2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---邻里情暖，冰雪消融 导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Mark and Daniel were next-door neighbors. Every summer, the two families held backyard barbecues together, with Mark bringing homemade dumplings and Daniel’s wife preparing her famous cakes. During holidays, they exchanged small but thoughtful gifts. One June, Mark began building a new garden shed to store his tools. He hired a construction team that worked quickly but not carefully. Large wooden boards and sharp nails were piled dangerously close to Daniel’s fence. Daniel noticed that and warned the workers to be more careful, but the warning was brushed off. Then it happened. A sudden summer storm hit the town. Strong winds knocked over the pile of wood. The damage to Daniel’s garden was awful—his wife’s prized rose bushes, which she had been nurturing (培育) for over fifteen years, were crushed and destroyed. She was heartbroken. Failing to comfort her, Daniel stormed over to Mark’s house, demanding an apology and help with the repairs. But Mark, who had just returned from work and was tired and stressed, felt wrongly accused. “It’s not on purpose,” he said sharply. “You can’t blame me for the weather.” “But it wouldn’t have happened if your workers had listened!” Daniel argued. Voices were raised, fingers pointed, and neither side was willing to back down. That day, a long-standing friendship cracked under pressure. From then on, they stopped greeting each other and even avoided eye contact. Days passed. Seasons changed. But the cold silence remained. Winter came. One day, Daniel caught a glimpse of Mark and noticed he was in a wheelchair with a cast (石膏) on his leg. Daniel hesitated about going over but his feet remained. A heavy snowstorm quietly arrived that night, blanketing the neighborhood in thick, icy snow. When morning came, driveways were buried, and doors were nearly frozen shut. Men came out of their houses to clear the driveways. By the window Mark looked at his broken leg and sighed, “My responsibility! But now there’s no chance for me to make it.” At noon, Daniel noticed Mark’s driveway was still covered with thick snow. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150个左右。 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Daniel decided to help. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ A snow-cleared driveway appeared before Mark and his family. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 Mark and Daniel were next-door neighbors (got along well)--- _________________ --- Mark’s workers piled wood dangerously, Daniel’s warning was ignored--- _________________ --- a storm destroyed Daniel’s rose bushes, the two had a quarrel--- _________________ --- their friendship broke, they avoided each other--- Mark got injured and sat in a wheelchair--- a heavy snowstorm hit, Mark couldn’t clear his driveway--- Daniel noticed Mark’s uncleared driveway 4. 细节问答 What was the relationship between Mark and Daniel at first? ：___________________________________ What did Mark do in June?：_________________________________ Why were Daniel’s rose bushes destroyed?：________________________________________________ Why did Mark and Daniel quarrel?：__________________________________________ What happened to their friendship after the quarrel?：_____________________________________________ What happened to Mark in winter?_________________________________________________ What did Daniel notice at noon after the snowstorm?：________________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 Mark和Daniel是邻居，相处融洽→_________________ →Mark建花园棚屋，工人粗心堆放木材，无视Daniel的警告→_________________ →暴风雨摧毁Daniel妻子的玫瑰丛，两人争吵不休→他们的友谊破裂，互不往来→冬天Mark受伤坐上轮椅→一场暴风雪来袭，Mark无法清理车道→Daniel注意到Mark未清理的车道→（续写）Daniel决定伸出援手→（续写）车道被清理干净，两人重归于好 6．情感线 Daniel：friendly→___________→angry and upset→___________→hesitant→___________（续写） Mark：friendly→___________→wronged and stressed→___________→helpless→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式（写出文中对应的例句） 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 温情邻里类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Daniel decided to help. 衔接句1——What did Daniel do to help? How did he feel?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: A snow-cleared driveway appeared before Mark and his family. 衔接句2——How did Mark react? What happened to their friendship?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：Daniel决定伸出援手。→①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； Daniel decided to help. Putting aside their past quarrel, he took his snow shovel and walked to Mark’s driveway. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 第二段：一条清理干净的车道出现在Mark和他的家人面前。→④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 A snow-cleared driveway appeared before Mark and his family. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 Daniel（重情重义、懂得包容的邻居）；Mark（疏忽大意但知错能改的邻居）；Daniel’s wife（珍视玫瑰、重感情的人） 2．视角 第三人称 3．时空线 Mark and Daniel were next-door neighbors (got along well)--- Mark began building a garden shed and hired careless workers--- Mark’s workers piled wood dangerously, Daniel’s warning was ignored--- a sudden summer storm knocked over the wood, destroying Daniel’s rose bushes--- a storm destroyed Daniel’s rose bushes, the two had a quarrel--- their friendship broke, they avoided each other--- Mark got injured and sat in a wheelchair--- a heavy snowstorm hit, Mark couldn’t clear his driveway--- Daniel noticed Mark’s uncleared driveway 4. 细节问答 What was the relationship between Mark and Daniel at first? ：They were next-door neighbors and got along well. What did Mark do in June?：He began building a new garden shed to store his tools and hired a careless construction team. Why were Daniel’s rose bushes destroyed?：A sudden summer storm knocked over the wood piled by Mark’s workers, which crushed the rose bushes. Why did Mark and Daniel quarrel?：Daniel demanded an apology and help with repairs because of the destroyed rose bushes, but Mark felt wrongly accused and refused to take responsibility. What happened to their friendship after the quarrel?：Their friendship cracked; they stopped greeting each other and avoided eye contact. What happened to Mark in winter?：He got injured, had a cast on his leg and had to sit in a wheelchair. What did Daniel notice at noon after the snowstorm?：He noticed Mark’s driveway was still covered with thick snow. What does the story tell us?：Friendship is precious; forgiveness and kindness can mend broken relationships, and neighbors should help each other. 5．情节线 Mark和Daniel是邻居，相处融洽→Mark六月开始建花园棚屋，雇佣了粗心的工人→Mark建花园棚屋，工人粗心堆放木材，无视Daniel的警告→暴风雨来袭，木材被吹倒，摧毁了Daniel妻子培育多年的玫瑰丛→暴风雨摧毁Daniel妻子的玫瑰丛，两人争吵不休→他们的友谊破裂，互不往来→冬天Mark受伤坐上轮椅→一场暴风雪来袭，Mark无法清理车道→Daniel注意到Mark未清理的车道→（续写）Daniel决定伸出援手，拿起铲子帮Mark清理车道→（续写）车道被清理干净，两人道歉和解，友谊重燃 6．情感线 Daniel：friendly→worried→angry and upset→hesitant→kind and forgiving（续写） Mark：friendly→careless→wronged and stressed→helpless→grateful and regretful（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：Mark和Daniel原本是相处融洽的邻居，因Mark雇佣的工人粗心堆放木材，暴风雨摧毁了Daniel妻子的玫瑰丛，两人争吵后友谊破裂。冬天Mark受伤致残，暴风雪后无法清理车道，Daniel放下芥蒂伸出援手，两人最终和解，友谊重燃。 英文：Mark and Daniel were once good next-door neighbors. Because Mark’s careless workers piled wood dangerously, a storm destroyed Daniel’s wife’s rose bushes, and their friendship broke after a quarrel. In winter, Mark was injured and couldn’t clear his driveway after a snowstorm. Daniel put aside their differences to help him, and they finally made up, rekindling their friendship. 8. 句式（写出文中对应的例句） 宾语从句：He noticed he was in a wheelchair with a cast on his leg. 定语从句：Daniel’s wife’s prized rose bushes, which she had been nurturing for over fifteen years, were crushed and destroyed. 状语从句：When morning came, driveways were buried, and doors were nearly frozen shut. 非谓语：Putting aside their past quarrel, he took his snow shovel and walked to Mark’s driveway. 并列句：Voices were raised, fingers pointed, and neither side was willing to back down. 9. 本文主题 温情邻里类：邻里之间应互帮互助、彼此包容，珍惜友谊，一句道歉、一次援手，就能化解矛盾，重获温暖。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Daniel decided to help. 衔接句1——What did Daniel do to help? How did he feel?：Daniel took his snow shovel to clear Mark’s driveway, putting aside their quarrel; he felt calm and determined to mend their friendship. Paragraph 2: A snow-cleared driveway appeared before Mark and his family. 衔接句2——How did Mark react? What happened to their friendship?：Mark was shocked and grateful, apologized to Daniel; the two made up and their friendship was reborn. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：Daniel决定伸出援手。→①Daniel放下过去的矛盾，拿起雪铲走向Mark的车道→②雪又厚又冰，清理起来很困难，但他没有放弃→③他一边铲雪，一边回忆两人过去的美好时光，怒气渐渐消散； Daniel decided to help. Putting aside their past quarrel and all the unhappiness between them, he took his snow shovel and walked quietly to Mark’s driveway. The snow was thick and icy, sticking tightly to the ground, making it extremely hard to clear. But he kept working silently, wiping the sweat from his forehead from time to time. He thought of their old days of warm backyard barbecues and thoughtful holiday gifts, and the anger in his heart gradually faded away. He kept shoveling persistently until his hands were numb and red, 第二段：一条清理干净的车道出现在Mark和他的家人面前。→④Mark看到后又惊又喜，感动得落泪，主动向Daniel道歉→⑤Daniel原谅了Mark，两人解开了心结→⑥他们的友谊在雪中重燃，恢复了往日的融洽。 determined to help Mark out of his helpless situation. A snow-cleared driveway appeared before Mark and his family. Mark looked out the window, his eyes wide with shock and soon filled with tears of gratitude. He wheeled himself out slowly, walked up to Daniel, and thanked him sincerely, also apologizing for his rudeness and stubbornness during their quarrel. Daniel smiled gently and patted his shoulder, saying they were neighbors and old friends after all. The cold silence that had lasted for months between them melted away in the warm atmosphere, and their long-standing friendship was reborn in the white snow, as warm as before. | 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $