Unit 9 Section 8 Writing Workshop-【新课程学案】2025-2026学年高中英语必修第三册教师用书word（北师大版）

本讲义聚焦高中英语学习反思写作这一核心知识点，通过过渡衔接词（如moreover）的用法感知与应用，系统梳理学习反思的文体架构（过去认识-现在理解-未来计划）、行文逻辑（过渡词衔接）及具体写作步骤（构思谋篇、要点表达），搭建完整学习支架。 该资料特色在于融合语言能力（过渡词应用提升表达连贯性）、思维品质（三段式结构培养逻辑分析能力）、学习能力（提供写作素材与范文助力自主学习）。实例包括“moreover”用法归纳、“终身学习”主题写作指导，课中辅助教师系统教学，课后学生可利用素材自主练习，有效查漏补缺。

Section 8　 Writing Workshop 课时目标 1.认真阅读作者对《记忆的秘密》文章的反思，理解篇章结构。 2.利用一些单词、短语和句型，学会写学习反思。 3.学会使用过渡衔接词，使文章层次分明。 Moreover, I must also learn to do “spaced review”， especially during the first day after learning. 此外，我还必须学会进行“定时复习”，尤其是在学习后的第一天。 ★moreover adv.此外，而且 |用|法|感|知| ·(“运动健身”主题佳句)Bicycling is a good exercise; moreover, it doesn't pollute the air. 骑自行车是一项很好的运动，而且也不污染空气。 ·(“建议”类佳句)Moreover, the competition will supply you with a chance to develop your creativity and build friendship with other students who share the same interest with you. 此外，这次竞赛将会给你提供一个机会，帮助你发展创造力，与志同道合的同学建立友谊。 [归纳点拨] (1)moreover意为“此外，而且；更有甚者”，常用作插入语，相当于what's more、 besides、 furthermore、 in addition等，可位于句首或句中。 (2)what's worse＝worse still/to make things worse更糟糕的是 |应|用|融|会| (完成句子) ①I like shopping online; what's_more/moreover,_ I like group purchase. 我喜欢网购，而且我喜欢团购。 ②Moreover,_ studying for a degree in different cultures is never easy.此外，在不同的文化中攻读学位从来都不是一件容易的事。 ③It's getting dark.To_make_things_worse/What's_worse/Worse_still,_ it's raining harder and harder. 天要黑了。更糟糕的是，雨越下越大。 ■写作项目——Write a Learning Reflection　 本单元的写作项目是写一篇学习反思，主要总结归纳自己学习的收获和感想，属于议论文。一般会用简洁、生动的语言把对所学知识的反思准确、完整地表达出来，以使自己能有所提高。学习反思主要包括对过去知识的反思，反思从中学到了什么、如何提高自己等。 由教材学写作 一、学文体架构 阅读课文，总结该文体的框架结构如下： 二、学要点构思 学习反思是议论性较强的读书笔记，用切身体会、实践经验和生动的事例来阐明从“读”中悟出的道理。因此，文章既要叙述，又要说理。叙述是议论的基础，议论又是叙述的深化，二者相互结合。第一段主要反思自己过去对记忆的认识，引出话题。先点明《记忆的秘密》一文对自己的帮助，并提出自己在读这篇文章之前对记忆的认识不够充分，点题明确，过渡自然。第二段主要叙述了作者从《记忆的秘密》一文中学到的关于记忆的一些信息。在陈述自己的感悟时，引用了原文中的一些句子来进一步表明自己对记忆的理解。最后一段主要讲述为了提高自己的记忆作者要采取的措施，紧密结合自身实际，言之有物。 三、学行文逻辑 此类文章的行文通常按照从对所学文章的理解到自我反思的逻辑顺序推进，分析部分要条理清晰，反思内容要与文章紧密结合且具有一定深度和合理性。对自己过去的认识进行反思时常使用before ...I didn't know ...；反思现在的认识时常使用at the moment I understand ...; now I have learnt ...；介绍以后的计划或措施时常使用also; what's more/moreover; not only ... but also ...; in addition等使行文更连贯；在反思时常运用例证法来证明自己的观点，如for example等。 [提能训练]　(完成句子) ①Before_attending_the_party,_ I didn't know so many celebrities would be present.在参加这个晚会之前，我不知道有那么多的名人会出席。 ②Moving out of this city means losing not_only_some_of_your_friends_but_also_a_lot_of_opportunities.搬离这座城市意味着你不仅会失去一些朋友，还会失去很多机会。 具体写作指导 A Learning Reflection about “Life－Long Learning” ——写一篇关于“终身学习”的学习反思 第一步：构思谋篇 Tense Simple present/future tense Person First person Main points Part 1：The past knowledge and the reflection Part 2：The present understanding Part 3：The future plan or ways to improve 第二步：要点表达 第一部分　概括收获及反思过去 ①“The Importance of Life－Long Learning” has helped me better understand_how_our_learning_counts.《终身学习的重要性》帮助我更好地理解了学习的重要性。 ②Before reading the text, I didn't_know_that_there_are_so_many_exciting_and_inspiring_ examples about our learning. 在阅读这篇文章之前，我不知道有这么多关于我们学习的令人兴奋和鼓舞人心的例子。 第二部分　介绍学到的内容及反思 1．学到的内容 ①At the moment I understand the significance of life－long learning, which_can_make_a_great_difference_to_our_life.此刻，我明白了终身学习的意义，它可以对我们的生活产生很大的影响。 ②I also learnt that no_matter_how_old_you_are,_you can improve yourself through learning.我也学到了，无论你多大年纪，你都可以通过学习来提高自己。 2．举例说明 Just as the saying says, “You can't teach an old dog new tricks.” _which_turns_out_to_be_wrong_nowadays.For me, it is beneficial to know that_it's_never_too_late_to_learn. 正如俗话所说，“老年人很难适应新事物”，这在今天被证明是错误的。对我来说，知道学习永远不会太晚是有益的。 第三部分　总结全文，点明将来的学习计划或改进措施 1．回应主题，总结全文 Getting to know the importance of life－long learning means learning not_only_the_facts_about_it,_ but also the ways to finish it. 要了解终身学习的重要性，意味着不仅要学习有关终身学习的事实，还要学习完成终身学习的方法。 2．介绍将来的计划 ①In my opinion, I plan_to_follow_the_models and spare no effort to strengthen my will. 在我看来，我计划效仿榜样，不遗余力地增强我的意志。 ②When_acquiring_new_knowledge,_I'll work hard to keep learning and practicing. 在获得新知识时，我会努力不断学习和实践。 ③Moreover, I must also learn to do continuous update for what_I_have_learnt_already,_especially when we get older and older. 此外，我还必须学会不断更新我已经学过的东西，特别是当我们越来越老的时候。 [针对练笔] 请结合你自己的英语学习情况，写一篇学习反思。 参考范文： There was a time when my thoughts wandered.Though I spent two hours in memorising words of a unit, I didn't really grasp the words.But when I concentrate on the words, I just need 40 minutes or less to grasp the words of a unit.To promote efficiency and address this challenge, I reflected on this matter.Nowadays, if I am going to do some reading, I will ask myself a question, “Are you ready to devote yourself to English now？” If my answer is “no”， I won't start the work as it is no use learning English without attention.In this way, I learn English for greater efficiency and my English has improved a lot. 写作素材储备 (一)写作佳句 1．常用开头句 (1)“The Secrets of Your Memory” has helped me better understand how my memory works. 《记忆的秘密》帮助我更好地理解我的记忆是如何工作的。 (2)The whole article about learning lets me gain more on how to improve my study. 关于学习的整篇文章让我对如何提高我的学习有了更多的了解。 (3)After reading this article “On Study”， I have a better understanding of the methods of studying. 读了《论学习》这篇文章后，我对学习方法有了更好的了解。 2．常用中间句 (1)We should form the habit of making plans for our study and keep a good balance between study and entertainment.我们应该养成为学习制订计划的习惯，并在学习和娱乐之间保持良好的平衡。 (2)If we have difficulties, we can turn to our teachers and classmates for help. 如果有困难，我们可以向老师和同学们寻求帮助。 (3)A wide variety of after－class activities will broaden our horizons, enrich the school life and make us relaxed.丰富多彩的课外活动能拓宽我们的视野，丰富学校生活并让我们放松。 3．常用结束句 (1)I'm sure these methods will help me improve my learning efficiency. 我确信这些方法会帮助我提高学习效率。 (2)I will try these methods to make great progress in my study. 我将尝试这些方法，以在学习上取得很大的进步。 (3)If I change my attitude to learning and think positively, I will get on well with my study. 如果我改变自己的学习态度，积极思考，我的学习就会进展良好。 (二)主题语段 1．反思学习中的问题 Looking back on my English learning path, I was filled with mixed feelings of joy and sorrow.The key to learning English well is to develop a deep interest.However, I was short of interest.I memorised sufficient words, but I couldn't guess all their meanings from the context. 回首我的英语学习历程，我喜忧参半。学好英语的关键是培养浓厚的兴趣。然而，我缺乏兴趣。我记住了足够多的单词，但我无法从上下文中猜出它们的全部含义。 2．改进的措施 To address these problems, first, I plan to create a quiet study environment. I will study in a room without distractions such as a TV or noisy siblings. Second, I will make a detailed study schedule. By strictly following it, I can make sure that every task has enough time to be completed. Third, I will take regular breaks. For example, after studying for 45 minutes, I will take a 10－minute break to relax my mind and body. I hope these measures will help me improve my study. 为了解决这些问题，首先，我打算营造一个安静的学习环境。我会在一个没有诸如电视或者吵闹的兄弟姐妹之类干扰因素的房间里学习。其次，我将制订一个详细的学习计划。通过严格遵守它，我能确保每项任务都有足够的时间去完成。第三，我会定期休息。例如，学习45分钟后，我会休息10分钟来放松身心。我希望这些措施能帮助我提升学习。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $