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专题07 应用文写作
主题01 人与自我
Passage 1
(24-25高二下·天津滨海新区·期中)假定你是晨光中学高二学生李津,得知天津博物馆正在招募暑假期间的志愿者,展示天津并帮助外国游客有更好的参观体验,了解天津的历史和文化。你欲参加并给相关负责人写一封申请信,内容包括:
1.写信的目的;
2.介绍自己的情况;
3.对志愿活动的理解(宣传天津、让外国游客了解天津并对天津留下深刻印象);
4.希望能被录用。
注意:1.词数100左右(文章开头已写,不计入总词数);2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir or Madam.
I’m Li Jin, a senior high school student from Chenguang High School.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Jin
Passage 2
(23-24高二下·天津·期中)假如你是晨光中学学生会主席李津。随着外卖行业的普及,你看到身边的好多同学都用外卖代替正餐。你觉得这不是个好习惯。请你结合以下要点,为校英文广播站撰稿:
(1)常吃外卖的危害;
(2)提出健康饮食的建议;
(3)发出倡议。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可以适当增加细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:外卖takeaway
Dear fellow students,
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Passage 3
(24-25高二下·天津东丽·期中)为积极响应节能号召,共建绿色家园,请你以学生会的名义用英文写一封以“节约用电,珍惜能源”为主题的倡议书, 内容包括:
1.如今浪费电的现象
2.节约用电的意义
3.日常节电的措施
4.自己感悟
注意: 1.词数100 词左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear students,
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Yours,
Li Hua
主题02 人与社会
Passage 1
(24-25高二下·天津·期中)假定你是晨光中学的李津,你的英国交换生朋友Chris想使用AI完成中文家庭作业,他写邮件向你征求意见,请你给他回信。内容包括:
(1)可以使用,但要适度:
(2)建议借助AI查找有用信息,以辅助完成家庭作业;
(3)注意辨别AI提供的信息是否真实、正确。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可以适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Jin
Passage 2
(24-25高二下·天津和平·期中)假设你是晨光中学的李津,近年来,露营活动越来越流行,人们走进自然、拥抱自然,学校的英语公众号正在举办the Charm of Camping的征文活动,请你写一篇稿件,内容包括:
1)露营活动受到人们的喜爱;
2)分析该现象产生的原因;(根据饼状图所示,选择2-3个原因分析)
3)鼓励大家去露营。
要求:
1)词数不少于100;
2)可以适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
The Charm of Camping
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主题01 人与自我
Passage 1
(24-25高二下·天津南开·期中)假设你是学生会主席李津,你校上周组织全体学生会成员参观了海鸥手表博物馆。作为学生代表,你将在升旗讲话中分享参观见闻和参观感受。内容包括:
(1)活动的时间、地点和目的;
(2)活动的内容(了解海鸥手表的发展历史——始创于1955年,参观不同种类的手表,体验“中国制造”)和感受;
(3)谈谈你对工匠精神的理解。
注意:
(1) 词数不少于100词;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:海鸥手表博物馆 Sea-gull watch Museum;工匠精神 craftsmanship
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Passage 2
(24-25高二下·天津滨海新·期中)假设你是晨光中学学生李津。为了让学生亲近大自然,你校预计于5月1日举办春游踏青活动,请您写一封邮件邀请你的英国留学生朋友Chris共享春景,内容要点如下:
(1)简要介绍时间、地点并发出邀请;
(2)介绍活动安排(登山、野餐、赏景等)及这次活动的意义(自然对于我们的重要性);
(3)希望得到尽快回复。
注意:1.词数不少于100词;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使内容充实、行文连贯。
参考词汇:春游the spring outing
Dear Chris,
Good news for you!
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Yours,
Li Jin
Passage 3
(24-25高二下·天津河西·期中)假如你是李华,你的学校正在开展“传承工匠精神”的主题活动,请你写一篇演讲稿,包括以下要点:
(1) 一位具有工匠精神的中国人物及其事迹;
(2) 通过细节描写体现其专注、坚持与追求卓越的品质;
(3) 作为高中生,应该如何在学习和生活中传承工匠精神。
词数:不少于100词。
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主题02 人与社会
Passage 1
(23-24高二下·天津河西·期中)假定你是李华,你校英语报“Great People”专栏正在征文,请写一篇短文,介绍你心目中最具工匠精神的名人,并投稿。
内容包括:1. 名人简介;2. 主要事迹和贡献;3. 对你的影响。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Passage 2
(23-24高二下·天津北辰·期中)假设你是李津,你所在的城区引进了无人驾驶公交车。请你用英语给你校英语校报写一篇文章,谈一谈你对这项新科技的感想,内容包括:
(1)简单介绍无人驾驶公交车;
(2)无人驾驶公交车的优点 (安全、准时、经济);
(3)你对无人驾驶公交车的看法。
注意:
(1) 词数不少于 100词;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
The Driverless Bus
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Passage 3
(23-24高二下·天津·期中)近年来,科技的高速发展给人们的生活带来了巨大的改变。假设你是李华,有意参加你校将举办的TECH TALK活动。请以“Technology and Lifestyles”为题,写一篇演讲稿,内容如下:
1. 科技的重要性;
2. 举例说明科技对人类生活的积极影响;
3. 你对科技应用的态度。
Ladies and Gentlemen,
I’m Li Hua. I am delighted to speak on the topic of “Technology and Lifestyles” at the TECH TALK event.
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Passage 4
(23-24高二下·天津河西·期中)假如你是李华,你所在的学校将于6月5日下午3点在俱乐部中心举办一场中国传统手工艺品展览会。请你给你的外教Mr Clarks写一封邮件,邀请他参加,要点如下:
(1)展览会的时间、地点、主要内容;
(2)展览会的意义;
(3)希望对方参加这场展览会。
字数不少于100。
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专题07 应用文写作
主题01 人与自我
Passage 1
(24-25高二下·天津滨海新区·期中)假定你是晨光中学高二学生李津,得知天津博物馆正在招募暑假期间的志愿者,展示天津并帮助外国游客有更好的参观体验,了解天津的历史和文化。你欲参加并给相关负责人写一封申请信,内容包括:
1.写信的目的;
2.介绍自己的情况;
3.对志愿活动的理解(宣传天津、让外国游客了解天津并对天津留下深刻印象);
4.希望能被录用。
注意:1.词数100左右(文章开头已写,不计入总词数);2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir or Madam.
I’m Li Jin, a senior high school student from Chenguang High School.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Jin
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Jin, a senior high school student from Chenguang High School. Upon learning that you are recruiting volunteers to assist foreign visitors at Tianjin Museum during the summer vacation, I am writing with great enthusiasm to apply for the position.
I am confident that I am qualified for this position. First and foremost, as a native of Tianjin and a history lover, I am familiar with the history and modern development of Tianjin, which equips me to excel in this role. In addition, with an easy-going and considerate personality, I can build friendly bonds with foreign visitors as well as offer them timely help. Meanwhile, I have a good command of English, which enables me to communicate with foreign visitors fluently and clearly. Taking all these strengths into account, I can ensure an enjoyable visit to Tianjin Museum for visitors. More importantly, I believe this voluntary work will not only leave a lasting impression of Tianjin on foreign visitors, but also showcase Tianjin to the world.
I sincerely hope to be chosen as a volunteer. If selected, I will make every effort to live up to your expectations and ensure an unforgettable experience for every visitor. Thank you for considering my application.
Yours sincerely,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给天津博物馆的负责人写信申请做暑期志愿者。
【详解】1.词汇积累
考虑到:take sth into account→take sth into consideration
真诚地:sincerely→genuinely
确保:ensure→make sure
尽一切努力:make every effort→try one’s best
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I sincerely hope to be chosen as a volunteer.
拓展句:I sincerely hope that I can be chosen as a volunteer.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am confident that I am qualified for this position. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Meanwhile, I have a good command of English, which enables me to communicate with foreign visitors fluently and clearly.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
Passage 2
(23-24高二下·天津·期中)假如你是晨光中学学生会主席李津。随着外卖行业的普及,你看到身边的好多同学都用外卖代替正餐。你觉得这不是个好习惯。请你结合以下要点,为校英文广播站撰稿:
(1)常吃外卖的危害;
(2)提出健康饮食的建议;
(3)发出倡议。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可以适当增加细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:外卖takeaway
Dear fellow students,
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【答案】Dear fellow students,
With the popularity of takeaway, I’ve noticed many students around me choose it as a regular meal. However, it is an unhealthy diet.
First of all, takeaway contains high fat and calorie. Depending on it too much, we are likely to put on weight. Besides, without enough nutrition, our body will not function well in the long run. To solve this problem, we should bear a balanced diet in mind. In our daily life, we’d better take in more grains, eggs, milk, fruit and vegetables to satisfy our daily needs. What’s more, home-made food is a better choice for us, which is more nutritious and tasty. We can sense the family love as well while we enjoy it.
Let’s have less takeaway from now on and form a healthy eating habit.
【导语】本文是一篇应用文,要求考生就健康饮食的问题向全体同学发出号召。考生应该补充适当细节以使行文流畅。
【详解】1. 词汇积累:
流行:popularity→trendiness, prevalence
不健康的:unhealthy→harmful, detrimental
营养:nutrition→nourishment, sustenance
家庭关爱:family love→familial affection, domestic warmth
2. 句式拓展:
简单句变复合句
原句:Depending on it too much, we are likely to put on weight.
拓展句:If we depend on it too much, we are likely to put on weight.
【点睛】【高分句型1】What’s more, home-made food is a better choice for us, which is more nutritious and tasty.(which引导的非限定性定语从句)
【高分句型2】We can sense the family love as well while we enjoy it.(while引导的时间状语从句)
Passage 3
(24-25高二下·天津东丽·期中)为积极响应节能号召,共建绿色家园,请你以学生会的名义用英文写一封以“节约用电,珍惜能源”为主题的倡议书, 内容包括:
1.如今浪费电的现象
2.节约用电的意义
3.日常节电的措施
4.自己感悟
注意: 1.词数100 词左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear students,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear students,
Electricity plays a very important role in our daily life today, and we can not live without it. It worries me a lot to notice that with the rapid development of our country, electricity is being consumed too much, which threatens the sustainable economic growth.
Electricity is the basis of our life. Therefore, I strongly advocate that we should saved electricity immediately. To achieve the goal, let’s start with some small acts around us. For example, switch off the household appliances in time. Use the stairs as often as possible. All in all, form a good habit of saving electricity.
If we take measures, we will make a better environment. Every small step counts! However busy we are, remember to save electricity from small acts. If everyone take part in the energy-saving movement, earth must be more wonderful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以学生会的名义写一封以“节约用电,珍惜能源”为主题的倡议书,包括浪费电的现象、节约用电的意义、日常节电的措施及个人感悟。
【详解】1.词汇积累
非常:very→ extremely
担忧:worry→ concern
快速的:rapid→ quick
立即:immediately→ instantly
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Electricity plays a very important role in our daily life today, and we can not live without it.
拓展句:Electricity plays a very important role in our daily life today, without which we can not live.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It worries me a lot to notice that with the rapid development of our country, electricity is being consumed too much, which threatens the sustainable economic growth(运用了that引导的宾语从句、which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】If we take measures, we will make a better environment.(运用了If引导的条件状语从句)
主题02 人与社会
Passage 1
(24-25高二下·天津·期中)假定你是晨光中学的李津,你的英国交换生朋友Chris想使用AI完成中文家庭作业,他写邮件向你征求意见,请你给他回信。内容包括:
(1)可以使用,但要适度:
(2)建议借助AI查找有用信息,以辅助完成家庭作业;
(3)注意辨别AI提供的信息是否真实、正确。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可以适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Jin
【答案】Dear Chris,
I was really happy to get your email. I know you want to use AI to finish your Chinese homework. It’s fine to use it, but don’t overdo it.
AI can help you a lot. You can ask it to find useful information. For example, if you need to write a composition, you can ask AI for some ideas on how to organize it. You can also get some good sentences from it. This will make it easier for you to do your homework.
But you must remember that not all the information AI gives is right. Some of it may be wrong. So, you need to check the facts by yourself. This is also a good way to learn.
I hope my advice can help you. Keep in mind that the point of homework is to make you better at Chinese. Use AI properly.
Yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生就英国交换生朋友Chris想使用AI完成中文家庭作业这事给他回信并给出一些意见。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:happy→glad
完成:finish→accomplish
帮助:help→assist
例如:for example→for instance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:AI can help you a lot.
拓展句:There is no doubt that AI can help you a lot.
【点睛】【高分句型1】For example, if you need to write a composition, you can ask AI for some ideas on how to organize it. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
【高分句型2】But you must remember that not all the information AI gives is right.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
Passage 2
(24-25高二下·天津和平·期中)假设你是晨光中学的李津,近年来,露营活动越来越流行,人们走进自然、拥抱自然,学校的英语公众号正在举办the Charm of Camping的征文活动,请你写一篇稿件,内容包括:
1)露营活动受到人们的喜爱;
2)分析该现象产生的原因;(根据饼状图所示,选择2-3个原因分析)
3)鼓励大家去露营。
要求:
1)词数不少于100;
2)可以适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
The Charm of Camping
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【答案】
The Charm of Camping
In recent years, camping has become increasingly popular among people of all ages. As more people seek to reconnect with nature, camping offers a perfect escape from the pressures of daily life.
One major reason for this trend is the desire to escape city life. Surrounded by tall buildings and busy streets, many people long for fresh air and open spaces, making camping a refreshing getaway. Another important factor is its health and wellness benefits. Being outdoors helps reduce stress, improve mood, and promote physical activity.
Camping not only brings us closer to nature but also to each other. It creates valuable memories with family and friends. So why not pack your bag and go camping?
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“the Charm of Camping”为题写一篇短文,向学校的英语公众号投稿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
压力:pressure → stress
主要的:major → primary
重要的:important → significant
珍贵的:valuable → cherished
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:One major reason for this trend is the desire to escape city life.
拓展句:One major reason for this trend is that many people desire to escape city life.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As more people seek to reconnect with nature, camping offers a perfect escape from the pressures of daily life.(运用了as引导的状语从句)
【高分句型2】Surrounded by tall buildings and busy streets, many people long for fresh air and open spaces, making camping a refreshing getaway.(运用了过去分词surrounded和现在分词making作状语)
主题01 人与自我
Passage 1
(24-25高二下·天津南开·期中)假设你是学生会主席李津,你校上周组织全体学生会成员参观了海鸥手表博物馆。作为学生代表,你将在升旗讲话中分享参观见闻和参观感受。内容包括:
(1)活动的时间、地点和目的;
(2)活动的内容(了解海鸥手表的发展历史——始创于1955年,参观不同种类的手表,体验“中国制造”)和感受;
(3)谈谈你对工匠精神的理解。
注意:
(1) 词数不少于100词;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:海鸥手表博物馆 Sea-gull watch Museum;工匠精神 craftsmanship
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【答案】Dear teachers and fellow students,
Last week, all members of the Student Union visited the Sea-gull Watch Museum, aiming to explore the charm of “Made in China”.
Founded in 1955, Sea-gull watches have witnessed China’s remarkable progress in watchmaking. During the visit, we were amazed by various collections, from classic mechanical watches to modern smart ones. What impressed us most was the intricate craftsmanship behind each piece. Tiny gears and precise movements demonstrated the dedication of Chinese artisans.
This visit reshaped my understanding of craftsmanship. It’s not merely about perfecting skills but also about pursuing excellence with patience and perseverance. As students, we should apply this spirit to our studies, constantly striving for self-improvement. Let’s carry forward this precious spirit and contribute to our country’s development!
Thank you!
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生就学校组织全体学生会成员参观海鸥手表博物馆的活动,写一篇演讲稿,在升旗讲话中分享参观见闻和参观感受。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参观:visit→pay a visit to
各种各样的:various→all kinds of
追求:pursue→go in for
应该:should→be supposed to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Founded in 1955, Sea-gull watches have witnessed China’s remarkable progress in watchmaking.
拓展句:Sea-gull watches, which was founded in 1995, have witnessed China’s remarkable progress in watchmaking.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Founded in 1955, Sea-gull watches have witnessed China’s remarkable progress in watchmaking.(运用了过去分词短语作状语)
[高分句型2]What impressed us most was the intricate craftsmanship behind each piece.(运用了what引导主语从句)
Passage 2
(24-25高二下·天津滨海新·期中)假设你是晨光中学学生李津。为了让学生亲近大自然,你校预计于5月1日举办春游踏青活动,请您写一封邮件邀请你的英国留学生朋友Chris共享春景,内容要点如下:
(1)简要介绍时间、地点并发出邀请;
(2)介绍活动安排(登山、野餐、赏景等)及这次活动的意义(自然对于我们的重要性);
(3)希望得到尽快回复。
注意:1.词数不少于100词;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使内容充实、行文连贯。
参考词汇:春游the spring outing
Dear Chris,
Good news for you!
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Yours,
Li Jin
【答案】
Dear Chris,
Good news for you! Our school is organizing a spring outing to Siming Mountain on May 1, and I’d love to invite you to join us. It’s a perfect chance to embrace nature after weeks of study!
The day will start with a morning hike. The mountain trail is lined with blooming wildflowers and tall pine trees, offering breathtaking views at every turn. We’ll reach the summit around noon, where a picnic awaits—imagine enjoying sandwiches and fruit while overlooking a sea of green hills! In the afternoon, we’ll wander along a nearby stream, appreciating the clear water and singing birds. The trip aims to remind us of nature’s role in our lives: it’s not just a backdrop, but a source of peace and inspiration that helps us recharge and think more creatively.
I hope you can come and experience this firsthand. Let me know if you’re interested, and I’ll help you prepare comfortable shoes and a light jacket. The bus leaves the school gate at 7:30 a.m., so we need to arrive early. Looking forward to your reply soon!
Yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邮件邀请你的英国留学生朋友Chris参加你校预计于5月1日举办春游踏青活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
机会:chance→opportunity
提供:offer→provide
欣赏:appreciate→admire
帮助:help→assist
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The mountain trail is lined with blooming wildflowers and tall pine trees, offering breathtaking views at every turn.
拓展句:The mountain trail is lined with blooming wildflowers and tall pine trees, which offer breathtaking views at every turn.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 We’ll reach the summit around noon, where a picnic awaits—imagine enjoying sandwiches and fruit while overlooking a sea of green hills!(运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】 I hope you can come and experience this firsthand.(运用了省略that的宾语从句)
Passage 3
(24-25高二下·天津河西·期中)假如你是李华,你的学校正在开展“传承工匠精神”的主题活动,请你写一篇演讲稿,包括以下要点:
(1) 一位具有工匠精神的中国人物及其事迹;
(2) 通过细节描写体现其专注、坚持与追求卓越的品质;
(3) 作为高中生,应该如何在学习和生活中传承工匠精神。
词数:不少于100词。
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【答案】One possible version:
Good morning! My topic is “The Story of Zhang Lao and His Lifelong Craft”.
In Jingdezhen, there lives a man whose hands have shaped clay into art for over six decades. His name is Zhang Lao, a master porcelain craftsman. One of his most famous works is a blue-and-white vase that took him three years to complete. The vase, now displayed in a national museum, features a delicate landscape painting inspired by traditional Chinese ink art. It was crafted entirely by hand using ancestral techniques.
More than a craftsman, Zhang Lao is a guardian of cultural heritage. His life teaches us that the spirit of craftsmanship is not just about creating beautiful objects but about preserving the values of dedication. His vase reminds me mastery demands patience. When facing challenges, I’ll embrace his perseverance to pursue excellence.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份,写一篇有关“传承工匠精神”的演讲稿,应首先分享一位具有工匠精神的中国人物及其事迹,用细节描写突显其品质,再说明高中生应如何在学习和生活中传承工匠精神。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
有名的:famous→well-known
完成:complete→finish, accomplish
展示:display→exhibit, show
需要:demand→call for
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The vase, now displayed in a national museum, features a delicate landscape painting inspired by traditional Chinese ink art.
拓展句:The vase, which is now displayed in a national museum, features a delicate landscape painting inspired by traditional Chinese ink art.
【点睛】[高分句型1] In Jingdezhen, there lives a man whose hands have shaped clay into art for over six decades. (运用了完全倒装结构、whose引导限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] His life teaches us that the spirit of craftsmanship is not just about creating beautiful objects but about preserving the values of dedication. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
主题02 人与社会
Passage 1
(23-24高二下·天津河西·期中)假定你是李华,你校英语报“Great People”专栏正在征文,请写一篇短文,介绍你心目中最具工匠精神的名人,并投稿。
内容包括:1. 名人简介;2. 主要事迹和贡献;3. 对你的影响。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Born in July 1924 in Beijing, Ye Jiaying is a Chinese-born Canadian poet and scholar of classical Chinese literature.
Professor Ye devoted herself to carrying forward classical Chinese poetry. And with the popularity of her great works, she has become famous among the people who love Chinese poetry. Apart from her academic contributions, she also donated about 35 million yuan to Nankai University to support the study of traditional Chinese culture.
Professor Ye has demonstrated the spirit of craftsmanship in the spread of Chinese culture and truly deserves our respect. She inspires us to devote ourselves whole-heartedly to our future career and realize our dream.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学校英语报“Great People”专栏的正在进行的征文活动投稿,介绍自己心目中最具工匠精神的名人。
【详解】1.词汇积累
著名的:famous→well-known/noted
除……外:apart from→in addition to
捐赠,捐献:donate...to...→contribute...to...
展现:demonstrate→showcase/present
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Born in July 1924 in Beijing, Ye Jiaying is a Chinese-born Canadian poet and scholar of classical Chinese literature.
拓展句: Ye Jiaying, who was born in July 1924 in Beijing, is a Chinese-born Canadian poet and scholar of classical Chinese literature.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Born in July 1924 in Beijing, Ye Jiaying is a Chinese-born Canadian poet and scholar of classical Chinese literature. (运用了过去分词短语作状语)
【高分句型2】And with the popularity of her great works, she has become famous among the people who love Chinese poetry.(运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
Passage 2
(23-24高二下·天津北辰·期中)假设你是李津,你所在的城区引进了无人驾驶公交车。请你用英语给你校英语校报写一篇文章,谈一谈你对这项新科技的感想,内容包括:
(1)简单介绍无人驾驶公交车;
(2)无人驾驶公交车的优点 (安全、准时、经济);
(3)你对无人驾驶公交车的看法。
注意:
(1) 词数不少于 100词;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
The Driverless Bus
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【答案】 With the rapid development of technology, the driverless bus has appeared in our city. Just as its name shows, the driverless bus is a bus controlled by a computer system instead of a human driver.
The driverless bus has many advantages. First, it can reduce the danger of exposing the driver to tired driving. Thus, it is safer than a normal bus driven by a human. Second, it is more punctual because it is controlled by a computer. Third, the cost of hiring a driver is also saved.
In my opinion, with so many advantages, the driverless bus will surely become more popular in the near future.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就所在的城区引进了无人驾驶公交车这一事件谈谈对这项新科技的感想。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
而不是:instead of → rather than
减少:reduce → decrease
雇佣:hire→ employ
依我来看:in my opinion→ as far as I’m concerned
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:With the rapid development of technology, the driverless bus has appeared in our city.
拓展句:As the technology develop rapidly, the driverless bus has appeared in our city.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Just as its name shows, the driverless bus is a bus controlled by a computer system instead of a human driver.(运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Second, it is more punctual because it is controlled by a computer. (运用了because 引导的原因状语从句)
Passage 3
(23-24高二下·天津·期中)近年来,科技的高速发展给人们的生活带来了巨大的改变。假设你是李华,有意参加你校将举办的TECH TALK活动。请以“Technology and Lifestyles”为题,写一篇演讲稿,内容如下:
1. 科技的重要性;
2. 举例说明科技对人类生活的积极影响;
3. 你对科技应用的态度。
Ladies and Gentlemen,
I’m Li Hua. I am delighted to speak on the topic of “Technology and Lifestyles” at the TECH TALK event.
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【答案】One possible version:
Ladies and Gentlemen,
I’m Li Hua. I am delighted to speak on the topic of “Technology and Lifestyles” at the TECH TALK event. The development of technology has brought a massive transformation to our lives.
Technology has impacted our lives in so many areas, including healthcare, communication, and transportation. For example, medical technology has advanced treatments, allowing us to save more lives. Communication technology enables us to connect across the globe, further expanding our horizons. Additionally, transportation technology has made travel more efficient and cost-effective.
However, in spite of its many advances, technology has some limitations and negative impacts. Over-dependence on technology can create social and personal problems, such as addiction and mental issues.
To conclude, technology plays a critical role in society, which we must use wisely and responsibly. We must utilize the benefits of technology and pay attention to its possible negative consequences. By working together, we can create a healthier and more sustainable future.
【导语】本书面表达是一篇应用文写作,题目要求学生以李华的身份,以“Technology and Lifestyles”为题写一篇演讲稿,谈一下科技的高速发展给人们的生活带来的改变,需涵盖科技的重要性、积极影响以及个人态度。
【详解】1.词汇积累
此外:additionally→in addition, besides, furthermore, moreover
总之:to conclude→all in all, in a word, in short, in brief
重要的:critical→significant, crucial
可能的:possible→potential
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:However, in spite of its many advances, technology has some limitations and negative impacts.
拓展句:However, although technology has made many advances, it still has some limitations and negative impacts.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Communication technology enables us to connect across the globe, further expanding our horizons. (运用了现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】To conclude, technology plays a critical role in society, which we must use wisely and responsibly. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
Passage 4
(23-24高二下·天津河西·期中)假如你是李华,你所在的学校将于6月5日下午3点在俱乐部中心举办一场中国传统手工艺品展览会。请你给你的外教Mr Clarks写一封邮件,邀请他参加,要点如下:
(1)展览会的时间、地点、主要内容;
(2)展览会的意义;
(3)希望对方参加这场展览会。
字数不少于100。
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【答案】One possible version:
Dear Mr Clarks,
I am writing to invite you to visit an exciting exhibition. The theme of the exhibition is Chinese Traditional Handicrafts. In this exhibition, you will see exquisite traditional handicrafts, such as embroidery, paper cutting, and oil-paper umbrellas. Also, some craftsmen will be there and explain the craftsmanship, history, and cultural significance of these handicrafts.
The exhibition will be held in our school club centre at 3:00 pm on 5 June. I guess it will be a great opportunity for foreigners like you to experience the superb skills of Chinese craftsmen. I think it’s also a great opportunity for every participant to realise the importance of preserving precious traditional arts and crafts that are disappearing. If you want to know more information, please call me at 123456.
I’m looking forward to seeing you there!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的邀请信。要求考生给外教Mr Clarks写一封邮件,邀请他参加学校将举办的一场中国传统手工艺品展览会。
【详解】1.词汇积累
令人兴奋的:exciting→ thrilling
重要性、意义:significance → importance
机会:opportunity → chance
极好的:superb→ excellent
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:I am writing to invite you to visit an exciting exhibition. The theme of the exhibition is Chinese Traditional Handicrafts.
拓展句:I am writing to invite you to visit an exciting exhibition, whose theme is Chinese Traditional Handicrafts.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I guess it will be a great opportunity for foreigners like you to experience the superb skills of Chinese craftsmen.(运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】If you want to know more information, please call me at 123456.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
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