Unit 3 Period 4 Writing(Word教参)-【学霸笔记·同步精讲】2025-2026学年高中英语选择性必修第一册(外研版)
Period 4 Writing
主题引领 情境写作
写作一 应用文写作(描写运动时刻的记叙文)
典例呈现
上个月,你校举行了运动会。你班同学李华报名参加了3 000米长跑,他在运动会中的表现让全班非常钦佩。请你用英语为校报写一篇短文。内容包括:
1.赛场上的情景;
2.你的简短评论。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右。
2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
参考词汇:报名参加(enter)
Step 1 审题谋篇
Step 2 遣词造句
巧妙对接单元词汇
1._ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ n. 队友
[答案]teammate
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2._ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 超出某人的预期
[答案]beyond one's expectations
3._ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ n. 自信
[答案]self-belief
4._ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ adj. 非凡的;不寻常的
[答案]remarkable
5._ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ n. (竞争、比赛等的)对手
[答案]opponent
6._ _ _ _ _ _ v. 战胜,打败
[答案]defeat
巧用单元句式、语法
[第一段] 简单介绍比赛项目
1.上个月,我们学校举行了一次运动会。我的同学李华报名参加了3 000米长跑比赛。
Last month, our school held a sports meeting. My classmate Li Hua, _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ .
[答案]entered the 3,000-metre long-distance race
[第二段] 详细介绍比赛过程
2.当那天到来的时候,李华站在起跑线上,看上去充满自信。[现在分词(短语)作状语]
When the day came, Li Hua stood at the starting line, _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ .
[答案]looking full of self-belief
3.在比赛开始时,他领先于其他对手。
At the beginning of the race,he was ahead of _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ .
[答案]other opponents
4.不幸的是,离终点300米左右时,他摔倒了,左脚受了重伤。
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Unfortunately,he _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ around 300 meters away from the finish line and his left foot was badly hurt.
[答案]fell down when he was
5.他奋力前进,超出我们预期地完成了比赛。
He _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ and finished the race _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ .
[答案]fought his way; beyond our expectations
[第三段] 表达自己的感受
6.他没有打败其他选手赢得比赛。
He didn't _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ and win the race.
[答案]defeat others
7.他因他的坚持和勇敢而变得非比寻常。
He was _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ .
[答案]remarkable for his persistence and courage
靓化表达促提升
8.用让步状语从句合并句6和句7
_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _
[答案]Though/Although/While he didn't defeat others and win the race, he was remarkable for his persistence and courage.
Step 3 衔接成篇
[答案]
One possible version:
Last month,our school held a sports meeting. My classmate,Li Hua,entered the 3,000-metre long-distance race.
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