Unit 6 Section Ⅵ Writing-【新课程学案】2025-2026学年高中英语选择性必修第四册教师用书word（外研版）

本高中英语讲义聚焦“太空生活日志写作”核心知识点，系统构建文体特征（第一人称，含记事、议论等类型）、结构框架（引言-事件-结论）及写作技法（时间顺序展开、情感变化引导、过渡词衔接、亮点词汇句式运用）的学习支架，助力学生掌握日志写作要点。 该资料以范文分析为核心，通过时间顺序与情感波动（如兴奋-失望-惊喜）培养思维品质，提供“blast into orbit”等亮点词汇及感叹句、虚拟语气等句式提升语言能力，配套练笔与素材储备辅助学生应用。课中便于教师引导教学，课后助力学生自主复习查漏补缺，强化写作技能。

Section Ⅵ　Writing 写作项目——Writing a journal entry about living in space 本单元要求写一篇日志记录太空生活。日志常以第一人称记叙一天生活中的所见、所闻、所做或所想的事情，分记事型、议论型、描写型和抒情型。记事型是记述当天自己生活学习中发生的事情；议论型是针对生活中的某一事情或现象表达自己的看法，态度鲜明，逻辑严密；描写型或抒情型则是对某人或某物的特征做细致的描述，或针对某事物抒发自己的感情。 写作技法指导 (一)品参考范文 Sunday　12 April I was lucky enough to be chosen as a visitor to the space station! After an exciting blast into orbit, I couldn't wait to look through the space station windows into deep space！You can imagine my disappointment when I didn't see many stars.The astronauts laughed and explained to me that we were still in the sunlight, so of course we couldn't see much, because the light was too bright.Shortly after, we passed into Earth's shadow, and I looked out of the window to see the most amazing number of stars! I felt very excited! This is the most unforgettable experience on the station.Soon after that, it was time for dinner.The thing I noticed most was not the zero gravity measures for eating, but the fact that the food didn't have much taste.And my nose felt blocked.It turns out these things are related, because in zero gravity, your face swells up more. After that, it was time to get strapped into bed.It was a bit hard to sleep in zero gravity — my arms kept floating away, and I woke up to see them right in front of my face, instead of lying on the bed like they would on Earth.Despite even simple things being harder to do, I really enjoyed being in zero gravity, and I loved being able to float around instead of having to walk.It's a pity my stay on the station was so short.It would have been great to stay longer and learn more about life in space! (二)根据参考范文，可总结出该类文体的框架结构如下： (三)由范文学写作 1．学行文逻辑 (1)范文按照时间顺序展开，从被选为太空站访客开始，到进入太空站、观察星空、用餐，再到就寝，每个事件都按照实际发生的顺序进行叙述，使得整个故事流畅连贯。 (2)范文中通过主人公的情感变化来引导读者进入情境。一开始的兴奋(被选为访客、期待看到星空)，到失望(未能在阳光下看到星星)，再到惊讶和兴奋(进入地球阴影后看到繁星)，最后是享受(在零重力环境中的新奇体验)和遗憾(停留时间太短)。这种情感波动增强了故事的吸引力和真实感。 2．学衔接过渡 范文从开头到结尾，各个部分之间的衔接非常自然，没有明显的跳跃或突兀之感。尤其是作者巧妙地使用了过渡词来连接不同的段落或句子，使得文本更加连贯。例如，“Shortly after”“After that”“Despite”等词语在文中起到了很好的过渡作用，使得文本更加顺畅。 3．学亮点表达 (1)亮点词汇 ①第一段第二句使用了blast into orbit，形象地描绘了火箭发射时的强烈冲击力和速度感，而into orbit则准确指出了火箭的最终目的地——进入轨道。第三句使用了disappointment，准确地表达了作者未能立即看到星星时的失落情绪，为后文的转折做了铺垫。第四句和第五句分别使用了sunlight 和 Earth's shadow，形成了鲜明的对比，前者解释了为何看不到星星，后者则预示着星星即将出现，推动了情节的发展。第五句还使用了形容词amazing，强烈地表达了作者看到星星时的震撼和惊喜之情。最后一句使用了词组swells up揭示了失重环境下人体的一种生理反应，增加了文章的科普性和趣味性。 ②第二段首句中的短语get strapped into bed以及第三句中的float around都生动地描绘了作者在失重环境下能够自由漂浮的奇妙体验，展现了太空生活的独特魅力。第三句还使用了表示转折的介词Despite，表达了作者即使在面对困难时，也依然享受失重环境带来的乐趣，展现了作者积极乐观的态度。 (2)亮点句式 ①第一段第二句使用了感叹句，表达了作者对太空探索的迫切期待和兴奋之情，同时让读者能够感受到作者当时的激动心情。 ②第一段最后一句使用了because引导的原因状语从句，解释了食物味道变淡和鼻子感觉堵塞的原因——与失重环境有关，增加了文章的科学性和趣味性。 ③第二段最后一句使用了虚拟语气，表达了对不能长时间留在太空站学习更多太空生活知识的遗憾，增强了句子的情感色彩和感染力。 Shortly_after_entering_orbit,_I gazed out of the window in awe.After_that,_I adapted to zero gravity, in spite of feeling a bit disoriented at first. 进入轨道后不久，我敬畏地凝视着窗外。在那之后，我适应了零重力，尽管一开始感觉有点迷失方向。　　 具体写作指导 How to write a journal entry about living in space ——如何写一篇记录太空生活的日志 第一步：构思谋篇 Part 1 Introduction (to introduce the beginning of the space travel)． Part 2 Major events (in time order)． Part 3 Conclusion (your feelings and perception). 第二步：要点表达 第一部分　介绍太空旅行 ①The countdown began, and with a thunderous roar, the spacecraft lifted off, marking_the_start_of_a_space_travel_adventure. 倒计时开始，随着一声震耳欲聋的轰鸣，航天器升空，标志着太空冒险旅行的开始。 ②As_the_engines_started,_the astronauts felt very excited as they set foot on the thrilling journey into the vast unknown of space. 发动机启动时，宇航员们感到非常激动，因为他们踏上了令人兴奋的未知太空之旅。 ③With_the_whole_world_watching in awe, the spacecraft took off into the sky, marking the beginning of a journey to the stars. 在全世界敬畏地注视中，航天器腾空而起，标志着一场星际之旅开始了。 第二部分　介绍太空生活 ①My daily routine in space involves careful planning, from meal preparation to exercise period, all the while dealing_with_the_challenges_of_zero_gravity. 我在太空中的日常生活要精心安排，从做饭准备到锻炼时段(都要如此)，还要应对失重的挑战。 ②Work is both stimulating and rewarding.Conducting_scientific_experiments in this unique environment fuels my curiosity. 工作既刺激又有回报。在这种独特的环境中进行科学实验激发了我的好奇心。 ③I feel relieved in the beauty of the universe, gazing_out_of_the_window_at_stars _and_galaxies. 我在宇宙的美丽中找到了慰藉，凝视着窗外的恒星和星系。 ④Sleeping in space requires a special sleeping bag attached to the wall to_prevent_me_from_floating_around during my sleep. 在太空中睡觉需要在墙上挂一个特殊的睡袋，以防止我在睡觉时四处漂浮。 第三部分　太空旅行的感想 ①Exploring space feels like an unbelievable adventure. 探索太空感觉像是一次不可思议的冒险。 ②Space holds so many mysteries.I can't_wait_to_learn_more. 太空蕴藏着如此多的奥秘，我迫不及待地想了解更多。 ③Space travel makes me feel_connected_to_the_universe. 太空旅行让我感觉与宇宙相连。 ④I have a sense of excitement at_the_thought_of_space_travel. 一想到太空旅行，我就有一种兴奋感。 [针对练笔] 根据下列提示，写一篇关于在太空喝水的日志： 1．在太空飞行期间喝水对我来说是个大考验。尽管有点费力，但我还是感觉很奇妙。 2．在失重的情况下，一杯装满水的杯子会浮动起来。我跟着水杯漂浮，大约花了十分钟的时间才把水喝光了。 3．事实上，我最喜欢的是每天数小时的锻炼。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 根据括号内的汉语提示补全短文 For astronauts, drinking water becomes very strange. Drinking water during a space flight was also ①a_big_test_for_me (对我来说是个大考验). When I got up the next morning, ②I'd_like_a_glass_of_water (我想要一杯水). Under weightless conditions, ③a_glass_full_of_water_floated (一个装满水的杯子漂浮着). I spent about ten minutes ④drinking_it_all_up (把它喝光), floating after the glass. It was quite hard, but I felt wonderful. In fact, ⑤what_I_like_best (我最喜欢的) is to spend many hours every day keeping my muscles strong. 写作素材储备 (一)背写作词汇 1．space shuttle　　　　　　　 航天飞机 2．be immersed in 沉浸于…… 3．in the space lab 在太空实验室里 4．an incredible journey of discovery 一次令人难以置信的发现之旅 5．take pride in 为……自豪 6．gain a deeper insight into 对……有更深层次的认识 7．can't/couldn't wait to do sth. 迫不及待地做某事 8．arouse one's enthusiasm for 激起某人对……的热情 (二)背写作佳句 1．For the astronauts, eating and drinking water are very difficult. 对于宇航员来说，吃饭和喝水是非常困难的。 2．Just like entering a new home, I have to tidy up and put things away first. 就像进入新家一样，我首先要收拾整理，把物品收好。 3．I do a lot of statistics as well as observations and take notes every few hours. 我每隔几个小时就要进行大量的统计、观察和记录。 4．Space exploration plays a critical role in advancing human knowledge. 太空探索在推动人类知识进步方面起着关键作用。 5．We all thought the experience was valuable and that we should study hard to make contributions to our country in the future. 我们都认为这次经历是宝贵的，而且我们应该努力学习，将来为我们的国家做贡献。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $