话题12 五育并举（写作专项训练）（全国通用）2026年中考英语写作突破

话题12 五育并举 【话题解读】 本话题紧扣新课标核心素养与中考立德树人的命题导向，围绕五育并举中的劳动教育、体育教育、艺术教育三大核心维度展开，是中考英语书面表达的高频热点话题，摒弃了空泛的理论表述，聚焦学生日常校园与生活中的真实体验，让写作有具体内容可写。 话题选材贴合初中生的生活实际，劳动类聚焦校内劳动课、家庭家务、社区志愿劳动等实操性内容；体育类围绕日常锻炼、喜爱的运动、全民健身等生活化主题；艺术类则选取电影、音乐、绘画等青少年熟悉的艺术形式，所有选材均强调体验感与获得感，引导学生在写作中表达自身经历、感受与思考，既考查英语语言表达能力，又渗透五育融合的育人理念。 核心考查维度为“经历 + 观点 + 收获”的综合表达，要求学生能结合具体的劳动、体育、艺术经历，准确描述过程，清晰表达自身观点、收获或建议，实现 “语言运用 + 素养表达” 的双重目标，同时注重内容的真实性与行文的连贯性。 【命题探索】 1. 命题形式：以应用文为主，材料作文为辅，均为提示性写作 中考对本话题的考查以应用文为核心载体，占比最高的是电子邮件（给朋友 / 老师 / 社团分享经历、提建议、报名课程），其次为书信（给校报 / 杂志社的回信、投稿）、发言稿（校园活动分享）；同时搭配材料作文（主题征文、话题短文），所有题型均为要点提示式写作，给出明确的问题、提纲或表格提示，降低审题难度，符合中考书面表达的命题特点。 2. 写作要求：要点全覆盖，词数有明确范围，注重内容拓展 统一要求严格覆盖题目给出的所有写作要点，不遗漏核心信息（如经历、原因、收获、建议等），并要求结合自身实际适当拓展细节，让内容更充实；词数以80~100 词为主，部分基础题型要求 60/70 词起步，少量征文要求 100 词左右，开头 / 结尾多已给出，不计入总词数；同时要求语句通顺、条理清晰、书写规范，文中不得出现真实姓名 / 校名。 3. 时态运用：以一般现在时为主，一般过去时为辅，时态切换精准 主体时态为一般现在时，用于表达个人观点、习惯、建议、事物的意义等；一般过去时为核心辅助时态，用于描述具体的劳动、体育、艺术经历（如一次家务、一场锻炼、一段艺术学习故事），时态的切换需根据写作内容自然衔接，时态的准确性是中考评分的重要考查点。 4. 核心考查要点：基础信息表达 + 语言亮点 + 情感 / 收获表达 基础层：能准确表达五育相关的基础信息，要点完整，语法、拼写、标点无明显错误，能清晰描述经历过程； 提升层：能运用话题核心词汇（如 labor skills、keep fit、build up confidence 等）和多样的句型（定语从句、时间 / 原因状语从句、not only...but also... 并列结构、宾语从句等）打造语言亮点，避免句式单一； 拓展层：能在描述经历的基础上，表达自身的真实感受、收获或思考（如劳动培养的耐心、体育带来的快乐、艺术的解压作用），而非单纯的过程罗列，让写作有情感与深度。 5. 设问角度：围绕 “经历 + 原因 + 收获 / 建议” 展开，维度固定且贴合生活 常见设问角度可归纳为三类，可单独考查或组合考查：①经历描述类：要求讲述一次难忘的劳动 / 体育 / 艺术经历，描述具体过程；②原因分析类：要求说明喜欢某类运动 / 艺术形式的原因，或劳动 / 体育的重要性；③收获 / 建议类：要求谈谈从经历中得到的收获、提升体质 / 传承艺术的方法，或为校园五育活动提建议，所有设问均贴近学生生活，无生僻角度，易于学生梳理写作思路。 6. 写作视角：多以学生身份为第一人称，写作语境贴合校园 / 跨文化交流 写作主体多设定为李华、李平、Mike等经典初中生身份，以第一人称 “I” 展开写作，增强内容的真实感；写作语境主要为校园内部交流（给校报投稿、向社团提建议、校园活动分享）和简单跨文化交流（给外国朋友分享中国的劳动体验、个人锻炼习惯），语言表达要求简洁明了、符合英文交际习惯，避免复杂生僻的词汇与句式。 7. 评分导向：渗透五育理念，注重内容的积极正向性 本话题的写作评分不仅关注语言表达，还注重内容的积极正向性，要求学生在写作中传递正确的价值观：如劳动的价值、体育锻炼的重要性、艺术的审美与解压作用，引导学生树立热爱劳动、坚持锻炼、感受艺术之美的意识，体现中考立德树人的命题导向。 【典例赏析】 假如你是阳光中学的李华，你校英文报开展了一项关于青少年喜欢的艺术形式的调查请你根据以下内容，用英文写封回信。 We are carrying out a survey on what type of art form is the most popular among teenagers in our school. Please write to tell us: •Your favorite art form •Your opinions about this art form •Your story about this art form •Your favorite artist and the reason why you like her/him 注意: 1. 80~100词左右，语句流畅通顺； 2. 结合表格内容，并作适当发挥； 3. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名。 Dear Sir/Madam, I would like to introduce my favorite kind of art form. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope everyone can enjoy the art world. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Sir/Madam, I would like to introduce my favorite kind of art form. I like English films best because I can learn a lot from them. First of all, I can learn lots of English words and idioms. Watching English films can also help me improve my listening ability. Also, I can know some famous actors and actresses from the films, and my favorite artist is Danny Boyle, who has already directed many excellent movies. I started to watch English films with my parents at the cinema when I was nine. I fell in love with it. Besides, I can enjoy the places of interest in different parts of the world and see different kinds of delicious food. I hope everyone can enjoy the art world. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，确定“最喜欢的艺术形式”的主题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“个人观点、故事、最喜欢的艺术家”等方面进行介绍； 第三步，书写结语，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①learn from从……中学到 ②help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事 ③fall in love with爱上 [高分句型] ①Also, I can know some famous actors and actresses from the films, and my favorite artist is Danny Boyle, who has already directed many excellent movies.（who引导的非限制性定语从句） ②I started to watch English films with my parents at the cinema when I was nine.（when引导的时间状语从句） 【话题预测】 1．如今劳动课已经正式成为中小学的一门独立课程。你校英语社开展“劳动(Labour)加倍，快乐翻倍”的分享活动。请根据下面的海报，选择一个方面分享一次自己难忘的劳动经历，并谈谈你从中得到的收获。 要求： （1）文中不得出现真实的姓名、学校等信息； （2）词数：80左右。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Hello, everyone. Today I'd like to share my labour experience ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假如你是李华，你校英语社团将举行以“劳动（Labor）”为主题的社会实践活动，现向全校学生征集活动创意，请根据以下相关信息，给社团负责人Tom写一封邮件，分享自己的劳动经历、收获并提供一条活动建议。 Labor is meaningful! My Experiences >swept the floor >... My Gains (收获) >develop life skills >... My Idea >... 注意： 1. 邮件必须包括以上所有要点，补充内容至少各一条，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息； 3. 词数80词左右（邮件的第一句已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Tom, Labor is an important part of our life. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 3．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 学校劳动实践课程提供了四门短时课供学生选择，假设你是初三学生李华，请写一封邮件给教导处王老师报名，你的邮件必须包括： 1.你选择的课程名称； 2.你选择该课程的理由； 3.你期待的学习收获。 课程选项：花卉种植 (planting flowers)、点心制作 (making Dim Sum)、收纳整理 (tidying up)、职业体验 (trying out careers) 注意： -文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 -照抄试卷中内容不得分。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．每年的8月8日是“全民健身日”，为了让这项运动更加深入人心，某英文杂志的《运动与健康》栏目正在以“Let’s Do Exercise Together”为题，向广大中学生征文。请你根据下面表格中的要点提示写一篇文章，向该栏目投稿。 运动的重要性 运动的时间与方式 保持健康 上学时步行或骑自行车 培养个人的性格 体育课做各种锻炼（跑步、打篮球……） 周末与朋友去爬山、游泳等 参考词汇：keep fit, train a person’s character, on foot, PE classes, climb mountains ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．在日常锻炼中，有的学生喜欢独自锻炼，有的则喜欢和大家一起锻炼。你更倾向于哪种锻炼方式？校报体育专栏正在以“Exercising alone or exercising with a group?”为题开展征文活动，请你根据写作要求，结合自身实际，从以下两种锻炼方式中任选其一，用英语写一篇短文，陈述你的理由，向专栏投稿。 Exercising alone Exercising with a group can choose the exercise time freely have more motivation (动力) enjoy personal space make new friends 写作要求：1.文中须包含所选锻炼方式的要点提示，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数100左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Exercising alone or exercising with a group? Some students like to exercise alone. Others like to exercise with a group. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．学校英文网站正在开展以“体质健康提升”为主题的征文活动。请你以“How to Improve My Physical Health”为题，写一篇投稿谈谈你在体质健康提升方面的做法和理由。 提示： (1)What kind of exercise do you usually do? (2)How do you do exercise? (3)What else can help you improve your physical health? Give your reasons. 注意： (1)词数80个左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； (2)短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及其他相关信息。 How to Improve My Physical Health Nowadays, people pay much more attention to physical health. For me, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．体育活动是学生生活的重要组成部分。假定你是李华，请根据以下提示内容写一篇英语短文，介绍自己最喜欢的运动并说明喜欢这项运动的原因。 提示内容： 1. 说明自己最喜欢的运动； 2. 喜欢这项运动的原因（不少于三条）； 3. 发表感想。 要求： 1. 包括所有提示信息，可适当增加细节； 2. 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，语法正确； 3. 不少于70词（短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇：reason（原因），chance（机会），courage（勇气） I really like doing sports, and my favourite sport is ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．假如你是李平，请阅读你的英国朋友John的电子邮件并用英语回复。 Hi Li Ping, How is it going? In your last letter, you said that you started doing more exercise. That’s really cool! What sport do you like best? How do you usually practise it? What benefits does exercise bring you? Please share your exercise habits—I want to be more active, too! Looking forward to your reply. John 注意：1. 回复须围绕上述问题展开，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 词数：80—100。回复的邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：benefit 益处。 Hi John, I’m very glad to share my exercise habits with you. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Ping 9．假设你校校报《英语园地》“Art”栏目正在举行征文活动。此次征文活动的主题为“你最喜欢的艺术形式”。请你根据征文通知，写一篇短文参加活动。 Art is an important part of our life. ●What art form do you like best? (literature, music, dance, painting...) ●When did you become interested in it? ●Do you have any stories about it? ●How important is it to you? 写作要求： 1.短文须包含以上征文通知里的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数100左右(标题已给出，不计入总词数)。 My Favorite Art Form ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．音乐不仅能够给人们带来好的享受，还能在一定程度上疏解压力。假如你是Mike，校报正在进行有关音乐方面的征文稿，请你根据以下要点提示，写一篇英语短文，向校报投稿。 melody n. 旋律 build up confidence建立自信 purify one’s soul净化心灵 内容包括： ●What kind of music do you like? ●One experience where music helped you. ●Why do you like music? 要求： 1. 词数不少于80词； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1 / 22 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 话题12 五育并举 【话题解读】 本话题紧扣新课标核心素养与中考立德树人的命题导向，围绕五育并举中的劳动教育、体育教育、艺术教育三大核心维度展开，是中考英语书面表达的高频热点话题，摒弃了空泛的理论表述，聚焦学生日常校园与生活中的真实体验，让写作有具体内容可写。 话题选材贴合初中生的生活实际，劳动类聚焦校内劳动课、家庭家务、社区志愿劳动等实操性内容；体育类围绕日常锻炼、喜爱的运动、全民健身等生活化主题；艺术类则选取电影、音乐、绘画等青少年熟悉的艺术形式，所有选材均强调体验感与获得感，引导学生在写作中表达自身经历、感受与思考，既考查英语语言表达能力，又渗透五育融合的育人理念。 核心考查维度为“经历 + 观点 + 收获”的综合表达，要求学生能结合具体的劳动、体育、艺术经历，准确描述过程，清晰表达自身观点、收获或建议，实现 “语言运用 + 素养表达” 的双重目标，同时注重内容的真实性与行文的连贯性。 【命题探索】 1. 命题形式：以应用文为主，材料作文为辅，均为提示性写作 中考对本话题的考查以应用文为核心载体，占比最高的是电子邮件（给朋友 / 老师 / 社团分享经历、提建议、报名课程），其次为书信（给校报 / 杂志社的回信、投稿）、发言稿（校园活动分享）；同时搭配材料作文（主题征文、话题短文），所有题型均为要点提示式写作，给出明确的问题、提纲或表格提示，降低审题难度，符合中考书面表达的命题特点。 2. 写作要求：要点全覆盖，词数有明确范围，注重内容拓展 统一要求严格覆盖题目给出的所有写作要点，不遗漏核心信息（如经历、原因、收获、建议等），并要求结合自身实际适当拓展细节，让内容更充实；词数以80~100 词为主，部分基础题型要求 60/70 词起步，少量征文要求 100 词左右，开头 / 结尾多已给出，不计入总词数；同时要求语句通顺、条理清晰、书写规范，文中不得出现真实姓名 / 校名。 3. 时态运用：以一般现在时为主，一般过去时为辅，时态切换精准 主体时态为一般现在时，用于表达个人观点、习惯、建议、事物的意义等；一般过去时为核心辅助时态，用于描述具体的劳动、体育、艺术经历（如一次家务、一场锻炼、一段艺术学习故事），时态的切换需根据写作内容自然衔接，时态的准确性是中考评分的重要考查点。 4. 核心考查要点：基础信息表达 + 语言亮点 + 情感 / 收获表达 基础层：能准确表达五育相关的基础信息，要点完整，语法、拼写、标点无明显错误，能清晰描述经历过程； 提升层：能运用话题核心词汇（如 labor skills、keep fit、build up confidence 等）和多样的句型（定语从句、时间 / 原因状语从句、not only...but also... 并列结构、宾语从句等）打造语言亮点，避免句式单一； 拓展层：能在描述经历的基础上，表达自身的真实感受、收获或思考（如劳动培养的耐心、体育带来的快乐、艺术的解压作用），而非单纯的过程罗列，让写作有情感与深度。 5. 设问角度：围绕 “经历 + 原因 + 收获 / 建议” 展开，维度固定且贴合生活 常见设问角度可归纳为三类，可单独考查或组合考查：①经历描述类：要求讲述一次难忘的劳动 / 体育 / 艺术经历，描述具体过程；②原因分析类：要求说明喜欢某类运动 / 艺术形式的原因，或劳动 / 体育的重要性；③收获 / 建议类：要求谈谈从经历中得到的收获、提升体质 / 传承艺术的方法，或为校园五育活动提建议，所有设问均贴近学生生活，无生僻角度，易于学生梳理写作思路。 6. 写作视角：多以学生身份为第一人称，写作语境贴合校园 / 跨文化交流 写作主体多设定为李华、李平、Mike等经典初中生身份，以第一人称 “I” 展开写作，增强内容的真实感；写作语境主要为校园内部交流（给校报投稿、向社团提建议、校园活动分享）和简单跨文化交流（给外国朋友分享中国的劳动体验、个人锻炼习惯），语言表达要求简洁明了、符合英文交际习惯，避免复杂生僻的词汇与句式。 7. 评分导向：渗透五育理念，注重内容的积极正向性 本话题的写作评分不仅关注语言表达，还注重内容的积极正向性，要求学生在写作中传递正确的价值观：如劳动的价值、体育锻炼的重要性、艺术的审美与解压作用，引导学生树立热爱劳动、坚持锻炼、感受艺术之美的意识，体现中考立德树人的命题导向。 【典例赏析】 假如你是阳光中学的李华，你校英文报开展了一项关于青少年喜欢的艺术形式的调查请你根据以下内容，用英文写封回信。 We are carrying out a survey on what type of art form is the most popular among teenagers in our school. Please write to tell us: •Your favorite art form •Your opinions about this art form •Your story about this art form •Your favorite artist and the reason why you like her/him 注意: 1. 80~100词左右，语句流畅通顺； 2. 结合表格内容，并作适当发挥； 3. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名。 Dear Sir/Madam, I would like to introduce my favorite kind of art form. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope everyone can enjoy the art world. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Sir/Madam, I would like to introduce my favorite kind of art form. I like English films best because I can learn a lot from them. First of all, I can learn lots of English words and idioms. Watching English films can also help me improve my listening ability. Also, I can know some famous actors and actresses from the films, and my favorite artist is Danny Boyle, who has already directed many excellent movies. I started to watch English films with my parents at the cinema when I was nine. I fell in love with it. Besides, I can enjoy the places of interest in different parts of the world and see different kinds of delicious food. I hope everyone can enjoy the art world. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，确定“最喜欢的艺术形式”的主题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“个人观点、故事、最喜欢的艺术家”等方面进行介绍； 第三步，书写结语，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①learn from从……中学到 ②help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事 ③fall in love with爱上 [高分句型] ①Also, I can know some famous actors and actresses from the films, and my favorite artist is Danny Boyle, who has already directed many excellent movies.（who引导的非限制性定语从句） ②I started to watch English films with my parents at the cinema when I was nine.（when引导的时间状语从句） 【话题预测】 1．如今劳动课已经正式成为中小学的一门独立课程。你校英语社开展“劳动(Labour)加倍，快乐翻倍”的分享活动。请根据下面的海报，选择一个方面分享一次自己难忘的劳动经历，并谈谈你从中得到的收获。 要求：（1）文中不得出现真实的姓名、学校等信息；（2）词数：80左右。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Hello, everyone. Today I'd like to share my labour experience ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version Hello, everyone. Today I’d like to share my labour experience of growing vegetables at home last summer.   When my parents built a small garden, I volunteered to help. Every morning, I dug the soil and removed stones under the hot sun. My hands developed blisters and sweat soaked my clothes, but I kept working. After planting seeds, I watered them carefully and protected young plants from insects. Three months later, fresh tomatoes and carrots appeared! The moment I tasted them, their sweetness filled my mouth with joy.   Through this experience, I learned that patience and responsibility turn effort into valuable rewards. Labour not only taught me practical skills but also doubled my happiness by witnessing growth. Now I truly understand—hard work plants the seeds of joy. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。   [写作步骤] ① 第一步，引出话题，表明自己对劳动的看法； ② 第二步，详细阐述自己在家种植蔬菜的一次经历； ③ 第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受和收获。   [亮点词汇] ①keep doing sth坚持做某事 ②protect...from...保护……不受…… ③ turn...into...把……变成……   [高分句型] ①When my parents built a small garden, I volunteered to help. （when引导时间状语从句） ②Through this experience, I learned that patience and responsibility turn effort into valuable rewards.（宾语从句） 2．假如你是李华，你校英语社团将举行以“劳动（Labor）”为主题的社会实践活动，现向全校学生征集活动创意，请根据以下相关信息，给社团负责人Tom写一封邮件，分享自己的劳动经历、收获并提供一条活动建议。 Labor is meaningful!My Experiences>swept the floor >... My Gains (收获) >develop life skills >... My Idea >... 注意： 1. 邮件必须包括以上所有要点，补充内容至少各一条，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息； 3. 词数80词左右（邮件的第一句已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Tom, Labor is an important part of our life. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】参考范文： Dear Tom, Labor is an important part of our life. Here are my experiences and suggestion. Last week, I did some housework like making the bed, sweeping the floor, doing the dishes, and so on. Helping with chores not only helps me form good habits, but also helps to develop my life skills. Also, sharing housework can help our parents free from heavy chores after work. For the coming activity, I have a great suggestion. I think holding competitions about labor skills is an excellent idea. Students will learn about the importance of hard work and the value of labor. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，整体说明劳动的重要性； 第二步，具体阐述自己的劳动经历和收获； 第三步，提供一条活动建议。 [亮点词汇] ① not only...but also...不但……而且…… ② develop life skills 培养生活技能 ③ the value of labor劳动的价值 [高分句型] I think holding competitions about labor skills is an excellent idea.（宾语从句） 3．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 学校劳动实践课程提供了四门短时课供学生选择，假设你是初三学生李华，请写一封邮件给教导处王老师报名，你的邮件必须包括： 1.你选择的课程名称； 2.你选择该课程的理由； 3.你期待的学习收获。 课程选项：花卉种植 (planting flowers)、点心制作 (making Dim Sum)、收纳整理 (tidying up)、职业体验 (trying out careers) 注意： -文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 -照抄试卷中内容不得分。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 Dear Mr. Wang, I am Li Hua, a Grade 9 student. I would like to sign up for the “Making Dim Sum” course. I chose it because I love Chinese food and want to learn how to make delicious snacks by myself. Also, I think cooking is a useful life skill. I hope to learn some basic cooking methods and finally make nice dim sum for my family. I believe this course will be both fun and helpful. Thank you for your time. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：邮件需包含选择的课程名称、选择理由及期待收获，并注意邮件格式。 [写作步骤] 第一步：自我介绍，并直接说明报名课程； 第二步：阐述选择该课程的理由； 第三步：说明期待的学习收获，并总结课程价值，最后礼貌结尾。 [亮点词汇] ①sign up for报名参加 ②delicious美味的 ③useful有用的 ④basic cooking methods基本的烹饪方法 [高分句型] ①I chose it because I love Chinese food and want to learn how to make delicious snacks by myself.（because引导的原因状语从句） ②I believe this course will be both fun and helpful.（宾语从句） 4．每年的8月8日是“全民健身日”，为了让这项运动更加深入人心，某英文杂志的《运动与健康》栏目正在以“Let’s Do Exercise Together”为题，向广大中学生征文。请你根据下面表格中的要点提示写一篇文章，向该栏目投稿。 运动的重要性 运动的时间与方式 保持健康 上学时步行或骑自行车 培养个人的性格 体育课做各种锻炼（跑步、打篮球……） 周末与朋友去爬山、游泳等 参考词汇：keep fit, train a person’s character, on foot, PE classes, climb mountains ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文： Let’s Do Exercise Together Exercise is of great importance. It helps us keep fit and trains a person’s character. We can exercise in different ways. We may walk or ride bikes to school on weekdays. In PE classes, we take various exercises such as running and playing basketball. On weekends, we can climb mountains or swim with friends. Let us start to exercise right now, so that we can live a healthier and better life! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：文章覆盖“运动重要性”“锻炼时间与方式”等要点，内容完整。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开篇点明运动的重要性； 第二步：分场景介绍锻炼方式：平日上学通勤、体育课活动、周末和朋友的运动； 第三步：发出锻炼呼吁，收尾全文。 [亮点词汇] ①of great importance 非常重要 ②various exercises 各种锻炼 ③right now 立刻 [高分句型] ①Let us start to exercise right now, so that we can live a healthier and better life! (“so that”引导目的状语从句) 5．在日常锻炼中，有的学生喜欢独自锻炼，有的则喜欢和大家一起锻炼。你更倾向于哪种锻炼方式？校报体育专栏正在以“Exercising alone or exercising with a group?”为题开展征文活动，请你根据写作要求，结合自身实际，从以下两种锻炼方式中任选其一，用英语写一篇短文，陈述你的理由，向专栏投稿。 Exercising alone Exercising with a group can choose the exercise time freely have more motivation (动力) enjoy personal space make new friends 写作要求：1.文中须包含所选锻炼方式的要点提示，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数100左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Exercising alone or exercising with a group? Some students like to exercise alone. Others like to exercise with a group. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One Possible Version: Exercising alone or exercising with a group? Some students like to exercise alone. Others like to exercise with a group. I like exercising with a group. Firstly, when I exercise with others, I have more motivation. We can encourage each other when we feel tired. It makes me more likely to keep going. Besides, I can make new friends. We can talk and laugh together, which makes the exercise more enjoyable. We can also share our experiences and methods about exercise. In this way, exercise becomes a fun and social activity. It’s not only good for my body but also helps me build better relationships. Another Possible Version: Exercising alone or exercising with a group? Some students like to exercise alone. Others like to exercise with a group. I prefer exercising alone. Firstly, I can choose the exercise time freely. After a busy day at school, I can go for a run or do some yoga in the evening when I feel relaxed. There is no need to worry about matching others’ schedules. Secondly, I enjoy my personal space. When I exercise alone, I can focus on my own feelings and goals. I can listen to my favorite music and think about my own things. It’s a great way for me to relieve stress and stay fit. In a word, exercising alone suits me better. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：材料所给两种锻炼方式的要点需完整表达，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，明确自己倾向的锻炼方式； 第二步，结合所选方式的要点展开说明； 第三步，总结该锻炼方式的优势，呼应主题。 [亮点词汇] ①freely自由地 ②motivation动力 ③personal space个人空间 ④encourage each other互相鼓励 [高分句型] ①We can encourage each other when we feel tired. It makes me more likely to keep going.（when引导时间状语从句，说明群体锻炼的互助作用） ②When I exercise alone, I can focus on my own feelings and goals.（when引导时间状语从句，体现独自锻炼的专注性） 6．学校英文网站正在开展以“体质健康提升”为主题的征文活动。请你以“How to Improve My Physical Health”为题，写一篇投稿谈谈你在体质健康提升方面的做法和理由。 提示： (1)What kind of exercise do you usually do? (2)How do you do exercise? (3)What else can help you improve your physical health? Give your reasons. 注意： (1)词数80个左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； (2)短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及其他相关信息。 How to Improve My Physical Health Nowadays, people pay much more attention to physical health. For me, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 How to Improve My Physical Health Nowadays, people pay much more attention to physical health. For me, I have some useful ways to keep fit. First, I usually go running and playing basketball. I run for 20 minutes every morning in the park, which can make my heart stronger. After school, I play basketball with classmates twice a week. Besides exercise, I also have a healthy diet. I eat more vegetables and fruits and less junk food, because they provide enough nutrition for my body. Also, I sleep 8 hours every day to let my body rest well. These habits really help me stay healthy. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，点明自己有提升体质的实用方法； 第二步，具体阐述自己做的运动以及健康饮食和充足睡眠； 第三步，书写结语，总结这些习惯带来的好处。 [亮点词汇] ①keep fit 保持健康 ②healthy diet健康饮食 ③stay healthy保持健康 [高分句型] ①I run for 20 minutes every morning in the park, which can make my heart stronger.（定语从句） ②I eat more vegetables and fruits and less junk food, because they provide enough nutrition for my body.（原因状语从句） 7．体育活动是学生生活的重要组成部分。假定你是李华，请根据以下提示内容写一篇英语短文，介绍自己最喜欢的运动并说明喜欢这项运动的原因。 提示内容： 1. 说明自己最喜欢的运动； 2. 喜欢这项运动的原因（不少于三条）； 3. 发表感想。 要求： 1. 包括所有提示信息，可适当增加细节； 2. 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，语法正确； 3. 不少于70词（短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇：reason（原因），chance（机会），courage（勇气） I really like doing sports, and my favourite sport is ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I really like doing sports, and my favourite sport is basketball. I play it with my friends after school. I like it because it helps me keep healthy and strong. It also teaches me how to work as a team and build up courage when facing challenges. Besides, playing basketball gives me a chance to relax myself after studying. When I play it, I always feel happy and full of energy. I believe doing sports can make our life better and more exciting. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：材料作文，介绍自己最喜欢的运动并说明原因。 ②时态：以一般现在时为主。 ③提示：围绕喜欢的运动展开，说明至少三条理由，并表达个人感受。语言应简洁自然，符合初中生表达水平，词数控制在70词左右。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开篇点题，说明自己最喜欢的运动； 第二步：分别说明喜欢这项运动的三条原因； 第三步：表达自己的感受或希望。 [亮点词汇] ①keep healthy 保持健康 ②build up courage 增强勇气 ③work as a team 团队合作 ④relax oneself 放松自己 [高分句型] ①I like it because it helps me keep healthy and strong.（because引导原因状语从句） ②It also teaches me how to work as a team and build up courage when facing challenges.（特殊疑问词+不定式） ③When I play it, I always feel happy and full of energy.（when引导时间状语从句） ④I believe doing sports can make our life better and more exciting.（宾语从句） 8．假如你是李平，请阅读你的英国朋友John的电子邮件并用英语回复。 Hi Li Ping, How is it going? In your last letter, you said that you started doing more exercise. That’s really cool! What sport do you like best? How do you usually practise it? What benefits does exercise bring you? Please share your exercise habits—I want to be more active, too! Looking forward to your reply. John 注意：1. 回复须围绕上述问题展开，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 词数：80—100。回复的邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：benefit 益处。 Hi John, I’m very glad to share my exercise habits with you. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Ping 【答案】例文 Hi John,     I’m very glad to share my exercise habits with you.     My favorite sport is running, which I think is simple yet effective. I usually practice running in the park near my home. Every morning, when the air is fresh, I put on my running shoes and hit the trail. I start with a slow jog and gradually increase my pace. Sometimes, I set a goal for the distance I want to cover, like 5 kilometers.       Running has brought me many benefits. It not only keeps me fit but also clears my mind. Whenever I’m feeling stressed or overwhelmed, a good run makes me feel refreshed. It’s also a great way to start my day, giving me the energy and motivation I need.       Give it a try, and you’ll love it too! Li Ping 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本题是一封电子邮件； ②时态：本文用一般现在时； ③提示：回复John的邮件，和他分享自己的运动习惯，需要遵照所给要求，信息覆盖全面，适当补充细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表达很愿意和他分享自己的运动习惯，引出下文； 第二步，介绍自己最喜欢的运动以及自己如何进行练习，注意细节充分，三观正确； 第三步，分享这项运动带给自己的收获，注意用词准确，行文流畅； 第四步，表达期待。 [亮点词汇] ①hit the trail 出发，开始跑步 ②not only…but also… 不但……而且…… ③a great way to do sth. 做某事的好方式 [高分句型] ①My favorite sport is running, which I think is simple yet effective.（定语从句） ②Every morning, when the air is fresh, I put on my running shoes and hit the trail.（时间状语从句） 9．假设你校校报《英语园地》“Art”栏目正在举行征文活动。此次征文活动的主题为“你最喜欢的艺术形式”。请你根据征文通知，写一篇短文参加活动。 Art is an important part of our life. ●What art form do you like best? (literature, music, dance, painting...) ●When did you become interested in it? ●Do you have any stories about it? ●How important is it to you? 写作要求： 1.短文须包含以上征文通知里的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数100左右(标题已给出，不计入总词数)。 My Favorite Art Form ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: My Favorite Art Form My favorite art form is music. I first loved it at the age of seven, after hearing a wonderful piano piece at a concert. My story with music began when I started to learn the piano. The notes were hard to remember at first. Last year, I played a short piece at our school art festival. Everyone clapped and I felt so proud and happy. Music is very important in my life. It helps me relax when I am tired. Playing the piano makes me forget my worries. It teaches me that practice brings joy. To me, music is like a good friend who is always there. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：以一般现在时为主，穿插一般过去时； ③提示：围绕“最喜欢的艺术形式是音乐”展开写作，要点清晰，添加了个人经历细节，突出音乐对自身的意义。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇直接点明最喜欢的艺术形式是音乐，以及爱上音乐的时间和契机。 第二步，接着讲述自己的音乐学习经历，从初学的困难到在校园艺术节表演的收获。 第三步，最后阐述音乐在自己生活中的重要性和带来的影响，点明音乐的特殊意义。 [亮点词汇] ①art form艺术形式 ②at the age of在……岁时 [高分句型] ①I first loved it at the age of seven, after hearing a wonderful piano piece at a concert. (现在分词短语作时间状语) ②It teaches me that practice brings joy. (that引导宾语从句作teach的宾语) 10．音乐不仅能够给人们带来好的享受，还能在一定程度上疏解压力。假如你是Mike，校报正在进行有关音乐方面的征文稿，请你根据以下要点提示，写一篇英语短文，向校报投稿。 melody n. 旋律 build up confidence建立自信 purify one’s soul净化心灵 内容包括： ●What kind of music do you like? ●One experience where music helped you. ●Why do you like music? 要求： 1. 词数不少于80词； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 I like light music best because of its beautiful and gentle melody. Last month, I felt extremely nervous before a big exam. When I listened to a piece of soft music, I slowly became relaxed and calm. Finally, I did really well in that exam! I enjoy music for two reasons. Firstly, it helps build up my confidence. Secondly, it can deeply purify my soul. Listening to music not only makes me happy but also teaches me to cherish and love life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：话题作文； ②时态：一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：围绕音乐类型（轻音乐）、个人经历（考试前减压）、喜爱原因（建立自信/净化心灵）展开。 [写作步骤] 第一步：说明喜爱的音乐类型及原因； 第二步：描述音乐帮助的经历（考试前听歌放松）； 第三步：总结喜爱音乐的理由。 [亮点词汇] ①because of因为 ②build up建立 ③listen to听 [高分句型] ①When I listened to a piece of soft music, I slowly became relaxed and calm.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②Listening to music not only makes me happy but also teaches me to cherish and love life.（not only...but also...并列结构） 1 / 22 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $