内容正文:
Section Ⅵ Writing
写作项目——Make an effective poster
本单元的写作任务是写一则关于濒危物种的海报。海报是应用文中的一种,应用场合非常广泛,其性质类似于广告。海报视觉效果要强烈,能吸引眼球。海报语言表达要简明扼要,能打动人心,词句要生动、鲜活、耐读。制作该海报需要学生深入了解和研究濒危物种的境况,并思考保护措施,最终以新颖美观的形式向人们传递信息和意图。
由教材学写作
一、学文体架构
二、学写作手法
1.强烈震撼的标题
课文两则海报是呼吁人们保护野生动物的公益宣传海报,标题都短小精悍、吸人眼球,语言感染力强,易引起读者共鸣。
2.简明扼要的语言文字
两则海报的正文的句式多为短句,用词简明(如ugly, cute, want, give, cut down等),但准确贴切,说服力强。第一则海报的正文使用陈述语气呼吁人们保护各种野生动物,娓娓道来,让人不知不觉接受作者的观点;第二则海报的正文使用感叹句(In this way a lot of animal homes are being destroyed!)和反问句(Is it right to make animals homeless so that humans can have more paper?),语气强烈,引人深思。
三、学亮点表达
1.Give Ugly a Chance!
Don't Make Paper with My Home!
赏析:海报一的标题以祈使句的方式呈现,并且使用了“丑陋”这样的含蓄表达,既委婉真切,又引人深思。海报二的标题也是祈使句,使用了拟人的修辞手法,以考拉的声音发出呼吁,震撼人心。 “Home”指代树木,属于借代修辞。
2.When it comes to wildlife protection, all species — the good, the bad, and the ugly — should be treated equally ... So if you want the future to be beautiful, you have to give ugly a chance.
赏析:首尾两句都采用了状语从句的表达方式,语气委婉含蓄,首尾呼应,表达了作者的观点:相貌丑陋的动物同样需要人类的关爱。
3.Is it right to make animals homeless so that humans can have more paper?
赏析:反问句的使用,加强了语气,提升了表达效果,鲜明地亮出了作者的态度和观点,使读者产生共鸣。
针对练笔/完成句子
①When_it_comes_to_dancing,_I have two left feet.
谈到跳舞,我就笨手笨脚的。
②If_you_want_to_succeed,_you won't give up until your dream comes true.
如果你想成功,就不要放弃,直到梦想成真。
③Is_it_right_to_kill_animals so that people can wear warm fur coats?
为了让人们能穿上暖和的毛皮大衣而宰杀动物,对吗?
写作项目指导
How to make a poster about an endangered animal——如何写一则关于濒危动物的海报
第一步:构思谋篇
Part 1
to write a simple, interesting and unusual title
Part 2
to analyze why the animal is endangered
Part 3
to call on people to protect the animal
第二步:要点表达
第一部分 写明海报标题
1.如何写海报标题?
海报的标题写法较多,可单独在第一行中间写上“POSTER”字样;可直接用活动的内容做题目,如Weekend Ball,English Corner,Volunteers Wanted,Film News 等;也可用一些描述性的文字,如An exciting football match,突出其简洁明了,使其富有吸引力。
2.言简意赅的海报标题
①Electricity all around 身边的电
②If I were a Boy Again 假如我又回到了童年
③Action English 动感英语
④English Space 英语天地
⑤Better English, Better Life 学好英语,改变人生
⑥English Fastfood 英语快餐
第二部分 介绍濒危动物及其濒危原因
1.常见的濒危动物
①golden monkeys 金丝猴
②South China Tiger 华南虎
③the milu deer 麋鹿
④Yangtze River Dolphin 白鱀豚
⑤blue whale 蓝鲸
⑥red-crowned crane 丹顶鹤
⑦Chinese alligator 扬子鳄
2.描述濒危原因常用词汇
①destroy v. 破坏
②death n. 死亡
③pollution n. 污染
④decrease/reduce v. 减少
⑤lead_to 导致
⑥die_out 灭绝
⑦hunt_for 猎杀
⑧the number of ... ……的数量
⑨with the development of ... 随着……的发展
⑩be in danger of 处于……的危险中
第三部分 呼吁保护野生动物
①We should protect_them instead of killing them.
我们应该保护它们,而不是杀死它们。
②Stop_killing and protect wild animals.
停止杀戮,保护野生动物。
③Love animals, so that human beings are not_alone! 爱护动物,让人类不孤单!
④Protecting wild animals is a_better_choice for human beings!
保护野生动物是人类更好的选择!
⑤Stop illegal hunting and save_our_habitats now!
现在,停止非法狩猎,拯救我们的栖息地!
⑥Prevent human beings from hunting_and_killing wild animals!制止人类捕杀野生动物!
⑦We should take responsibility for living in harmony with animals.
我们应担起责任:与动物和睦相处。
⑧Shame_on animal cruelty, glory in animal protection.
虐待动物可耻,保护动物光荣。
[随堂针对练笔]
请根据下面提示写一则保护丹顶鹤的海报。
Red-crowned crane
Population
only 1,000
Why is it endangered?
As a result of the growing population, the habitats are transformed into farmland or cities.
What is being done?
Some wetland reserves have been established.
What can we do?
①Protect the natural environment of wetlands.
② ...
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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参考范文:
Protect red-crowned cranes!
Red-crowned cranes are in a state of extinction, and there are only 1,000 of them left in China! Due to the increasing population, their habitats are gradually changed into farmland or cities. Fortunately, Chinese government has set up wetland reserves to protect them. We should respond to the government's call to protect the red-crowned crane's wetland reserves and prohibit the hunting of red-crowned cranes!
写作素材储备
(一)有关动物保护的常用句式
①They are being ..., resulting in ...
②The reason why the number of ... is decreasing is that ...
③More measures should be taken to protect ... from ...
④Only in this way can we ...
⑤So, it's time for us to do .../So it's high time that we ...
(二)有关动物保护的常用佳句
①As we all know, wild animals are dying out for a variety of reasons.
众所周知,野生动物正由于各种原因而濒临灭绝。
②The number of wild animals decreases/reduces/drops at an alarming rate.
野生动物的数量以一种惊人的速度下降。
③Wild animals are losing their habitats, which forces them to leave or die out.野生动物正在失去它们的栖息地,这使得它们不得不离开或灭绝。
④If people keep cutting down the forests, the wild animals will have nowhere to live.
如果人们继续砍伐森林,野生动物将无处栖身。
⑤Air and water are being polluted so that the environment where wild animals live is destroyed.
空气和水正受到污染,以至于野生动物的生存环境遭到破坏。
⑥People hunt them for their fur and skins to make profits.
人们猎取它们的毛皮以获取利润。
⑦We call on everyone to do their best to protect wild animals.
我们呼吁每个人都尽最大努力保护野生动物。
⑧It is everyone's responsibility to protect wildlife.
保护动物,人人有责。
⑨It's high time for us to take measures to protect endangered animals.
到了我们该采取措施保护濒危动物的时候了。
⑩Saving animals is saving ourselves!
拯救动物就是拯救自己!
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