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话题06 学习体验与方法
【话题解读】
学习体验与方法是中考英语书面表达实用类高频必考话题,紧密围绕学生日常学习展开,聚焦学习经验、学科提升、阅读习惯、效率优化、心态调整、困难解决与劳逸结合等内容,贴合中考 “实用性、生活化” 命题导向。话题主要覆盖六大方向:语言学习技巧、学科薄弱点突破、阅读习惯与收获、提高学习效率、平衡学习与放松、从错误 / 创新中学习。考查能力以第一人称分享经验、提出建议、说明理由、表达感悟为主;通用写作框架为 “点明主题→介绍方法 / 经历→阐述收获 / 意义”,时态以一般现在时、一般过去时为主,词数要求 80—100 词,内容贴近学生真实学习场景,表达直白、易得分。
【命题探索】
结合全国中考考情,学习体验与方法类书面表达命题规律高度稳定,以实用化、情境化、建议型为主要趋势。文体以电子邮件、演讲稿、征文、投稿、建议信为主;设问核心围绕 “学习问题、具体方法、个人体验、收获意义、平衡策略” 五大要点,要求要点齐全、条理清晰。命题常设置真实学习场景,如给外国朋友提语言学习建议、分享阅读习惯、解决薄弱学科、提高居家学习效率、平衡学习与休息等,侧重可操作的方法表述;评分侧重要点完整、连接词规范、句式多样,鼓励使用宾语从句、非谓语、not only…but also… 等高分句型,整体难度中等,是中考书面表达中稳定拿分、易于套写的核心题型。
【典例赏析】
假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Tracy的学校即将开设特色选修课程,她正在考虑是否选修汉语,来信询问你的建议。请你根据所给提示给她写封回信。
要点:(1)给出你的建议;
(2)谈谈学习汉语的重要性;
(3)结合自身经历,介绍至少2种学习汉语的方法。
要求:1.必须包含所给要点,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名;
4.词数80~100左右(开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Tracy,
I’m glad to hear from you.
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I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考答案01】
Dear Tracy,
I’m glad to hear from you.I strongly recommend choosing Chinese as your elective. As the most spoken language globally, mastering Chinese will broaden your career opportunities and deepen your understanding of Asian culture. For example, many international companies value employees with bilingual skills.
When I started learning Chinese, I found watching movies with subtitles and practicing with native speakers highly effective. These methods improved my pronunciation and fluency. Remember, it is key to keep going!
I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
翻译:
亲爱的Tracy:
很高兴收到你的来信。
我强烈建议你选修汉语。作为全球使用最广泛的语言,掌握汉语能拓宽你的职业机会并加深对亚洲文化的理解。例如,许多国际公司看重具备双语能力的员工。
我初学汉语时,发现看带字幕的电影和与母语者练习非常有效。这些方法提升了我的发音和流利度。记住,坚持是关键!
希望我的建议对你有所帮助。
李华
重点词汇:
1. recommend /ˌrekəˈmend/ v. 推荐;建议
2. elective /ɪˈlektɪv/ n. 选修课;adj. 可选择的
3. opportunity /ˌɒpəˈtjuːnəti/ n. 机会;时机
4. effective /ɪˈfektɪv/ adj. 有效的;实际的
范文分析:
1. 结构清晰:分两段分别阐述建议、重要性及方法,逻辑连贯。
2. 语言特点:使用复合句(如"As the most spoken language...")和说服性词汇("strongly recommend")。
3. 写作技巧:结合自身经历增强说服力,用具体例子(movies, native speakers)说明方法。
写作技巧指导:
1. 建议类书信框架:开头明确建议→理由(2-3点)→方法(具体可行)。
2. 连接词使用:如"As...", "For example..." 增强逻辑性。
3. 个性化表达:用"I found..." 代替泛泛而谈,更真实。
【参考答案02】
Dear Tracy,
I’m glad to hear from you. I strongly suggest you choose Chinese. It is very important because China plays an important role in the world today. Learning Chinese can help you know more about Chinese history and traditional culture, and communicate with more people around the world. From my experience, watching Chinese movies with subtitles is a good way. It makes learning interesting and helps you improve your listening. Besides, you can keep a Chinese diary every day. It is useful for your writing and helps you remember new words. If you keep practicing, you will learn Chinese well.
I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:书信作文;
②时态:一般现在时为主;
③提示:建议选修汉语,说明重要性,结合自身经历介绍两种学习方法。
[写作步骤]
第一步:直接给出建议;
第二步:说明汉语的重要性;
第三步:介绍两种学习方法。
[亮点词汇]
①suggest建议
②important重要的
③experience经历
④practice练习
⑤traditional culture传统文化
⑥subtitles字幕
[高分句型]
①I strongly suggest you choose Chinese.(运用了suggest接宾语从句的虚拟语气省略should)
②It is important because China plays a key role in the world.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
③It is useful for your writing and helps you remember new words.(运用and连接并列谓语)
【话题预测】
1.创新是通往成功的关键,它能改变我们的思维方式和行为方式,让我们勇敢面对挑战,超越自我。请你根据以下提示,以“How We Improve Our Creativity”为题,用英文写一篇短文,向学校英语校刊投稿。
要点提示:1. 敢于尝试,不断挑战自我。
2. 不怕犯错,从失败中学习。
3. 善于思考,打破传统思维。
注意:1. 词数100词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可以适当增添细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名。
How We Improve Our Creativity
Being creative is the key to success. It can change our ways of thinking and behaving.
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2.俗话说,“读万卷书,行万里路”。读书使人明志,读书使人在繁重学习与快速生活节奏中开拓一片思维的净土。某英文报刊正在开展以“My Reading Life”为题的征文活动。请根据以上描述及思维导图提示,写一篇英语短文,向该报刊投稿。
写作要求:
1. 条理清晰,字迹工整,词数不少于80词;
2. 文中不得出现真实人名和学校等相关信息。
My Reading Life
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3.我们都知道,学习对学生来讲很重要,但是几乎每位学生都有自己的薄弱学科,请根据下图对话内容的提示,并结合自己的实际情况,写一篇英语作文。
注意:
(1)短文参考对话内容提示,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
(3)词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Learning is very important for students, as it helps us build a better future.
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4.某学校英文报正在开展以“Mistakes—Steps towards Success”为题的讨论。请你根据以下思维导图的提示,并结合自身感悟,写一篇英语短文投稿。
要求:
(1)短文必须包含所有提示信息,并适当发挥;
(2)80词左右(标题和开头都已给出,不计入总词数);
(3)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Mistakes—Steps towards Success
Mistakes are a part of life. Instead of fearing them, we should see them as chances to grow._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5.亲爱的孩子们,经历了一个寒假的在家自主学习,你一定收获满满。为了更好地帮助九年级学生提高在家的学习效率 (learning efficiency),你校从学习态度、学习方法和学习习惯三个维度开展了假期自主学习的问卷调查。请你根据以下问卷调查结果及写作要求,以“ Improve Learning Efficiency at Home”题,用英语写一篇短文向校报英文栏目投稿。
What most improves your learning efficiency at home?
要点:
1. 简要描述问卷调查结果
2. 从三个维度中选择你认为最有效的一个,并给出相关建议
要求:
1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称
2. 词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)
Improve Learning Efficiency at Home
Our school did a survey on what most improves our learning efficiency at home.
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6.某英文网站正在开展以“Balance Relaxation and Studies”为题的征文活动。假设你是李华,请你用英文写一篇短文投稿。介绍你平时是如何平衡学习与放松的,以及你这样做的理由。
提示词语:hobby, plan, improve, healthy, efficient
提示信息:
●How do you balance relaxation and studies?
●Why do you think it is important to balance them?
As the old saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”
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7.生活中,我们总会遇到各种各样的困难。有时,困住我们的不是困难本身,而是我们看待它的角度。请你以“Think outside the Box”为题,结合自己的经历,分享一个跳出固有思维尝试新视角或者新方法,最终帮你摆脱困境的故事。
要求:
1.字数80-120词;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息:
▶English problems, misunderstanding, arguments, go out without taking umbrellas
▶upset, lonely, regretful, confused (困惑的)
▶connect words with favorite lyrics, say sorry by drawing pictures, a new chance to make friends, a good time to enjoy the rain
In our daily lives, we often face problems that seem hard to solve. Sometimes, the key is not to give up, but to change the way we think about them.
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8.人生中难免会遇到挑战,但积极的态度能帮助我们更好地成长。你们学校的英语俱乐部将举办一次主题为“How to Stay Positive”的征文活动,请你根据以下提示,写一篇短文向英语俱乐部进行投稿。
内容包括:
1. 保持积极人生态度的重要性(如:有利于解决问题、感到快乐……);
2. 分享帮助保持积极心态的方式(如:保持微笑、与朋友交流……);
3. 你的期待。
注意:
1. 词数为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实的姓名及学校名称;
4. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:positive(adj. 积极的),attitude(n. 态度),hopeful(adj. 有希望的)
How to Stay Positive
Life is not always easy.
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9.为了让同学们能够更好地适应九年级的学习生活,做到劳逸结合,张弛有度,本周学校将组织同学们进行学习方法交流,请根据下面图示,以“How to Learn Wisely”为题写一篇演讲稿,各抒己见吧!
注意:(1)词数80-90,开头已给出,不计入总词数。(2)要求字迹工整,语句通顺,条理清晰。(3)文中不可出现真实姓名及学校名称。
How to Learn Wisely
Hello, everyone. We are busier with our studies these days.
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Thanks for listening.
10.假定你是李华,你的朋友Li Ming英语基础薄弱,感到很焦虑,来信询问你校近期开展的“英语学习妙招分享”校园活动详情。请你根据以下思维导图提示,写一封回信,介绍活动、分享活动学习心得,并鼓励他。
注意事项:
1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
4. 字数80词左右。
Dear Li Ming,
I’m sorry to hear you feel anxious about your English.
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Yours,
Li Hua
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话题06 学习体验与方法
【话题解读】
学习体验与方法是中考英语书面表达实用类高频必考话题,紧密围绕学生日常学习展开,聚焦学习经验、学科提升、阅读习惯、效率优化、心态调整、困难解决与劳逸结合等内容,贴合中考 “实用性、生活化” 命题导向。话题主要覆盖六大方向:语言学习技巧、学科薄弱点突破、阅读习惯与收获、提高学习效率、平衡学习与放松、从错误 / 创新中学习。考查能力以第一人称分享经验、提出建议、说明理由、表达感悟为主;通用写作框架为 “点明主题→介绍方法 / 经历→阐述收获 / 意义”,时态以一般现在时、一般过去时为主,词数要求 80—100 词,内容贴近学生真实学习场景,表达直白、易得分。
【命题探索】
结合全国中考考情,学习体验与方法类书面表达命题规律高度稳定,以实用化、情境化、建议型为主要趋势。文体以电子邮件、演讲稿、征文、投稿、建议信为主;设问核心围绕 “学习问题、具体方法、个人体验、收获意义、平衡策略” 五大要点,要求要点齐全、条理清晰。命题常设置真实学习场景,如给外国朋友提语言学习建议、分享阅读习惯、解决薄弱学科、提高居家学习效率、平衡学习与休息等,侧重可操作的方法表述;评分侧重要点完整、连接词规范、句式多样,鼓励使用宾语从句、非谓语、not only…but also… 等高分句型,整体难度中等,是中考书面表达中稳定拿分、易于套写的核心题型。
【典例赏析】
假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Tracy的学校即将开设特色选修课程,她正在考虑是否选修汉语,来信询问你的建议。请你根据所给提示给她写封回信。
要点:(1)给出你的建议;
(2)谈谈学习汉语的重要性;
(3)结合自身经历,介绍至少2种学习汉语的方法。
要求:1.必须包含所给要点,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名;
4.词数80~100左右(开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Tracy,
I’m glad to hear from you.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考答案01】
Dear Tracy,
I’m glad to hear from you.I strongly recommend choosing Chinese as your elective. As the most spoken language globally, mastering Chinese will broaden your career opportunities and deepen your understanding of Asian culture. For example, many international companies value employees with bilingual skills.
When I started learning Chinese, I found watching movies with subtitles and practicing with native speakers highly effective. These methods improved my pronunciation and fluency. Remember, it is key to keep going!
I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
翻译:
亲爱的Tracy:
很高兴收到你的来信。
我强烈建议你选修汉语。作为全球使用最广泛的语言,掌握汉语能拓宽你的职业机会并加深对亚洲文化的理解。例如,许多国际公司看重具备双语能力的员工。
我初学汉语时,发现看带字幕的电影和与母语者练习非常有效。这些方法提升了我的发音和流利度。记住,坚持是关键!
希望我的建议对你有所帮助。
李华
重点词汇:
1. recommend /ˌrekəˈmend/ v. 推荐;建议
2. elective /ɪˈlektɪv/ n. 选修课;adj. 可选择的
3. opportunity /ˌɒpəˈtjuːnəti/ n. 机会;时机
4. effective /ɪˈfektɪv/ adj. 有效的;实际的
范文分析:
1. 结构清晰:分两段分别阐述建议、重要性及方法,逻辑连贯。
2. 语言特点:使用复合句(如"As the most spoken language...")和说服性词汇("strongly recommend")。
3. 写作技巧:结合自身经历增强说服力,用具体例子(movies, native speakers)说明方法。
写作技巧指导:
1. 建议类书信框架:开头明确建议→理由(2-3点)→方法(具体可行)。
2. 连接词使用:如"As...", "For example..." 增强逻辑性。
3. 个性化表达:用"I found..." 代替泛泛而谈,更真实。
【参考答案02】
Dear Tracy,
I’m glad to hear from you. I strongly suggest you choose Chinese. It is very important because China plays an important role in the world today. Learning Chinese can help you know more about Chinese history and traditional culture, and communicate with more people around the world. From my experience, watching Chinese movies with subtitles is a good way. It makes learning interesting and helps you improve your listening. Besides, you can keep a Chinese diary every day. It is useful for your writing and helps you remember new words. If you keep practicing, you will learn Chinese well.
I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:书信作文;
②时态:一般现在时为主;
③提示:建议选修汉语,说明重要性,结合自身经历介绍两种学习方法。
[写作步骤]
第一步:直接给出建议;
第二步:说明汉语的重要性;
第三步:介绍两种学习方法。
[亮点词汇]
①suggest建议
②important重要的
③experience经历
④practice练习
⑤traditional culture传统文化
⑥subtitles字幕
[高分句型]
①I strongly suggest you choose Chinese.(运用了suggest接宾语从句的虚拟语气省略should)
②It is important because China plays a key role in the world.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
③It is useful for your writing and helps you remember new words.(运用and连接并列谓语)
【话题预测】
1.创新是通往成功的关键,它能改变我们的思维方式和行为方式,让我们勇敢面对挑战,超越自我。请你根据以下提示,以“How We Improve Our Creativity”为题,用英文写一篇短文,向学校英语校刊投稿。
要点提示:1. 敢于尝试,不断挑战自我。
2. 不怕犯错,从失败中学习。
3. 善于思考,打破传统思维。
注意:1. 词数100词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可以适当增添细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名。
How We Improve Our Creativity
Being creative is the key to success. It can change our ways of thinking and behaving.
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【答案】
例文
How We Improve Our Creativity
Being creative is the key to success. It can change our ways of thinking and behaving. To improve our creativity, we should first dare to try new things and challenge ourselves. New attempts bring new inspirations. They also gives us the courage to face all kinds of challenges and go beyond ourselves. For example, we can learn a new skill or solve problems in different ways. Second, we should not be afraid of making mistakes. We can learn from failures and grow stronger. Finally, we need to think deeply and break traditional ideas. By asking questions and sharing thoughts with others, we can find creative solutions. In short, creativity helps us face challenges and become better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:是“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明主题——提高创造力的重要性;
第二步,分三点阐述提高创造力的具体方法;
第三步,总结创造力带来的益处。
[亮点词汇]
①challenge ourselves挑战自我
②all kinds of各种各样的
③be afraid of害怕
④In short简言之
[高分句型]
To improve our creativity, we should first dare to try new things and challenge ourselves.(开篇引出方法,结构简洁,符合观点类短文开头句式)
2.俗话说,“读万卷书,行万里路”。读书使人明志,读书使人在繁重学习与快速生活节奏中开拓一片思维的净土。某英文报刊正在开展以“My Reading Life”为题的征文活动。请根据以上描述及思维导图提示,写一篇英语短文,向该报刊投稿。
写作要求:
1. 条理清晰,字迹工整,词数不少于80词;
2. 文中不得出现真实人名和学校等相关信息。
My Reading Life
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【答案】范文:
My Reading Life
Reading has always been an important part of my life. I usually read for about half an hour every day before sleeping. I also like to take notes while reading, which helps me remember useful expressions and ideas.
My favorite kinds of books are science fiction and biographies. Science fiction books take me to amazing imaginary worlds, and biographies teach me valuable lessons from real people’s lives.
Through reading, I have not only improved my English vocabulary but also learned to think more deeply. Reading is like a window to the world—it helps me understand different cultures and broadens my mind.
In short, reading makes my life richer and more meaningful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文为一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:主要使用“一般现在时”;
③提示:需依据思维导图四个要点展开,适当补充细节,保持内容连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,简要介绍自己的阅读习惯与方法;
第二步,说明自己喜欢的书籍类型并简述原因;
第三步,阐述阅读给自己带来的收获;
第四步,总结阅读对个人生活的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①take notes记笔记
②valuable lessons宝贵的经验
③broaden my mind开阔我的思维
[高分句型]
①I also like to take notes while reading, which helps me remember useful expressions and ideas. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②Through reading, I have not only improved my English vocabulary but also learned to think more deeply. (not only…but also…连接并列成分)
3.我们都知道,学习对学生来讲很重要,但是几乎每位学生都有自己的薄弱学科,请根据下图对话内容的提示,并结合自己的实际情况,写一篇英语作文。
注意:
(1)短文参考对话内容提示,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
(3)词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Learning is very important for students, as it helps us build a better future.
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【答案】例文:
Learning is very important for students, as it helps us build a better future. However, almost every student has a weak subject. For me, that subject used to be English.
The main reasons were that I practiced less and often felt nervous during exams. To improve, I started doing more English exercises every day. When I came across difficult problems, I didn’t hesitate to ask my teacher and classmates for help.
With my persistent efforts, my English has made great progress. I believe I can do even better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是材料作文;
②时态:主要时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作需涵盖薄弱学科是什么、薄弱原因以及改进计划等要点,且要适当发挥,使文章内容丰富。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。直接指出学习重要且每个学生几乎都有薄弱学科,进而引出自己曾经的薄弱学科;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。说明薄弱原因,阐述改进计划及行动;
第三步,书写结语。表达通过努力取得进步以及对未来的信心。
[亮点词汇]
①used to be过去是
②come across difficult problems遇到难题
③make great progress取得很大进步
[高分句型]
①The main reasons were that I practiced less and often felt nervous during exams. (表语从句)
②When I came across difficult problems, I didn’t hesitate to ask my teacher and classmates for help. (When引导的时间状语从句)
4.某学校英文报正在开展以“Mistakes—Steps towards Success”为题的讨论。请你根据以下思维导图的提示,并结合自身感悟,写一篇英语短文投稿。
要求:
(1)短文必须包含所有提示信息,并适当发挥;
(2)80词左右(标题和开头都已给出,不计入总词数);
(3)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Mistakes—Steps towards Success
Mistakes are a part of life. Instead of fearing them, we should see them as chances to grow._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Mistakes—Steps towards Success
Mistakes are a part of life. Instead of fearing them, we should see them as chances to grow.
When we make mistakes, we can learn a lot from them. They help us understand things better and make our skills stronger. When I tried to learn a new sport, I kept falling. But each time I got up, I got better. Mistakes also build resilience. They teach us to stay positive and never give up. What’s more, mistakes encourage creativity. They push us to find new ways to solve problems.
In the end, mistakes are not something to be afraid of. They are steps that lead us to success.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态以一般现在时为主;
③提示:写作要点明确,逻辑清晰,通过具体事例补充细节,突出核心观点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点明核心论点;
第二步,进一步拓展论点;
第三步,总结升华,强调错误并不可怕,是通往成功的阶梯,呼应开篇论点。
[亮点词汇]
①learn a lot from从……中学到很多
②build resilience培养韧性
[高分句型]
①They help us understand things better and make our skills stronger.(and并列两个谓语短语)
②When I tried to learn a new sport, I kept falling.(when引导时间状语从句)
5.亲爱的孩子们,经历了一个寒假的在家自主学习,你一定收获满满。为了更好地帮助九年级学生提高在家的学习效率 (learning efficiency),你校从学习态度、学习方法和学习习惯三个维度开展了假期自主学习的问卷调查。请你根据以下问卷调查结果及写作要求,以“ Improve Learning Efficiency at Home”题,用英语写一篇短文向校报英文栏目投稿。
What most improves your learning efficiency at home?
要点:
1. 简要描述问卷调查结果
2. 从三个维度中选择你认为最有效的一个,并给出相关建议
要求:
1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称
2. 词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)
Improve Learning Efficiency at Home
Our school did a survey on what most improves our learning efficiency at home.
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【答案】例文:
Improve Learning Efficiency at Home
Our school did a survey on what most improves our learning efficiency at home. According to the results, 43% of students believe correct learning methods are key, 32% prioritize good habits, and 25% highlight a positive attitude.
Among these, I think correct learning methods matter most. First, set clear, achievable goals for each study session to stay focused and motivated. Second, divide tasks into smaller steps to avoid feeling overwhelmed and steadily boost productivity. Third, review regularly to reinforce knowledge and identify gaps promptly for improvement. Lastly, use active learning techniques like summarizing or teaching concepts to others to deepen understanding.
By adopting these methods, students can make home learning more effective and enjoyable.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:说明文,用一般现在时为主
明确要点:描述问卷调查结果、选择最有效维度并给出建议
确定人称:第三人称(students)及第一人称(I/my,阐述自己观点时)
注意事项:不得透露真实姓名和学校名称
[第二步:构思布局]
两段式结构:
开头段:描述问卷调查结果
主体段:选择最有效维度并给出相关建议,总结效果
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:描述问卷调查结果
结果描述:According to the results, 43% of students believe correct learning methods are key, 32% prioritize good habits, and 25% highlight a positive attitude./According to the survey, X% of students think...,X% of students regard... as important, and X% of students emphasize...
要点二:选择最有效维度并给出建议
维度选择:correct learning methods/good learning habits/positive learning attitude
建议内容:
- set clear, achievable goals for each study session to stay focused and motivated/set specific and attainable goals for every study period to keep concentrated and enthusiastic
- divide tasks into smaller steps to avoid feeling overwhelmed and steadily boost productivity/split tasks into tiny parts to prevent being stressed and gradually enhance efficiency
- review regularly to reinforce knowledge and identify gaps promptly for improvement/go over what you've learned frequently to strengthen knowledge and find weaknesses quickly for betterment
- use active learning techniques like summarizing or teaching concepts to others to deepen understanding/employ active learning methods such as summarizing or explaining ideas to others to deepen comprehension
6.某英文网站正在开展以“Balance Relaxation and Studies”为题的征文活动。假设你是李华,请你用英文写一篇短文投稿。介绍你平时是如何平衡学习与放松的,以及你这样做的理由。
提示词语:hobby, plan, improve, healthy, efficient
提示信息:
●How do you balance relaxation and studies?
●Why do you think it is important to balance them?
As the old saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”
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【答案】例文1
As the old saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” As a teenager, I think it’s important to balance relaxation and studies. Here’s how I keep this balance in daily life.
First, I make a strict daily plan. I not only set a time limit for study, like two hours for homework after school, but also spare time for fun, such as playing games for 30 minutes. Besides, I take short breaks while studying. For example, to avoid feeling worn out, I often rest for 10 minutes after studying for 40 minutes. Having some snacks is my favorite relaxation.
A good balance between relaxation and studies improves my efficiency and helps me keep healthy, which benefits my studies and personal growth.
例文2
As the old saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” As a teenager, I believe that balancing relaxation and studies is essential. Here’s how I achieve this balance in daily life.
First, I make a practical daily plan and stick to it strictly. I spend two hours on homework and 30 minutes on fun activities like ball games—time limits keep me focused while fun helps me unwind. Besides, I take short breaks: 10 minutes’ rest after 40 minutes’ study to avoid tiredness. My favorite relaxation is reading, which lets me escape schoolwork and enrich my inner world.
This balance helps me study efficiently and stay healthy, benefiting my personal growth.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,不得遗漏,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开门见山,引出话题;
第二步:详细描述自己如何平衡学习与放松的,以及理由;
第三步:书写结尾,总结升华主题。
[亮点词汇]
①a strict daily plan一个严格的日常计划
②short breaks短暂休息
③balance平衡
④keep healthy保持健康
[高分句型]
①I not only set a time limit for study, like two hours for homework after school, but also spare time for fun, such as playing games for 30 minutes. (not only...but also...句式)
②A good balance between relaxation and studies improves my efficiency and helps me keep healthy, which benefits my studies and personal growth. (定语从句)
7.生活中,我们总会遇到各种各样的困难。有时,困住我们的不是困难本身,而是我们看待它的角度。请你以“Think outside the Box”为题,结合自己的经历,分享一个跳出固有思维尝试新视角或者新方法,最终帮你摆脱困境的故事。
要求:
1.字数80-120词;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息:
▶English problems, misunderstanding, arguments, go out without taking umbrellas
▶upset, lonely, regretful, confused (困惑的)
▶connect words with favorite lyrics, say sorry by drawing pictures, a new chance to make friends, a good time to enjoy the rain
In our daily lives, we often face problems that seem hard to solve. Sometimes, the key is not to give up, but to change the way we think about them.
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【答案】范文:
Think outside the Box
In our daily lives, we often face problems that seem hard to solve. Sometimes, the key is not to give up, but to change the way we think about them.
I once felt very confused about memorizing English words. They were boring and easy to forget. Then I realized that by connecting English words with my favorite song lyrics, memorizing them became much easier. For example, I learned “shine” from a song called “You Shine.” I even wrote my own short lyrics with new words.
This new way made English fun. I no longer felt stressed, and my vocabulary grew quickly. It taught me that thinking outside the box can turn a problem into an opportunity.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态以“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:需围绕“跳出固有思维,尝试新方法”这一主题,结合个人经历展开叙述,内容需涵盖遇到的困难、解决的新方法及最终结果。
[写作步骤]
第一步,简述遇到的困难情境;
第二步,描述如何转换思维或采用新方法应对;
第三步,说明改变思维方式后带来的积极结果。
[亮点词汇]
①give up放弃
②feel confused about对……感到困惑
[高分句型]
I realized that by connecting English words with my favorite song lyrics, memorizing them became much easier. (宾语从句与动名词短语作主语结合使用,表达因果与方式)
8.人生中难免会遇到挑战,但积极的态度能帮助我们更好地成长。你们学校的英语俱乐部将举办一次主题为“How to Stay Positive”的征文活动,请你根据以下提示,写一篇短文向英语俱乐部进行投稿。
内容包括:
1. 保持积极人生态度的重要性(如:有利于解决问题、感到快乐……);
2. 分享帮助保持积极心态的方式(如:保持微笑、与朋友交流……);
3. 你的期待。
注意:
1. 词数为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实的姓名及学校名称;
4. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:positive(adj. 积极的),attitude(n. 态度),hopeful(adj. 有希望的)
How to Stay Positive
Life is not always easy.
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【答案】
例文
How to Stay Positive
Life is not always easy. We often face challenges, but a positive attitude matters a lot—it helps us solve problems better and feel happier in daily life.
To stay positive, we can try small things: keep smiling even when things go wrong, and talk with friends about our troubles. For example, I once felt upset about a bad test score, and chatting with my deskmate soon cheered me up. Sharing feelings makes us feel less stressed.
I hope more people can stay positive. Let’s spread this hopeful attitude together!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接已给的开头,介绍保持积极人生态度的重要性;
第二步,分享帮助保持积极心态的方式;
第三步,表达个人期待。
[亮点词汇]
①solve problems解决问题
②go wrong出错
③cheered me up让我振作起来
[高分句型]
To stay positive, we can try small things: keep smiling even when things go wrong, and talk with friends about our troubles.(when引导的时间状语从句)
9.为了让同学们能够更好地适应九年级的学习生活,做到劳逸结合,张弛有度,本周学校将组织同学们进行学习方法交流,请根据下面图示,以“How to Learn Wisely”为题写一篇演讲稿,各抒己见吧!
注意:(1)词数80-90,开头已给出,不计入总词数。(2)要求字迹工整,语句通顺,条理清晰。(3)文中不可出现真实姓名及学校名称。
How to Learn Wisely
Hello, everyone. We are busier with our studies these days.
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Thanks for listening.
【答案】例文
How to Learn Wisely
Hello, everyone. We are busier with our studies these days. All of us want to learn wisely. But how can we do that?
First, we should listen to our teachers carefully in class. And it’s a good idea to take notes at the same time. After class, we must do our homework carefully. Before exams, we’d better review the notes in order to remember something important. And it’s necessary to keep on studying hard. At last, we need to relax ourselves. We can spend some time doing sports.
I’m sure you’ll learn wisely if you can do these things.
Thanks for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接已给的开头,引出话题;
第二步,分点介绍具体方法:课上认真听讲并记笔记、课后认真完成作业、考前复习笔记,同时补充“放松 (做运动)”的建议;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①take notes记笔记
②at the same time同时
③spend time doing sth.花时间做某事
[高分句型]
I’m sure you’ll learn wisely if you can do these things. (if引导的条件状语从句)
10.假定你是李华,你的朋友Li Ming英语基础薄弱,感到很焦虑,来信询问你校近期开展的“英语学习妙招分享”校园活动详情。请你根据以下思维导图提示,写一封回信,介绍活动、分享活动学习心得,并鼓励他。
注意事项:
1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
4. 字数80词左右。
Dear Li Ming,
I’m sorry to hear you feel anxious about your English.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Li Ming,
I’m sorry to hear you feel anxious about your English. Last Sunday, our school organized an “English Learning Tips Sharing” activity during the activity time. It was helpful, and I’d like to share some tips we discussed.
We talked about improving listening with English songs and enhancing reading through English news. For writing, keeping a diary in English is a great method. Speaking practice was also encouraged to build confidence.
These tips have boosted my enthusiasm for learning English. Don’t worry—with effort, you’ll improve too!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是书信作文;
②时态:主要时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,需根据思维导图提示介绍活动、分享活动学习心得,并鼓励朋友,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步:先对朋友感到焦虑表示理解,然后引出学校活动。
第二步:具体阐述写作内容。介绍活动:说明活动时间、活动内容,如分享了听力、阅读、写作、口语等方面的学习妙招。分享心得:讲述自己从活动中获得的收获,如提高了学习热情等。
第三步:书写结语。鼓励朋友不要担心,只要努力就会取得进步。
[亮点词汇]
①organize组织
②improve listening提高听力
③boost one’s enthusiasm提高某人的热情
[高分句型]
①It was helpful, and I’d like to share some tips we discussed. (定语从句)
②For writing, keeping a diary in English is a great method. (动名词短语作主语)
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