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专题07 应用文写作
主题01 人与自我——生活与学习—乐于学习,善于学习,终身学习
Passage 1
(24-25学年高一下·江苏苏州·期中)
56.学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.学习活动状况描述;
2.简单评论;
3.你的建议。
写作要求:
1.词数100左右。
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Learning English Beyond the Classroom
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Passage 2
(24-25学年高一下·江苏常州·期中)
46.假设你是李华,你校英语广播站(English broadcast station)计划在每周五中午开设名为“Exploring Literature”的栏目,目前正在招募主持人。请给广播站负责人Ms. Lin写一封邮件,申请应聘这一岗位。内容包括:
1. 你的优势;
2. 专栏内容的策划。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Ms. Lin,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
主题02 人与社会——历史、社会与文化—对社会有突出贡献的人物
(24-25学年高一下·江苏盐城东台市·期中)
71.假定你是李华,上周你参加了学校英语社团举办的“A Great Chinese Scientist”英语演讲比赛。请给你的英国朋友Mark写一封邮件,分享你参加这次演讲的经历和感受。
内容包括:
1. 活动的目的;
2. 你介绍的科学家和他(她)的成就;
3. 参加这次演讲的感受。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mark,
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Yours,
Li Hua
主题02 人与社会——科学与技术—科技发展与信息技术创新,科学精神,信息安全
Passage 1
(24-25学年高一下·江苏无锡宜兴市·期中)
61.你校上周举办了以“智创科技 触碰未来”为主题的科技节活动。请为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:
1. 活动目的;2. 活动内容;3. 活动反响。
注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 请按如下格式作答。
参考词汇:智创科技 触碰未来Innovation and technology, touching the future
A Successful Sci-tech Festival
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Passage 2
(24-25学年高一下·江苏宿迁市泗阳县·期中)
71.假设您是李华。随着Deepseek等人工智能技术在全球范围内广受欢迎,您的英国朋友Tobby通过书信与您分享了他对此现象的看法。请您给他回信,
信中请包含以下内容:1.表达问候之意;2.阐述您的观点;3.详细解释您观点的成因。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tobby,
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Yours,
Li Hua
主题03 人与自然——自然生态—人与环境、人与动植物
Passage 1
(24-25学年高一下·江苏宿迁市沭阳县·期中)
61.每年的4月22日是世界地球日。随着全球变暖现象日益严峻,各种环境问题正威胁着人类的生存与发展。作为地球村的一员,我们每个人都肩负着保护环境的责任。请以“Beat Global Warming”为题撰写一篇倡议书,要点包括:
1.全球变暖的现状及后果;2.解决方案(至少两条);3.发出倡议。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Beat Global Warming
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Passage 2
(24-25学年高一下·江苏南通·期中)
56.假定你是李华,上周五,你班开展了“世界地球日”的主题班会课活动,请你给美国朋友Smith写一封邮件分享这次活动,内容包括:
1. 活动目的:
2. 活动内容:
3. 你的感想。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Smith.
I’m writing to share with you a World Earth Day-themed class meeting held by our class last Friday.
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Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 3
(24-25学年高一下·江苏连云港市赣榆区·期中)
56.假定你是李华,上周五下午你们班在校园内进行了一次有意义的植树活动,请给你的英国朋友Lily写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)时间、地点:
(2)活动内容;
(3)你的感想。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
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主题01 人与自我——做人与做事—健康的生活方式、积极的生活态度
(24-25学年高一下·江苏南通如皋市·期中)
46.假设你是李华,校英文报计划发布一份关于青少年健康问题的调查报告。请根据以下2014年与2024年的对比数据,撰写一篇调查报告,内容包括:
1. 简要描述数据趋势;
2. 选择其中一个问题分析其原因;
3. 提出具体建议。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 深色代表2014年数据(百分比数值),浅色代表2024年数据。
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主题02 人与社会——历史、社会与文化—物质与非物质文化遗产
Passage 1
(24-25学年高一下·江苏南通海安市·期中)
46.随着旅游业和经济的发展,人们对文化遗址的破坏也在日益加剧。假定你是李华,请你以学生会的名义用英语写一封主题为“Please protect the heritage sites!”倡议书。内容包括:
1. 倡议目的;
2. 倡议内容;
3. 发出号召。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
Dear fellow students,
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The Students’ Union
Passage 2
(24-25学年高一下·江苏徐州市铜山区·期中)
51.假如你是李华,你的留学生朋友Max即将到徐州进行为期两天的短暂旅行,听说徐州是烧烤(barbecue)的发源地(birthplace),希望你推荐一家烧烤店,请你写一封邮件回复,内容包括:
1. 推荐的理由;
2. 表达期望。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Max,
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Yours
Li Hua
Passage 3
(24-25学年高一下·江苏扬州高邮市·期中)
66.假定你是李华,决定五一假期到高邮旅游。请你根据以下内容给笔友 Mary 写一封信了解相关情况,以便提前做好准备。要点包括:
1. 说明个人打算;
2. 询问著名景点;
3. 了解注意事项。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mary,
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
主题03 人与自然——灾害防范—自然灾害与防范,安全常识与自我保护
(24-25学年高一下·江苏扬州市邗江区·期中)
86.上周五你校组织学生参观了自然灾害博物馆 (Natural Disaster Museum)。请你用英文为校微信公众号写一篇新闻报道介绍该活动,内容包括:
1. 活动目的;2. 活动内容;3. 活动反响。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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专题07 应用文写作
主题01 人与自我——生活与学习—乐于学习,善于学习,终身学习
Passage 1
(24-25学年高一下·江苏苏州·期中)
56.学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.学习活动状况描述;
2.简单评论;
3.你的建议。
写作要求:
1.词数100左右。
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Learning English Beyond the Classroom
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【答案】范文
Learning English Beyond the Classroom
Nowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the classroom in various ways.
It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose to listen to English songs and watch English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. However, those choosing to read English books and visit English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%.
As far as I’m concerned, it is a disturbing trend. For students, what benefits most to their study is reading English books. Because of their lack of self-discipline, they’re more easily addicted to chatting online or playing games. It’s urgent for students themselves to improve their self-discipline, and it’s also vital that parents and teachers strengthen the guidance.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文。要求考生以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题,使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
令人不安:disturbing→worrisome
因为:because of→due to
各种各样的:various→diverse
趋势:trend→tendency
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Nowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the classroom in various ways.
拓展句:Nowadays, as smartphones and computers grow popular, an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the classroom in various ways.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose to listen to English songs and watch English movies is respectively 65% and 50%.(运用了who引导定语从句)
【高分句型2】It’s urgent for students themselves to improve their self-discipline, and it’s also vital that parents and teachers strengthen the guidance.(运用了that引导的主语从句)
Passage 2
(24-25学年高一下·江苏常州·期中)
46.假设你是李华,你校英语广播站(English broadcast station)计划在每周五中午开设名为“Exploring Literature”的栏目,目前正在招募主持人。请给广播站负责人Ms. Lin写一封邮件,申请应聘这一岗位。内容包括:
1. 你的优势;
2. 专栏内容的策划。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Ms. Lin,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Ms. Lin,
I’m Li Hua, eager to apply for the host position of “Exploring Literature” at our English broadcast station.
I have a good command of English and a deep passion for literature, which I believe are my advantages. I plan to share classic works and authors that inspire us, hoping to spark students’ interest in literature. Also, I’ll invite guests to discuss their favorite books, making the show interactive and engaging.
I’m confident I can make this column both educational and enjoyable.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件,申请应聘学校英语广播站“探索文学”栏目的主持人岗位,并阐述自己的优势和专栏内容策划。
【详解】1.词汇积累
渴望的:eager→ keen
申请:apply→ seek application for
位置,岗位:position→ post
精通:have a good command of→ be proficient in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m Li Hua, eager to apply for the host position of “Exploring Literature” at our English broadcast station.
拓展句:I’m Li Hua, who is eager to apply for the host position of “Exploring Literature” at our English broadcast station.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I have a good command of English and a deep passion for literature, which I believe are my advantages.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I’m confident I can make this column both educational and enjoyable.(运用了省略that的宾语从句)
主题02 人与社会——历史、社会与文化—对社会有突出贡献的人物
(24-25学年高一下·江苏盐城东台市·期中)
71.假定你是李华,上周你参加了学校英语社团举办的“A Great Chinese Scientist”英语演讲比赛。请给你的英国朋友Mark写一封邮件,分享你参加这次演讲的经历和感受。
内容包括:
1. 活动的目的;
2. 你介绍的科学家和他(她)的成就;
3. 参加这次演讲的感受。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mark,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mark,
How have you been lately? I’m writing to share with you my experience of participating in the “A Great Chinese Scientist” English speech contest held by our school’s English club last week.
The purpose of the activity was to honor outstanding Chinese scientists. I chose to talk about Yuan Longping, who is known as the “Father of Hybrid Rice”. His achievement in developing high-yield hybrid rice has greatly contributed to solving food shortages worldwide.
I felt honored to participate and it was a great opportunity to improve my English speaking skills. The experience also deepened my understanding and admiration for Chinese scientists.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Mark写一封邮件,分享参加“伟大的中国科学家”英语演讲比赛的经历和感受。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加:participate in → take part in
目的:purpose → aim/goal
杰出的:outstanding→ excellent
机会:opportunity→ chance/occasion
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m writing to share with you my experience of participating in the “A Great Chinese Scientist” English speech contest held by our school’s English club last week.
拓展句:I’m writing to share with you my experience of participating in the “A Great Chinese Scientist” English speech contest, which was held by our school’s English club last week.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The purpose of the activity was to honor outstanding Chinese scientists. (运用了不定式to honor作表语)
【高分句型2】I chose to talk about Yuan Longping, who is known as the “Father of Hybrid Rice”.(运用了不定式to talk about作宾语、who引导的非限制性定语从句)
主题02 人与社会——科学与技术—科技发展与信息技术创新,科学精神,信息安全
Passage 1
(24-25学年高一下·江苏无锡宜兴市·期中)
61.你校上周举办了以“智创科技 触碰未来”为主题的科技节活动。请为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:
1. 活动目的;2. 活动内容;3. 活动反响。
注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 请按如下格式作答。
参考词汇:智创科技 触碰未来Innovation and technology, touching the future
A Successful Sci-tech Festival
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【答案】范文
The school’s yearly sci-tech festival was successfully held last week, aiming to encourage students’ active engagement with science and technology.
The festival, featuring “Innovation and technology, touching the future”, attracted lots of students to participate in a variety of activities such a8 robotics competitions, science exhibitions, and coding contests. But the highlight of this grand gathering was the three forums, the lecturers of which were all renowned scholars on emerging technologies, Augmented Reality, for example. So thrilled were those present that they made the most of this opportunity to interact with the experts, trying to gain a deeper insight on how technology is changing the world.
Overall, the festival received an enthusiastic response from inside and outside the campus. It served as a platform for young minds not only to showcase their creativity and ingenuity, but also to explore how they might reshape the future by means of science.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你校上周举办了以“智创科技 触碰未来”为主题的科技节活动。请为校英文报写一篇报道。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举行:hold→host
各种各样的:a variety of→various
担任:serve as→work as
总之:overall→all in all
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The school’s yearly sci-tech festival was successfully held last week, aiming to encourage students’ active engagement with science and technology.
拓展句:The school’s yearly sci-tech festival was successfully held last week, which aimed to encourage students’ active engagement with science and technology.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The school’s yearly sci-tech festival was successfully held last week, aiming to encourage students’ active engagement with science and technology. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] It served as a platform for young minds not only to showcase their creativity and ingenuity, but also to explore how they might reshape the future by means of science. (运用了how引导宾语从句)
Passage 2
(24-25学年高一下·江苏宿迁市泗阳县·期中)
71.假设您是李华。随着Deepseek等人工智能技术在全球范围内广受欢迎,您的英国朋友Tobby通过书信与您分享了他对此现象的看法。请您给他回信,
信中请包含以下内容:1.表达问候之意;2.阐述您的观点;3.详细解释您观点的成因。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tobby,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Tobby,
How are you? AI like Deepseek is changing our world. For example, doctors use it to find diseases faster, and teachers use it to make classes more fun. But some problems worry people. If AI does many jobs, workers might lose their work. Also, someone could steal our private data online. I think we should use AI carefully. Governments need clear rules, and schools should teach students about AI. If we balance new ideas with safety, our future can be brighter. What do you think?
Please write back soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Tobby回信,分享对人工智能技术在全球范围内广受欢迎现象的看法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
例如:for example→for instance
使担心:worry→concern
失业:lose one’s work→be out of work
谨慎地:carefully→cautiously
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:AI like Deepseek is changing our world. For example, doctors use it to find diseases faster, and teachers use it to make classes more fun.
拓展句:AI like Deepseek is changing our world, which helps doctors find diseases faster and help teachers make classes more fun.
【点睛】【高分句型1】If AI does many jobs, workers might lose their work.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
【高分句型2】I think we should use AI carefully.(运用了省略that的宾语从句)
主题03 人与自然——自然生态—人与环境、人与动植物
Passage 1
(24-25学年高一下·江苏宿迁市沭阳县·期中)
61.每年的4月22日是世界地球日。随着全球变暖现象日益严峻,各种环境问题正威胁着人类的生存与发展。作为地球村的一员,我们每个人都肩负着保护环境的责任。请以“Beat Global Warming”为题撰写一篇倡议书,要点包括:
1.全球变暖的现状及后果;2.解决方案(至少两条);3.发出倡议。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Beat Global Warming
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【答案】
Beat Global Warming
As the global warming increases, it results in a number of environmental challenges that threatens human survival and development. As citizens of this Earth village, each one of us bears the responsibility to protect our environment.
Firstly, we must adopt renewable energy sources such as solar, wind, and hydroelectric power to reduce our dependence on fossil fuels. Changing to clean energy will significantly decrease greenhouse gas emissions. Secondly, individuals and communities should employ sustainable practices in daily life, which includes reducing waste, saving water and energy, and promoting the use of eco-friendly products.
Each individual should make continuous efforts to live responsibly and contribute to environmental conservation. Together, we can create a sustainable future for generations to come.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求撰写一篇以“Beat Global Warming”为题的倡议书,文章旨在阐述全球变暖的现状与后果,并提出解决方案,呼吁人们共同应对全球变暖问题。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
导致:result in →lead to
采用:employ →take advantage of
包含:include →involve
促进:promote →boost
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:As the global warming increases, it results in a number of environmental challenges that threatens human survival and development.
拓展句:With the global warming increasing, it results in a number of environmental challenges that threatens human survival and development.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】Changing to clean energy will significantly decrease greenhouse gas emissions.(运用了动名词短语作主语)
【高分句型 2】Secondly, individuals and communities should employ sustainable practices in daily life, which includes reducing waste, saving water and energy, and promoting the use of eco-friendly products.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
Passage 2
(24-25学年高一下·江苏南通·期中)
56.假定你是李华,上周五,你班开展了“世界地球日”的主题班会课活动,请你给美国朋友Smith写一封邮件分享这次活动,内容包括:
1. 活动目的:
2. 活动内容:
3. 你的感想。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Smith.
I’m writing to share with you a World Earth Day-themed class meeting held by our class last Friday.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
I’m writing to share with you a World Earth Day-themed class meeting held by our class last Friday. It was definitely an instructive activity.
The class meeting was aimed at raising awareness about environmental protection. First, we watched a short documentary showing the beauty of our planet. The monitor then organized a heated discussion on current environmental issues like climate change and plastic pollution. In the end, we brainstormed practical ways to reduce our carbon footprint.
Actually everyone can make a difference in protecting our planet. I’d like to adopt a low-carbon lifestyle and encourage others to do the same.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给美国朋友Smith写一封邮件,分享上周五班级开展的“世界地球日”主题班会课活动,包括活动目的、内容以及个人感想。
【详解】1.词汇积累
指导性的:instructive→educational
旨在:be aimed at→be intended to
热烈的:heated→intense
讨论:discussion→debate
2.句式拓展
改强调句型
原句:The class meeting was aimed at raising awareness about environmental protection.
拓展句:It was raising awareness about environmental protection that the class meeting was aimed at.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First, we watched a short documentary showing the beauty of our planet.(运用了现在分词短语showing the beauty of our planet作后置定语)
【高分句型2】Actually everyone can make a difference in protecting our planet.(运用了动名词短语protecting our planet作宾语)
Passage 3
(24-25学年高一下·江苏连云港市赣榆区·期中)
56.假定你是李华,上周五下午你们班在校园内进行了一次有意义的植树活动,请给你的英国朋友Lily写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)时间、地点:
(2)活动内容;
(3)你的感想。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
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【答案】
Dear Lily,
I’m writing to share with you a tree-planting activity we had on the school campus last Friday afternoon.
The activity started at 2 o’clock and lasted three hours. First, our head teacher gave us basic guidance, which enabled us to plant trees properly. Then we were divided into three groups and each was assigned with different tasks, such as digging holes, placing the young trees and watering. During the activity, 20 new trees were planted.
This activity was meaningful. Not only did it provide a chance for us to exercise, but also it helped build a beautiful and green school.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Lily写一封邮件,介绍植树活动的相关情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
开始:start→begin
首先:first→to begin with
有意义的:meaningful→significant
机会:chance→opportunity
2.句式拓展
并列句变复合句
原句:The activity started at 2 o’clock and lasted three hours.
拓展句:The activity started at 2 o’clock, which lasted three hours.
【点睛】[高分句型1]First, our head teacher gave us basic guidance, which enabled us to plant trees properly.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Not only did it provide a chance for us to exercise, but also it helped build a beautiful and green school.(运用了部分倒装)
主题01 人与自我——做人与做事—健康的生活方式、积极的生活态度
(24-25学年高一下·江苏南通如皋市·期中)
46.假设你是李华,校英文报计划发布一份关于青少年健康问题的调查报告。请根据以下2014年与2024年的对比数据,撰写一篇调查报告,内容包括:
1. 简要描述数据趋势;
2. 选择其中一个问题分析其原因;
3. 提出具体建议。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 深色代表2014年数据(百分比数值),浅色代表2024年数据。
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【答案】
One possible version:
A Study on Teenagers’ Health Problems: 2014 vs. 2024
As the chart shows, there has been a worrying decline in teenagers’ health over the past decade, with internet addiction, sleep shortages, obesity, and poor eyesight on the rise.
The most alarming is the 90% sleep shortage rate among teens in 2024, mainly due to heavy schoolwork. Despite efforts to reduce homework, students still sacrifice sleep for grades. This bad cycle worsens health issues.
Immediate action is needed. Schools should enforce strict sleep rules, and governments should pass laws to protect students’ sleep, punishing over-assigning schools. Ending the “sleep for grades” mindset is crucial for teen health.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文。题目要求学生以李华的身份,就图中所给的对比数据,撰写一篇关于青少年健康问题的调查报告,应首先简要描述数据趋势,再就其中一个问题分析原因,最后提出具体建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
显示:show→indicate/demonstrate
因为:due to→owing to/on account of
使恶化:worsen→aggravate
使结束:end→terminate
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Despite efforts to reduce homework, students still sacrifice sleep for grades.
拓展句:Although there are efforts to reduce homework, students still sacrifice sleep for grades.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As the chart shows, there has been a worrying decline in teenagers’ health over the past decade, with internet addiction, sleep shortages, obesity, and poor eyesight on the rise. (运用了as引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Ending the “sleep for grades” mindset is crucial for teen health. (运用了动名词短语作主语)
主题02 人与社会——历史、社会与文化—物质与非物质文化遗产
Passage 1
(24-25学年高一下·江苏南通海安市·期中)
46.随着旅游业和经济的发展,人们对文化遗址的破坏也在日益加剧。假定你是李华,请你以学生会的名义用英语写一封主题为“Please protect the heritage sites!”倡议书。内容包括:
1. 倡议目的;
2. 倡议内容;
3. 发出号召。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
Dear fellow students,
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The Students’ Union
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear fellow students,
With the rapid development of tourism and economy, our precious cultural heritage sites are facing increasing threats. To raise awareness and take action, we are launching the campaign “Please Protect the Heritage Sites!”.
As members of the younger generation, we have a responsibility to protect these invaluable treasures that carry centuries of history and culture. We should always follow site regulations, refrain from touching artifacts or writing on walls, and dispose of waste properly. When we’re visiting these sites, choosing environmentally friendly transportation can significantly reduce our impact. Moreover, we should actively share the importance of preservation with those around us.
Let’s unite in this meaningful cause! Together, we can ensure these magnificent sites continue to inspire future generations.
The Students’ Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以学生会的名义写一封倡议书,首先说明倡议的目的,再详细介绍倡议的内容,最后发出保护文化遗址的号召。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
宝贵的:precious→ treasurable, valuable
采取行动:take action→ act, make a move
遵循:follow→obey, observe
确保:ensure→guarantee
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:With the rapid development of tourism and economy, our precious cultural heritage sites are facing increasing threats.
拓展句:As tourism and economy develop rapidly, our precious cultural heritage sites are facing increasing threats.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As members of the younger generation, we have a responsibility to protect these invaluable treasures that carry centuries of history and culture. (运用了that引导限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Together, we can ensure these magnificent sites continue to inspire future generations. (运用了that引导宾语从句并被省略)
Passage 2
(24-25学年高一下·江苏徐州市铜山区·期中)
51.假如你是李华,你的留学生朋友Max即将到徐州进行为期两天的短暂旅行,听说徐州是烧烤(barbecue)的发源地(birthplace),希望你推荐一家烧烤店,请你写一封邮件回复,内容包括:
1. 推荐的理由;
2. 表达期望。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Max,
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Yours
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Max,
I’m thrilled to hear that you’re coming to Xuzhou and eager to explore its barbecue culture! As you know, Xuzhou is the birthplace of barbecue, and I’m more than happy to recommend a great barbecue joint for you.
I’d like to suggest “Brothers Barbecue”. First of all, it has a good reputation in Xuzhou. Locals have been flooding to this place for decades due to its delicious food. Moreover, the ingredients here are always fresh. It provides high - quality meat and vegetables daily, ensuring that every bite is full of flavor. The secret sauce gives the food a unique and unforgettable taste. Last but not least, the atmosphere here is very lively. You can enjoy your meal while chatting with friendly locals and experiencing the real Xuzhou cuisine.
I’m really looking forward to hearing about your experience at the barbecue place. I believe you’ll have a wonderful time in Xuzhou and fall in love with its barbecue.
Yours
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的推荐信。要求考生给留学生朋友Max写封信,向其推荐一家徐州的烧烤店。
【详解】1.词汇积累
渴望做某事:be eager to→ be desperate to
高兴的:happy→ delighted
由于: due to → because of/owing to
充满了:be full of→ be filled with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Locals have been flooding to this place for decades due to its delicious food.
拓展句:Locals have been flooding to this place for decades because it has delicious food.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As you know, Xuzhou is the birthplace of barbecue, and I’m more than happy to recommend a great barbecue joint for you.(运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】It provides high-quality meat and vegetables daily, ensuring that every bite is full of flavor.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
Passage 3
(24-25学年高一下·江苏扬州高邮市·期中)
66.假定你是李华,决定五一假期到高邮旅游。请你根据以下内容给笔友 Mary 写一封信了解相关情况,以便提前做好准备。要点包括:
1. 说明个人打算;
2. 询问著名景点;
3. 了解注意事项。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mary,
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mary,
With the May Day holiday approaching, I’ve made a wonderful plan to travel to Gaoyou. I’m writing to enquire some information about that beautiful place.
I know you’re familiar with Gaoyou and have a wealth of travel knowledge. Above all, I’m wondering if you could recommend some of the most fascinating scenic spots. I’m particularly interested in historical sites and natural landscapes. Besides, I’m a bit worried about some particular things I should pay attention to, like local customs, transportation, and weather. Any advice would be really helpful.
Thank you in advance. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给笔友Mary写一封信,说明个人旅行的打算,询问著名景点以及了解注意事项。
【详解】1.词汇积累
临近:approach→around the corner
迷人的:fascinating→appealing
此外:besides→in addition
建议:advice→suggestion
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:With the May Day holiday approaching, I’ve made a wonderful plan to travel to Gaoyou.
拓展句:As the May Day holiday approaches, I’ve made a wonderful plan to travel to Gaoyou.
【点睛】【高分句型1】With the May Day holiday approaching, I’ve made a wonderful plan to travel to Gaoyou.(运用了with的复合结构)
【高分句型2】Above all, I’m wondering if you could recommend some of the most fascinating scenic spots.(运用了if引导宾语从句)
主题03 人与自然——灾害防范—自然灾害与防范,安全常识与自我保护
(24-25学年高一下·江苏扬州市邗江区·期中)
86.上周五你校组织学生参观了自然灾害博物馆 (Natural Disaster Museum)。请你用英文为校微信公众号写一篇新闻报道介绍该活动,内容包括:
1. 活动目的;2. 活动内容;3. 活动反响。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】参考范文
In order to raise the risk awareness of natural disasters, our school organized students to visit the Natural Disaster Museum last Friday.
During the visit, students were exposed to a series of pictures and videos of various natural disasters like earthquake, flood, landslide and forest fires, which made them deeply feel the power and danger of natural disasters. Afterwards, an expert gave a lecture, from which students learned some basic ways to deal with different natural disasters. Undoubtedly, what they experienced in the museum was impressive and educational.
This activity turned out an enormous success. Not only did the students have their survival skills boosted, but also they were deeply convinced of the importance of staying in harmony with nature.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英文为校微信公众号写一篇新闻报道介绍参观自然灾害博物馆活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
为了:in order to→so as to
演讲:lecture→speech
应对:deal with→handle
无疑:undoubtedly→certainly
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In order to raise the risk awareness of natural disasters, our school organized students to visit the Natural Disaster Museum last Friday.
拓展句:Our school organized students to visit the Natural Disaster Museum last Friday, which aims to raise the risk awareness of natural disasters.
【点睛】[高分句型1] In order to raise the risk awareness of natural disasters, our school organized students to visit the Natural Disaster Museum last Friday. (运用了不定式作目的状语)
[高分句型2] Not only did the students have their survival skills boosted, but also they were deeply convinced of the importance of staying in harmony with nature. (运用了部分倒装句)
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