Unit 1 Section Ⅵ Writing-【新课程学案】2025-2026学年高中英语必修第二册配套课件PPT（外研版）

　Writing Section Ⅵ 写作项目——Writing a recipe 本单元的写作任务是写一篇介绍一道美食及其制作方法的短文，属于事物说明文。事物说明文一般是通过介绍事物的形状、构成、类别、功能等使人们对该事物形成客观认识。写作时应抓住事物的显著特点，按照正确的说明顺序，采用恰当的说明方法进行介绍。语言风格方面，在介绍美食时应注重运用一些描述性的词语来讲述其起源、口味等主要特点；在介绍其制作方法时则应侧重说明性语言，表述应尽量简洁清晰。 由教材学写作 一、学文体架构 事物说明文一般可按照“总—分—总”的模式展开： 二、学语言风格 说明文的语言讲究言简意赅，不拖沓，无赘余。如课文的Instructions部分，在介绍制作过程时全部使用了祈使句，并根据实际表达需要，灵活使用了时间状语从句与祈使句相结合(When the oil is hot, add ...)，以及并列祈使句(Add the spring onions and stir ...)。 三、学亮点表达 为使说明的事物能给读者留下深刻的印象，在描述事物特点时应尽量详细具体，用词讲究生动形象。如课文第一段第一句中使用了过去分词短语also known as Kung Pao Chicken作后置定语，名词短语a high-ranking court official of the Qing Dynasty作同位语，丰富了细节内容；第二段第一句中的spicy，salty, sweet and sour细致入微地介绍了宫保鸡丁的口感，hard to resist则形象地写出了这道菜味道诱人，令人难以抗拒，这些表达增加了文章的生动性。 四、学衔接过渡 课文第二段先介绍了这道菜的口感，接着用表示递进关系的What's more强调了该菜式制作简单，以此加深读者对尝试该菜谱的兴趣。同时，第三段开头使用了表示因果关系的连词so进行总结，并作出推荐。整篇文章行文自然流畅，无堆砌之感。 写作项目指导 Write an article about a dish ——介绍一道美食 第一步：构思谋篇 Part 1 ·What food do you want to introduce？ ·What are the typical features of the food？ Part 2 ·What are the ingredients of the food？ ·How do you cook it？ Part 3 Highlight the characteristics of the food or recommend the food. 第二步：要点表达 第一部分　明确说明对象 如何引入要介绍的美食？其突出特点是什么？ ①Jiaozi is _______________________ and is essential during holidays in Northern China. 饺子是中国的一种传统食物，在北方的节日里必不可少。 ②Stir-fried tomatoes and eggs,______________________________ ________, is not only easy to make but also delicious and nutritious. 西红柿炒鸡蛋，在中国是一道很常见且受欢迎的菜，不仅制作简单，而且味道鲜美、营养丰富。 a traditional Chinese food a very common and popular dish in China ③Hot pot is ______________________Chinese folk dishes and in China，people eating hot pots can be found everywhere. 火锅是中国最著名的民间菜肴之一。在中国，随处可见人们吃火锅。 ④Baozi has different fillings,____________________________. We usually___________________, together with soya milk. 包子有不同的馅料，包括肉和蔬菜。我们通常用它做早餐，伴着豆浆一起吃。 one of the most famous including meat and vegetables have it for breakfast 第二部分　介绍具体信息 1．美食的烹饪方式有哪些？ ①boil煮　 ②stew焖/炖　　 ③steam蒸 ④fry煎 ⑤stir-fry炒 ⑥deep-fry炸 ⑦roast烤 ⑧bake烘烤 ⑨braise炖/焖/煨 2．如何介绍美食的味道和用料？ ①This sweet, crispy, and fragrant dessert ____________________ peanuts and malt sugar. 这道甜、脆、香的甜点主要是用花生和麦芽糖做成的。 ②As a typical Hunan cuisine, it __________________by thick and pungent flavour. 作为典型的湖南菜，它以其味浓与味辛为特色。 is mainly made with characterizes itself ③_____________________________ and the fish that goes with Sichuan pickles is mainly grass carp. 这道菜又辣又酸，配四川泡菜的鱼主要是草鱼。 ④As_______________, the sweet and mild flavour of the red bean filling slowly fills my mouth. 每咬一口，红豆馅淡而不腻的香甜味道徘徊在我的唇齿之间。 The dish is both spicy and sour I take each bite 3．美食的制作步骤是什么？ ①______________ into a bowl and beat them until smooth. 把鸡蛋打入碗中，搅拌均匀。 ②Before mixing, salt the Chinese cabbage, let it rest for 15 minutes and___________________. 搅拌之前，在白菜上撒上盐，静置15分钟，挤出多余的水分。 Crack the eggs press out extra water ③The pork is cut into 50-gram cubes and deep-fried _________ _______________ yellow liquor, soy sauce, and rock sugar for an hour. 将猪肉切成50克的小块油炸，然后与黄酒、酱油和冰糖一起煮一个小时。 ④Shelled peanuts are coated in a syrupy mixture of brown sugar and flour, and then baked______________________________. 把去壳的花生裹上一层红糖和面粉混合的糖浆，然后烤制成浅棕色。 before it's then boiled with until they are light brown in color 第三部分　总结或推荐 ①__________________ at home and you might find you fall in love with cooking! 试着在家做这道菜，你有可能会发现自己喜欢上烹饪！ ②When you ____________________in your daily life, you can try to make pan-fried dumplings with your family. 平时有空的时候，可以试着和家人一起做煎饺。 ③So why don't you come to my home this weekend? And we can _______________________. 那么，这个周末为什么不来我家？我们可以一起包饺子。 Try to cook this dish have some spare time make dumplings together [针对练笔] 假定你是李华，你的留学生朋友Fred 想学习浙江名菜“东坡肉”(Braised Dongpo Pork)。请你写一个片段，向他介绍这道菜的做法。内容应包括： 1．主料：带皮的五花肉(streaky pork)600克 配料：葱、姜(ginger)、酱油、冰糖 2．制作步骤：(1)将肉放入热水煮2～3分钟；(2)将肉切成块；(3)锅内放进葱姜，肉放在葱姜上面，并加入配料；(4)文火煮约3个小时。 参考范文： First, prepare 600g streaky pork with skin and a proper amount of green onion, ginger, sauce and rock candy. Second, boil the pork in hot water for 2－3 minutes, take it out and cut it into large cubes. Next, put the green onion and ginger at the bottom of the pot. Then put the pork cubes on the green onion and ginger. After that, add other ingredients into the pot. The most important step is to boil it for about three hours over the slow fire. Before taking it out, pour some sauce over the pork and a delicious dish just appears in front of you. 写作素材储备 (一)美食介绍 1．Zongzi Zongzi is a traditional Chinese food which is enjoyed during the Dragon Boat Festival. These pyramid-shaped dumplings are made by wrapping sticky rice in bamboo leaves. Sweet zongzi often have red bean paste or dates, while slightly salty ones might include pork, egg yolks or mushrooms. Today, making zongzi is a fun family activity. The bamboo leaves give the rice a special smell, and unwrapping them feels like opening a gift. Whether you like sweet or salty flavors, eating zongzi is a delicious way to experience Chinese food culture. 粽子是中国端午节的传统美食。这种金字塔形状的饺子是用竹叶包裹糯米制成的。甜口粽子常含红豆沙或枣，咸味粽子则会加入猪肉、蛋黄或香菇。 如今，包粽子已成为一项有趣的家庭活动。竹叶赋予糯米独特香味，拆开粽叶的过程犹如拆礼物(般充满惊喜)。无论偏好甜咸哪种风味，品尝粽子都是体验中华饮食文化的绝佳方式。 2．Steamed pork with rice flour Steamed pork with rice flour (Fen Zheng Rou) is a popular Chinese dish, especially in the Jiangnan region. This dish is simple but clever. During steaming, the meat becomes juicy, while the rice flour absorbs the meat's flavors and turns slightly sticky. This dish tastes fresh, soft and not greasy. 粉蒸肉是一道受欢迎的中国菜肴，尤其在江南地区。这道菜看似简单却很巧妙——蒸制过程中，鲜肉出汁，而米粉吸收肉味变得黏糯。这道菜口感清新松软且不油腻。 (二)制作过程 1．How to make jiaozi (Chinese dumplings) Firstly, mix flour and water to make a soft dough. Let it rest for 30 minutes. Then make the filling. You should cut the meat (pork) into tiny pieces, add salt, oil, soy sauce and Chinese cabbage if you like. Mix them thoroughly. Thirdly, divide the dough into small pieces. Flatten each piece into a thin pancake.Fourthly, put a spoon of filling in the center. Fold it and press the edges. And at last boil the dumplings in boiling water until they float (about 6—8 minutes)． 如何包饺子(中式水饺) 第一步：将面粉和水混合，揉成柔软的面团，静置醒发30分钟。 第二步：制作馅料。将猪肉剁碎，加入盐、油、酱油调味，喜欢的话还可以加入白菜，搅拌均匀。 第三步：将面团分成小剂子，擀成小块面皮。 第四步：取一勺馅料放在面皮中央，对折捏紧边缘。 最后：将饺子放入开水中煮至浮起(约6—8分钟)即可。 2．How to make sausages at home (1)Prepare the meat. Choose fresh meat (pork) and cut it into small pieces. (2)Mix flavors. Add salt, pepper, garlic and a little sugar or wine. Mix everything with the meat. (3)Stuff the sausages.Fill the casings with the meat mixture and tie the ends with thread. (4)Air-dry. Hang the finished sausages in a cool, dry place for a few days to dry. 家庭自制香肠 (1)备肉料 选用新鲜猪肉切成小肉丁。 (2)调味 加入盐、胡椒、蒜末及少许糖或料酒，与肉充分拌匀。 (3) 灌制香肠 将调好的肉馅灌入肠衣，两端用棉线扎紧。 (4) 风干 将香肠悬挂于阴凉通风处晾干数日即可。 课时跟踪检测 一、写作专项训练 Ⅰ.靓表达升级(8分) 1．People suggest that we should have a balanced diet and get into the good habit of getting up early. →__________________ we should have a balanced diet and get into the good habit of getting up early. (It be＋过去分词＋that ...) 2．You needn't worry about your weight. Nothing is as important as health. →______________________________________. Nothing is as important as health.(there is no need ...) It is suggested that There is no need to worry about your weight 3．The majority of people take in too much fat and not enough fibre. It does great harm to their health. →The majority of people take in too much fat and not enough fibre,_________________________________.(定语从句) 4．If you take more exercise and have enough sleep, you will feel relaxed and energetic. →______________________________________________________ ___________________ (祈使句＋and＋陈述句) which does great harm to their health Take more exercise and have enough sleep, and you will feel relaxed and energetic. Ⅱ.微语境写作(8分) 1．It seems that many people today are overweight. Some people even ___________(遭受……之苦) obesity. 2．However, if you want to lose weight, _________________________ _____________________(改变不健康的饮食习惯是一个好主意)． 3．We suggest that our school organize classes where teachers can ___________________________(给予关于……的必要指导) a balanced diet. 4．It is important to remember that the body needs proper care ___________________(为了健康)． suffer from it is a good idea to change unhealthy eating habits give necessary guidance about in order to be healthy Ⅲ.应用文写作(15分) 假定你是李华，最近你收到笔友Lucy的来信，信中她向你询问如何做蛋炒饭，请你就此给她写一封回信。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：蛋炒饭stir-fried rice and eggs 炒菜锅wok ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文： Dear Lucy， I'm glad to receive your letter. In your letter, you told me you like the homemade food and asked me about the recipe for stir-fried rice and eggs. Now I'd like to tell you about the process. The first step is to crack the eggs and mix the eggs in a big bowl. After that, it's time to put some oil in a wok and heat the oil. Then add rice and eggs and you had better stir-fry for two minutes in case it gets burnt. Finally, add salt and serve them on a plate. I hope my tips are satisfying. Yours， Li Hua Ⅳ.读后续写(15分) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I shut my lunch bag quickly as I saw what was in it. The strong familiar smell of garlic (大蒜) and onion brought back some memories of middle school lunch times. That day, when I opened my lunch bag with Chinese fried tofu in it, the boys and girls shouted, held their noses and ran away. I went red in the face. So for the rest of middle school, I insisted on having “normal” food for lunch like ham and cheese sandwiches instead. This morning, before Mom rushed out for work, she simply spared some of her lunch in my lunch bag. It was not Mom's fault. As a busy single mother, she always gives me her best. Every time I invite my friends home, the Chinese spring rolls and rice puddings Mom makes always amaze them and fill their stomachs. What would happen today? I felt nervous and restless. I was at a loss when Mary and Tommy, my best friends in high school, came over and shared the same lunch table. My friends happily pushed their lunch bags in front, inviting me to share mine. Hesitantly, I did. 注意： 1.词数80左右； 2．要求逻辑通顺，情节合理，体现“动作描写”。 I had expected them to stand up and hold their noses, but it was not the truth._____________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文： I had expected them to stand up and hold their noses, but it was not the truth. Mary said，“I don't mind the smell of garlic and onion. Onions are my favorite food. My mom says onions are good for our health. They have a lot of benefits. For example, onions are rich in vitamins, which can help get rid of the body of garbage, promote metabolism(新陈代谢), and prevent colds.” Tommy also added a bite of onion, and said the spicy flavor was refreshing. Hearing this, I was relieved. Laughing and joking, we enjoyed lunch happily together. I was grateful for having such considerate friends. 二、阅读拓展训练 阅读七选五 Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the most important festivals in the Chinese calendar. The festival typically involves family getting together to share mooncakes while watching the moon. Typical Chinese mooncakes are round in shape, and measure around 10cm in diameter and 4－5cm in thickness. Most mooncakes consist of a thin tender skin enveloping a sweet and dense filling. _______ It is a custom for housewives to prepare mooncakes at home when the festival is approaching. Now let's learn to make traditional Chinese mooncakes. Above all, full preparations should be made, including materials such as flour, water, sugar and vegetable oil, and fillings — the lotus seed paste and eggs. Mix together all the materials to get a dough (生面团)．______ Next, separate the egg yolks from the whites and salt the steamed yolks. While the oven is preheated to 180 degrees Celsius, roll the lotus paste and the dough into small balls. ______ 1 2 3 Then, shape up with each consisting of a dough wrapper, one ball of the lotus paste, and half of a salted egg yolk. Make a hole in a ball of the lotus paste and put the yolk inside. Similarly, cover the ball (with the yolk inside) with a wrapper. ______ Then shape it with the mold (模具)． ______ Take them out after 5 minutes and brush them with the egg wash. Put the mooncakes back until they become golden brown. Remember to wait for two days to eat the mooncakes when they are soft and also look shiny. 5 4 A．A mooncake ball is made. B．Prepare the salted egg yolks. C．Finally, put all mooncakes into the oven. D．Flatten each piece of dough into a thin wrapper. E．There're many stories about mooncakes and Chang'e. F．Mooncakes are the must-eat food for Mid-Autumn Festival. G．Covered with plastic wrap, it should be set aside for at least 3 hours. 语篇解读：本文主要讲述了制作月饼的流程和方法。 1．选F　空后讲到了“It is a custom for housewives to prepare mooncakes ...”，故可推知空处也应该会讲到月饼对于中秋节的重要意义，故F项符合语境。 2．选G　 空前一句提到了“get a dough(生面团)”，下文则讲到了制作月饼的另一个步骤。因此，空处应该会讲到对面团的处置方式，结合常识可知，做好面团之后需要醒面。G项“盖上塑料膜，它(面团)至少要放置3个小时”符合语境。G项中的it指代空前的 a dough。 3．选D　根据空前一句中的“roll the lotus paste and the dough into small balls”并结合常识可知，空处应该会讲到擀皮，故D项符合语境。下文中的“a dough wrapper”亦是提示。 4．选A　 根据空前的描述和空后一句“Then shape it with the mold (模具)．”可知，月饼团的制作已经完成，故A项符合语境。 5．选C　结合语境可知，空后一句中的“Take them out after 5 minutes”指的是5分钟后，把月饼从烤箱中拿出来，因此，空处应该会讲到把月饼放进烤箱，且C项中的“Finally ...”与上文中的“Next ...，Then ...”形成了序列，故C 项符合语境。 本课结束 更多精彩内容请登录：www.zghkt.cn $