专题07 书面表达（期中专项训练）五年级英语下学期（牛津上海版试用本）

专项07 书面表达 01 解题小技巧 02【题型一】书面表达 解题小技巧 书面表达考查词句运用和简单写作能力，掌握以下技巧可快速写出规范小作文： 一、核心解题四步法 （一）审清要求，定方向 · 圈出写作主题、必用信息、字数要求，确定人称（I/He/She/It）和时态（一般现在时）。 · 明确要写的内容：如动物特征、外貌、喜好等。 （二）套用模板，搭框架 · 直接用高频基础句式，不用自创复杂句： · 介绍动物：This is… → It is a/an… → It has got… → It likes… · 介绍外貌：He/She is… → His/Her… is… → He/She has got… · 介绍喜好：I like… → My… likes… （三）结合提示，填内容 · 把图文 / 题目给出的关键词填入模板： · 特征：has got big eyes/long hair · 外形：is tall/cute/brown and white · 喜好：likes bananas/rice （四）检查细节，不出错 · 单词拼写正确，不抄错。 · 主谓一致：He/She/It 后用 likes/has got，I 后用 like/have got。 二、避坑小提醒 · 只用课本学过的词，不写生僻词。 · 一句话只表达一个意思，句子简单通顺即可。 · 严格按题目要求写，不遗漏图文提示的信息。 三、速记口诀 · 先审要求定主题，套用模板搭结构； · 关键词汇填进去，简单通顺最稳妥； · 拼写语法查三遍，规范书写拿高分。 【题型一】书面表达 （一） 假如教室很乱，到处都是同学们的东西，请你帮忙整理一下，写至少5句话，三种句型。 Tidy up the classroom _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二） 以“Clean my room”为题写一篇短文，要求用不少于8句话、三种句型完成。 Clean my room _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （三） 以“My favourite insect”为题写一篇短文，要求用不少于8句话、三种句型完成。 My favourite insect _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ （四） 以“What I hear on my way to school”为题写一篇短文，要求用不少于8句话、三种句型完成。 What I hear on my way to school __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （五） Write(说说自己的饮食习惯，可以提出一些建议。至少45个单词，3种及以上句型) My eating habits(我的饮食习惯) _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （六） 以“My favourite movie”为题介绍一下自己最喜欢的电影，要求用不少于8句话、三种句型完成。 My favourite movie ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （七） Write. (以My timetable for ______为题写一篇小短文，要求语句通顺，意思连贯，不少于45 单词，句式三种或以上) _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案及解析 第 1 页 共 6 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 【题型一】 （一）范文： Tidy up the classroom What a mess! These are Peter’s books. Put all his books on his desk. This is Amy’s bag. Don’t put it on the floor. Pick it up and put it on her desk. These are our balls. We should put them in the box. We should keep our classroom clean. 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求帮忙整理教室，阐述应该做的具体的事情。注意文章为一般现在时并要符合句子数量要求和句型要求。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：mess混乱，put放，pick up捡起，on the floor在地板上，in the box在箱子里，clean干净 参考句型：These are...；This is...；Don’t...；We should... （二）例文： Clean my room Last Sunday, it was a sunny day. I stayed at home and cleaned my room. My room is on the first floor. It’s not big but very untidy. Oh, my pen was on the floor. I picked it up and put it on my desk. Then I saw my desk was very untidy. There were books, pencils, exercise books and papers on it. I put them into my schoolbag. At last, I have got a tidy and clean room. I was very happy. Because my room was very clean. 【详解】题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称写出自己清扫房间的过程。注意用一般过去时来写。 参考词汇与句型： 参考词汇：stay at home待在家里，untidy不整洁的，pick up捡起，put ...into把……放进去， 参考句型：I picked it up ...； Then I saw ...；I put them into ... （三）范文： My favourite insects are bees. In my opinion, bees are hard-working. They get up early and try to collect pollen (花粉) as much as possible before they come home. People's lives won't be easier without bees' hard work, because honey is from bee's work. So people should not only learn from their spirit, but also protect this kind of animal. 【详解】1. 题干解读：要求介绍我最喜欢的昆虫，可以从其外形，习性与我们的相关性去写。应用一般现在时。要求用不少于8句话、三种句型完成。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考词汇： hard-working勤奋的，as much as possible尽可能多，collect收集，without没有，learn from学习，protect保护，pollen花粉，in one's opinion在某人看来 参考句型： My favourite insect is...；So people should... （四）例文： I go to school at half past seven this morning. On my way to school, there are many trees and flowers on each side of the street. Then I hear the voice of a cat in the flowers. It looks hungry. So I give it some of my bread. After eating the bread, it looks very happy. I'm also very happy that I can help the cat. And I hope to see it tomorrow. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称写出自己上学路上所听到的，注意文章为一般现在时，并要符合句子数量要求。 2.参考词汇与句型： 参考词汇：go to school，on my way to school，hear，voice… 参考句型：I go to school…；On my way to school, there are …；Then I… （五）范文： My eating habits I have good eating habits. I usually have vegetables and fish every day because they are healthy. I never eat fried food because it is bad for my health. Besides, I always wash my hands before I eat meal. I never watch TV when I’m having dinner. The good eating habits keep me fit and healthy. What about you? 【详解】题目解读：该题目要求以第一人称来介绍自己的饮食习惯和生活习惯，文章时态为一般现在时，并满足句子数量要求。 参考词汇与句型： 参考词汇： vegetables 蔬菜；fried food油炸食品；healthy健康的； 参考句型： I have…；I never…；I usually…； （六）范文 My favourite movie is Harry Potter. When he was only one year old, his parents died because they wanted to protect Harry. Harry grows up at his uncle’s home and his brother often beat him before he entered the magic school. I think Harry is very brave and clever. He is a real hero of all of us. He is never afraid of the danger. He just believes what he sees and does. I think Harry Potter is a very good movie. Maybe you should have a look by yourselves sometime. 【详解】以“My favourite movie”为题介绍一下自己最喜欢的电影，要求用不少于8句话、三种句型完成。 2. 参考词汇和句型： 参考词汇： boy男孩，parents父母，grows up长大，brave勇敢。 参考句型：When he was…； I think…； He is…；Maybe you should…。 （7） My timetable for Saturday      Saturday is fun! I get up at 8:30. After breakfast, I finish homework from 9:00 to 10:30. Then I read comics. At noon, I eat lunch with family. In the afternoon, I play badminton with friends. Before bedtime, I watch cartoons.      What a happy day! 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求写某一天的时间表，可以写我周六的时间表，注意时态是一般现在时，用第一人称，并要符合字数要求和句式要求。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：fun有趣的，get up起床，breakfast早餐，homework家庭作业，comics漫画， 参考句型：I get up...；I finish...；I play badminton with... $