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Section Ⅴ Writing
写作项目——Write an art exhibition announcement
本单元的写作任务是“写一则艺术展览公告”,其实质是主题展览推介文,属于应用文体中的公告或通知。写作时要注意公告或通知的格式和具体内容的安排,做到内容客观、真实,具有说服力和吸引力。该写作项目旨在鼓励学生参与各种艺术交流活动,拓展学生的视野,帮助他们感受艺术在跨文化交流中的独特价值,提高学生的审美能力。
|由课文学写作|
一、学写作架构
阅读课文,总结其篇章结构如下:
二、学要点展开
此类写作中主体内容是选择一两件观众可能感兴趣的作品进行介绍,以激发他们的观赏兴趣。可以从以下几个角度入手:
1.简单介绍作品的故事背景,如本文第四段介绍唐朝雕塑时,引申了Buddhism传入中国的历史、 the Silk Road的发展等,让观众了解作品的来历和价值。
2.简要介绍作者使用的创作技巧,如本文第二段介绍唐寅的Clearing After Snow on a Mountain Pass时,介绍了画作的技巧“showing high mountains, trees, and houses covered in snow, was made with extraordinary skill”。
3.描述作品的主题或情节,让观众能够轻松理解。
4.简要描述作品的色彩和形状,吸引观众的注意力。
三、赏语言特色
1.公告类写作往往着重对活动内容、对象进行说明,多用被动语态以体现内容的客观性、真实性,增强文章的说服力。如本文中运用了This painting, showing high mountains ...in snow, was made;Some of the items on display are thought to ...等表达方式。
2.公告类写作为了吸引观众参观,多使用一些宣传句式,写作时注意模仿和使用。如本文中运用了These works were intended to ...;they are of exceptional beauty and quality;We guarantee that ...等表达方式。
3.多用简单句和祈使句,尽可能用精练的文字明确地表达信息。如作者运用清晰的段落结构、短小精悍的句子,如“No one will be admitted into the exhibition after 4:30 p.m.;No photos or food and drink are allowed in the museum.”等提供了有关展览的实用信息,重点突出,一目了然。
提能训练/完成句子
①He said the activity was intended to spread Chinese culture.
他说这个活动旨在传播中国文化。
②We guarantee that the exhibition will be a feast for your eyes.
我们保证这次展览将会使您大饱眼福。
③No more than 30 students will be admitted into this program next year.
明年该项目将录取不超过30名学生。
④No pets or animals are allowed in the museum.
博物馆内禁止携带宠物或动物。
|写作项目指导|
Write an art exhibition announcement ——写一则艺术展览公告
第一步:构思谋篇
文章
结构
开头
点明要参加的展览和目的
中间
介绍展览的情况
结尾
注意事项
时态和
人称
以一般将来时为主;以第二、三人称为主
第二步:要点表达
第一部分:点明要参加的展览和目的
①The exhibition aims to make people have a better understanding of Chinese ink wash painting.
该展览旨在使人们更好地理解中国水墨画。
②Aimed at promoting traditional Chinese culture, our school will arrange for the English club members and the exchange students to pay a visit to the Chinese Ink Wash Painting Exhibition.
为了弘扬中国传统文化,我们学校将安排英语俱乐部成员和交换生参观中国水墨画展。
第二部分:具体介绍展览的情况
1.介绍展览的时间和地点
①There will be an exhibition of Zhang Daqian’s paintings at the National Art Museum of China from May 10th to 25th.
5月10日至25日将在中国美术馆举办张大千画展。
②The art exhibition of calligraphy, painting and photography will be held in the activity room on the second floor of our school at 9 am on November 25.
11月25日上午9点在我们学校二楼活动室将举办书法、绘画和摄影艺术展。
③As planned, it will take place in the school museum from 8:30 am to 11:30 am this Saturday, which is a good platform to showcase your talents.
按照计划,它将于本周六上午8:30至11:30在学校博物馆举行,这是一个展示你的才能的好平台。
2.介绍展览的内容
①As you know, Mr Zhang, one of the most famous Chinese painters of the 20th century, was a master at many types of painting, especially landscapes.The coming exhibition will be composed of more than 100 of his masterpieces.
如你所知,张先生是20世纪最著名的中国画家之一,他擅长多种风格的绘画,尤其是山水画。即将到来的展览将由他的100多件杰作组成。
②It is said that twenty Chinese zithers of different ages will be on display in the museum, of which the oldest one has a history of 2,500 years.
据说,博物馆将展出20件不同年代的中国古筝,其中最古老的一件有2 500年的历史。
③The highlight of the exhibition is one painting created by Tang Yin, who is recognised as one of the greatest artists China has ever known.
展览的亮点是唐寅创作的一幅画,唐寅被认为是中国有史以来最伟大的艺术家之一。
3.介绍展览的意义
①It centers/focuses on the history of the traditional Chinese ink wash paintings and displays various famous paintings from different dynasties, from which you are expected to have a deep insight into the development of Chinese culture.
它以中国传统水墨画的历史为中心,展示了不同朝代的各种名画,可以让您深入了解中国文化的发展。
②The art exhibition will be a celebration of creativity and imagination, showcasing/showing the beauty and power of art to inspire people.
该艺术展将是对创造力和想象力的庆祝,展示艺术的美和力量以激励人们。
第三部分:注意事项及期望
①However, you’d better keep in mind that no photos or talking loudly is allowed in the museum.
然而,请记住博物馆内不允许拍照或大声喧哗。
②We will meet at school at 9 am and take the subway to the museum.Bring a pen and a notebook for notes.
我们早上9点在学校见面,然后乘地铁去博物馆。(记得)带上一支笔和一个笔记本做笔记。
③You are guaranteed/sure to have a great time full of fun and learning.You can’t afford to miss it.
你一定会度过一段充满乐趣的美好时光,还能学到新东西。机不可失。
④The exhibition is well worth a visit/is worth visiting/is worthy to be visited/is worthy of being visited.这次展览很值得参观。
[针对练笔]
假定你是校学生会主席李华,你校学生会计划举办一场主题为“国际青少年生活”的摄影展,向学生展示不同国家的青少年的风采。请你写一则通知发布在校英语网站上,内容包括:
1.活动的时间和地点;
2.活动的内容;
3.期待参与。
根据括号内的汉语提示补全下面的短文。
Notice
Our world is increasingly becoming a global village.We teenagers ①are eager to get familiar with (渴望熟悉) international peers.②To satisfy our desires (为了满足我们的愿望), a photo exhibition called “International Teenagers’ Life” will be held at 3 pm next Sunday in our school hall.
The exhibition will feature ③an impressive collection of photographs (一个令人印象深刻的照片集) capturing the lives of young people from different corners of the world.④Through this visual journey (通过这次视觉之旅), we will get a glimpse into their daily routines, traditions and aspirations.Each photo ⑤tells a unique story (讲述一个独特的故事), allowing us to ⑥ appreciate the beauty and differences (欣赏美和差异) between cultures.
We eagerly hope for your participation in the exciting event.
The Students’ Union
|写作素材储备|
(一)写作佳句
Ⅰ.引入话题常用表达
1.There will be a seminar ...
……将有一场研讨会。
2.In order to promote ..., a lecture will be given by ...in our school.
为了推广……,我们学校将举办一场由……主讲的讲座。
3....will be held from ....to ...in ..., the theme of which is “ ...”.
从……点至……点,在……将举办以“……”为主题的……
4.There will be ...in our school, where you can see ...
我们学校将举办……,在那里你可以看到……
5.It has been decided that we’ll take a trip to an exhibition being held in ...
我们已经决定参观一个正在……举行的展览。
Ⅱ.陈述具体内容常用表达
1.Some famous artists will give live performances of ...
一些著名的艺术家们将现场表演……
2.There will be many excellent works of various styles on the exhibition.
展览上将有很多不同风格的优秀作品。
3.During the exhibition, ...submitted by ... will be on show.
展览期间,将展出由……提交的……
4.The visit includes three parts, the first of which is a brief introduction to the history of ...tracing back to ...
这次参观包括三个部分,第一部分是对追溯到……的历史的简要介绍。
5....is a traditional art form in China, which has a history of ...years.
……是中国的传统艺术形式,有……年的历史。
6.They’re all typical Chinese paintings with ...as their main theme.
它们都是典型的以……为主题的中国画。
7.Besides, some great calligraphy works from well⁃known artists are included.
此外,还有一些著名艺术家的优秀书法作品。
Ⅲ.总结常用表达
1.I hope you can have a good time.
我希望你们玩得开心。
2.Everyone is welcome to attend/take part in it.
欢迎所有人参加。
3.You can’t afford to miss it!
机不可失!
4.Admission is free and all students are welcome to attend this event.
本次活动免费入场,欢迎所有学生参加。
5.This activity was really educational and eye⁃opening.
这次活动真的很有教育意义,(让人)大开眼界。
6.Not only does it arouse students’ interest in art, but it also inspires their love for our country.
它不仅激发了学生对艺术的兴趣,而且还激发了他们对国家的热爱。
7.We believe this is a good chance for you to get close to Chinese works of art and get a general idea of the Chinese artists.
我们相信这是您接近中国艺术作品,了解中国艺术家的好机会。
(二)主题语段
1.介绍名画
This is Mona Lisa. In the painting, a mysterious woman sits gracefully on a chair, with a subtle smile, her eyes seeming to gaze at the viewer.Her expression is full of mystery and charm, inviting viewers to ponder her inner world.
这是《蒙娜丽莎》。画中,一个神秘的女性端庄地坐在一把椅子上,唇角那抹微笑似隐似现,眼睛仿佛在注视着观者。她的面容充满了神秘和魅力,令观者忍不住想要去揣摩她的内心世界。
2.介绍艺术品
This is an ancient Chinese artwork — a bronze ding.The ding has a dignified and imposing shape, decorated with excellent patterns and designs, showcasing the superb craftsmanship of ancient artisans.In ancient times, the ding was an important ceremonial vessel used for cooking and rituals.It not only reflects the wisdom of ancient Chinese people but also carries memories of many historical cultures.
这是一件中国古代艺术品——青铜鼎。鼎的造型庄重大气,四周装饰着精美的花纹和图案,展现出古代工匠的高超技艺。在古代,鼎是一种重要的礼器,用来烹饪和祭祀。它不仅体现了古代中国人民的智慧,也承载了许多历史文化的记忆。
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