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考前押题10 英语作文题
话题1 推荐信
话题4 观点看法
话题2 倡议书
话题5 建议信
话题3 投稿
话题6 个人经历
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话题1 推荐信
Passage 1
假设你是明启中学的学生李华,你校图书馆打算开展一次主题为“阅读的力量”的读书活动,现向全校学生征集活动方案,写一封信给图书馆,推荐活动方案,内容须包括:
1.具体的活动安排;
2.活动的意义。
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【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
Knowing that our library is planning to hold an activity called “The Power of Reading”, I’m writing to give some recommendations.
First, we can set up a reading corner in each class, encouraging students to bring their own books to the corner and share them with others. In addition, we can also call on students to write their reading feelings and give rewards to those who submit the best ones. What’s more, a composition competition should be held on behalf of the library. Every student has access to the competition.
Such activities not only offer us joy and excitement, but also encourage us to think critically. I’d appreciate it if you could take my recommendations into account.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作,要求考生给图书馆写一封推荐信,推荐活动方案,并介绍具体的活动安排和活动的意义。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
设立:set up→ establish
呼吁:call on→ appeal to
提交:submit→ hand in
代表:on behalf of→ represent
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:What’s more, a composition competition should be held on behalf of the library. Every student has access to the competition.
拓展句:What’s more, a composition competition should be held on behalf of the library, which every student has access to.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First, we can set up a reading corner in each class, encouraging students to bring their own books to the corner and share them with others.(使用了现在分词短语作伴随状语)
【高分句型2】In addition, we can also call on students to write their reading feelings and give rewards to those who submit the best ones.(使用了不定式作宾补和who引导定语从句)
Passage 2
假设你是明启中学的高二学生李明,最近你校计划成立一个新社团,校学生会正在全校范围内征求意见。两个备选社团分别为“流浪动物关爱社团(Homeless Animals Care Club)”和“民间艺术保护社团(Folk Arts Protection Club)”。作为学校的一员,你决定写一封电子邮件,向学生会表达自己的想法。
你的邮件内容须包括:
1. 你的选择;
2. 你做出该选择的理由。
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【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
Hearing that you are calling on students to give opinions on choosing a student association, I am so interested in it and decide to write a letter to suggest selecting the Homeless Animals Care Club.
In my opinion, with your fund, the Homeless Animals Care Club can do some important things to help homeless animals, such as regular medical examinations, which can improve the rehabilitation of homeless animals and promote the all-round development of homeless animals. With the fund, the club can organize some public activities, so that homeless animals and animal-lovers can have some social activities together, which can help homeless animals better integrate into society, reduce their psychological pressure and let them feel the care of society.
I think it significant to set up the Homeless Animals Care Club. I hope you can take my suggestion seriously.
Yours,
Li Ming
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给学生会写一封邮件,对于新社团的选择提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累:
建议:suggest→advise
在我看来:in my opinion→from where I stand
改善:improve→enhance
压力:pressure→stress
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I think it significant to set up the Homeless Animals Care Club.
拓展句:I think it is significant to set up the Homeless Animals Care Club.
【点睛】[高分句型1] In my opinion, with your fund, the Homeless Animals Care Club can do some important things to help homeless animals, such as regular medical examinations, which can improve the rehabilitation of homeless animals and promote the all-round development of homeless animals. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] With the fund, the club can organize some public activities, so that homeless animals and animal-lovers can have some social activities together, which can help homeless animals better integrate into society, reduce their psychological pressure and let them feel the care of society. (运用了so that引导的目的状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
Passage 3
假如你叫李平。你的笔友Wu Lei听说你校正在提倡主动性学习,特来信询问有关情况。请你根据下表信息,写一封回信,谈一谈提倡主动性学习前后的变化。
提倡主动性学习前
提倡主动性学习后
课堂上
老师一直讲解课本,学生被动听讲、做笔记
老师提出问题,学生互相讨论或学生自己提出问题,一起讨论解决
课后
需完成没完没了的作业
丰富多彩的课外活动,如读自己感兴趣的书籍,去图书馆或者上网查资料
参考词汇:主动性学习 active learning
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【答案】Dear Wu Lei,
I’m glad to hear from you. You have heard that our school is advocating active learning and you are curious about how is it going. In short, things have been improving since the school began to carry it out.
In the past, the teachers kept on explaining the points in our textbooks. We students just listened and took notes passively. But now we often discuss and try to solve the problems raised by the teachers or ourselves. After class, we enjoy different kinds of activities instead of doing endless homework. For example, we can read what we are interested in; we can go to the library or surf the Internet for various information.
In a word, we are now masters of study, and we are very happy.
Yours,
Li Ping
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作,要求考生写一封回信,陈述学校提倡主动性学习前后的变化。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
收到……的来信:hear from→ receive a letter from
提倡:advocate→ promote
进行:carry out→ conduct
解决:solve→ address
而不是:instead of→ rather than
2. 句式拓展
简单句合并
原句:In the past, the teachers kept on explaining the points in our textbooks. We students just listened and took notes passively.
拓展句:In the past, the teachers kept on explaining the points in our textbooks while we students just listened and took notes passively.
【点睛】【高分句型1】You have heard that our school is advocating active learning and you are curious about how is it going.(使用了and连接并列句、that和how引导宾语从句)
【高分句型2】But now we often discuss and try to solve the problems raised by the teachers or ourselves.(使用了and连接并列的谓语结构和过去分词短语作后置定语)
话题2 倡议书
Passage 1
假设你是学生会主席李华,请你围绕“protect animals, respect life (保护动物, 尊重生命)”的主题,写一封英语倡议书,内容包括:
1. 保护动物的重要性;
2. 如何保护动物;
3. 发出倡议。
注意:1.开头已给出,词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear fellow students,
I’m writing to call on everyone to take an active part in protecting animals.
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Li Hua
【答案】
Dear fellow students,
I’m writing to call on everyone to take an active part in protecting animals.
Animals are an important part of our ecosystem. They maintain the ecological balance and provide various resources for us. Protecting them means protecting our own living environment.
There are many ways to protect animals. Firstly, we should raise our awareness and oppose any form of animal abuse. Secondly, we can support animal protection organizations and participate in volunteer activities. Thirdly, we can advocate for the establishment and improvement of relevant laws.
Let’s start from now on and do our bit to protect animals and respect life. Every small action counts.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于倡议书。要求考生围绕“保护动物,尊重生命”这一主题,阐述保护动物的重要性、保护动物的方法,并发出倡议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
重要部分:an important part → a significant component
维持:maintain → keep/sustain
反对:oppose → object to
参加:participate in → take part in
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Animals are an important part of our ecosystem.
拓展句:Animals, which play a crucial role in our daily lives, are an important part of our ecosystem.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Protecting them means protecting our own living environment. (运用了动名词作主语和宾语)
[高分句型2] Let’s start from now on and do our bit to protect animals and respect life.(运用了动词不定式作目的状语)。
Passage 2
题目要求:假如你是学生会主席李华,你校将举行主题为“Let’s go green now”的环保活动。请你用英文写一封倡议信,要点包括:
1. 倡导绿色生活的原因。
2. 你的建议 (至少三点)。
注意:词数80词左右;可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
Boys and girls,
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Students’ Union
Li Hua
【答案】
Boys and girls,
With the development of economy, the global climate is worsening. In order to raise students’ awareness of environmental protection, our school will hold a program “Let’s go green now”. I’m writing to call on everyone to participate in it .
Firstly, we can use public transportation or ride bicycles instead of driving private cars, which can make a great difference to our environment. Secondly, we should take full advantage of water, electricity, paper and so on. Last but not least, it is a good idea to classify our rubbish and recycle it in daily life.
Let’s make joint efforts to create a green and harmonious environment.
Students’ Union
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封倡议书,介绍学校即将举办的环保活动,号召大家绿色低碳生活。
【详解】1.词汇积累
意识:awareness→consciousness
参加:participate in→join in
利用:take full advantage of→make full use of
和谐的:harmonious→peaceful
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:With the development of economy, the global climate is worsening.
拓展句:As the economy develops, the global climate is getting worse.
【点睛】[高分句型 1] In order to raise students’ awareness of environmental protection, our school will hold a program “Let’s go green now”. (运用了in order to引导目的状语)
[高分句型 2] Firstly, we can use public transportation or ride bicycles instead of driving private cars, which can make a great difference to our environment. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)。
话题3 投稿
Passage 1
假定你是李华,你校英语报正在举办以“如何处理亲子紧张关系”为主题的征文比赛活动。请你写一篇文章参加比赛,内容包括:
1.亲子紧张关系产生的原因;
2.处理亲子紧张关系具体做法。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】
How Can Teenagers deal with Parent-child Tension?
Nowadays, there is more and more disagreement between teenagers and parents. In my opinion, parent-child tension often arises from a lack of understanding and communication. Teenagers may feel misunderstood by their parents, leading to conflicts.
To handle this tension, teenagers should communicate openly with their parents, expressing their feelings calmly and listening actively. It is also important for teenagers to try to understand their parents’ perspectives and show empathy. Additionally, setting aside quality time for family activities can help strengthen the bond and reduce misunderstandings.
I hope that children and parents can get along well with each other.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇短文参加校英文报正在举办的主题为“如何处理亲子紧张关系”的征文比赛。
【详解】1. 词汇积累:
导致:lead to→ result in
表达:express → convey
同情:empathy → compassion
增强:strengthen → enhance
2. 句式拓展:
简单句变成复杂句
原句:In my opinion, parent-child tension often arises from a lack of understanding and communication.
拓展句:I hold the belief that parent-child tension often arises from a lack of understanding and communication.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Teenagers may feel misunderstood by their parents, leading to conflicts. (运用了现在分词作结果状语)
【高分句型2】I hope that children and parents can get along well with each other. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)。
Passage 2
你校英文报Wise Words栏目正以 How Taking Advice Helped Me Grow为题征文,请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.你曾遇到的困难或挑战;
2.你寻求建议的经历和收获。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
How Taking Advice Helped Me Grow
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【答案】
How Taking Advice Helped Me Grow
During my high school years, I struggled with math, finding it difficult to keep up with the class. Frustrated, I sought advice from my teacher. She suggested I practice daily and focus on understanding concepts rather than just memorizing. Following her advice, I gradually improved and gained confidence. Not only did my math scores soar, but I also developed a deeper appreciation for the subject. This experience taught me the value of seeking help and the power of perseverance, reinforcing the idea that with the right guidance and effort, any obstacle can be overcome.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生围绕“How Taking Advice Helped Me Grow”这一主题,叙述自己曾遇到的困难或挑战,以及寻求建议的经历和收获。
【详解】1.词汇积累
挣扎,努力:struggle → wrestle/endeavor
沮丧的:frustrated → disappointed/depressed
建议:advice → suggestion/proposal
坚持不懈:perseverance → persistence
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:During my high school years, I struggled with math, finding it difficult to keep up with the class.
拓展句:During my high school years, as I was struggling with math, I found it increasingly difficult to keep pace with my classmates.
【点睛】[高分句型1] She suggested I practice daily and focus on understanding concepts rather than just memorizing. (运用了省略连词that的宾语从句和虚拟语气)
[高分句型2] Following her advice, I gradually improved and gained confidence. (运用了现在分词短语作状语)
[高分句型3] This experience taught me the value of seeking help and the power of perseverance, reinforcing the idea that with the right guidance and effort, any obstacle can be overcome. (运用了现在分词短语作状语和连词that引导的同位语从句)。
Passage 3
假设你是高一年级学生李明,国庆假期后学校安排高一年级集体前往上海东方绿舟(Oriental Land)进行了为期一周的封闭式军训。请写一篇文章,给校报“My Impressive Military Training Experience”板块投稿,内容需包括:
● 军训过程中让你印象深刻的活动;
● 该活动后你的感受。
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【答案】
During the National Day holiday, our school organized a week-long military training at Oriental Land for all senior one students. One activity that left a deep impression on me was the team obstacle course.
This challenging course required our team to climb walls, crawl under nets, and carry heavy loads. It was tough, and at times, I felt like giving up. However, the encouragement and support from my teammates motivated me to push through. In the end, we completed the course together, which taught me the importance of teamwork and perseverance.
After this activity, I realized that I am capable of much more than I originally thought. The experience boosted my confidence and made me appreciate the strength found in unity. It was truly memorable and has left a lasting impact on me.
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。国庆假期后学校安排高一年级集体前往上海东方绿舟(Oriental Land)进行了为期一周的封闭式军训,要求考生以“My Impressive Military Training Experience”为题写一篇作文投稿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累:
难忘的:memorable→ unforgettable
活动:activity → event
激励:motivate→ stimulate
完成:complete → accomplish
2. 句式拓展:
同义句替换
原句:One activity that left a deep impression on me was the team obstacle course.
拓展句:What left a deep impression on me was the team obstacle course.
【点睛】[高分句型1]After this activity, I realized that I am capable of much more than I originally thought.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]In the end, we completed the course together, which taught me the importance of teamwork and perseverance.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
话题4 观点看法
Passage 1
现在城市里有很多家庭请家政服务(housekeeping service),请你对此现象发表你的看法。内容必须包括:
◆概述城市里有很多家庭请家政服务现象
◆此现象对家庭和社会产生的影响
◆你对此现象的看法
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【答案】We can often see reports that the housekeeping industry is in a state of shortage, which shows more and more people hire housekeeping.
This phenomenon has various effects on the family and society. First, housekeeping can save time to do other things. Office workers increasingly need the help of housekeeping services to help them save from tedious household chores and devote themselves to meaningful things.
Secondly, it helps to reduce family conflicts and promote family harmony. Housekeeping can help young couples maintain family relations and reduce family conflicts after forming a new family.
Finally, housekeeping can also bring convenience to parents. Due to the particularity of work, such as doctors, traffic police may not be able to go home during the New Year. In this case, it is a good choice to find a domestic helper or occasionally call an hourly worker.
Therefore, I think the housekeeping service is necessary.
【导语】本文是一篇说明文。要求考生针对城市很多家庭请家政服务现象进行概述,分析这一现象对家庭和社会产生的印象,以及考生对此的看法。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
表明:show →indicate
产生影响:have effects on →have influence on
由于:due to →because of
选择:choice→option
2. 句式拓展
原句:Housekeeping can help young couples maintain family relations and reduce family conflicts after forming a new family.
拓展句:Housekeeping can help young couples maintain family relations and reduce family conflicts after they have formed a new family.
【点睛】【高分句型1】We can often see reports that the housekeeping industry is in a state of shortage, which shows more and more people hire housekeeping.(运用了that引导同位语从句,运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Secondly, it helps to reduce family conflicts and promote family harmony.(运用了动词不定式作宾语)
Passage 2
假设你是明启中学高三学生李华,学校学生会近日打算策划一次促进学生心理健康的活动,并向全校同学征集活动方案。请向学生会投稿,给出你的活动创意和如此设计的原因。
注意:作文中不得出现你本人的姓名、班级及学校等真实信息。
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【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I am glad to hear that the Student Union is planning an activity to promote students’ mental health recently. I am writing to make some suggestions of my own.
We can organize a lecture on mental health counseling. We can invite mental health education experts to give theme lectures to help students learn to express themselves in an appropriate way, enhance their sense of gratitude, and understand how to communicate. I think that in this way, we will face others with optimism, humor and positive attitude, improve interpersonal communication ability and establish a positive and harmonious “sunshine attitude”. Besides, we can conduct on-site psychological counseling activities. Provide on-site answers to students’ psychological problems and confusion encountered in daily life through face-to-face consultation.
I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生向学生会投稿,提出你对促进学生心理健康的活动的创意并介绍原因。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad→happy
建议:suggestion→advice
此外:besides→what’s more
有帮助的:helpful→useful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Besides, we can conduct on-site psychological counseling activities.
拓展句:Besides, we can conduct on-site psychological counseling activities, which can help students solve existing problems.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am glad to hear that the Student Union is planning an activity to promote students’ mental health recently.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】I think that in this way, we will face others with optimism, humor and positive attitude, improve interpersonal communication ability and establish a positive and harmonious “sunshine attitude”.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
Passage 3
假定你是李华,你的朋友吴磊邀请了5位朋友下周末参加他在家里举办的阅读马拉松活动 (readathon)。他非常需要朋友们的建议来帮助他设计活动并做好各项准备工作。请给他写一封信,提出你的想法和意见。
以下内容仅作参考:
阅读马拉松(readathon)是一项专注于阅读的活动或比赛,通常具有特定的目标或挑战,以个人或团队为单位进行。活动可以结合对阅读速度和质量的考察,采取多种形式展开。例如:阅读规定数量的书籍、持续阅读特定的时长,或者阅读某一特定主题的书籍等等。
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【答案】Dear Wu Lei,
I have heard that you will hold a readathon, which is an activity or race that focuses on reading, usually with a specific goal or challenge, and is conducted individually or as a team. I am delighted to give you some advice on the activity.
From my point of view, the activity can focus on the examination of the speed and quality of reading, so we can design some tests to check speed and quality, for instance, finishing reading a book or a passage within specific time. Besides, we can read a book with given topic, then share what we have gained from the book. The activity of reading can be taken in many forms. First, our members can be divided into groups and read together. Then, we can let each member read individually and share their opinion.
These are my advice for the activity. I hope they will be helpful for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给吴磊写封信,对于他将在家里举办的阅读马拉松活动提出想法和意见。
【详解】1.词汇积累
专注于:focus on→ concentrate on
建议:advice→ suggestion
此外:besides→ in addition
有帮助的:helpful→ beneficial
2.句式拓展
同意句转换
原句:Besides, we can read a book with given topic, then share what we have gained from the book.
拓展句:Besides, we can read a book that has a given topic, then share what we have gained from the book.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I have heard that you will hold a readathon, which is an activity or race that focuses on reading, usually with a specific goal or challenge, and is conducted individually or as a team.(运用了that引导的宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Besides, we can read a book with given topic, then share what we have gained from the book.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)
话题5 建议信
Passage 1
假设你是明启中学的学生,学校将在暑假期间重新装修图书馆,校报正在开展英语征文活动,题目为“Small changes make an ideal school library”。你有意投稿,撰写一篇文章,内容包括:
1.描述你希望图书馆发生的1~2个变化
2.说明你的理由
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Small Changes Make an Ideal School Library
As a student of Mingqi High School, I am excited about the upcoming renovation of our library during the summer vacation. Among the many potential improvements, I particularly envision two important changes. Firstly, I hope to see more comfortable seating arrangements, including sofas and beanbags, to create a cozy reading environment. Secondly, I propose introducing a digital reading zone with computers and tablets, enabling students to access e-books and online resources effortlessly.
These changes are crucial because they directly enhance the student experience. Comfortable seating encourages longer reading sessions, fostering a deeper engagement with books. Meanwhile, the digital reading zone caters to the modern learning trends, making it easier for students to access information beyond the physical shelves. With these small yet impactful adjustments, our library will transform into an ideal learning hub that meets the needs of both traditional and digital learners.
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇开放性作文。要求考生以“Small changes make an ideal school library”为题,写一篇文章投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
首先:firstly→to begin with
许多的:many→a number of
重要的:important→significant
加强:enhance→strengthen
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Firstly, I hope to see more comfortable seating arrangements, including sofas and beanbags, to create a cozy reading environment.
拓展句:Firstly, I hope to see more comfortable seating arrangements, which include sofas and beanbags, to create a cozy reading environment.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
These changes are crucial because they directly enhance the student experience.(运用了because引导原因状语从句)
[高分句型2]
With these small yet impactful adjustments, our library will transform into an ideal learning hub that meets the needs of both traditional and digital learners.(运用了that引导定语从句)
Passage 2
假设你是李华,你在广州留学的英国朋友Peter打算到莆田进行为期一周的旅游,给你发邮件询问去莆田的交通方式及莆田的景点,请你回复邮件,内容包括:
1. 推荐从广州到莆田的交通工具;
2. 推荐莆田的两三个景点及理由。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Peter,
I’m thrilled to hear about your trip to Putian! For transportation, taking a direct flight from Guangzhou is highly recommended. Though slightly more expensive, it saves your precious time (only 1.5 hours) and ensures a comfortable journey.
When exploring Putian, do visit Meizhou Island, the sacred birthplace of Mazu culture, where breathtaking coastal scenery merges with spiritual heritage. Another highlight is Jiulihu Waterfall, famed for its crystal-clear lakes and poetic rock formations, often compared to a miniature Guilin. These sites perfectly capture Putian’s cultural and natural charm.
Wish you an unforgettable adventure!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份,针对英国朋友Peter打算到莆田旅游询问交通方式及景点一事进行回复,内容需包含推荐的交通方式和莆田的两三个景点及理由。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
推荐:recommend → suggest
珍贵的:precious → valuable
神圣的:sacred → holy
迷人的:breathtaking → fascinating
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:For transportation, taking a direct flight from Guangzhou is highly recommended.
拓展句:For transportation, it is highly recommended that you take a direct flight from Guangzhou, which can save you a lot of time.
【点睛】[高分句型1] When exploring Putian, do visit Meizhou Island, the sacred birthplace of Mazu culture, where breathtaking coastal scenery merges with spiritual heritage. (运用了省略的时间状语从句和关系副词where引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] Another highlight is Jiulihu Waterfall, famed for its crystal clear lakes and poetic rock formations, often compared to a miniature Guilin. (运用了过去分词短语作后置定语)
Passage 3
假如你是高一学生李华,近日你的英国好友Fiona发来邮件说她与母亲之间发生了一点不愉快,因为她最近加入了校舞蹈社团,经常回家很晚,她母亲对此很生气,希望她退出社团。请你用英语给她回一封邮件,宽慰她并为她提供一些改善母女关系的建议。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Fiona,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Fiona,
I’m sorry to hear that your relationship with your mother has been difficult recently. But I can totally understand your feelings. Here are my suggestions.
Firstly, it would be wise of you not to quarrel with your mother, as it won’t improve things, but only make things worse. You’d better have a face-to-face talk with your mother, which will enable both of you to understand each other better. In addition, I recommend that you go home with two or three reliable friends from the dancing club who live close to you. If necessary, give your mother a phone call before you are about to leave school to let her know you are safe.
I hope the above will be of help to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给英国好友Fiona写一封回信,宽慰她并为她提供一些改善母女关系的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
难的:difficult→tough
建议:suggestion→recommendation
安全的:safe→secure
对……有帮助:be of help→be beneficial to
2.句式拓展
复合句变成非谓语
原句:You’d better have a face-to-face talk with your mother, which will enable both of you to understand each other better.
拓展句:You’d better have a face-to-face talk with your mother, enabling both of you to understand each other better.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Firstly, it would be wise of you not to quarrel with your mother, as it won’t improve things, but only make things worse.(运用了it作形式主语,不定式作真正主语结构和as引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】In addition, I recommend that you go home with two or three reliable friends from the dancing club who live close to you. (运用了that引导的宾语从句包含虚拟语气省略should结构和who引导的限制性定语从句)。
话题6 个人经历
Passage 1
班会课上,吴老师向同学们介绍了成功的内在规律,以及成功与失败的辩证关系。请结合自己(或身边人)的成功事例,写一篇关于成功的短文。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】When it comes to success, most people will think about the great persons, such as Bill Gates and Ma Huateng, who are rich and powerful. There is no doubt that success is what we all hope for, because it can bring us a sense of pride and a good reputation. The moment we succeed, we always feel so proud. However, some failure can also make us lose heart.
Different people have different views towards success. Personally, I think success can be anything that a person achieves through effort. It can be something very simple, like cooking a nice meal for our family or friends after we have tried many times. On the other hand, it can also be something that takes a long time to achieve, such as achieving our academic goals.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇关于成功的短文。
【详解】1.词汇积累
富裕的:rich→wealthy
希望:hope → wish
不同的:different→various
实现:achieve→ realize
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:However, some failure can also make us lose heart.
拓展句:However, some failure, no matter how big or small, can also make us lose heart.
【点睛】【高分句型1】When it comes to success, most people will think about the great persons, such as Bill Gates and Ma Huateng, who are rich and powerful.(运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Personally, I think success can be anything that a person achieves through effort. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
Passage 2
假定你是李华,今年暑假你在北京颐和园做志愿者,为外国朋友做向导。请给你的朋友Amanda写一封邮件分享你的经历,内容包括:
1. 志愿活动;
2. 你的感想。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Amanda,
I hope this email finds you well.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Amanda,
I hope this email finds you well. This summer, I’ve been volunteering as a guide at the Summer Palace in Beijing. It’s been an amazing experience! I’ve been helping foreign friends explore this beautiful historical site, sharing stories and culture. Every day is filled with new encounters and fascinating conversations. The smiles and thanks I receive make it all worthwhile. I’ve also improved my English and gained a deeper understanding of different cultures. This opportunity has truly been enriching and rewarding. Wish you were here to join me!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份,给朋友Amanda写一封邮件,分享自己在北京颐和园做志愿者,为外国朋友做向导的经历。
【详解】1.词汇积累
了不起的:amazing → marvelous
帮助:help → assist
充满:be filled with → be full of
机会:opportunity → chance
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:I’ve been volunteering as a guide at the Summer Palace in Beijing. It’s been an amazing experience!
拓展句:I’ve been volunteering as a guide at the Summer Palace in Beijing, which has been an amazing experience!
【点睛】[高分句型1] The smiles and thanks I receive make it all worthwhile. (运用了省略关系代词的定语从句)
[高分句型2] Wish you were here to join me!(运用了省略连词that的宾语从句和虚拟语气)。
Passage 3
假定你是John Li,刚结束了为期一年的英国交换生项目。学校英语报邀请你写一篇英语文章,分享你的见闻。内容包括:
1.你的经历:
2.你的感受。
注意:
1.词数80左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
My Exchange Experience
My recent one-year exchange program in the UK was _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________
【答案】
My Exchange Experience
My recent one-year exchange program in the UK was truly a life-changing experience. I attended lectures, participated in seminars, and engaged in group discussions, all of which enriched my academic knowledge. Besides, I visited various historical landmarks, which deepened my understanding of British culture.
Living in a different country, I faced challenges like language barriers and cultural differences. However, these difficulties also brought me a sense of achievement as I gradually adapted. The program not only broadened my horizons but also made me more independent and confident. I am grateful for this opportunity and will cherish the memories forever.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生刚结束了为期一年的英国交换生项目。学校英语报邀请考生写一篇英语文章,分享自己的见闻。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加:participate in→take part in
各种各样的:various → a variety of
困难:challenge→difficulty
感激的:grateful→ appreciative
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:My recent one-year exchange program in the UK was truly a life-changing experience.
拓展句:My recent one-year exchange program in the UK was truly a life-changing experience, which leaves me deep impression.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I attended lectures, participated in seminars, and engaged in group discussions, all of which enriched my academic knowledge.(运用了介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Living in a different country, I faced challenges like language barriers and cultural differences.(运用了现在分词作状语的结构)。
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话题归纳·内容导航
话题1推荐信
话题4观点看法
话题2倡议书
话题5建议信
话题3投稿
话题6个人经历
话题通关·靶向提分
话题1推荐信
Passage 1
假设你是明启中学的学生李华,你校图书馆打算开展一次主题为“阅读的力量”的读书活动,现向全校学
生征集活动方案,写一封信给图书馆,推荐活动方案,内容须包括:
1.具体的活动安排;
2.活动的意义。
Passage 2
假设你是明启中学的高二学生李明,最近你校计划成立一个新社团,校学生会正在全校范围内征求意见。
两个备选社团分别为“流浪动物关爱社团(Homeless Animals Care Club)”和“民间艺术保护社团(Folk Arts
Protection Club)”。作为学校的一员,你决定写一封电子邮件,向学生会表达自己的想法。
你的邮件内容须包括:
1.你的选择;
2.你做出该选择的理由。
Passage 3
假如你叫李平。你的笔友WuLi听说你校正在提倡主动性学习,特来信询问有关情况。请你根据下表
信息,写一封回信,谈一谈提倡主动性学习前后的变化。
提倡主动性学习前
提倡主动性学习后
课堂
老师一直讲解课本,学生被动听讲、
老师提出问题,学生互相讨论或学生自己提出问题,一起讨
上
做笔记
论解决
丰富多彩的课外活动,如读自己感兴趣的书籍,去图书馆或
课后
需完成没完没了的作业
者上网查资料
参考词汇:主动性学习active learning
话题2倡议书
Passage 1
假设你是学生会主席李华,请你围绕“protect animals,respect life(保护动物,尊重生命)”的主题,写一封
英语倡议书,内容包括:
1.保护动物的重要性;
2.如何保护动物:
3.发出倡议。
注意:1开头已给出,词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear fellow students,
I'm writing to call on everyone to take an active part in protecting animals
Li Hua
Passage 2
题目要求:假如你是学生会主席李华,你校将举行主题为Let's go green now'的环保活动。请你用英文
写一封倡议信,要点包括:
1.倡导绿色生活的原因。
2.你的建议(至少三点)。
注意:词数80词左右;可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
Boys and girls.
Students'Union
Li Hua
话题3投稿
Passage 1
假定你是李华,你校英语报正在举办以“如何处理亲子紧张关系”为主题的征文比赛活动。请你写一篇文
章参加比赛,内容包括:
1亲子紧张关系产生的原因:
2.处理亲子紧张关系具体做法。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Passage 2
你校英文报Wise Words栏目正以How Taking Advice Helped Me Grow为题征文,请你用英语写一篇短
文投稿,内容包括:
1.你曾遇到的困难或挑战:
2.你寻求建议的经历和收获。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
How Taking Advice Helped Me Grow
Passage 3
假设你是高一年级学生李明,国庆假期后学校安排高一年级集体前往上海东方绿舟(Oriental Land)进
行了为期一周的封闭式军训。请写一篇文章,给校报y Impressive Military Training Experience”板块投稿,
内容需包括:
●军训过程中让你印象深刻的活动;
●
该活动后你的感受。
话题4观点看法
Passage 1
现在城市里有很多家庭请家政服务housekeeping service),请你对此现象发表你的看法。内容必须包括:
◆概述城市里有很多家庭请家政服务现象
◆此现象对家庭和社会产生的影响
◆你对此现象的看法
Passage 2
假设你是明启中学高三学生李华,学校学生会近日打算策划一次促进学生心理健康的活动,并向全校
同学征集活动方案。请向学生会投稿,给出你的活动创意和如此设计的原因。
注意:作文中不得出现你本人的姓名、班级及学校等真实信息。
Passage 3
假定你是李华,你的朋友吴磊邀请了5位朋友下周末参加他在家里举办的阅读马拉松活动(readathon)。
他非常需要朋友们的建议来帮助他设计活动并做好各项准备工作。请给他写一封信,提出你的想法和意见。
以下内容仅作参考:
阅读马拉松(readathon)是一项专注于阅读的活动或比赛,通常具有特定的目标或挑战,以个人或团队为单
位进行。活动可以结合对阅读速度和质量的考察,采取多种形式展开。例如:阅读规定数量的书籍、持
续阅读特定的时长,或者阅读某一特定主题的书籍等等。
话题5建议信
Passage 1
假设你是明启中学的学生,学校将在暑假期间重新装修图书馆,校报正在开展英语征文活动,题目为
“Small changes make an ideal school library'”。你有意投稿,撰写一篇文章,内容包括:
1.描述你希望图书馆发生的1~2个变化
2.说明你的理由
Passage 2
假设你是李华,你在广州留学的英国朋友Peter打算到莆田进行为期一周的旅游,给你发邮件询问去莆
田的交通方式及莆田的景点,请你回复邮件,内容包括:
1.推荐从广州到莆田的交通工具;
2.推荐莆田的两三个景点及理由。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(②)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 3
假如你是高一学生李华,近日你的英国好友Fiona发来邮件说她与母亲之间发生了一点不愉快,因为她
最近加入了校舞蹈社团,经常回家很晚,她母亲对此很生气,希望她退出社团。请你用英语给她回一封邮件,
宽慰她并为她提供一些改善母女关系的建议。
注意:
1.词数80左右
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Fiona,
Yours,
Li Hua
话题6个人经历
Passage 1
班会课上,吴老师向同学们介绍了成功的内在规律,以及成功与失败的辩证关系。请结合自己(或身
边人)的成功事例,写一篇关于成功的短文。
Passage 2
假定你是李华,今年暑假你在北京颐和园做志愿者,为外国朋友做向导。请给你的朋友Amanda写一封
邮件分享你的经历,内容包括:
1.志愿活动:
2.你的感想。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Amanda.
I hope this email finds you well.
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 3
假定你是John Li,刚结束了为期一年的英国交换生项目。学校英语报邀请你写一篇英语文章,分享你
的见闻。内容包括:
1.你的经历:
2.你的感受。
注意:
1.词数80左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
My Exchange Experience
My recent one-year exchange program in the UK was