper’s feed. He then explained that Caper would soon be right as rain if they cut back on his diet and let him rest properly. The most important thing now, he added, was to bring the heat down and reduce the swelling. “Don’t worry about the fish, child. The sea has always been kind to us.” Grandfather smiled at Aislinn and urged her to get some sleep. Aislinn lay in bed, but sleep would not come. She opened her window. The sliver moon had risen above the sea. Aislinn wondered how Grandfather could sell the fish he’d worked so hard to catch. She wished they had enough money for the rent. But above all, Aislinn wished Caper’s hooves would stop hurting. Damp wind filled the room as she watched the cold waves crash on the beach. Aislinn gradually remembered when she had got a swollen ankle, Grandfather had told her to keep ice on it, and the swelling had gone down. If cold could reduce the heat and swelling in her ankle, perhaps it could ease Caper’s pain as well! There was ice in the fish crate (箱子) to keep the fish fresh, and the cold sea lay only a short walk away, with its waves rolling on and on toward the shore. 注意： （1）续写词数应为150左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Aislinn pulled on her sweater and boots and hurried down the hallway. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: The next morning, Aislin n woke beside the horse. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 The wind swept across the Irish coast--- _________________ --- Grandfather found Caper’s hooves burning and swollen, with a mild sickness--- _________________ --- Aislinn worried about Caper and their rent without him--- _________________ --- Grandfather told Aislinn to cut Caper’s diet and let him rest--- Aislinn couldn’t sleep and remembered her swollen ankle was cured by ice--- Aislinn had an idea to help Caper with cold 4. 细节问答 What was wrong with Caper?：___________________________________ Why was Aislinn worried about Caper?： _________________________________ What did Grandfather do to help Caper?： ________________________________________________ How did Grandfather cure Aislinn’s swollen ankle?： __________________________________________ What idea did Aislinn have to help Caper?： _____________________________________________ What did Caper do for Aislinn and Grandfather every week?： _________________________________________________ Why couldn’t Aislinn sleep?： ________________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?： ________________________________________________ 5．情节线 6．情感线 Aislinn：worried→___________→anxious→___________→determined →___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文： ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文： ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．句式 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 温情成长类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Aislinn pulled on her sweater and boots and hurried down the hallway. 衔接句1——What did Aislinn do to help Caper? How did she carry out her idea? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: The next morning, Aislinn woke beside the horse. 衔接句2——What changes did Caper have? How did Aislinn and Grandfather feel? What did they learn? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：Aislinn穿上毛衣和靴子，匆忙穿过走廊。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：第二天早上，Aislinn在马驹身边醒来。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写 Aislinn pulled on her sweater and boots and hurried down the hallway. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The next morning, Aislinn woke beside the horse. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 Aislinn（善良、细心、有爱心，懂得举一反三的小女孩）；Grandfather（沉稳、有经验、疼爱Aislinn和Caper的老人）；Caper（Aislinn和祖父的宠物马，承担运鱼任务，乖巧可怜） 2．视角 第三人称 3．时空线 The wind swept across the Irish coast--- Grandfather bent to examine Caper’s front hooves--- Grandfather found Caper’s hooves burning and swollen, with a mild sickness--- Aislinn asked when Caper would feel better and worried about their rent--- Aislinn worried about Caper and their rent without him--- Grandfather removed half of Caper’s grain and told Aislinn to let Caper rest--- Grandfather told Aislinn to cut Caper’s diet and let him rest--- Aislinn couldn’t sleep and remembered her swollen ankle was cured by ice--- Aislinn had an idea to help Caper with cold 4. 细节问答 What was wrong with Caper?：He had a mild case of sickness, and his front hooves were burning and swollen. Why was Aislinn worried about Caper?：Because Caper carried fish to the market every week; without him, they couldn’t sell fish or pay the rent, and she also felt sorry for Caper’s pain. What did Grandfather do to help Caper?：He removed half of the grain from Caper’s feed and told Aislinn to let Caper rest properly to bring the heat down and reduce the swelling. How did Grandfather cure Aislinn’s swollen ankle?：He told her to keep ice on it, and the swelling went down. What idea did Aislinn have to help Caper?：She thought cold could ease Caper’s pain, so she planned to use ice from the fish crate or seawater to help Caper reduce swelling. What did Caper do for Aislinn and Grandfather every week?：He carried the load of fish to the market. Why couldn’t Aislinn sleep?：She worried about Caper’s pain, their rent without Caper, and Grandfather’s hard-caught fish that couldn’t be sold. What does the story tell us?：Kindness and wisdom can help those we care about; small efforts from a caring heart can bring hope and change, and love can bridge difficulties. 5．情节线 爱尔兰海岸，祖父检查马驹Caper→ _________________→Aislinn询问Caper何时能好，担心没有Caper运鱼卖就交不起房租→祖父让减少Caper的喂食，让它好好休息→Aislinn睡不着，想起自己脚踝肿胀时祖父用冰敷治好→（续写） __________________________________________→（续写）第二天早上，Aislinn在马驹身边醒来，看到Caper的蹄子消肿，疼痛减轻，祖父也为她的善良和智慧感到欣慰 6．情感线 Aislinn：worried→anxious→anxious→inspired→determined→relieved and happy（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：在爱尔兰海岸，祖父发现他们的宠物马Caper蹄子红肿发炎，得了轻微的病。Aislinn既担心Caper的疼痛，也担心没有Caper运鱼卖就交不起房租。她睡不着时，想起自己脚踝肿胀时祖父用冰敷治好，便想到用寒冷帮助Caper缓解疼痛，于是悄悄起身实施自己的想法。 英文：On the Irish coast, Grandfather found that their pet horse Caper’s hooves were burning and swollen, and he had a mild sickness. Aislinn was worried not only about Caper’s pain but also about not being able to pay the rent without Caper carrying fish to the market. When she couldn’t sleep, she remembered that her swollen ankle was cured by ice, so she came up with an idea to ease Caper’s pain with cold and quietly got up to put it into action. 8．句式 状语从句：If cold could reduce the heat and swelling in her ankle, perhaps it could ease Caper’s pain as well! 非谓语动词：The wind swept across the Irish coast as Grandfather bent to examine Caper’s front hooves. 宾语从句：Grandfather said that Caper had a mild case of sickness and that he would be right as rain if they cut back on his diet. 并列句：Without him, they could not take the fish to the market. Without selling the fish, they would not get their rent paid. 9. 本文主题 温情成长类：善良与智慧能温暖身边的生命，小小的善举蕴含大大的力量，懂得举一反三、主动付出，就能为身边的人（或动物）带来希望，也能在成长中收获感动与成长。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Aislinn pulled on her sweater and boots and hurried down the hallway. 衔接句1——What did Aislinn do to help Caper? How did she carry out her idea? Aislinn quietly took ice from the fish crate and went to the stable, then used the ice and cold seawater to apply a cold compress to Caper’s hooves gently, staying by its side all night. Paragraph 2: The next morning, Aislinn woke beside the horse. 衔接句2——What changes did Caper have? How did Aislinn and Grandfather feel? What did they learn? Caper’s hooves were no longer swollen, and it could stand up easily. Aislinn felt relieved, and Grandfather praised her for her kindness and wisdom, letting her know that love and effort can solve difficulties. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：Aislinn穿上毛衣和靴子，匆忙穿过走廊。→①她悄悄来到鱼箱旁，取出里面的冰，又走到海边打了些冷水→②她来到马厩，小心翼翼地用冰和冷水为Caper冷敷红肿的蹄子→③她守在Caper身边，轻轻抚摸它，直到不知不觉睡着； 第二段：第二天早上，Aislinn在马驹身边醒来。→①她发现Caper的蹄子不再红肿，还主动用鼻子蹭她的手→②祖父来到马厩，看到这一幕十分欣慰，称赞Aislinn聪明又善良→③Caper很快恢复健康，重新帮他们运鱼，一家人也顺利交上了房租。 四.段落续写 Aislinn pulled on her sweater and boots and hurried down the hallway. She tiptoed to the kitchen, took the ice from the fish crate carefully, and then walked to the beach to fetch some cold seawater. When she reached the stable, Caper looked at her gently, as if knowing she was there to help. Aislinn sat beside it, dipped a cloth in cold seawater, wrapped it with ice, and applied it to Caper’s hooves softly. She stayed with Caper all night, stroking its mane to comfort it, until she fell asleep beside it. The next morning, Aislinn woke beside the horse. To her joy, Caper’s hooves were no longer swollen and burning. It stood up slowly and nuzzled her hand gently, letting out a soft sound. Just then, Grandfather came in and was surprised by the change. He patted Aislinn’s head proudly, saying her kindness and wisdom saved Caper. Soon, Caper recovered completely and went back to carrying fish to the market, and they paid the rent on time. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $