2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---失去右腿后的温暖救赎 导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Losing my entire right leg at 32 was going to be hard. I knew that. But two weeks before my biopsy （活检） results came in, I had a dream that my life on one leg would be filled with purpose, moving forward bravely and even fore-seeing the birth of a second son. I didn’t tell anyone about the dream. I simply wrote these words in my journal: “I know I am going to lose my leg, and it’s going to be okay.” That dream was so vivid and reassuring that I walked into the doctor’s office calmly and acceptably. It was December 22, 1987, and he wanted to operate before Christmas. I calmly asked if he could promise me another Christmas, “I want to spend Christmas and New Year with my family. And I want one more night of dancing on two legs with my husband. I’ve checked my calendar, and I’m free on January 6th. Will that work for you?” His mouth opened, but no words came out. Finally, he nodded, “I’ll make that work.” After surgery, I recovered at a health centre, struggling with terrible pain and trying to regain my strength. One day, I decided to walk to a nearby store to buy myself some chocolate bars. Using my walking stick, I made my way to the candy aisle and noticed a tall man nearby. He was fixing a shelf and seemed to be observing me with a gentle expression. He looked like a worker there, wearing a uniform and holding a toolbox. When I tried to push open the door to leave, nothing happened. The door was too heavy. I looked up as hopelessness washed over me. “Really? Is this what my life on one leg will be like?” Tears came to my eyes as frustration and sadness built inside me. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 During that moment of absolute helplessness, the man approached me. His kindness gave me courage to face the hard days ahead. 一、文本分析 1．角色： _________________________________________________________________ 2. 视角： 第__________________________人称视角 3．时空线： 32岁的“我”被确诊需要截肢，术前做了一个充满希望的梦，坚定了面对的勇气，说服医生推迟手术，与家人共度圣诞和新年；术后“我”在康复中心努力恢复，忍受剧痛，某天拄着拐杖去附近商店买巧克力，尝试推门离开时因门太重而陷入无助，流下眼泪，此时商店里的陌生工人向“我”走来→（续写）___________________________________________ 4．情感线 “我”：术前因梦境而平静接受截肢事实→术后忍受剧痛、努力康复→独自去商店时的坚持→推门失败后的无助、沮丧、落泪→（续写）得到帮助后的温暖、感动→重拾勇气，坚定面对未来。 陌生工人：___________________________ 医生：___________________________ 5．文章大意概括 中文： ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文： ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．句式示例（补充） 宾语从句、状语从句、神态描写、心理描写各1句： _________________________________________________________________ 二、情节构造 1. 第一段提示句：During that moment of absolute helplessness, the man approached me. 衔接句 1—— 对 “互动场景” 提问：陌生工人靠近“我”时的神态、动作是什么？他说了什么、做了什么？“我”的反应如何？ 衔接句 2—— 对 “过渡作用” 提问：这段互动如何为第二段“重拾勇气”做铺垫？陌生工人的善意如何影响“我”的心态？ 过渡逻辑：请说明第一段续写内容如何为第二段“His kindness gave me courage”做铺垫：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 第二段提示句：His kindness gave me courage to face the hard days ahead. 衔接句 1—— 对 “情感回升” 提问：“我”得到帮助后，心态发生了怎样的变化？如何体现“重拾勇气”？ 衔接句 2—— 对 “主题升华” 提问：这段续写如何呼应“困境中的善意与勇气”这一主题？ 主题： ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三、段落构思 第一段（During that moment of absolute helplessness, the man approached me.） 写作思路：①描写陌生工人靠近时的神态、动作；②刻画工人的语言、行为（帮助“我”推门、安慰“我”）；③描写“我”的反应（惊讶、感动、情绪缓解）；④为第二段“重拾勇气”做铺垫。 续写： ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 第二段（His kindness gave me courage to face the hard days ahead.） 写作思路：①描写“我”心态的转变（从无助到坚定）；②刻画“我”之后的行动（更加努力康复、积极面对生活）；③呼应开头的梦境，凸显“勇敢前行”的主题；④可加入细节体现善意的影响。 续写： ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色： “我”（32岁，截肢患者，乐观且有韧性，被梦境赋予勇气，术后经历无助但最终重拾信心）、陌生工人（善良、温和、细心，用微小的善意温暖他人）、医生（通情达理，尊重患者的意愿）。 2. 视角： 第一人称视角 3．时空线： 32岁的“我”被确诊需要截肢，术前做了一个充满希望的梦，坚定了面对的勇气，说服医生推迟手术，与家人共度圣诞和新年；术后“我”在康复中心努力恢复，忍受剧痛，某天拄着拐杖去附近商店买巧克力，尝试推门离开时因门太重而陷入无助，流下眼泪；陌生工人主动上前帮助“我”，用温柔的话语安慰“我”；“我”被这份善意打动，重拾勇气，更加坚定地面对术后的艰难生活，努力康复，拥抱新生活。 4．情感线 “我”：术前因梦境而平静接受截肢事实→术后忍受剧痛、努力康复（坚韧）→独自去商店时的坚持（渴望回归正常生活）→推门失败后的无助、沮丧、落泪（困境中的脆弱）→得到陌生工人帮助后的温暖、感动→重拾勇气，坚定面对未来（成长与蜕变）。 陌生工人：温和、细心、善良，不张扬，用微小的行动传递善意，默默温暖困境中的“我”。 医生：通情达理，尊重患者的情感需求，愿意配合患者推迟手术，体现人文关怀。 5．文章大意概括 中文：32岁的“我”被确诊需要截肢，术前做了一个充满希望的梦，让“我”平静接受了这一事实，并说服医生推迟手术，与家人共度圣诞和新年。术后“我”在康复中心忍受剧痛、努力恢复，某天拄着拐杖去附近商店买巧克力，离开时因推不动沉重的门而陷入无助、落泪。此时商店的陌生工人主动上前帮助“我”，并用温柔的话语安慰“我”。这份善意让“我”重拾勇气，坚定地面对术后的艰难生活，努力康复，最终学会拥抱新生活，明白困境中总有善意相伴。 英文：At the age of 32, I was diagnosed with the need for amputation. Two weeks before the biopsy results came out, I had a vivid dream that gave me the courage to accept the fact calmly. I persuaded the doctor to postpone the surgery so that I could spend Christmas and New Year with my family. After the operation, I struggled with severe pain in the health center and tried to regain my strength. One day, I walked to a nearby store with a walking stick to buy chocolate bars. When I tried to push the heavy door to leave, I felt helpless and burst into tears. A stranger who worked in the store approached me, helped me open the door, and comforted me with kind words. His kindness gave me the courage to face the difficult days ahead. I worked harder in rehabilitation, learned to embrace my new life, and realized that there is always kindness around even in hardship. 6．句式示例 宾语从句：I knew that losing my entire right leg at 32 was going to be hard. 状语从句：When I tried to push open the door to leave, nothing happened. 神态描写：He looked like a worker there, wearing a uniform and holding a toolbox, with a gentle expression on his face. 心理描写：I looked up as hopelessness washed over me. “Really? Is this what my life on one leg will be like?” 二、情节构造 1. 第一段提示句：During that moment of absolute helplessness, the man approached me. 衔接句 1—— 对 “互动场景” 提问：陌生工人靠近“我”时，神态温和、动作轻柔，没有丝毫敷衍，他没有过多询问“我”的情况，而是先默默帮忙推门，再用温暖的话语安慰“我”；“我”的反应从惊讶、无助，逐渐变得平静、感动，眼泪渐渐止住，内心的沮丧被善意融化。 衔接句 2—— 对 “过渡作用” 提问：这段互动让“我”感受到了陌生人的善意，打破了“我”对“截肢后生活充满无助”的认知，为第二段“重拾勇气、积极面对”做了铺垫，让“我”明白，即使身处困境，也会有温暖相伴，从而坚定了面对未来的决心。 过渡逻辑：第一段中，陌生工人的善意像一束光，照亮了“我”无助的时刻，缓解了“我”的负面情绪，让“我”从绝望中走出来，重新审视自己的生活，这份温暖成为“我”重拾勇气的动力，为第二段“主动面对艰难、努力康复”的情节奠定了情感基础。 2. 第二段提示句：His kindness gave me courage to face the hard days ahead. 衔接句 1—— 对 “情感回升” 提问：“我”从陌生工人的善意中获得力量，心态从无助、沮丧转变为坚定、乐观，开始主动克服康复中的困难，不再抱怨命运的不公；“我”把这份善意记在心里，作为坚持下去的动力，逐渐学会适应单腿生活，甚至重新拥抱生活的美好。 衔接句 2—— 对 “主题升华” 提问：这段续写呼应了“困境中的善意与勇气”的主题，通过“我”的成长与蜕变，体现了善意的力量——它能驱散绝望，给予人前行的勇气；同时也呼应了开头“我”的梦境，证明单腿的生活依然可以充满希望、充满意义，深化了“勇敢前行、拥抱生活”的核心思想。 主题：困境中，善意能给予人前行的勇气；面对人生的挫折，要保持乐观与坚韧，学会接受不完美，在温暖与坚持中，依然能拥有充满希望的生活；陌生人的微小善意，也能成为照亮他人困境的光。 三、段落构思解析 第一段（During that moment of absolute helplessness, the man approached me.） 写作思路解析：①开篇承接提示句，描写陌生工人的神态（温柔微笑）、动作（轻声走近、默默推门），体现其善良、细心的特质；②加入语言描写（温暖的安慰话语），凸显工人的温和，同时刻画“我”的反应（声音颤抖、道谢），展现情感的转变；③结尾埋下伏笔，为第二段“重拾勇气”做铺垫，让情节过渡自然。 During that moment of absolute helplessness, the man approached me. He walked over quietly, with a soft smile on his face, and didn’t say a word at first—he just gently held the door handle and pushed it open for me. “It’s heavy, even for people with two legs,” he said in a warm, low voice, noticing my tears. He handed me a tissue and added, “You’re doing amazing, walking here all by yourself. Don’t be hard on yourself.” His words were simple, but they felt like a warm hug, chasing away my frustration and hopelessness. I thanked him with a shaky voice, and he nodded gently before turning back to fix the shelf. 第二段（His kindness gave me courage to face the hard days ahead.） 写作思路解析：①开篇承接第一段的善意，描写“我”的心态转变（从感动到坚定）；②加入具体的行动描写（握紧巧克力、努力康复），体现“重拾勇气”；③呼应开头的梦境，强化“单腿生活依然充满希望”的主题；④结尾升华情感，点明“善意的力量”和“勇敢面对生活”的核心，让故事有始有终，传递正向价值观。 His kindness gave me courage to face the hard days ahead. I held the chocolate bars tightly, feeling the warmth from that stranger’s kindness. I realized that my life on one leg wouldn’t be full of helplessness—there would be people who cared, even strangers. From that day on, I pushed myself harder in rehabilitation, ignoring the pain and focusing on my dream. I kept that stranger’s words in my heart, and whenever I felt like giving up, I thought of his gentle smile. Slowly, I learned to walk steadily, to embrace my new life, and to believe that even in hardship, kindness and courage would light the way. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $