2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习后院的足球与新友谊续写导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 When my brother Jake left for college, gone was the laughter that once filled our home. Jake wasn’t just my brother — he was my best friend and the one who always knew how to pull me out of my darkest moods. His absence left a huge hole in my life, and no amount of video calls or texts could fill it. Then came the news: Marco, an exchange student from Italy, would be staying in Jake’s room. “Marco? In Jake’s room?” I asked, my voice trembling. “But that’s his space.” My mom, trying to comfort me, said, “Marco’s excited to be here. You might even learn something new.” I wasn’t convinced. The idea felt like a betrayal (背叛), as if we were replacing Jake. When Marco arrived, he was nothing like I had expected. He was tall, with dark curly hair and a confident smile that seemed to light up the room. He greeted me with a cheerful “Hello!” and immediately started unpacking his things. I stood awkwardly in the doorway, watching as he transformed Jake’s room into his own space. Overwhelmed (不知所措的), I whispered a quick “Hi” and returned to my room. The first few days were tense. Marco, chatting with my parents about Naples, tried to include me, but I kept my distance. One evening, I overheard him talking about how much he missed playing soccer with his friends back home. “It’s not just a game,” he said. “It’s a way of life.” I rolled my eyes. Then, one Saturday afternoon, everything changed. My parents had to attend a wedding out of town, leaving Marco and me in the house. I busied myself with my own things in my room, trying to avoid any interaction. But around midday, Marco knocked on my door. “Hey, I’m going to play some soccer in the backyard. Want to join me?” he asked. I hesitated. Soccer had never been my thing — I was more of a basketball person. But the thought of sitting alone in my room all day didn’t sound appealing either. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Finally, I followed Marco into the backyard. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That day marked a turning point in my relationship with Marco. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 My brother Jake left for college, leaving me sad and empty→ _________________ →My parents told me an exchange student Marco would stay in Jake’s room→ _________________ →Marco arrived, I felt awkward and kept my distance from him→ _________________ →My parents left for a wedding, Marco invited me to play soccer in the backyard 4. 细节问答 Why did I feel sad after Jake left for college? ：___________________________________ How did I feel when I heard Marco would stay in Jake’s room?： _________________________________ What was Marco like when he arrived?： ________________________________________________ How did I get along with Marco in the first few days?： __________________________________________ What did Marco miss about his home?： _____________________________________________ Why did I hesitate to join Marco in playing soccer? _________________________________________________ What would happen when I played soccer with Marco? ________________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 哥哥Jake去上大学，我失去了最好的朋友，内心充满失落→_________________ →父母告知我，意大利交换生Marco会住进Jake的房间→_________________ →我觉得这是对Jake的背叛，内心抵触→Marco抵达，他开朗自信，但我很尴尬，刻意疏远他→_________________ →最初几天相处紧张，Marco试图靠近我，我始终保持距离→父母外出参加婚礼，Marco邀请我去后院踢足球，我有些犹豫→（续写）我跟着Marco去后院踢足球，逐渐放下戒备→（续写）这次相处成为我和Marco关系的转折点，我们成为朋友，我也走出了失落 6．情感线 I：sad and empty (after Jake left)→_________________ →resistant and angry (when hearing Marco would stay)→_________________ →awkward and distant (when Marco arrived)→_________________ →hesitant (when invited to play soccer)→_________________（续写） Marco：cheerful and confident→_________________ →kind and patient (trying to include me)→_________________ →friendly (inviting me to play soccer)→_________________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文： ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文： ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 温情成长类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Finally, I followed Marco into the backyard. 衔接句1——What did we do in the backyard? How did I feel during the process? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: That day marked a turning point in my relationship with Marco. 衔接句2——How did our relationship change? What did I gain from this friendship? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：Finally, I followed Marco into the backyard. →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：That day marked a turning point in my relationship with Marco. →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写 Finally, I followed Marco into the backyard. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That day marked a turning point in my relationship with Marco. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 I（重感情、内心敏感，因哥哥离开而失落，最终学会成长的孩子）；Marco（开朗自信、善良耐心、热情友好的意大利交换生）；Jake（“我”的哥哥，“我”最好的朋友，带给“我”欢乐）；父母（细心体贴，希望“我”能走出失落，接受新的朋友） 2．视角 第一人称 3．时空线 My brother Jake left for college, leaving me sad and empty→ Video calls and texts couldn’t fill the hole in my heart→My parents told me an exchange student Marco would stay in Jake’s room→ I felt betrayed and resistant to Marco→Marco arrived, I felt awkward and kept my distance from him→ Marco tried to include me but I refused to get close→My parents left for a wedding, Marco invited me to play soccer in the backyard 4. 细节问答 Why did I feel sad after Jake left for college? ：Because Jake was not just my brother, but also my best friend who could pull me out of dark moods, and his absence left a huge hole in my life. How did I feel when I heard Marco would stay in Jake’s room?：I felt betrayed, as if we were replacing Jake, and I was resistant and unhappy. What was Marco like when he arrived?：He was tall, with dark curly hair and a confident smile that could light up the room, and he was cheerful and friendly. How did I get along with Marco in the first few days?：The days were tense; Marco tried to include me, but I kept my distance from him. What did Marco miss about his home?：He missed playing soccer with his friends back home, which he thought was a way of life. Why did I hesitate to join Marco in playing soccer?：Because soccer had never been my thing — I preferred basketball, but I didn’t want to sit alone in my room all day. What would happen when I played soccer with Marco?：Marco taught me to play soccer gently, encouraged me, and we chatted happily, which made the tension fade away. What does the story tell us?：New friendships can heal sadness; change is not a betrayal but a chance to grow; being open-minded can bring new happiness. 5．情节线 哥哥Jake去上大学，我失去了最好的朋友，内心充满失落→视频通话和短信都无法填补我内心的空缺→父母告知我，意大利交换生Marco会住进Jake的房间→我觉得这是对Jake的背叛，内心抵触→Marco抵达，他开朗自信，但我很尴尬，刻意疏远他→最初几天相处紧张，Marco试图靠近我，我始终保持距离→父母外出参加婚礼，Marco邀请我去后院踢足球，我有些犹豫→（续写）我跟着Marco去后院踢足球，他耐心教我，我们边玩边聊天，紧张感逐渐消失，我重新感受到欢乐→（续写）这次相处成为我和Marco关系的转折点，我们成为好朋友，我走出了失落，学会接受变化、拥抱成长 6．情感线 I：sad and empty (after Jake left)→resistant and angry (when hearing Marco would stay)→awkward and distant (when Marco arrived)→hesitant (when invited to play soccer)→relaxed and happy (when playing soccer with Marco)（续写） Marco：cheerful and confident→kind and patient (trying to include me)→friendly (inviting me to play soccer)→warm and encouraging (teaching me to play soccer)（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：“我”的哥哥Jake去上大学后，“我”因失去最好的朋友而内心失落。父母安排意大利交换生Marco住进Jake的房间，“我”觉得这是一种背叛，刻意疏远Marco。直到一次父母外出，Marco邀请“我”踢足球，在相处中“我”放下戒备，两人成为好朋友，“我”也走出失落，学会接受变化、拥抱成长。 英文：After my brother Jake left for college, I felt sad and empty because I lost my best friend. My parents arranged for Marco, an exchange student from Italy, to stay in Jake’s room. I felt it was a betrayal and kept my distance from Marco. Until one day my parents went out, Marco invited me to play soccer. During our time together, I let go of my guard, we became good friends, and I got out of my sadness, learning to accept change and embrace growth. 8. 句式 宾语从句：I wasn’t convinced that Marco could make me feel better or that I could learn something new from him. 定语从句：Jake wasn’t just my brother — he was my best friend and the one who always knew how to pull me out of my darkest moods. 状语从句：When Marco arrived, he was nothing like I had expected. 非谓语：Overwhelmed, I whispered a quick “Hi” and returned to my room. 并列句：Soccer had never been my thing — I was more of a basketball person, but the thought of sitting alone in my room all day didn’t sound appealing either. 9. 本文主题 温情成长类：友谊具有治愈力量，能填补内心的空缺；学会放下抵触、敞开心扉，接受生活中的变化，才能收获新的快乐与成长。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Finally, I followed Marco into the backyard. 衔接句1——What did we do in the backyard? How did I feel during the process?Marco taught me to play soccer gently, encouraged me when I made mistakes, and we chatted happily; I felt relaxed and forgot my sadness temporarily. Paragraph 2: That day marked a turning point in my relationship with Marco. 衔接句2——How did our relationship change? What did I gain from this friendship?We became good friends, and Marco filled the empty space in my heart; I learned to let go of sadness and embrace new happiness and growth. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：Finally, I followed Marco into the backyard. →①Marco递给我足球，耐心教我踢足球的基本动作→②我起初笨拙出错，感到尴尬，但Marco一直鼓励我，为我的小进步欢呼→③我们边玩边聊天，分享彼此的故事，之前的紧张感渐渐消失，我也笑了起来； 第二段：That day marked a turning point in my relationship with Marco. →④我们成为了好朋友，经常一起踢足球，分享喜怒哀乐→⑤Marco没有取代Jake，而是以他自己的方式填补了我内心的空缺→⑥我学会放下失落，敞开心扉，明白变化不是背叛，而是成长和收获新快乐的机会。 四.段落续写 Finally, I followed Marco into the backyard. He handed me a soccer ball, patience in his eyes, and taught me the basics gently. At first, I stumbled and missed many passes, feeling embarrassed. But Marco never laughed at me; instead, he encouraged me and celebrated every small progress I made. As we played, we chatted — he told me about his home in Naples, and I shared my memories with Jake. The tension between us faded away, and I even found myself laughing again. That day marked a turning point in my relationship with Marco. We became good friends, often playing soccer together and sharing our joys and worries. Marco didn’t replace Jake; instead, he filled the empty space in my heart in his own way. I learned to let go of my sadness and embrace new friendships. Through Marco, I realized that change isn’t always a betrayal, but a chance to grow and find new happiness. | 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $