Unit 9 Section 8 Writing Workshop-【新课程学案】2025-2026学年高中英语必修第三册配套课件PPT（北师大版)

该高中英语课件聚焦“学习反思”写作，涵盖过渡衔接词运用、篇章结构（首段概述收获反思过去、中段学到内容及反思、尾段今后计划）等核心知识点。课堂通过分析《记忆的秘密》反思范文导入，新知深化学习中过渡词（如“moreover”）学习为写作搭建词汇支架，写作专项提能提供结构和逻辑指导，课时检测巩固应用，形成完整学习支架。 其亮点在于融合语言能力、思维品质和学习能力培养，以“三步构思谋篇”引导学生构建逻辑清晰的文章，结合过渡词提升语言连贯性，提供参考范文和素材储备助迁移应用。学生能掌握写作方法提升表达能力，教师可借助系统资源高效教学。

Writing Workshop Section 8 课时目标 1.认真阅读作者对《记忆的秘密》文章的反思，理解篇章结构。 2.利用一些单词、短语和句型，学会写学习反思。 3.学会使用过渡衔接词，使文章层次分明。 新知深化学习 写作专项提能 课时检测 Contents 目录 01 02 03 3 01 新知深化学习 Moreover, I must also learn to do “spaced review”， especially during the first day after learning. 此外，我还必须学会进行“定时复习”，尤其是在学习后的第一天。 ★moreover adv.此外，而且 |用|法|感|知| ·(“运动健身”主题佳句)Bicycling is a good exercise; moreover, it doesn't pollute the air. 骑自行车是一项很好的运动，而且也不污染空气。 ·(“建议”类佳句)Moreover, the competition will supply you with a chance to develop your creativity and build friendship with other students who share the same interest with you.此外，这次竞赛将会给你提供一个机会，帮助你发展创造力，与志同道合的同学建立友谊。 [归纳点拨] (1)moreover意为“此外，而且；更有甚者”，常用作插入语，相当于what's more、 besides、 furthermore、 in addition等，可位于句首或句中。 (2)what's worse＝worse still/to make things worse更糟糕的是 |应|用|融|会| (完成句子) ①I like shopping online; _______________________, I like group purchase. 我喜欢网购，而且我喜欢团购。 ②____________, studying for a degree in different cultures is never easy.此外，在不同的文化中攻读学位从来都不是一件容易的事。 ③It's getting dark.________________________________________, it's raining harder and harder. 天要黑了。更糟糕的是，雨越下越大。 what's more/moreover Moreover To make things worse/What's worse/Worse still 02 写作专项提能 写作项目——Write a Learning Reflection　 本单元的写作项目是写一篇学习反思，主要总结归纳自己学习的收获和感想，属于议论文。一般会用简洁、生动的语言把对所学知识的反思准确、完整地表达出来，以使自己能有所提高。学习反思主要包括对过去知识的反思，反思从中学到了什么、如何提高自己等。 |由教材学写作| 一、学文体架构 阅读课文，总结该文体的框架结构如下： 二、学要点构思 学习反思是议论性较强的读书笔记，用切身体会、实践经验和生动的事例来阐明从“读”中悟出的道理。因此，文章既要叙述，又要说理。叙述是议论的基础，议论又是叙述的深化，二者相互结合。第一段主要反思自己过去对记忆的认识，引出话题。先点明《记忆的秘密》一文对自己的帮助，并提出自己在读这篇文章之前对记忆的认识不够充分，点题明确，过渡自然。第二段主要叙述了作者从《记忆的秘密》一文中学到的关于记忆的一些信息。在陈述自己的感悟时，引用了原文中的一些句子来进一步表明自己对记忆的理解。最后一段主要讲述为了提高自己的记忆作者要采取的措施，紧密结合自身实际，言之有物。 三、学行文逻辑 此类文章的行文通常按照从对所学文章的理解到自我反思的逻辑顺序推进，分析部分要条理清晰，反思内容要与文章紧密结合且具有一定深度和合理性。对自己过去的认识进行反思时常使用before ...I didn't know ...；反思现在的认识时常使用at the moment I understand ...; now I have learnt ...；介绍以后的计划或措施时常使用also; what's more/moreover; not only ... but also ...; in addition等使行文更连贯；在反思时常运用例证法来证明自己的观点，如for example等。 [提能训练]　(完成句子) ①________________________, I didn't know so many celebrities would be present. 在参加这个晚会之前，我不知道有那么多的名人会出席。 ②Moving out of this city means losing ______________________ _________________________________. 搬离这座城市意味着你不仅会失去一些朋友，还会失去很多机会。 Before attending the party not only some of your friends but also a lot of opportunities |具体写作指导| A Learning Reflection about “Life-Long Learning” ——写一篇关于“终身学习”的学习反思 第一步：构思谋篇 Tense Simple present/future tense Person First person Main points Part 1：The past knowledge and the reflection Part 2：The present understanding Part 3：The future plan or ways to improve 第二步：要点表达 第一部分　概括收获及反思过去 ①“The Importance of Life-Long Learning” has helped me better understand _______________________. 《终身学习的重要性》帮助我更好地理解了学习的重要性。 ②Before reading the text, I ________________________________ _____________________________about our learning. 在阅读这篇文章之前，我不知道有这么多关于我们学习的令人兴奋和鼓舞人心的例子。 how our learning counts didn't know that there are so many exciting and inspiring examples 第二部分　介绍学到的内容及反思 1．学到的内容 ①At the moment I understand the significance of life-long learning, _______________________________________.此刻，我明白了终身学习的意义，它可以对我们的生活产生很大的影响。 ②I also learnt that ________________________, you can improve yourself through learning. 我也学到了，无论你多大年纪，你都可以通过学习来提高自己。 which can make a great difference to our life no matter how old you are 2．举例说明 Just as the saying says, “You can't teach an old dog new tricks.” ___________________________________.For me, it is beneficial to know that ________________________. 正如俗话所说，“老年人很难适应新事物”，这在今天被证明是错误的。对我来说，知道学习永远不会太晚是有益的。 which turns out to be wrong nowadays it's never too late to learn 第三部分　总结全文，点明将来的学习计划或改进措施 1．回应主题，总结全文 Getting to know the importance of life-long learning means learning ________________________, but also the ways to finish it. 要了解终身学习的重要性，意味着不仅要学习有关终身学习的事实，还要学习完成终身学习的方法。 not only the facts about it 2．介绍将来的计划 ①In my opinion, I _________________________ and spare no effort to strengthen my will. 在我看来，我计划效仿榜样，不遗余力地增强我的意志。 ②_____________________________, I'll work hard to keep learning and practicing. 在获得新知识时，我会努力不断学习和实践。 ③Moreover, I must also learn to do continuous update for __________________________, especially when we get older and older. 此外，我还必须学会不断更新我已经学过的东西，特别是当我们越来越老的时候。 plan to follow the models When acquiring new knowledge what I have learnt already [针对练笔] 请结合你自己的英语学习情况，写一篇学习反思。 参考范文： There was a time when my thoughts wandered.Though I spent two hours in memorising words of a unit, I didn't really grasp the words.But when I concentrate on the words, I just need 40 minutes or less to grasp the words of a unit.To promote efficiency and address this challenge, I reflected on this matter.Nowadays, if I am going to do some reading, I will ask myself a question, “Are you ready to devote yourself to English now？” If my answer is “no”， I won't start the work as it is no use learning English without attention.In this way, I learn English for greater efficiency and my English has improved a lot. |写作素材储备| (一)写作佳句 1．常用开头句 (1)“The Secrets of Your Memory” has helped me better understand how my memory works. 《记忆的秘密》帮助我更好地理解我的记忆是如何工作的。 (2)The whole article about learning lets me gain more on how to improve my study. 关于学习的整篇文章让我对如何提高我的学习有了更多的了解。 (3)After reading this article “On Study”， I have a better understanding of the methods of studying. 读了《论学习》这篇文章后，我对学习方法有了更好的了解。 2．常用中间句 (1)We should form the habit of making plans for our study and keep a good balance between study and entertainment.我们应该养成为学习制订计划的习惯，并在学习和娱乐之间保持良好的平衡。 (2)If we have difficulties, we can turn to our teachers and classmates for help. 如果有困难，我们可以向老师和同学们寻求帮助。 (3)A wide variety of after-class activities will broaden our horizons, enrich the school life and make us relaxed.丰富多彩的课外活动能拓宽我们的视野，丰富学校生活并让我们放松。 3．常用结束句 (1)I'm sure these methods will help me improve my learning efficiency. 我确信这些方法会帮助我提高学习效率。 (2)I will try these methods to make great progress in my study. 我将尝试这些方法，以在学习上取得很大的进步。 (3)If I change my attitude to learning and think positively, I will get on well with my study. 如果我改变自己的学习态度，积极思考，我的学习就会进展良好。 (二)主题语段 1．反思学习中的问题 Looking back on my English learning path, I was filled with mixed feelings of joy and sorrow.The key to learning English well is to develop a deep interest.However, I was short of interest.I memorised sufficient words, but I couldn't guess all their meanings from the context. 回首我的英语学习历程，我喜忧参半。学好英语的关键是培养浓厚的兴趣。然而，我缺乏兴趣。我记住了足够多的单词，但我无法从上下文中猜出它们的全部含义。 2．改进的措施 To address these problems, first, I plan to create a quiet study environment. I will study in a room without distractions such as a TV or noisy siblings. Second, I will make a detailed study schedule. By strictly following it, I can make sure that every task has enough time to be completed. Third, I will take regular breaks. For example, after studying for 45 minutes, I will take a 10-minute break to relax my mind and body. I hope these measures will help me improve my study. 为了解决这些问题，首先，我打算营造一个安静的学习环境。我会在一个没有诸如电视或者吵闹的兄弟姐妹之类干扰因素的房间里学习。其次，我将制订一个详细的学习计划。通过严格遵守它，我能确保每项任务都有足够的时间去完成。第三，我会定期休息。例如，学习45分钟后，我会休息10分钟来放松身心。我希望这些措施能帮助我提升学习。 03 课时检测 Ⅰ.靓表达升级(10分) 1．Your encouragement and instructions have guided me in the right direction.(强调句) →_________________________________________ have guided me in the right direction. 2．Most important of all, I will not miss every chance to communicate with others in Chinese.(主语从句) →______________________________ I will not miss every chance to communicate with others in Chinese. It is your encouragement and instructions that What is the most important is that 3．You fix all your attention on studies, which makes you feel stressed and find it difficult to get on well with your classmates.(用非谓语动词作状语升级) →You fix all your attention on studies, _________________________ _______________________________________________. 4．Speaking and listening are very important for language learning.You are sure to make great progress by speaking and learning.(用“介词＋关系代词”升级) →Speaking and listening are very important for language learning, ________________________________________. thus making you feel stressed and find it difficult to get on well with your classmates by which you are sure to make great progress 5．If we contact traditional Chinese culture in our daily life, we can make more people get to know our country's rich culture.(用only倒装结构升级) →______________________________________________________________ make more people get to know our country's rich culture. Only by contacting traditional Chinese culture in our daily life can we Ⅱ.微语境写作(共8空，16分) 1．①______________________________________________________ (我发现掌握一些习语的意思很有挑战性) while reading English texts.They often confuse me, and ②________________________________ ________ (我不确定如何正确解释它们)．I know that idioms are a crucial part of English language learning, so ③______________________________ _____________________ (我将采取措施提高我对它们的理解)． I find it quite challenging to grasp the meanings of some idioms I'm not sure how to interpret them correctly I will take measures to improve my understanding of them 2．④________________________________________ (我在英语学习方面遇到了很多困难)．First, I find our texts full of new words that ⑤________________________________ (对我来说难以记住)．Besides, the texts are too long for me to recite.What's more, ⑥______________ ___________________ (语法也很难学)． 3．In my opinion, attitude is everything.⑦___________________ (不管你做什么), you must do it well even if you may fail many times.Sooner or later ⑧________________________________________ ______________________ (你对工作或生活的积极态度会得到回报)． I have met much difficulty in learning English are very difficult for me to memorise grammar is also very difficult to learn No matter what you do you will be rewarded for your positive attitude towards your work or life Ⅲ.应用文写作(15分) 假定你是李华，明日你班英语课课前3分钟自由表达的主题是“如何高效学习”。请你以“How to Study Effectively”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你对高效学习的看法。内容包括： 1．你对高效学习的理解；2．你的建议。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2．请按如下格式作答。 How to Study Effectively ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文： How to Study Effectively Efficient learning means using the shortest time to understand what you do not know and fulfill what you cannot do, constantly improving yourself.There are some suggestions we can use for maximum efficiency. First, a good attitude is an indispensable factor.However smart you are, as long as you have a bad attitude, there is surely no good result.What we need to do next is to set a specific goal.Just as importantly, we should identify everyday work and make a sensible plan. All in all, only when we have a clear plan and stick to the well-made plan, can we see our hard work pay off. Ⅳ.读后续写(25分) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My efforts to learn, read, write and speak English have been a significant challenge in my life.When I first came to the United States about 12 years ago, I could barely communicate in English.Today, although I still have much to learn, I realize I have made a good amount of progress in my years abroad. I grew up in a small village, where no one I knew spoke English.I wasn't exposed to English or any other language through books, magazines or TV.Only when I later went to study in Hong Kong, China, was I exposed to American and Western culture through movies, music and other media.Although English is common there, I still couldn't speak, read or write much after graduating from high school. In my early 20s, I decided to move to New York City and I was determined to make a new life for myself there.However, I didn't want to end up speaking my native language because I knew that learning English was very important if I wanted to be successful in this new country.New York seemed like another world and without speaking much English it was even more difficult to make friends. I didn't have a teacher at first, so I tried every way I could to learn the language.One way that was very useful was listening to the radio and watching TV, mostly news.I tried to speak like the people I heard on TV.They spoke more clearly and it was easier to understand than the English I heard people speaking in my neighborhood.I picked up one word at a time, and looked them up in the dictionary.I would also try to write down the words and remember them.I made a goal of learning at least 20 new words every day. 注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 After a while I made friends. ________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ Thinking back on the ways I have learned English over the years, I have something to say._________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ 参考范文： After a while I made friends.They were another way I learned English.I would pick up a lot of cool expressions just from spending time with them and listening to them speak.My friends were patient with me and helped me a lot, but I often became discouraged.Seeing I gave up speaking English, they tried to encourage me to speak out.They often invited me to their parties where I was surrounded by English atmosphere and I was forced to communicate with them in English. Thinking back on the ways I have learned English over the years, I have something to say.It is clear that I am a visual learner — I learn by seeing and looking.I had the most success when reading and using written materials.I enjoyed reading books, newspapers and magazines.Of course, it is also very important to be able to speak and listen.So, I spent lots of time trying to develop these skills, like getting involved in social activities with friends.So, if I could become more and more fluent, so can you！ 本课结束 更多精彩内容请登录：www.zghkt.cn $